第一部分應(yīng)用文寫作03求助類（解析版）2021-2022學(xué)年新教材新高考英語寫作新題型三合一解讀訓(xùn)練（高考專用）

應(yīng)用文寫作類型03求助類求助信是當(dāng)個(gè)人遇到一些自己無法解決的問題或困難時(shí)向別人請(qǐng)求幫助的一種書信，注意語氣要委婉、真誠。其結(jié)構(gòu)一般如下：①、表明寫作目的，請(qǐng)求幫助②、清晰陳述求助的具體內(nèi)容③、希望得到對(duì)方的幫助素材精粹【高分句型】首段：開門見山表明求助意圖Hearingyouhavemuchexperiencein...，Iamwritingtoaskyouforhelp./someadvice.聽說您在……方面很有經(jīng)驗(yàn)，我寫信向您求助/征求建議。Ihavesomedifficultyin...，whichbothersmealot，soIhavenochoicebuttoturntoyou.我在……方面有一些困難，這讓我很困擾，所以我別無選擇只能向您求助。Facedwith/Facingsomanydifficulties，Iamanxioustoaskyouforhelp.面對(duì)如此多的難題，我非常想向您求助。主體部分：說明求助事由Iamencounteringthreeproblemswhichbothermealot.Tobeginwith，...What'sworse，...Whattroublesmemostis.…Alloftheseupsetmebecause.…我遇到了三個(gè)很困擾我的問題。首先，……。更糟糕的是，……。最讓我苦惱的是…。所有這些都讓我很不高興，因?yàn)椤璉reallyhavenoidea/wonderhowtodealwiththeproblems.我真不知道/想知道如何解決這些問題。尾段：期盼回復(fù)并表示感謝Iwillbegratefulifyoucansparetimetogivemeahand/domeafavor.如果您能抽出時(shí)間幫我，我將很感激。Iwouldappreciateitifyoucouldbesokindastogivemesomeuseful/practicaltips/suggestions.如果您能非常友好地給我提供一些有用的/實(shí)用的建議，我將不勝感激。Thanksforconsideringmyrequest.I'mlookingforwardtoyourreply.多謝考慮我的請(qǐng)求。我期待您的答復(fù)。佳作共賞DearMike，I'mLiHua，oneofyourstudents.I'mwritinginthehopethatyoucangivemesomeadviceonmyEnglishstudy.Ournewwritingtaskcalled"extendedwriting"requiresustowriteareasonableendingtoastory.Obviously，thisisaveryopentaskwithmultiplepossibilities.WhileIenjoythecreativitythistaskrequires，Ifinditchallengingtoidentifytheplotandgivemyversionofthepossibleending.Ialsohavetroubleexpressingmyideasaccuratelyduetomylimitedvocabulary.Anysuggestionswouldbegreatlyappreciated.Lookingforwardtoyourreply.Yours，LiHua實(shí)戰(zhàn)突破Test1假定你是李華，你的美國筆友0livia負(fù)責(zé)的創(chuàng)造性寫作俱樂部進(jìn)展良好，你也有意組建一個(gè)類似的俱樂部。請(qǐng)給她寫一封郵件尋求幫助，內(nèi)容包括：1.寫信目的；2.你的問題；3.表示感謝。注意：寫作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80左右。DearOlivia,___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua【答案】DearOlivia,Inspiredbyyourcreativewritingclub,Iwanttoestablishsuchaclubaswell.I'mwritingtoaskforyoursuggestionsandhelp..Firstly,wouldyoupleasetellmetheprocedureofhowtostartaclub?IalsowanttoknowwhateventsIcouldhold.Moreover,doyouhaveanydigitalversionsofteachingmaterialstosharewithme?Thankyousomuchforyourtimeandsupportinadvance.I'mlookingforwardtohearingfromyousoon.Yours,LiHua【分析】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文，要求考生給美國筆友0livia寫封信，向他尋求組建俱樂部方面的幫助?！驹斀狻?.詞匯積累鼓勵(lì)：inspire→encourage創(chuàng)立：establish→found建議：suggestion→advice另外：moreover→additionally2.句式拓展簡單句變復(fù)合句原句：Moreover,doyouhaveanydigitalversionsofteachingmaterialstosharewithme?拓展句：Moreover,doyouhaveanydigitalversionsofteachingmaterialsthatyoucansharewithme?【點(diǎn)睛】[高分句型1]Inspiredbyyourcreativewritingclub,Iwanttoestablishsuchaclubaswell.(運(yùn)用了過去分詞作狀語)[高分句型2]IalsowanttoknowwhateventsIcouldhold.(運(yùn)用了what引導(dǎo)的賓語從句)Test2假定你是李華，當(dāng)前你在英語學(xué)習(xí)方面遇到了一些問題。于是你向你校的外籍老師Tom寫一封求助信尋求幫助。要點(diǎn)如下：1.本人簡介。2.求助內(nèi)容。3.希望得到Tom的幫助。Dearteacher,______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yourssincerely,LiHua【答案】Dearteacher,MynameisLiHua.

I’mwritingalettertoyoutoaskforsomehelp.

IhavemetmuchdifficultyinlearningEnglish.

First,

Ifindourtextsfullofnewwordsthatareverydifficultformetoremember.

Besides,

thetextsaretoolongformetorecite.

What’smore,

grammarisalsoverydifficulttolearn.Facedwith

somuchdifficulty,

Ihavetoaskyouforsomehelp.

Wouldyouliketointroducetoussomegoodwaystolearnnewwordssothatwecanrememberthemmoreeasily?

Inthemeanwhile,

Ibegyoutoteachthetextmoreslowlysothattheaveragestudentscaneasilyfollowyou.

Also,

Iwouldlikeyoutointroducesomerulesandgoodwaystolearngrammar.I’msurethatIcanmakegreatprogressinmyEnglishstudywithyourhelp.Yourssincerely,LiHua【分析】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文，要求考生給外籍老師Tom寫一封求助信,希望老師幫助解決自己在英語學(xué)習(xí)方面遇到的一些問題?！驹斀狻吭~匯積累此外：besides→additionally記住：remember→memorize/keep…inmind與此同時(shí)：meanwhile→meantime普通學(xué)生：ordinarystudents→averagestudents進(jìn)步：progress→improvement句式拓展簡單句變復(fù)合句原句：Besides,thetextsaretoolongformetorecite.拓展句：Besides,thetextsaresolongthatIcanhardlyrecitethem.【點(diǎn)睛】[高分句型1]First,Ifindourtextsfullofnewwordsthatareverydifficultformetoremember.（使用了that引導(dǎo)的定語從句）[高分句型2]Facedwithsomuchdifficulty,Ihavetoaskyouforsomehelp.（使用了非謂語動(dòng)詞facedwith作狀語）Test3假如你是李華，最近，你和好朋友Lisa的關(guān)系不好，讓你比較迷茫。于是你寫信向知音欄目主持人Tom求助。請(qǐng)你用100字左右的英文寫這封求助信。內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)如下：1.影響你們友誼的具體事件或者原因。2.你的感受。3.求助的具體內(nèi)容。注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；2.可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。DearTom,__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________YoursLiHua【答案】范文DearTom,Youareacelebrityinaidingthosewhoareintroublebecauseofpersonallifeandwork.I'mwritingtoaskyouofafavorandhopeyouwillbekindenoughtogivemesomeinstructions.Recently,Lisa,mybestfriendfrommychildhood,didn'ttreatmethewaybefore.Whatmadeourrelationshiplessclosewasanaccidentalargumentonhowtogetonwellwithparents.Weholdquitedifferentopinionsonthat.Sincethenwehaveseldomspokentoeachother,whichreallymakesmesadanddepressed.IamatsuchalossoverwhatIcandotomakeupandinneedofyourhelp.Iwillbeextremelygratefulifyoucouldgivemesomeadvice.Lookingforwardtoyourearlyreply.Bestwishesforyou.YoursLiHua【分析】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于求助信，要求考生給知音欄目主持人Tom寫信，就如何處理好與好朋友Lisa的關(guān)系向他尋求幫助?！驹斀狻?.詞匯積累幫助：aid→help最近、近期：recently→lately爭(zhēng)論、爭(zhēng)吵：argument→quarrel觀點(diǎn)：opinion→view/idea2.句式拓展原句：Recently,Lisa,mybestfriendfrommychildhood,didn'ttreatmethewaybefore.拓展句：Recently,Lisa,whohasbeenmybestfriendfrommychildhood,didn'ttreatmethewaybefore.【點(diǎn)睛】[高分句型1]Youareacelebrityinaidingthosewhoareintroublebecauseofpersonallifeandwork.(運(yùn)用了who引導(dǎo)的限制性定語從句)[高分句型2]Whatmadeourrelationshiplessclosewasanaccidentalargumentonhowtogetonwellwithparents.(運(yùn)用了what引導(dǎo)的主語從句和how引導(dǎo)的賓語從句)[高分句型3]IamatsuchalossoverwhatIcandotomakeupandinneedofyourhelp.(運(yùn)用了what引導(dǎo)的賓語從句)Test4假定你是李華，臨近高考，心理壓力特別大，于是向?qū)W校心理老師Tom寫一封信，求助如何緩解壓力，在高考中取得優(yōu)異成績。要點(diǎn)如下：1.自我介紹；2.壓力大的原因；3.希望得到老師的幫助。注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。DearTom,____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yourssincerely，LiHua【答案】Onepossibleversion:DearTom,IamLiHua,aSenior3student.Withthecollegeentranceexaminationapproaching,Ifeelgreatpsychologicalpressure.SoI'mwritingtoyou,askingforhelponhowtorelievethepressureandgetexcellentresultsinthecollegeentranceexamination.I'mencounteringsomeproblemswhichtroublemealot.First,IhavetospendsomuchtimeonmyhomeworkthatIhardlyhavetimetotakesports.Moreover,thehighexpectationfromtheteachersandmyparentsmakesmeextremelystressfulbecauseIdon'twanttoletthemdown.Whattroublesmemostisthatit'sdifficultformetofallasleepeverynight.Facedwiththeaboveproblems,I'manxioustogetyourhelp.Couldyoupleaseoffermesomeadviceonhowtosolvetheseproblems?Yourssincerely，LiHua【分析】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文，要求考生給學(xué)校心理老師Tom寫一封信，求助如何緩解壓力，在高考中取得優(yōu)異成績?！驹斀狻?.詞匯積累即將到來：athand/aroungthecorner尋求幫助：askforhelp/turntosb.forhelp使某人失望：makesb.sad/disappointed/upset渴望做某事：beeagertodo/beanxioustodo/can'twaittodo2.句式拓展句式優(yōu)化原句：First,IhavetospendsomuchtimeonmyhomeworkthatIhardlyhavetimetotakesports.優(yōu)化后：First,spendingmuchtimeonmyhomework,Ihardlyhavetimetotakesports.【點(diǎn)睛】[高分句型1]Withthecollegeentranceexaminationapproaching，Ifeelgreatpsychologicalpressure.（運(yùn)用了with的復(fù)合結(jié)構(gòu)）[高分句型2]Facedwiththeaboveproblems，I'manxioustogetyourhelp.（運(yùn)用了過去分詞做狀語）Test5假定你是李華，你正在為高考緊張復(fù)習(xí)，但最近你遇到了一些問題導(dǎo)致無法集中精力學(xué)習(xí)。于是你給你校的外籍心理老師Kate寫一封求助信尋求幫助。要點(diǎn)如下:1.你所遇到的問題或者困惑2.希望得到Kate的幫助。注意:1.詞數(shù)100左右;2、可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫DearKate,_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Sincerelyyours,LiHua【答案】Onepossibleversion:DearKate,IamLiHua,aSenior3student.Recently,lhavebeenbusypreparingformycollegeentranceexam,butunfortunatelyIfinditquitehardtoconcentrateonmystudy.SoIamwriting