初中英語九年級(jí)主題作文13-保護(hù)環(huán)境

主題：環(huán)境保護(hù)

導(dǎo)讀本單元的主題是保護(hù)環(huán)境，引導(dǎo)同學(xué)們培養(yǎng)環(huán)保意識(shí)，關(guān)注和保護(hù)環(huán)境.與本主題有關(guān)的英語作文命題通常有提示性作文和看圖作文等.同學(xué)們寫此類作文時(shí)，要注意點(diǎn)明寫作意圖,描述問題所在，并提出解決問題的建議.可適用于本單元的關(guān)聯(lián)主題有很多，如Howtoprotecttheenvironment,Creatingagreenerworld,Walkingtoschoolisagoodchoice等.題目回放隨著社會(huì)的發(fā)展，我們的生活越來越便利，但我們周圍的環(huán)境問題卻變得日益嚴(yán)峻.環(huán)境問題嚴(yán)重影響著人們的工作、學(xué)習(xí)和生活.我們應(yīng)該如何保護(hù)環(huán)境呢?假如你是李華，你校要在6月5日這個(gè)世界環(huán)境日開展以“保護(hù)我們的環(huán)境”為主題的演講比賽.請(qǐng)你自擬標(biāo)題，根據(jù)以下要求,寫一篇90詞左右的英語演講稿.寫作要求：L舉例說明現(xiàn)存的環(huán)境問題；2.說明我們應(yīng)采取怎樣的措施保護(hù)環(huán)境.審題指引1審體裁：演講稿，屬于應(yīng)用文.2審內(nèi)容：點(diǎn)明環(huán)境現(xiàn)狀和問題，提出應(yīng)對(duì)措施.3審時(shí)態(tài)：以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主.4審人稱：以第一人稱為主.框架設(shè)計(jì)開頭：第一段點(diǎn)明環(huán)境現(xiàn)狀，引入主題.中間：主體段落列舉現(xiàn)存的環(huán)境問題.結(jié)尾：最后針對(duì)問題提出具體應(yīng)對(duì)措施.范文:CreatingagreenerworldHello,everyone!IamLiWen,a15-year-oldChineseboyfromtheWuxiSunshineMiddleSchool.Asweallknow,theenvironmentisgettingworseandworseacrosstheglobe.Luckily,theChinesegovernmentsatalllevelshavetakenmeasurestoimprovetheenvironment.Thefactoriesthatcausedpollutionhavebeenshutup,andthenewenergyfromwind,waterandsolarpowerisbeingfullyused.Tohelpreduceairpollution,Ioftengotoschoolonfoot.Besides,Iremembertoturnoffthelightsbeforeleavingmyhouseormyclassroom.Moreover,Talwaysreuserecyclables,suchasfoodcansandbrownbags.Ibelieveaslongaswetryourbesttoprotecttheenvironmentaroundus,wewillhaveagreenerworld.Thankyou.段落素描.Firstparagraph:TodayisJune5,anditisWorldEnvironmentDay.Itremindsustoprotecttheenvironmentbecause...(TodayisJune5,celebratedasWorldEnvironmentDayaroundtheglobe.Itremindsustoprotecttheenvironment,forthepollutionaroundus...)(...).Thebody:Overthepastfewyears,ourgovernmentshavedonesomethingtocontrolpollution,butitstillexists.Mostvehiclesemit..:somepeoplethrowtrashandinsomeareas,farmerspollutethesoilwithchemicals...(Inrecentyears,governmentsatvariouslevelshavetakenmeasurestocontrolpollution,butitstillarises.Insomeareas,factoriesdischargeelectronicproductsproduceandsomepeoplecutdowntrees,...)(...).Lastparagraph:Therefore,wemustfindwaystoprotecttheenvironment.Ashighschoolstudents,wecan...Besides,weshould...(Inviewofthesefacts,wemusttakeactiontoprotecttheenvironment.Ashighschoolstudents,wecan...Moreimportantly,weneedto...)(...)范本淬煉AProtectingourenvironmentHello,everyone!TodayisJune5,anditisWorldEnvironmentDay.It①remindsustoprotecttheenvironmentbecausethepollutionaroundus②doesharmtoourhealth.Overthepastfewyears,ourgovernmenthasdonesomethingtocontrolpollution,butitstillexists.Mostvehicles③emitexhaustgasandmakenoise;somepeoplethrowtrashintorivers;andinsomeareas,farmerspollutethesoilwith④chemicalssuchasfertilizersandpesticides.Therefore,wemustfindways⑤toprotecttheenvironment.Ashighschoolstudents,wecangotoschoolbybus,bybikeoronfoot*Besides,weshoulduselessplasticbags,⑥whichcausewhitepollution4①remindsb.todosth.,提醒某人做某事.②doharmto,損害.③emitexhaustgasandmakenoise,排放廢氣和產(chǎn)生噪音.④chemicalssuchasfertilizersandpesticides,諸如化肥和殺蟲劑等化學(xué)品.⑤toprotect…是動(dòng)詞不定式短語充當(dāng)后置定語，修飾前面的ways.⑥which引導(dǎo)非限制性定語從句.亮點(diǎn)點(diǎn)評(píng).文章緊扣保護(hù)環(huán)境這一主題，內(nèi)容完整，要點(diǎn)齊全，段落清晰..文中運(yùn)用了一些不同的句式，如because引導(dǎo)的原因狀語從句和which引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語從句,為文章增色不少..作者使用了較為豐富的詞匯和短語，如remindsb.todosth.,doharmto,control,exist,vehicle,emit等，增強(qiáng)了文章的生動(dòng)性.ProtectingourenvironmentHello,everyone!TodayisJune5,①celebratedasWorldEnvironmentDayaroundtheglobe.Itremindsustoprotecttheenvironment,forthepollutionaroundushasseriously②affectedourhealthanddailylife.Inrecentyears,governmentsatvariouslevelshave③takenmeasurestocontrolpollution,butitstillarises.Insomeareas,factories④dischargewastesmoke,exhaustgas,wastewater,andresidualwaste;⑤electronicproductsproduceelectromagneticradiation;andsomepeoplecutdowntrees,⑥r(nóng)esultinginincreasedcarbondioxideintheair.⑦Inviewofthesefacts,wemusttakeactiontoprotecttheenvironment.Ashighschoolstudents,wecangotoschoolbybusoronfoot,andtellourrelativesandfriendstogotoworkbybusor(8)bysubwaytraininsteadofbycar.Moreimportantly,weneedtosaveasmuchenergyaspossible⑨bysavingwater,turningoffthelightswhenweleavethehouse,andusingrecyclablepaperinourstudies.①celebratedas…，作為….??被慶祝.②affectourhealthanddailylife,影響我們的健康和日常生活.③takemeasures,采取措施.④discharge,并日出.⑤electronicproducts,電子產(chǎn)品.⑥r(nóng)esultinginincreasedcarbondioxideintheair,導(dǎo)致空氣中二氧化碳增加,此處現(xiàn)在分詞短語充當(dāng)結(jié)果狀語.⑦inviewofthesefacts,鑒于這些事實(shí).⑧bysubwaytrain,乘坐地鐵.⑨bysavingwater,通過節(jié)水.亮點(diǎn)點(diǎn)評(píng)L開篇直接點(diǎn)明污染環(huán)境造成的危害，主體段落敘述影響環(huán)境的具體問題，最后提出改善環(huán)境的措施.與上文相比，本文敘述更完整,內(nèi)容更豐富..文章句式多樣，除了用簡單句、并列句外，還用了現(xiàn)在分詞充當(dāng)結(jié)果狀語和by+動(dòng)名詞等句式，顯示了作者駕馭多種句式的能力..文中用inrecentyears,insomeareas,inviewofthesefacts,moreimportantly等用語銜接句子，使文章邏輯性更強(qiáng)，上下文更連貫..比起上面的二類文，本文用詞更豐富，如seriously,atvariouslevels,arise,wastesmoke,exhaustgas,residualwaste等用語增強(qiáng)了文章的感染力.佳作賞析AHowtosaveenergy①Withtherapiddevelopmentofoursociety,theresourcesontheearth②tendtobedecreased.Inordertoprotect③theexistingresourcesandsaveenergy,somethingmustbedone.Firstofall,asasourceoflife,waterisveryimportanttous.Weshouldprotectwater,especiallydrinkingwater,andpreventfactoriesfromdischargingpollutedwaterintorivers.Besides,wemustsaveelectricity④byturningoffthelightswhenweleavethehouse.Moreover,weneedtostopcuttingdowntreesandincreaseforeststomakeourworldagreenerone.⑤Mostimportantly,wearesupposedtosaveourresourcesby⑥r(nóng)eusingrecyclables,suchasfoodcans,brownbagsandplasticbottles.Inshort,everyoneshould⑦takeactiontoprotecttheenvironmentandsaveenergy.①withtherapiddevelopmentof…，隨著,…?的快速發(fā)展.②tendto,趨于.③theexistingresources,現(xiàn)有資源.④by,通過.此處后接動(dòng)名詞.⑤mostimportantly,最重要的是.⑥r(nóng)euserecyclables,重復(fù)使用可回收物品.⑦takeaction,采取行動(dòng).亮點(diǎn)點(diǎn)評(píng)L本文首段簡介節(jié)約能源的原因和意義,主體段落說明如何節(jié)約能源，尾段再次點(diǎn)明主題.文章結(jié)構(gòu)分明,層次清晰..文中運(yùn)用了多種句式，如動(dòng)詞不定式充當(dāng)目的狀語以及when引導(dǎo)的時(shí)間狀語從句等..銜接語如firstofall,besides,moreover,mostimportantly等使文章邏輯性強(qiáng)，上下文連貫通順..文中詞匯和短語豐富，如withtherapiddevelopmentof...,tendto,especially,prevent...from...,saveelectricity,reuserecyclables,takeaction等，增強(qiáng)了文章的感染力和生動(dòng)性.WhatIdotoprotecttheenvironment①Atpresent,wearefacingseriousenvironmentalproblems,especiallyairpollutionandwaterpollution.②Tomakeourlifebetter,Ioftentrytodosomethingtoprotecttheenvironment.Firstofall,Ialways③switchoffthelightswhenIleavethehousetosaveelectricity.Besides,whenIbrushmyteeth,Ineverwastethetapwater.Also,Ioftentellmyparentsandfriendstogotoworkbybus④insteadofbycaranduserecyclablebagswhengoingshopping.Moreover,Ialwayssavepaperbywritingonbothsidesofthepaperattheschool.Inmymind,⑤onlywheneveryonetriestoprotecttheenvironmentcanwehaveabetterplacetolivein.Iwill⑥keepmyhabitofprotectingtheenvironment.①atpresent,目前②tomakeourlifebetter是動(dòng)詞不定式，充當(dāng)目的狀語.③switchoff,關(guān)閉.?insteadof,而不是.此處后接介詞短語.⑤onlywhen…是only+時(shí)間狀語引起的倒裝句.⑥keepmyhabit,保持我的習(xí)慣.亮點(diǎn)點(diǎn)評(píng).開篇簡要介紹保護(hù)環(huán)境的背景和意義，主體段落敘述作者自己采取的措施，結(jié)尾呼吁大家保護(hù)環(huán)境并說明自身將保持愛護(hù)環(huán)境的習(xí)慣.文章布局合理，邏輯清晰..文章句式豐富，除多次運(yùn)用when引導(dǎo)的時(shí)間狀語從句外,還運(yùn)用了動(dòng)詞不定式作目的狀語、when+現(xiàn)在分詞、by+動(dòng)名詞，以及only+時(shí)間狀語引起的倒裝句等句式..文中用firstofall,besides,also,moreover,inmymind等銜接語,把文章緊密連接起來，增強(qiáng)了段落和句子之間的連貫性.CProtectingtheearthAtpresent,suchenvironmentalproblemsasglobalwarming,the①significantlyincreasingacidrainanddeserts,reducedforestsand②non-renewableresources,waterandairpollutionhaveposedseriouschallengestohumanbeings.3)Consideringthesefacts,wemusttakemeasurestoprotecttheearth.Firstofall,weshoulddoourbesttosaveenergy.Whenweleaveourhome,weshouldturnoffthe④electricappliances;whenwegotoschoolorgotowork,wecantakeabusorrideabike.Besides,weneedtosaveforestsbycuttingdownnotreesandplantingmoretrees.Lastbutnotleast,wearesupposedtoreuserecyclables,suchasbrownbagsandfoodcans.⑤Anyway,sincewehaveonlyoneearth,weshoulddoeverythingtoprotectit.significantlyincreasing,顯著增力口.non-renewableresources,不可再生資源.③consideringthesefacts,考慮到這些事實(shí).electricappliances,電器.⑤anyway,無論如何.亮點(diǎn)點(diǎn)評(píng).文章思路清晰,段落設(shè)計(jì)合理.開篇列舉環(huán)境污染的各種問題,中間段落說明環(huán)境保護(hù)的具體措施，尾段呼吁大家保護(hù)環(huán)境..靈活運(yùn)用長短句，并注意交叉使用簡單句和復(fù)合句(如含狀語從句的復(fù)合句)，避免了句式單調(diào)..用firstofall,besides,lastbutnotleast,anyway等銜接語，使段落之間和句子之間銜接緊密，表達(dá)流暢自然.用詞豐富、精準(zhǔn),如使用globalwarming,significantlyincreasing,non-renewableresources,poseseriouschallenges,considering,electricappliances等，增力U了文章亮點(diǎn).素材寶庫.好詞妙語usedtobeclean過去彳艮干凈getworseandworse變得越來越嚴(yán)重reduceairpollution減少空氣污染theadvantages/disadvantagesof....…一的優(yōu)（缺）點(diǎn)beharmfultotheenvironment對(duì)環(huán)境有害haveaninfluence/impacton...對(duì)有影響non-renewableresources不可再生資源consideringthesefacts考慮到這些事實(shí)tendtobedecreased趨于被減少theexistingresources現(xiàn)有資源resultinincreasedcarbondioxideintheair導(dǎo)致空氣中的二氧化碳增加.提分佳句Thisisnotonlycruel,butalsoharmfultotheenvironment.這不但殘忍，而且對(duì)環(huán)境有害.Youcansaveelectricitybyturningoffthelightswhenyouleavethehouse.你可以通過離家時(shí)關(guān)閉電燈來節(jié)約用電.Ourjointeffortswillmakeagreatdifferenceandbringaboutabetterfuture.我們的共同努力可以起很大作用,帶來更美好的未來.Ithinkitisagreatideathatyouhavetopayforplasticbagsinsomestores.在一些商店里你得為塑料袋付費(fèi)，我認(rèn)為這是一個(gè)好主意.Remembertothrowrubbishindustbinsandkeeppublicplacescleanandbeautiful.記住要把垃圾扔在垃圾箱里并且保持公共場所干凈而漂亮.Weshouldwritetothegovernmenttomakethemclosedownthefactoriesthatcausepollution.我們應(yīng)當(dāng)給政府寫信讓他們關(guān)閉那些引起污染的工廠.Ifeveryonemakescontributionstobuildingagreencity,theworldwillbecomeabetterplaceforeveryonetolivein.如果每個(gè)人都為建設(shè)綠色城市做出貢獻(xiàn)，世界將變成一個(gè)更適合每個(gè)人居住的地方.Tosavetheearthistosaveourselves.拯救地球就是拯救我們自己.Wemusttakeactiontoprotectwildanimals.我們必須采取措施保護(hù)野生動(dòng)物.Wecannotwaitanylonger.Justtakeaction!我們?cè)僖膊荒艿攘?采取行動(dòng)吧！Protectingtheenvironmentiseveryone*sresponsibility.保護(hù)環(huán)境，人人有責(zé).寫作預(yù)熱.句子改錯(cuò)Pollutionisharmtoalllifeontheearth.Eattoomuchsugarcanleadtohealthproblems.Protectingtheenvironmentiseveryone'sresponsible.Sofar,noscientificresearchhasshown