讀后續(xù)寫-情緒描寫課件【核心素養(yǎng)提升+備課精講精研】高考英語復習

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Howishefeeling?

1Itwasthedayofthebigcross-countryrun.Studentsfromsevendifferentprimaryschoolsinandaroundthesmalltownwerewarmingupandwalkingtheroute(路線)throughthickevergreenforest.

1IlookedaroundandfinallyspottedDavid,whowasstandingbyhimselfofftothesidebyafence.Hewassmallfortenyearsold.Hisusualbigtoothysmilewasabsenttoday.

2Whatwaswrong?Hehadworkedsohardforthisevent!

3

4Davidhadabraindiseasewhichpreventedhimfromwalkingorrunninglikeotherchildren,butatschoolhisclassmatesthoughtofhimasaregularkid.Healwaysparticipatedtothebestofhisabilityinwhatevertheyweredoing.讀后續(xù)寫情緒描寫

(每一篇都能用！)“我開心

”3種

高級句式

2022年全國1卷

為例

1Itwasthedayofthebigcross-countryrun.Studentsfromsevendifferentprimaryschoolsinandaroundthesmalltownwerewarmingupandwalkingtheroute(路線)throughthickevergreenforest.

2

3

4Readyforrace

1IlookedaroundandfinallyspottedDavid,whowasstandingbyhimselfofftothesidebyafence.Hewassmallfortenyearsold.Hisusualbigtoothysmilewasabsenttoday.

2s

3au

4BeforetheraceIwalkedoverandaskedhimwhyhewasn'twiththeotherchildren.Hehesitated(猶豫)andthensaidhehaddecidednottorun.

2Whatwaswrong?Hehadworkedsohardforthisevent!

3

4BeforetheraceIquicklysearchedthecrowdfortheschool'scoachandaskedhimwhathadhappened."Iwasafraidthatkidsfromotherschoolswouldlaughathim,"heexplaineduncomfortably."Igavehimthechoicetorunornot,andlethimdecide."

3

4BeforetheraceIbitbackmyfrustration(懊惱).Iknewthecoachmeantwell-hethoughthewasdoingtherightthing.AftermakingsurethatDavidcouldrunifhewanted,Iturnedtofindhimcomingtowardsme,hissmallbodyrockingfromsidetosideasheswunghisfeetforward.

1Itwasthedayofthebigcross-countryrun.Studentsfromsevendifferentprimaryschoolsinandaroundthesmalltownwerewarmingupandwalkingtheroute(路線)throughthickevergreenforest.

2Whatwaswrong?Hehadworkedsohardforthisevent!

3

4Davidhadabraindiseasewhichprevented(阻止)himfromwalkingorrunninglikeotherchildren,butatschoolhisclassmatesthoughtofhimasaregularkid.Healwaysparticipatedtothebestofhisabilityinwhatevertheyweredoing.

1Itwasthedayofthebigcross-countryrun.Studentsfromsevendifferentprimaryschoolsinandaroundthesmalltownwerewarmingupandwalkingtheroute(路線)throughthickevergreenforest.

2Whatwaswrong?Hehadworkedsohardforthisevent!

3

4ThatwaswhynoneofthechildrenthoughtitunusualthatDavidhaddecidedtojointhecross-countryteam.Itjusttookhimlonger-that'sall.Davidhadnotmissedasinglepractice,andalthoughhealwaysfinishedhisrunlongaftertheotherchildren,hedidalwaysfinish.AsaspecialeducationteacherattheDavidfacedandwasschool,Iwasfamiliarwiththechallengesthechallengesproudofhisstrongdetermination(決心).e7d195523061f1c011414db08df74492ac20befa3fb15586EED641F7DA837B3633596E05B8AE62E50B5E5456BD3C648DCE2D234CC482E88EB223CB95B207F69907A09C8021443F850886F0462B4D95DA40FEEC67EEE4C0008F0A643130BF266E4312290E282E16EEADFA6C3AD458AEB27BCA95FABCD4888E99644CA7D552501BE770A8381F56E4D2

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Paragraph2:IwatchedasDavidmoveduptothestartinglinewiththeotherrunners.

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我開心：“Iamhappy.”(換主語)：“開心(的情緒)抓住了我”Delightseizedme.(加介短)：“一股開心(的情緒)抓住了我”Awaveofdelightseizedme.(加并列)：“開心與振奮(的情緒)抓住了我”Delightandexcitementseizedme.(加副詞)：“即刻地，一股開心(的情緒)抓住了我”Instantly,astrongsenseofdelight

seizedme.(加時間狀從)：“聽到那好消息，一股開心(的情緒)即刻抓住了我”Instantly,astrongsenseofdelightseizedme

asIheardthegoodnews.

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1.無靈主語：

“情緒名詞+固定動詞+sb”+as/when

sbdosth當某人做某事時，一股xx情緒涌上心頭。例句：Uncontrollably,awaveofregretwashedovermeasIheardthebadnews.聽到這個壞消息時，一股悔恨的情緒無法控制地涌上我心頭。（情緒名詞）：happiness/joy/delight開心gratitude/appreciation

感激admiration

欽佩/贊賞anger/rage/fury狂怒sadness/sorrow悲傷fear/terror/fright/panic

害怕guilt/regret/remorse愧疚悔恨astonishment/shock/surprise

震驚nervousness/anxiety/stress不安/焦慮/壓力（固定動詞）：seize

抓住catch(過去式caught)strike(過去式

struck)surround圍繞著takeholdof

控制washover讓人感到comeover包圍/支配envelop

籠罩overwhelm使難以承受+sb(藍字為推薦使用詞匯)e7d195523061f1c011414db08df74492ac20befa3fb15586EED641F7DA837B3633596E05B8AE62E50B5E5456BD3C648DCE2D234CC482E88EB223CB95B207F69907A09C8021443F850886F0462B4D95DA40FEEC67EEE4C0008F0A643130BF266E4312290E282E16EEADFA6C3AD458AEB27BCA95FABCD4888E99644CA7D552501BE770A8381F56E4D2

1.無靈主語：

“情緒名詞+固定動詞+sb”+as/when

sbdosth當某人做某事時，一股xx情緒涌上心頭。例句：Uncontrollably,awaveofregret

washedovermeasIheardthebadnews.聽到這個壞消息時，一股悔恨的情緒無法控制地涌上我心頭。練習

1.當意識到如果沒有恰當?shù)墓膭?，大衛(wèi)的情況可能會變得更糟，我感到擔憂和焦慮。WorryandanxietyseizedmeasIrealizedDavid'ssituationmightgetworsewithoutproperencouragement.2.當大衛(wèi)終于下定決心繼續(xù)賽跑時，我感到欣慰和開心。ReliefanddelightcameovermewhenDavidfinallybecamedeterminedto(madeuphismindto)continuetherace.e7d195523061f1c011414db08df74492ac20befa3fb15586EED641F7DA837B3633596E05B8AE62E50B5E5456BD3C648DCE2D234CC482E88EB223CB95B207F69907A09C8021443F850886F0462B4D95DA40FEEC67EEE4C0008F0A643130BF266E4312290E282E16EEADFA6C3AD458AEB27BCA95FABCD4888E99644CA7D552501BE770A8381F56E4D2

(感到xx和xx,某人做某事1，并做某事2)例句：Nervousandscared,Petermanagedtostepontothestage,startingtodeliverhisspeech.

(感到)緊張和害怕，彼得勉力走上舞臺，開始發(fā)表演講。練習1：感到堅定和受到鼓舞，David抬起頭，感激地看著我。Determinedandinspired(encouraged),Davidraisedhishead,lookingatmewithgratitude.練習2：(感到)放松的和快樂的，大衛(wèi)在越過終點線后立刻向我揮手，表達他的快樂和感激。Relievedanddelighted,Davidwavedatmeimmediatelyaftercrossingthefinishline,conveying(showing)hishappinessandgratitude.2.非謂語：情緒形容詞1+情緒形容詞2,sbdosth,doingsth.

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[情緒形容詞]非謂語

·擴寫疊加

大衛(wèi)繼續(xù)跑步：“Davidkeptonrunning.”(前加情緒形容詞)：“大衛(wèi)充滿信心和決心，繼續(xù)奔跑”Confidentanddetermined,Davidkeptonrunning.(后加非謂語/分動作)：“大衛(wèi)充滿信心和決心，繼續(xù)奔跑，奮力沖向終點線”Confidentanddetermined,Davidkeptonrunning,strugglingtoreachthefinishline.(managingtoreachthefinishline)(后加獨立主格/五官)：“大衛(wèi)自信而堅定，繼續(xù)奔跑，汗水順著他的臉流下來”Confidentanddetermined,Davirdkeptonunning,sweatstreamingdownhisface.e7d195523061f1c011414db08df74492ac20befa3fb15586EED641F7DA837B3633596E05B8AE62E50B5E5456BD3C648DCE2D234CC482E88EB223CB95B207F69907A09C8021443F850886F0462B4D95DA40FEEC67EEE4C0008F0A643130BF266E4312290E282E16EEADFA6C3AD458AEB27BCA95FABCD4888E99644CA7D552501BE770A8381F56E4D2

盡管某人(感到)xx,某人仍做某事例句：Nervousashewas,Peterpluckedupcourageandmadehiswaytothestage.盡管很緊張，彼得仍鼓起勇氣走上舞臺。練習1：盡管還有一絲緊張，David決心完成賽跑。Slightlynervousashewas,Davidbecamedeterminedtofinishtherace.練習2：[2022廣州一模]盡管很著急和不情愿，我還是按照爸爸的要求去洗碗。Anxiousandreluctant(unwilling)asIwas,IstilldidthedishesatDad’srequest.3.讓步狀語從句：情緒形容詞+assb+be動詞,sb(still)dosth.

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Tears

wellingupinhiseyes,hethankedthepolicewith/inatremblingvoice.Tears

streamingdown

hischeeks,Davidthankedmeforthetimelyencouragement.Eyes

filledwith

regretfultears,sbdosth...(眼里滿含著...)Eyesglitteringwith

relief/joy,sbdosth...(眼里閃著...)Face

gleamingwith

delight,Peterfailedtoutteraword.(臉上洋溢著喜悅)Heart

beatingwith

happiness,sb...

(某人的心因...而怦怦直跳)其他部位：Arms/legs/muscles

achingandkneesshaking/trembling,Ididsth...(胳膊/腿/肌肉酸痛，膝蓋發(fā)抖/顫抖，我...)(劃橫線的情緒詞，可按需換掉)4.獨立主格：身體部位+動詞非謂語，sbdosth.

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Tears

wellingupinsb’seyes/streamingdown

sb’scheeks,sbdosthEyesglitteringwith

relief/joy,sbdosth...(眼里閃著...)Face

gleamingwith

delight,Peterfailedtoutteraword.

(臉上洋溢著喜悅)Heart

beatingwith

happiness,sb...

(某人的心因...而怦怦直跳)4.獨立主格：身體部位+動詞非謂語，sbdosth.

練習1：[2022全國1卷]大衛(wèi)自信而堅定，繼續(xù)奔跑，汗水順著他的臉流下來。Confidentanddetermined,Davidkeptonrunning,sweatstreamingdownhisface.練習2：讓我們欣喜若狂的是，大衛(wèi)順利越過終點線，臉上洋溢著滿足的喜悅。Toourecstasy,Davidcrossedthefinishlinesmoothly,hisfaceshiningwithsatisfieddelight.e7d195523061f1c011414db08df74492ac20befa3fb15586EED641F7DA837B3633596E05B8AE62E50B5E5456BD3C648DCE2D234CC482E88EB223CB95B207F69907A09C8021443F850886F0462B4D95DA40FEEC67EEE4C0008F0A643130BF266E4312290E282E16EEADFA6C3AD458AEB27BCA95FABCD4888E99644CA7D552501BE770A8381F56E4D2

①

無靈主語+時間狀語從句：情緒名詞+動詞+sb+as/whensbdosth.

Uncontrollably,nervousnessoverwhelmedPeterashesteppedontothestage.②非謂語：情緒形容詞1+情緒形容詞2,sbdosth,doingsth.Nervousandslightlyscared,Petermanagedtostepontothestage,startingtodeliverhisspeech.③

讓步狀語從句：情緒形容詞+assb+be動詞,sbdosth.Nervousashewas,Davidpluckedupcourageandmadehiswaytothestage.加在你的“sbdosth”前加在你的“sbdosth”前

句式總結

每

一

篇

續(xù)

寫

都

能

用！長句e7d195523061f1c011414db08df74492ac20befa3fb15586EED641F7DA837B3633596E05B8AE62E50B5E5456BD3C648DCE2D234CC482E88EB223CB95B207F69907A09C8021443F850886F0462B4D95DA40FEEC67EEE4C0008F0A643130BF266E4312290E282E16EEADFA6C3AD458AEB27BCA95FABCD4888E99644CA7D552501BE770A8381F56E4D2

①

無靈主語②非謂語

③

讓步狀從+④

獨立主格

句式雜糅

①+④:NervousnessenvelopingPeter,hewalkedtowardsthestage,hishandsshakingslightly.緊張籠罩在彼得心頭，他走向舞臺，雙手微微顫抖。②+④:Nervousandslightlyscared,Peterwalkedtowardsthestage,hishandsshakingslightly.緊張，有點害怕，彼得勉力走上舞臺，手微微顫抖。③+④:Nervousashewas,Peterwalkedtowardsthestage,hishandsshakingslightly.Peter雖然緊張，但還是走上舞臺，他的手微微顫抖。一

鍵疊buff①無②非③讓：位于句首④獨立主格：位于句末三

段

式

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①

無靈主語+時間狀從：(情緒名詞+動詞+sb)+(as/whensbdosth).

(獨立長句)

(重)②

非謂語：情緒形容詞1+,情緒形容詞2,sbdosth,doingsth.

(加在句首)

(“淺寫情緒”)③

讓步狀語從句：Adj.+as+sb+be動詞,sbdosth.(加在句首)

(“淺寫情緒”)?情緒描寫-位置建議：續(xù)寫首句

心理變化處

情節(jié)變化處結尾句(以上建議僅供參考，非絕對)

句式特點+全文位置建議“首尾+變化”e7d195523061f1c011414db08df74492ac20befa3fb15586EED641F7DA837B3633596E05B8AE62E50B5E5456BD3C648DCE2D234CC482E88EB223CB95B207F69907A09C8021443F850886F0462B4D95DA40FEEC67EEE4C0008F0A643130BF266E4312290E282E16EEADFA6C3AD458AEB27BCA95FABCD4888E99644CA7D552501BE770A8381F56E4D2

Paragraph1:Wesatdownnexttoeachother,butDavidwouldn'tlookatme.Paragraph2:IwatchedasDavidmoveduptothestartinglinewiththeotherrunners.Completethetwoparagraphswithwhatyoulearntinthisclass.Thankyouforyourattention!續(xù)寫微作文（2021.徐州模擬）請根據(jù)所給情節(jié)，嘗試續(xù)寫一個正在等待與老友重逢以及終于等到老友的情節(jié)。側重人物高興和激動的情感細節(jié)描寫。（詞數(shù)70左右，注意同義詞替換，避免重復）Shestoodbythewindow,joyfullyandpatientlywatching.________________

________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Hint：timecluesWaiting:________________________________________Friendappearing:______________________________Finalmeeting:__________________________________Thankyouforyourattention!續(xù)寫微作文（2021.徐州模擬）請根據(jù)所給情節(jié)，嘗試續(xù)寫一個正在等待與老友重逢以及終于等到老友的情節(jié)。側重人物高興和激動的情感細節(jié)描寫。（詞數(shù)70左右，注意同義詞替換，避免重復）Shestoodbythewindow,joyfullyandpatientlywatching.________________

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Goldensunlightdancedinfloatedintheair.Shestaredattheendoftheroad,hopingherclosefriendwouldcomeearlier.Itseemedasifshehadbeenstandingthereforacentury.Suddenlyawaveofhappinessandexcitementseized/sweptoverherwhenshecaughtsightofafamiliarfigure.Herheartleapedwithjoy,andashiningsmilelitupherface.Sherantoherfriendandthrewherselfintoherfriend'sarms.Tearsof

joy

/happiness

/excitementwelledupintheireyesastheyhuggedtightlytogether.Hint：timecluesWaiting:_________________________________________Friendappearing:______________________________________Finalmeeting:_______________________________________________e7d195523061f1c011414db08df74492ac20befa3fb15586EED641F7DA837B3633596E05B8AE62E50B5E5456BD3C648DCE2D234CC482E88EB223CB95B207F69907A09C8021443F850886F0462B4D95DA40FEEC67EEE4C0008F0A643130BF266E4312290E282E16EEADFA6C3AD458AEB27BCA95FABCD4888E99644CA7D552501BE770A8381F56E4D2

Itwasthedayofthebigcross-countryrun.Studentsfromsevendifferentprimaryschoolsinandaroundthesmalltownwerewarmingupandwalkingtheroute(路線)throughthickevergreenforest.

IlookedaroundandfinallyspottedDavid,whowasstandingbyhimselfofftothesidebyafence.Hewassmallfortenyearsold.Hisusualbigtoothysmilewasabsenttoday.Iwalkedoverandaskedhimwhyhewasn'twiththeo