讀后續(xù)寫練習(xí)寫作講義 高三英語(yǔ)三輪沖刺

續(xù)寫：植樹(shù)造林，修復(fù)村莊，人與自然閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開(kāi)頭語(yǔ)續(xù)寫兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。ImettheManoftheTreesinsummertenyearsago,whenIwasvisitingUncleJita.Thoseweredifficulttimes.Peoplewerecuttingdownourforest,andtherewasoftenflooding.Sometimesourwatersupplywasdirty.Whenourpump

didhavecleanwater,wehadtowaitinlineforages.Whenthepumpwasn’tworking,wehadtowalkfivekilometrestothecloseststream.ButIwashappy.Iwasgoingtoseemyfavoriteuncle.Whenthedayfinallyarrived,DaddrovemetoUncleJita’shouseandleft.Oncehesawme,UncleJitaannounced,“Tomorrowwe’regoingtoexploreamagicalplace.Hereismycamera,Amy.Youcantakephotosofwhatyousee.”Thefollowingday,wewokeupandleftearlyonaboat.Thetripwasexciting.Butwhenwegotoff,therewas...nothinginfrontofus.“Idon’twanttotakepicturesofthis,”Icomplained.Unclelaughed,“Startwalking,Amy.Ipromiseyou’llbesurprised.”Aftersometime,Icouldseetheoutlineofaforestinthedistance.Alittlecloser,therewasamanwavingtous.“That’sKabir.Theforestyouseeishis.Heplantedeverysingletree.”AswewalkedtowardsKabir,Uncleexplainedthatthirtyyearsago,thewholeareawasawasteland.ButonedayKabirdecidedtochangeallthatandstartedplantingtrees.Thankstohim,partofthewastelandisnowaparadise(天堂).UncleintroducedmetoKabir,whohadgrayhairandadeterminedface.“Jitatoldmeyoulikeanimals.Areyoureadytoseesome?”heasked.“Ofcourse!”Ireplied.Wecontinuedwalkingandsoonwereunderthetrees.Iturnedmyheadandwasamazedatthedifferencebetweenthetwoplaces.Allbecauseoftheeffortsofoneman.LikeUnclesaid,Kabir’sforestwasmagical.Wesawdeer,rhinos,andeventigers.Duringlunchtime,Kabirexplainedhow,byplantingtrees,itwaspossibletostopthelandfromeroding(侵蝕).注意：1．續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；2．請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。Hearingthis,Iturnedtomyuncle,“Ithinkwecanplanttreestoo.

”

Intheyearsthatfollowed,peopleinourvillageworkedhardtocarryoutourplan.

Hearingthis,Iturnedtomyuncle,“Ithinkwecanplanttreestoo.”

Grabbing

the

camera

inmyhand,I

addedwithexcitement,“I’vegotaplan!I’llshowthemthephotosof

Kabir’smagicalforest!”SeeingUncleandKabir’s

encouragingsmile,Iimmediatelysetdowntowork,

busy

pressingmyshutter.Withthebigplan--restoringourvillagewithcleanwatersupplyin10years

hauntinginmymind,

bubblinginsidemyheartwasthrillandhopeforanewlife.

WhenUncleandIwentbacktothevillageandshowedthesewonderfulpicturestomyneighbors,they

werestunnedby

thebeautyoftheforest.“Itwasthetreesthatturnedtheplaceintoaparadise!”Wethenexplained

our

tree-plantingplan

tothevillagers,whichwasquicklyacceptedbyallofthem.

Intheyearsthatfollowed,peopleinourvillageworkedhardtocarryoutourplan.

Westartedtoplanttreesbyrolling

oursleevesup,diggingholes,settingsaplingsintoholesandcoveringthemwithsoil,

whichhaseventuallyhelped

protectthesoil

and

stoppedthelandfromeroding.Thankstothetrees,thewaterhasbeenpurifiedandwefinallyhave

cleanandstablewatersupply.

Yearswitnessedourgreatendeavorandourperspirationeventuallypaidoff.Ourvillage

isnowsurroundedby

smallthrivingforestswithbloomingflowers,livelyanimalsandcrystal-clearstreamsrunningthrough.Standingunderthetreesand

enjoyingthestrokeofgentlebreeze,Iheardbirdschirpingbetweenbranchesasifcelebrating

forourfruitfulachievementandpraisingforourwisechoice-doingsomethingrightandturningourlifebackontrackwithourrespectandworshipforourMotherNature.

聽(tīng)到這些，我轉(zhuǎn)向叔叔，“我想我們也可以種樹(shù)。”我把相機(jī)拿在手里，興奮地補(bǔ)充道:“我有個(gè)計(jì)劃!我要給他們看卡比爾魔法森林的照片!”看到叔叔和卡比爾鼓勵(lì)我的微笑，我立刻坐下來(lái)工作，忙著按快門。十年后讓我們村恢復(fù)清潔供水的宏偉計(jì)劃縈繞在我的腦海中，我的內(nèi)心沸騰著對(duì)新生活的興奮和希望。當(dāng)我和叔叔回到村子，把這些精彩的照片給鄰居們看時(shí)，他們都被森林的美麗驚呆了?！笆沁@些樹(shù)把這里變成了天堂!”然后我們向村民們解釋了我們的植樹(shù)計(jì)劃，很快他們都接受了。在接下來(lái)的幾年里，我們村里的人努力工作來(lái)執(zhí)行我們的計(jì)劃。我們開(kāi)始種樹(shù)，卷起袖子，挖洞，把樹(shù)苗埋在洞里，用土覆蓋，最終保護(hù)了土壤，阻止了土地的侵蝕。多虧了這些樹(shù)，水被凈化了，我們終于有了干凈穩(wěn)定的供水。歲月見(jiàn)證了我們的努力，汗水終于有了回報(bào)。我們的村莊現(xiàn)在被茂密的小森林包圍著，鮮花盛開(kāi)，動(dòng)物活潑，清澈的溪流流過(guò)。站在樹(shù)下，享受著微風(fēng)的撫摸，我聽(tīng)到鳥(niǎo)兒在樹(shù)枝間啁啾，仿佛在慶祝我們豐碩的成就，贊美我們明智的選擇——做了正確的事情，讓我們的生活回到正軌，尊重和崇拜我們的大自然母親。其他版本1

Hearingthis,Iturnedtomyuncle,"Ithinkwecanplanttreestoo."Themomentmywordsspilledoutoflips,

itfoundacceptance

fromuncleandkabir,approvingsmilesparkingintheireyes.Tomaterializemyidea,kabirsharedwithushissuccessfulrecipeindetail.Havingengravedeverywordhesaidinmind,isetforhomewiththephotosofKabir’smagicalforest.Withthebigplan--restoringourvillagewithcleanwatersupplyin10yearshauntinginmymind,

bubblinginsidemyheartwasthrillandhopeforanewlife.Thefollowingdayswitnessedmyfamilyrolledoursleevesup,diggingholes,settingsaplingsintoholesandcoveringthemwithsoil.Photosofthemagicalforestwithnews

thatplantingtreescansaveuscleanwater

spreadingaroundvillage,moreandmorepeoplejoinedus.

Intheyearsthatfollowed,peopleinourvillageworkedhardtocarryoutourplan.

Demandingastheprocesswas,thehugeprojectbreathedlifeandasenseofachievementintoeveryone’sheart.

Whatamagicaldifferenceoureffortbrought:

wastedareasgivingwaytogreeneryregions,diverseanimalscomingandgoingasvisitorsandaboveall,thereturningofourlifewater---

cleanandsweet.

Haditnotbeenfor

Kabir’sinspiration,wecouldn’thaverealized

howfarwehavegonetobetraythelawsofnature.

Standingunderthetreesandenjoyingthestrokeofgentlebreeze,Iheardbirdschirpingbetweenbranchesasifcelebrating

forourfruitfulachievementandpraisingforourwisechoice-doingsomethingrightandturningourlifebackontrackwithourrespectandworshipforourMotherNature.

其他版本2

Hearingthis,Iturnedtomyuncle,

“Ithinkwecanplanttreestoo.”

Grabbingthe

camera

inmyhand,Iaddedwithexcitement,

“I’vegotaplan!I’llshowthemthephotosof

Kabir’smagicalforest!”

SeeingUncleandKabir’sencouragingsmile,Iimmediatelysetdowntowork,busy

pressingmyshutter.WhenUncleandIwentbacktothevillageandshowedthesewonderfulpicturestomyneighbors,they

werestunnedby

thebeautyoftheforest.

“Itwasthetreesthatturnedtheplaceintoaparadise!”

Wethenexplained

our

tree-plantingplan

tothevillagers,whichwasquicklyacceptedbyallofthem.

Intheyearsthatfollowed,peopleinourvillageworkedhardtocarryoutourplan.

Insteadof

cuttingdownourforest,westartedtoplanttrees,whichhaseventuallyhelped

protectthesoil

and

stoppedthelandfromeroding.Thankstothetrees,thewaterhasbeenpurifiedandwefinallyhave

cleanandstablewatersupply.Withourjointefforts,ourvillageisnowsurroundedby

smallthrivingforestswithbloomingflowers,livelyanimalsandcrystal-clearstreamsrunningthrough.Witnessingthegradualchangeofourvillage,we'vecometorealizethat

onlywhenweliveinharmonywithnaturecanwehaveabrighterfuture..續(xù)寫：鞋子溫情閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開(kāi)頭語(yǔ)續(xù)寫兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文?！癢hat'sthatsqueakynoise?"Megaskedhereight-year-olddaughter,Haley.Shelookeddownatthegirl'sshoesandnoticedhersneakerssoles(鞋底)hadbeentornopen.MegandHaleywereontheirwayhomefromschool,andithadjuststoppedraining.WaterontheroadhadleakedintoHaley’sdamagedshoesmakingasquishy(吱吱作響的)noise.Megimmediatelytookherdaughtertoashoestoretobuyheranewpairofsneakers.ShehadsomemoneyforgroceriesbutthoughtgettingHaleyanewpairofshoeswasmoreimportant.“Howaboutthese?”askedHaley,whowascheckingshoesinthesectiononlyforboys.“Mama,Iwanttheselimited-editionsneakers.BuddylovesaTVshowandalwaystellsmehowhewishestowearsuchshoes.”Megfrowned.Notonlydidshenothavemoneytoaffordtwopairsofshoes,butshewonderedwhyHaleywastoointerestedingettingherclassmateBuddyanewpair.Sensinghermother'shesitation,Haleycontinued,“Buddyisfromaverypoorfamily,mama.Poorerthanus.Hisshoesaretornandlookmiserable.Everybodylaughsathim.Please,canwebuytheseshoesforhim?Youcanbuyminelater.”Megthoughtforawhileanddecideditwouldbebestifsheboughtherdaughtershoesfornow.“Youwillfallsickifyoukeepwearingyourwettornshoes.I'msorry,honey,butyouneedanewpair.”Haleysighedheavilyandagreed.Shewasnotexcitedtoseethenewpairofsneakershermomhadboughtforher.AsMegandHaleyleft,Bob,theshoestoreownerwhoknewMegwell,walkedtotheentranceandsighed.Hehadoverheardeverythingandknewwhatitwasliketoliveinpoverty.HewantedtohelpHaleyfulfillhermissionofhelpingBuddybutdidn'tknowhow.Moreover,thepairofshoesHaleywantedtogetforBuddywasalimited-editioncollection,whichhadbeenorderedbysomeoneelse.Hecouldnotsimplygivethemaway.注意:1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右;2.請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。Suddenly,Bobrememberedsomethingandclimbeddownstairswhereoldshoeswerestored.Thenextmorning,Haleywasshockedtofindashoeboxlyingoutsideherhouse.范文1：Suddenly,Bobrememberedsomethingandclimbeddownstairswhereoldshoeswerestored.Wrigglinghiswaythroughthesectionswhereoldlimited-editionshoeswerestocked,hesearchedhighandlowandfinallyrestedhiseyesontheshoeboxatthetopoftheshelf.Thereitwas;thepairboremuchresemblancetowhatBuddydesiredbutwereanolderversion.Hegingerlybroughtitdownanddustedtheashoff.ThenhecontactedHaley'smotherandexplainedhismotive.“Iwanttosurprisethegirl.IsthatOKifIdropofftheshoesbeforesixtomorrowmorning?”“Sure.Thanks,Mr.White.I'mgladyoucouldhelp!”Megsaidgratefully.Thenextmorning,Haleywasshockedtofindashoeboxlyingoutsideherhouse.Sherubbedhersleepyeyesandcaughtsightofthenotestuckonthebox.Itwaswritten,“HopeBuddylovesthem!”Curioustoknowwhatwasinside,Haleyhurriedlyopenedtheboxandstoodstunnedthenextminute.Thoughabitdifferent,theshoeswerewhatwouldmakeBuddyexhilarated.Cradlingtheshoesinherarms,shecriedinjoy.Meg,whohadbeenhiddenbehindthedoortoeyeherdaughter’sreaction,shedtears,too.Shewasconvincedthatsomethingelseilluminatedherthatday—twogoldenhearts.

突然，鮑勃想起了一件事，他爬到放舊鞋的樓下。他在擺放限量版舊鞋的貨架間蠕動(dòng)著，上下尋找著，最后把目光落在了架子頂部的鞋盒上。它就在那兒;這一對(duì)很像巴迪想要的，但卻是一個(gè)舊版本。他小心翼翼地把它拿下來(lái)，撣掉上面的灰。然后他聯(lián)系了海莉的母親，解釋了他的動(dòng)機(jī)?！拔蚁虢o女孩一個(gè)驚喜。我明天早上6點(diǎn)前把鞋送過(guò)來(lái)行嗎?”“當(dāng)然。謝謝，懷特先生。我很高興你能幫忙!”梅格感激地說(shuō)。

第二天早上，海莉震驚地發(fā)現(xiàn)她家門外躺著一個(gè)鞋盒。她揉了揉睡眼，看到了粘在盒子上的紙條。上面寫著:“希望巴迪愛(ài)他們!”哈利很想知道里面是什么，趕緊打開(kāi)盒子，站在那里呆了一分鐘。雖然有點(diǎn)不同，但這雙鞋會(huì)讓巴迪興奮不已。她把鞋子抱在懷里，高興地叫了起來(lái)。梅格一直躲在門后看著女兒的反應(yīng)，也流下了眼淚。她確信那天有別的東西照亮了她——兩顆金色的心。范文2