英語九年級上冊Unit5Whataretheshirtsmadeof九年級五單元寫作

Objectives1.TofinishSelfCheck.2.Towriteapassageaboutaspecialthingthatyourtownisfamousfor.3.Theundergroundparkinglot______________(close)atmidnighteveryday.4.Thereisalotofresearchonhowlanguages_________________(learn).5.Someclassicfilms_______________(show)atthatcinemalastweek.1.Cheese_______________(make)frommilk.2.Parentsandstudents___________________(invite)totheschoolconcertlastnight.Completethesentencesusingthecorrectformsofthewordsinbrackets.3ismadewereinvitedisclosedarelearnedwereshownListsomethingsyouuseeveryday.Writedownwhattheyaremadeof/fromandwheretheyweremade.1pencilwoodscissorsmetal,plasticChopstickssteelSelf-checkThispairofscissorsismadeofmetalandplastic,anditwasmadeinJapan.Thechopsticksaremadeofsteel,andtheyaremadeinKorea.Usetheinformationabovetowritefullsentences.2WarmingupWhat’sthemostfamousorspecialthinginyourhometown?(Thesecanbefood,artworkoranyotherproducts.)1.Isitmadeof/fromwood/paper/gold/silver/cotton/silk/glass/plastic/steel?2.Whereisitmade?3.Whatisitusedfor?4.Whatisitknownfor?5.Whyisitspecial?Let’stalkWhatdoyouthinkofdoingchores?

Writing(寫作)LeadinWhataresomespecialthingsthatyourcityisfamousfor?Thesecanbefood,artworkoranyotherproducts.WhattheproductisWhoitismadebyWhereisitmadeWhatitcandoGuoshengTeateafamersMountBailinggoodforhealth國勝茶是攀枝花的著名特產(chǎn)之一，請根據(jù)以下提示寫一篇介紹國勝茶的作文1、國勝茶產(chǎn)自百靈山，有300多年的歷史。2、生長環(huán)境和制作。3、茶文化的組成：種茶、采茶、品茶。3、喝茶的益處：有利于身體健康；增加茶農(nóng)收入，改善他們的生活。4、表達(dá)你對國勝茶的看法。提示詞：bemadeupof…由…組成、increaseincomes增加收入

、improve改善注意：

1．詞數(shù)80詞左右，開頭已給出，但不計入總詞數(shù)；2.短文必須包括所有要點，不要逐詞翻譯，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，使其

連貫、通順。3.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實的人名、校名等相關(guān)信息。GuoshengTea

ThereareallkindsofteainChina,andGuohengteaisthemostfamousteainPanzhihua._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________1.審：4連：5.集：3.抓：Howtowrite6整：審清題意抓住要點連詞成句形成框架規(guī)范整理BeforewritingWhilewritingPostwriting2.思：整體構(gòu)思7.審：審查無誤集句成段審時態(tài)體裁（記述文?應(yīng)用文?議論文?）第三人稱人稱記敘文一般現(xiàn)在時(一般現(xiàn)在時的被動語態(tài))列要點介紹國勝茶可以從以下幾個方面進(jìn)行寫作：1、介紹國勝茶的產(chǎn)地、悠久的歷史。2、生長環(huán)境和制作：種植在山坡山，茶葉成熟后手工采摘，然后送去加工。3.喝茶的好處（1）有利于身體健康。（2）對茶農(nóng)的好處增加收入，改善其生活。4、總結(jié)：你對國勝茶的看法。（多喝茶）1.在…制造的(地點)______________________2.有300多年歷史________________________________3.山坡上________________4.人工采摘________________5.送去加工______________________6.由…組成____________________________7.種茶、采茶、品茶_______________________6.有利于身體健康__________________________7.增加收入____________________________8.改善生活_________________________________

bemadein…/beproducedinthesidesofBailingMountainhasahistoryofover300years列短語begoodforhealthincreasetheirincomesimprovetheirlives

pickbyhandsendforprocessingbemadeupof…teaplanting、tea-leafpacking、teadrinking

第二段（正文）——擴(kuò)展句1（要視內(nèi)容而決定擴(kuò)展句的多少）——擴(kuò)展句6——擴(kuò)展句5——擴(kuò)展句4——擴(kuò)展句3——擴(kuò)展句2第三段（結(jié)尾）第一段（開頭）——主題句——擴(kuò)展句——結(jié)尾句（可點題、可總結(jié)、可建議等）列提綱ThereareallkindsofteainChina,andGuoshengTeaisthemostfamousteainPanzhihua.主題句：Paragragh1展擴(kuò)展句1GuoshengTeaisproducedinYanbian.Andithasalonghistoryofmorethan300years.擴(kuò)展句2TeaplantsaregrownonthesidesofBailingMountains.Whentheleavesareready,theyarepickedbyhandandthensentforprocessing.Paragragh2展擴(kuò)展句4GuoshengTeaisgoodforbothourhealthandbusiness.Itcanincreaseteafarmer'incomesandimprovetheirlives.

展擴(kuò)展句3Theteacultureismadeupofteaplanting,tea-leafpickingandteadrnking.擴(kuò)展句5IthinkweshoulddrinkmoreGuoshengTea,don'tyouthinkso?展Paragragh3將句子連接成為短文1.TherearemanykindsofteainChina,andGuoshengTeaisthemostfamousteainPanzhihua.2.GuoshengTeaisproducedinYanbian.Andithasalonghistoryofmorethan300years.TeaplantsaregrownonthesidesofBailingMountains.Whentheleavesareready,theyarepickedbyhandandthensentforprocessing.

Theteacultureismadeupofteaplanting,tea-leafpickingandteadrinking.GuoshengTeaisgoodforbothourhealthandbusiness.Itcanincreaseteafarmer'incomesandimprovetheirlives.3.IthinkweshoulddrinkmoreGuoshengTea,don'tyouthinkso?

3.Thesedays,Iwanttolearntocooksomedishes.IfIcandoit,myparentswillbehappy.展

檢查語法、拼寫和標(biāo)點等問題1.學(xué)生自己獨立檢查。2.小組互評，并對拿不準(zhǔn)的詞語和句子進(jìn)行替換或刪除，注意控制詞數(shù)。3.全班評價。

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TherearemanykindsofteainChina,andGuoshengTeaisthemostfamousteainPanzhihua.GuoshengTeaisproducedinYanbian.Andithasalonghistoryofmore