Unit4-Reading for writing 高中英語人教版2019必修第三冊

Unit4

SpaceExploration

ReadingforWritingChina’sfirstastronaut:YangLiweiThefirstChinesewomantoreachspace:LiuYangHowmuchmoneyhasChinaspentonitsspaceprogram?However......Theearthisstillfacing

poverty,pollution,disease,

hunger......povertyhungerpollutiondiseaseIsexploringspaceawasteoftimeandmoney?Why?1.Whatgenreisthisarticle?（題材）2.Whatistheissue(議題)?It’sanargumentativeessay.Isexploringspaceawasteornot?Tip1:Topicsentenceisusuallythefirstorthelastsentence.Pickoutthetopicsentenceofeachparagraph.Para1Para2Para3Para4

Para5Firstly,exploringspacehasalreadymadeadifferenceinthefightagainstworldhunger.Secondly,spaceexplorationhasalreadypromotedtechnologicalimprovementsthatbenefitusall.Finally,sendingastronautsintospacehashelpedpeopletothinkabouttheworld'sproblemsandeventofindwaystosolvethem.Somepeoplearguethatweshouldstop....However,othersfeelthisisashallowview...Inclosing,exploringspaceprovidestheworldwithmanydifferentbenefits.IntroductionBodyConclusionDifferentpointsReadforstructure

Evidence1Evidence2Evidence3TosummarizetheargumentTorepeatthepointCountriesaroundtheglobearespendingbillionsofdollarsandlotsoftimeonvariousspacemissions,whethertoMarsorotherplanetsmuchfurtheraway.Somepeoplearguethatweshouldstopwastingtimeandmoneyexploringspace.Instead,weshouldfeedtheworld’spoorandfindimmediatesolutionstootherproblems,suchaspollutionandfataldiseases.However,othersfeelthisisashallowviewwhichfailstorealizehowexploringspacehelpsus.PointIntroducethetopicDifferentpoints在…花費金錢或時間無論更遠的…的解決辦法

Firstly,exploringspacehasalreadymadeadifferenceinthefightagainstworldhunger.IthasdirectlyresultedinthemanysatellitesthatnoworbitEarth.Anumberofthesatellitesrecorddataonlandandweatherpatterns.ThenthedataistransmittedtoscientistsonEarth.Aftercarefulanalysis,thescientistscanprovideusefulrecommendationsandadviceforfarmers.Asaresult,Space-basedsciencehashelpedfarminginitseffortstogrowenoughfoodtofeedEarth’sincreasingpopulation.Evidence1Howdoesithelptofightagainstworldhunger?Supportingdetails導致傳輸?shù)浇Y果持續(xù)增長的人口Evidence2

Secondly,spaceexplorationhasalreadypromotedtechnologicalimprovementsthatbenefitusall.High-endproductsaroundtheworldaremadetoahigherstandardnowbecauseofadvancedtechnologywhichwasfirstcreatedtomeettherequirementsforspaceexploration.Forexample,spacetechnologieshavehelpedtheresearchanddevelopmentofdifferenttypesofnewmaterial.Theyhavealsohelpedcompaniesmakebetterheartmonitorsandothermachinesthatdoctorsregularlyuse.Today,spacetechnologiesarewidelyusedinallkindsofindustries,andeverydayproductssuchasmemoryfoampillows,andsmartphonecamerasarechangingourlives.

Whatkindoftechnologicalimprovementsdowehavenow?Supportingdetails推動科技進步滿足…的要求廣泛使用Evidence3

Finally,sendingastronautsintospacehashelpedpeopletothinkabouttheworld’sproblemsandeventofindwaystosolvethem.Seeingpicturesofourplanetasanislandinablackseamadepeoplerealisethatoutplanet’sresourcesarelimited.Inordertoprovideforsucharapidlyincreasingpopulation,scientistsaretryingtofindotherplanetsthatcouldonedaybeournewhome.ThegreatestattentionatpresentisonMarsbecauseitisclosertoEarth.Inthefuture,humansmayliveonbothplanets.1.Whataretheproblemsofourplanet?2.Whatarethewaystosolvethem?Supportingdetails

findingotherplanettoliveon

Inclosing,exploringspaceprovidestheworldwithmanydifferentbenefits.Therefore,itshouldcontinuesoastoprovidenewandbettersolutionstopeople’sshort-termandlong-termproblems.PointTosummarizetheargumentTorepeatthepoint最后為了Introduction

Mainbody

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Mainbody

ConclusionThe

structureofthepassageisgeneral-particular-general(總-分-總）However

Firstly

Secondly

FinallyInclosingTheauthorusedmanytransitionalwordstodevelopineveryparagraphs.Whatarethey?Tip2:Tomakeourarticlemorelogical,weshouldusesomelinkingwords.（連詞）Languagefeaturesofanargument體裁：議論文人稱：第三人稱、第一人稱時態(tài)：一般現(xiàn)在時為主要點：

分論點1+細節(jié)分論點2+細節(jié)分論點3+細節(jié)……結論：引出話題簡潔、清晰、明確1.Thereisawidespreadconcernovertheissuethat+主題

人們普遍擔憂關于……的問題2.Nowadays,主題isbecomingincreasinglypopular/serious.現(xiàn)在，……變得越來越流行/嚴重3.With

thedevelopmentof……,moreandmorepeoplechoosetodo+主題隨著……的發(fā)展，越來越多的人選擇做……闡明觀點人們對此有不同看法。Theopinions

concerningthishottopicvaryfrompersontoperson.

People

takedifferentattitudestowards/holddifferentopinionsonthisproblem/thisissue.人們認為……Some/Mostholdtheopinionthat...

一些/大多數(shù)認為……Some/Mostareinfavoroftheideathat...一些/大多數(shù)贊成……的觀點Peoplewhoarefor/againsttheidea

thinkthat...支持/反對這個想法的人認為……Somepeopleholdtheviewthat...while

othersarguethat...有些人認為……而另一些人認為……引出話題如何過渡Fromtheir/mypointofview,therearethreefactorscontributingto

thisattitude/problem,which

areasfollows.

在我看來，導致這種態(tài)度/這個問題的原因有三個，具體如下。Itcanbeillustrated

fromthefollowing

points.可以從以下幾點解釋。Itturnsoutbeneficial/harmful

fromthefollowingaspects.從以下幾方面來說，它是有益的/有害的。

如何銜接論據(jù)？表示遞進關系：Inthefirstplace;firstofall;

tobeginwith;firstlywhat’smore;furthermore;moreover;besides;what'sworse;tomakemattersworse;

worsestill表示列舉事實：suchas;

forexample/instance;

take...forexample;

表示解釋：thatistosay;inotherwords表示觀點：inone’sopinion,

inone’sview,

fromone’spointofview,asfarasIamconcerned,asforsb,

personally

如何增加支撐性細節(jié)①事實細節(jié)——列舉具體的實例；補充相關信息Ilikereadingbooks.Ilikereadingbooks,suchasnovels,shortstories,magazinesandnewspapers.I'dliketoseekapenpalwhoisinterestedintravelingjustlikeme.I'dliketoseekapenpalwhoisinterestedintravelingjustlikeme.Ifpossible,wecantraveltogetherorsharetravelingexperiences.

如何增加支撐性細節(jié)②邏輯細節(jié)——補充條件、原因、結果、目的等邏輯性內(nèi)容First,itisimportanttotakeaChinesecourse.First,itisimportanttotakeaChinesecourse,asyou’llbeabletolearnfromtheteacherandpracticewithyourfellowstudents.Iamplanningtotakeapart-timejobinaforeigncapitalcompany.Inordertogetsomepracticalexperience,Iamplanningtotakeapart-timejobinaforeigncapitalcompany.

如何增加支撐性細節(jié)③數(shù)據(jù)細節(jié)——羅列相關數(shù)據(jù)Studentstookanactivepartinthewritingcompetition.Studentstookanactivepartinthewritingcompetition.Totally758studentssubmittedtheirworksand100ofthemwonaprizebecauseoftheircreativemindsandexpressivewords.④引用——引用諺語或名人名言，增加說服力和可讀性Ifirmlybelievethatyouwillsucceed.Chancefavorsthepreparedmind.Ifirmlybelievethatyouwillsucceedaslongasyousparenoeffortforit.重申觀點表示總結：inshort;inbrief;inconclusion;ina/oneword;tosumup;allinall;onthewhole;ingeneral增強語氣：There’snodoubtthat…There’snodenyingthat…雙重否定

Never/Bynomeanscan/shouldwedo…假定你是李華，最近你班舉行了一次班會，班會的主題是：太空探索的意義。請結合下表內(nèi)容，用英語給校報寫一篇短文，客觀地介紹討論的情況并表達你自己的觀點。贊同者反對者1．獲得新的知識；2．從太空取得新資源；3．擴大人類的生存空間。1．耗資巨大；2．宇航員的安全問題。注意：1．詞數(shù)80左右；2．可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。導入主題在前幾天的班會上，我們對是否有必要進行外太空的探索進行了討論。闡述正方觀點1.獲得新知識；2.從太空取得新資源；3.擴大人類未來的生存空間。你的觀點agreeordisagree?Reason?Structure闡述反方觀點1.耗資巨大；2.宇航員的安全問題。導入主題在前幾天的班會上，我們進行了討論，認為進行太空探索是必要的。Structure在前幾天的班會上，我們對是否有必要進行外太空的探索進行了討論。Wehadanargumentoverwhetherit'snecessarytocarryouttheouterspaceexplorationsataclassmeetingtheotherday．Differentstudentshavedifferentattitudestowardsit.闡述正方觀點1.獲得新知識；2.從太空取得新資源；3.擴大人類未來的生存空間。Structure我們中的一些人認為研究外太空很重要。首先，人們可以通過探索更好地了解外層空間。

Someofusthinkit’simportanttoresearchtheouterspace.Firstofall，peoplecangetabetterunderstandingoftheouterspacethroughtheirexploration.其次，在那里可以為人類找到新的資源。Secondly，newresourcescanbefoundthereforhumanbeing.第三，這種探索可能在不久的將來為人類生活帶來新的生存空間。Thirdly，thisexplorationcanpossiblybringaboutnewlivingspaceforhumanlifeinthenearfuture.Structure闡述反方觀點1.耗資巨大；2.宇航員的安全問題。

他們認為這種探索需要花很多錢，這是不值得的。此外，宇航員在外太空做這樣的工作是非常危險的。Theybelievethatittakessomuchmoneytodothiskindofexploration，whichisnotworththevalue.

Besides，itisverydangerousforastronautstodosuchworkintheouterspace.然而，其他人則對此強烈反對。However，othersarestronglyagainstit.你的觀點agreeordisagree?Reason?Structure在我看來，人們應該具有開拓性（pioneering），因此，這種對外層空間的探索是值得嘗試的