讀后續(xù)寫好詞好句積累進(jìn)階拔高二講義

讀后續(xù)寫---拔高體驗(yàn)演講人2022-01-05“感到悲傷”的細(xì)節(jié)描述“感到害怕”的細(xì)節(jié)描述“感到生氣”的細(xì)節(jié)描述“感到羞愧”的細(xì)節(jié)描述“感到焦慮”的細(xì)節(jié)描述“感到開心”的細(xì)節(jié)描述“其他情緒”的細(xì)節(jié)描述最后，結(jié)尾部分需要迅速收束，并說明成功逃脫的結(jié)局。目錄“感到悲傷”的細(xì)節(jié)描述01“感到悲傷”的細(xì)節(jié)描述【好詞好句積累】“感到害怕”的細(xì)節(jié)描述02“感到害怕”的細(xì)節(jié)描述【好詞好句積累】“感到生氣”的細(xì)節(jié)描述03“感到生氣”的細(xì)節(jié)描述【好詞好句積累】“感到羞愧”的細(xì)節(jié)描述04“感到羞愧”的細(xì)節(jié)描述【好詞好句積累】“感到焦慮”的細(xì)節(jié)描述05“感到焦慮”的細(xì)節(jié)描述“感到開心”的細(xì)節(jié)描述06例如：Whenhismotherkissedhimonthecheek,thebabywashappy/delighted/fullofjoy.Whenhismotherkissedhimonthecheek,itseemedasifthebabywereontopoftheworld.Whenthemotherkissedthebabyonthecheek,hisfacebeamedandhisbrightsmilelituptheroom.(眉開眼笑；笑容照亮房間)【好詞好句積累】“感到開心”的細(xì)節(jié)描述“其他情緒”的細(xì)節(jié)描述07“其他情緒”的細(xì)節(jié)描述背景描寫（此部分的講解老師帶學(xué)生翻譯佳句，生詞講解，語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)剖析，幫助孩子記憶，最后強(qiáng)制要求學(xué)生背誦，才容易出效果）“其他情緒”的細(xì)節(jié)描述背景描寫（此部分的講解老師帶學(xué)生翻譯佳句，生詞講解，語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)剖析，幫助孩子記憶，最后強(qiáng)制要求學(xué)生背誦，才容易出效果）【早上】【黃昏】【晚上】【即學(xué)即練】Para1:Para2:【早上】01020304（部分描寫也可用于其它時(shí)間）Snowblanketedeveryrooftopandweighedonthebranchesofoldtrees.Thesweetnessofthesunfillsmylungs.甜美的陽(yáng)光，沁人心脾。Kissedbytherainandshining,thewetgroundiscoldunderfoot.Thebirdsbusythemselvesaroundme,notcaringthatI’mthere.潮濕的地面走起來很冷，被雨水親吻后閃閃發(fā)光。鳥兒們?cè)谖抑車β抵?，不關(guān)心我在那兒?！驹缟稀?1Adenseearthlysweetsmellrosefromtheground,envelopingeverythingwithinitssoftembrace.一股濃郁的泥土般的香味從地上升起，把一切都包裹在它柔軟的懷抱里。WhenIdrewthecurtainsback,thesunlightfloodedin.陽(yáng)光傾斜而入.【早上】ItwasSaturdaymorning,andallthesummerworldwasbrightandfresh,andfilledwithlife.Therewasasongineveryheart.Therewascheerineveryfaceandaspringineverystep.Theairwasfilledwiththepleasantsmellofflowers.【早上】Snowblanketedeveryrooftopandweighedonthebranchesofoldtrees.雪覆蓋了每一個(gè)屋頂，壓在老樹枝上。（部分描寫也可用于其它時(shí)間）【黃昏】Astheskygraduallydarkenedandthelightdimmed,（天空越來越黑，光線越來越暗）hequickenedhissteps.Thesunhidhimselfbehindthemountains,makingithardtoseeanythinginthethickdarkness.

Theraindrummedonthewindow,biddingfarewelltothelastbeamofsunlight.雨敲打在窗戶上好像敲起了小鼓，向最后一縷陽(yáng)光告別.TheleavescrunchedbeneathmyfeetasIstrolleddownthestreet.我在街上漫步時(shí)，樹葉在我腳下嘎吱作響。

Thesunsetwaslikeorangepaintonabluecanvas.日落就像藍(lán)色畫布上的橙色顏料.

Astheskygraduallydarkenedandthelightdimmed,（天空越來越黑，光線越來越暗）hequickenedhissteps.Thesundroppedthroughandlaidonhisheadandshoulders.太陽(yáng)下山，溫和的光線落在肩頭。

Theclearblueskywasdottedwithflutteringlarks.天氣晴朗，碧空里星星點(diǎn)點(diǎn)的云雀在翩翩起舞?！就砩稀浚ú糠置鑼懸部捎糜谄渌鼤r(shí)間）

Fromthedistance,hesawsomedimlight(昏暗的燈光)inthevillage.從遠(yuǎn)處，他看到村子里有些昏暗的燈光。Thedark,rainyevening,thewind,thethunderingcloudsheldmeentirelyintheirpower.漆黑的雨夜，狂風(fēng)大作，雷聲隆隆，我完全被它們的力量控制住了。Theskyisovercast,darkenedwithgloomyclouds,andthewholeworldseemedtobeenvelopedinah

【即學(xué)即練】1Astheskygraduallydarkenedandthelightdimmed,（天空越來越黑，光線越來越暗）hequickenedhissteps.2Thegentlebreeze(微風(fēng))strokedhishead,asifcomfortingallhistiredness.3Iclosedmyeyesinthespeedingcar.Windingrivers,loftymountains,deepvalleys(蜿蜒的小溪，高聳的山，深深的山谷)andsunnybeachesheldmeentirelyintheirfascination.【即學(xué)即練】radioedthecampmanagerforhelp.Hetoldmeahelicopterwasonitsway,butitwouldbe30minutesbeforeitarrived.Makingthebestofthiscloseencounter(相遇),Itooksomepicturesofthebear.【即學(xué)即練】Iclosedmyeyesinthespeedingcar.Windingrivers,loftymountains,deepvalleys(蜿蜒的小溪，高聳的山，深深的山谷)andsunnybeachesheldmeentirelyintheirfascination.過關(guān)檢測(cè)2020年浙江卷Onefall,mywifeElliandIhadasinglegoal:tophotographpolarbears.Wewerestayingataresearchcampoutside“thepolarbearcapitaloftheworld”—thetownofChurchillinManitoba,Canada.【即學(xué)即練】Iclosedmyeyesinthespeedingcar.Windingrivers,loftymountains,deepvalleys(蜿蜒的小溪，高聳的山，深深的山谷)andsunnybeachesheldmeentirelyintheirfascination.Takingpicturesofpolarbearsisamazingbutalsodangerous.Polarbears—likeallwildanimals—shouldbephotographedfromasafedistance.WhenI’mfacetofacewithapolarbear,Ilikeittobethroughacamerawithatelephotolens.Butsometimes,thatiseasiersaidthandone.Thiswasoneofthosetimes.【即學(xué)即練】Iclosedmyeyesinthespeedingcar.Windingrivers,loftymountains,deepvalleys(蜿蜒的小溪，高聳的山，深深的山谷)andsunnybeachesheldmeentirelyintheirfascination.AsElliandIcookeddinner,ayoungmalepolarbearwhowasplayinginanearbylakesniffed,andsmelledourgarlicbread.Thehungrybearfollowedhisnosetoourcamp,whichwassurroundedbyahighwirefence.Hepulledandbitthewire.Hestoodonhisbacklegsandpushedatthewoodenfenceposts.【即學(xué)即練】Iclosedmyeyesinthespeedingcar.Windingrivers,loftymountains,deepvalleys(蜿蜒的小溪，高聳的山，深深的山谷)andsunnybeachesheldmeentirelyintheirfascination.Terrified,ElliandItriedallthebeardefenseactionsweknew.Weyelledatthebear,hitpotshard,andfiredblankshotgunshellsintotheair.Sometimesloudnoiseslikethesewillscarebearsoff.Notthispolarbearthough—hejustkepttryingtoteardownthefencewithhismassivepaws(爪子).【即學(xué)即練】radioedthecampmanagerforhelp.Hetoldmeahelicopterwasonitsway,butitwouldbe30minutesbeforeitarrived.Makingthebestofthiscloseencounter(相遇),Itooksomepicturesofthebear.ElliandIfearedthefencewouldn’tlastthrough30moreminutesofthebear’spunishment.ThecampmanagersuggestedIusepepperspray.Thesprayburnsthebears’eyes,butdoesn’thurtthem.SoIapproachedouruninvitedguestslowlyand,throughthefence,sprayedhimintheface.Withanangryroar(吼叫),thebearrantothelaketowashhiseyes.注意：1.所續(xù)寫短文的詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；2.續(xù)寫部分分為兩段，每段的開頭語(yǔ)已為你寫好；fewminuteslater,thebearheadedbacktoourcamp.Para1:Para2:01020304Atthatverymoment,thehelicopterarrived.本文主要講述了人與熊對(duì)抗，之后成功脫險(xiǎn)的故事。主人公的感情線變化為：興奮渴望→驚恐→放松。劇情線以主人公如何與北極熊周旋并成功擺脫它展開?！窘馕觥坑傻谝欢蔚亩问滋崾揪淇芍簬追昼姾螅苡只氐綘I(yíng)地。接下來可通過場(chǎng)景渲染，描寫當(dāng)時(shí)令人顫栗驚恐的畫面，例如“Roarsandscreamspiercedthesilencewithneedle-likeshrillness.”這不僅合理地描寫了熊的反應(yīng)，也描繪出讓人戰(zhàn)栗的場(chǎng)景。由第二段的段首提示句可知：此時(shí)，直升機(jī)到了。如果想要進(jìn)行續(xù)寫兩段的合理銜接，第一段的結(jié)尾可描寫成“Afterthoroughlyscrutinizingthearea,thebeartrottedforwardafewsteps.”這樣可以營(yíng)造出危急的場(chǎng)景。“我們”看到直升機(jī)的到來，感到絕處逢生的喜悅，可以以人物心理描寫作為第二段的開頭，重點(diǎn)描寫喜極而泣的狀態(tài)，例如“MyheartleapedwithjoyasIknewwewerelikelytobesaved.”Para2:最后，結(jié)尾部分需要迅速收束，并說明成功逃脫的結(jié)局。08最后，結(jié)尾部分