大學(xué)英語(yǔ)四級(jí)考試作文評(píng)分原則和評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)

一、大學(xué)英語(yǔ)四級(jí)教學(xué)大綱對(duì)寫作的要求能在閱讀難度與課文相仿的書面材料時(shí)做筆記，回答問(wèn)題，寫提綱和摘要，能就一定的話題，提綱，表格或圖示在半小時(shí)內(nèi)寫出不少于120詞的短文，能寫日常應(yīng)用文信函，簡(jiǎn)歷），內(nèi)容完整，條理清晰，文理通順。二、大學(xué)英語(yǔ)四級(jí)考試大綱對(duì)寫作的要求共1題，考試時(shí)間30分鐘。要求考生寫出一篇100-120詞的短文，試卷上可能給出題目，或規(guī)定情景，或要求看圖作文，或給出段首句要求續(xù)寫；或給出關(guān)鍵詞要求寫成短文。2021/5/91要求能夠正確表達(dá)思想，意義連貫，無(wú)重大語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤。寫作的內(nèi)容包括日常生活和一般常識(shí)。短文寫作部分的目的是測(cè)試學(xué)生運(yùn)用英語(yǔ)書面表達(dá)思想的初步能力。

三、評(píng)分原則

CET是檢查考生是否達(dá)到大學(xué)英語(yǔ)教學(xué)大綱規(guī)定的教學(xué)要求，對(duì)作文的評(píng)判應(yīng)以此要求為準(zhǔn)則

2.CET作文題采用總體

(GlobalScoring)評(píng)分方法。閱卷人員就總的印象給出獎(jiǎng)勵(lì)分(RewardScores)，而不是按語(yǔ)言點(diǎn)的錯(cuò)誤數(shù)量扣分。

3.從內(nèi)容和語(yǔ)言兩個(gè)方面對(duì)作文進(jìn)行綜合評(píng)判。

4.避免趨中傾向。該給高分的給高分，包括滿分；該給低分的給低分，包括0分。

2021/5/92四、評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)

1.本題滿分為15分

2.閱卷標(biāo)準(zhǔn)共分五等：2分，5分，8分，11分及14分。各有標(biāo)準(zhǔn)樣卷一至二份。

14分——切題。表達(dá)思想清楚，文字通順，連貫性較好?；旧蠠o(wú)語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤，僅有個(gè)別小錯(cuò)。

11分——切題。表達(dá)思想清楚，文字連貫，但有少量語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤。

8分——基本切題。有些地方表達(dá)思想不夠清楚，文字勉強(qiáng)連貫；語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤相當(dāng)多，其中一些是嚴(yán)重錯(cuò)誤。

5分——基本切題。表達(dá)思想不清楚，連貫性差。大部分句子均有錯(cuò)誤，切多數(shù)為嚴(yán)重錯(cuò)誤。

2分——條理不清，思路紊亂，語(yǔ)言支離破碎。

2021/5/93作文得分技巧總結(jié)：1、卷面整潔，書寫清楚2、構(gòu)思簡(jiǎn)單，少犯錯(cuò)誤3、中心突出，層次分明4、固定經(jīng)典，名言注目5、重在變化，寧簡(jiǎn)勿濫2021/5/94寫作絕招開(kāi)頭萬(wàn)能公式：1．

開(kāi)頭萬(wàn)能公式一：名人名言經(jīng)典句型：A

proverb

says,

“

You

are

only

young

once.”

適用于已記住的名言It

goes

without

saying

that

we

cannot

be

young

forever.適用于自編名言更多經(jīng)典句型：As

everyone

knows,

No

one

can

deny

that…2021/5/952．

開(kāi)頭萬(wàn)能公式二：數(shù)字統(tǒng)計(jì)原理：要想更有說(shuō)服力，就應(yīng)該用實(shí)際的數(shù)字來(lái)說(shuō)明。不妨試用下面的句型：According

to

a

recent

survey,

about

78.9%

of

the

college

students

wanted

to

further

their

study

after

their

graduation.下面隨便幾個(gè)題目我們都可以這樣編造Honesty根據(jù)最近的一項(xiàng)統(tǒng)計(jì)調(diào)查顯示，大學(xué)生向老師請(qǐng)假的理由當(dāng)中78%都是假的。2021/5/96Travel

by

Bike根據(jù)最近的一項(xiàng)統(tǒng)計(jì)調(diào)查顯示，85%的人在近距離旅行的時(shí)候首選的交通工具是自行車。Youth根據(jù)最近的一項(xiàng)統(tǒng)計(jì)調(diào)查顯示，在某個(gè)大學(xué)，學(xué)生的課余時(shí)間的70%都是在休閑娛樂(lè)。Five-day

Work

Week

Better

than

Six-day

Work?根據(jù)最近的一項(xiàng)統(tǒng)計(jì)調(diào)查顯示，98%的人同意每周五天工作日。更多句型：A

recent

statistics

shows

that

…

2021/5/97結(jié)尾萬(wàn)能公式：1．

結(jié)尾萬(wàn)能公式一：如此結(jié)論開(kāi)頭很好，也必然要有一個(gè)精彩的結(jié)尾，讓讀者眼前一亮，這樣，你就可以拿高分了Obviously（此為過(guò)渡短語(yǔ)）,

we

can

draw

the

conclusion

that

good

manners

arise

from

politeness

and

respect

for

others.如果讀者很難“顯而見(jiàn)之”，但說(shuō)無(wú)妨，就當(dāng)讀者的眼光太淺罷了！更多過(guò)渡短語(yǔ)：to

sum

up,

in

conclusion,

in

brief,

on

account

of

this,

thus更多句型：Thus,

it

can

be

concluded

that…,

Therefore,

we

can

find

that…2021/5/982．

結(jié)尾萬(wàn)能公式二：如此建議“如此建議”應(yīng)該是最有價(jià)值的廢話了Obviously,

it

is

high

time

that

we

took

some

measures

to

solve

the

problem.很經(jīng)典的虛擬語(yǔ)氣的句型。拽！Accordingly,

I

recommend

that

some

measures

be

taken.Consequently,

to

solve

the

problem,

some

measures

should

be

taken.2021/5/99寫作的“七項(xiàng)基本原則”一、

長(zhǎng)

短

句原則

強(qiáng)烈建議：在文章第一段（開(kāi)頭）用一長(zhǎng)一短，且先長(zhǎng)后短；As

a

creature,

I

eat;

as

a

man,

I

read.

Although

one

action

is

to

meet

the

primary

need

of

my

body

and

the

other

is

to

satisfythe

intellectual

need

of

mind,

they

are

in

a

way

quite

similar.二、

主

題

句原則

所以奉勸各位一定要寫一個(gè)主題句，放在文章的開(kāi)頭（保險(xiǎn)型）或者結(jié)尾，讓讀者一目了然，必會(huì)平安無(wú)事！特別提示：隱藏主體句可是要冒險(xiǎn)的！2021/5/910To

begin

with,

you

must

work

hard

at

your

lessons

and

be

fully

prepared

before

the

exam（主題句）.

Without

sufficient

preparation,

you

can

hardly

expect

to

answer

all

the

questions

correctly.三、

一

二

三原則

考官們看文章必然要通過(guò)關(guān)鍵性的“標(biāo)簽”來(lái)判定你的文章是否結(jié)構(gòu)清楚，條理自然。1）first,

second,

third,

last（不推薦，原因：俗）2）firstly,

secondly,

thirdly,

finally（不推薦，原因：俗）3）the

first,

the

second,

the

third,

the

last（不推薦，原因：俗）2021/5/9114）in

the

first

place,

in

the

second

place,

in

the

third

place,

lastly（不推薦，原因：俗）5）to

begin

with,

then,

furthermore,

finally（強(qiáng)烈推薦）6）to

start

with,

next,

in

addition,

finally（強(qiáng)烈推薦）7）first

and

foremost,

besides,

last

but

not

least（強(qiáng)烈推薦）2021/5/912四、

短語(yǔ)優(yōu)先原則

其一、用短語(yǔ)會(huì)使文章增加亮點(diǎn)其二、關(guān)鍵時(shí)刻思維短路，湊字?jǐn)?shù)I

cannot

bear

it.可以用短語(yǔ)表達(dá)：I

cannot

put

up

with

it.I

want

it.可以用短語(yǔ)表達(dá)：I

am

looking

forward

to

it.2021/5/913五、

多實(shí)少虛原則

比如我們說(shuō)一個(gè)很好的時(shí)候，不應(yīng)該之說(shuō)nice這樣空洞的詞，應(yīng)該使用一些諸如generous,

humorous,

interesting,

smart,

gentle走出房間，general的詞是：walk

out

of

the

room但是小偷走出房間應(yīng)該說(shuō)：slip

out

of

the

room小姐走出房間應(yīng)該說(shuō)：sail

out

of

the

room小孩走出房間應(yīng)該說(shuō)：dance

out

of

the

room老人走出房間應(yīng)該說(shuō)：stagger

out

of

the

room2021/5/914六、

多變句式原則

1）加法（串聯(lián)）可以在任何句子之間加andI

enjoy

music

and

he

is

fond

of

playing

guitar.如果是二者并列的，我們可以用一個(gè)超級(jí)句式：Not

only

the

fur

coat

is

soft,

but

it

is

also

warm.其它的短語(yǔ)可以用：besides,

furthermore,

likewise,

moreover2021/5/9152）轉(zhuǎn)折（拐彎抹角）The

car

was

quite

old,

yet

it

was

in

excellent

condition.The

coat

was

thin,

but

it

was

warm.更多的短語(yǔ)：

despite

that,

still,

however,

nevertheless,

in

spite

of,

despite,3）因果（so,

so,

so）then,

therefore,

consequently,

accordingly,

hence,

as

a

result,for

this

reason,

so

that2021/5/9164）附加（多此一舉）The

man

whom

you

met

yesterday

is

a

friend

of

mine.I

don’t

enjoy

that

book

you

are

reading.Mr.

Liu,

our

oral

English

teacher,

is

easy-going.5)排比（排山倒海句）文學(xué)作品中最吸引人的地方莫過(guò)于此Whether

your

tastes

are

modern

or

traditional,

sophisticated

or

simple,

there

is

plenty

in

London

for

you.Nowadays,

energy

can

be

obtained

through

various

sources

such

as

oil,

coal,

natural

gas,

solar

heat,

the

wind

and

ocean

tides.

2021/5/917七、

挑戰(zhàn)極限原則

獨(dú)立主格The

weather

being

fine,

a

large

number

of

people

went

to

climb

the

Western

Hills.Africa

is

the

second

largest

continent,

its

size

being

about

three

times

that

of

China.如果您可一些出這樣的句子，不得高分才怪！2021/5/918文章主體段落三大殺手锏：一、舉實(shí)例思維短路，舉實(shí)例！提出一個(gè)觀點(diǎn)，舉實(shí)例！提出一個(gè)方案，舉實(shí)例！而且者也是我們揭示一個(gè)觀點(diǎn)最好的方式，任何情況下，只要我們無(wú)法繼續(xù)文章，不管三七二十一，盡管舉例子！To

take

…

as

an

example,

One

example

is…,

Another

example

is…,

for

example2021/5/919二、做比較世界上沒(méi)有同樣的指紋，沒(méi)有相同的樹(shù)葉，文章亦同，只有通過(guò)比較，你才會(huì)發(fā)現(xiàn)二者的相同點(diǎn)through

comparison）和不同點(diǎn)（through

contrast）相似的比較：in

comparison,

likewise,

similarly,

in

the

same

manner相反的比較：on

the

other

hand,

conversely,

whereas,

while,

instead,

nevertheless,

in

contrast,

on

the

contrary,

compared

with

…,