中職高考英語寫作訓(xùn)練教學(xué)課件

中職高考英語寫作訓(xùn)練11、不為五斗米折腰。12、芳菊開林耀，青松冠巖列。懷此貞秀姿，卓為霜下杰。13、歸去來兮，田蜀將蕪胡不歸。14、酒能祛百慮，菊為制頹齡。15、春蠶收長絲，秋熟靡王稅。中職高考英語寫作訓(xùn)練中職高考英語寫作訓(xùn)練11、不為五斗米折腰。12、芳菊開林耀，青松冠巖列。懷此貞秀姿，卓為霜下杰。13、歸去來兮，田蜀將蕪胡不歸。14、酒能祛百慮，菊為制頹齡。15、春蠶收長絲，秋熟靡王稅。中職英語高考寫作訓(xùn)練陸道夫主講2012年3月1.Sensorimotorstage:0-2years~Beginstomakeuseofimitation,memory,andthought;~Beginstorecognizethatobjects,donotceasetoexistwhentheyarehidden~Movesfromreflexactionstogoal-directedactivity2.Preoperationalstage:2-7years

~Graduallanguagedevelopmentandabilitytothinkinsymbolicform;~Abletothinkoperationsthroughlogicallyinonedirection;~Hasdifficultyseeinganotherperson'spointofview.3.Concreteoperationalstage:7-11years

~Abletosolveconcrete,hands-onproblemsinlogicalfashion;~Understandslawsofconservationandabletoclassifyandseriate;~Understandsreversibility.4.FormalOperationalstage:11-15years~Abletosolveabstractproblemsinlogicalfashion;~Thinkingbecomesmorescientific;~Developsconcernsaboutsocialissues,identity.句子理解1(a)Hearrivedat2:30andwastoldtowaitintheVIPlounge.(b)Hearrivedat2:30.HehadbeentoldtowaitintheVIPlounge.譯文：(a)句：他兩點(diǎn)半到達(dá)，有人讓他在貴賓休息室等候；(b)他兩點(diǎn)半到達(dá)，在到達(dá)以前就有人對他說，在貴賓休息室等候。差別何在？句子理解2Everycompanytriestohaveateamofwizardsdevelopingmachinesthatuseacomputerdrivenlasertodowonders.譯文1：每個公司都試圖掌握一群發(fā)明機(jī)器的奇才，他們利用電子計(jì)算機(jī)發(fā)出激光來創(chuàng)造奇跡。譯文2：奇才發(fā)明機(jī)器，機(jī)器利用電子計(jì)算機(jī)激發(fā)激光，再由這種激光創(chuàng)造奇跡。句子理解3Thecarcametoadeadstop.譯文1：汽車停住了。譯文2：汽車停下了。譯文3：汽車不動了。譯文4：汽車死了。譯文5：汽車嘠的一聲剎住了。哪個好？為什么？作文得分要點(diǎn)1.格式2.人稱3.要點(diǎn)4.時(shí)態(tài)5.字?jǐn)?shù)6.語法7.書寫

1、中式英語2、句式單一，平鋪直敘3、詞匯掌握不牢，拼寫錯誤4、書寫不規(guī)范，大小寫、標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號CommonmistakesIthinkweshouldthinkmoregoodthinks.darenotraisetheirheadsbeforetheotherstudents.keepanormalheart(口)keepanormalstateofmindkeepaneasymindtakeiteasy中式英語例析Facedwithfailure,someofthemfeeldepressedallthetime.What’sworse,theythrowdoubtupontheirownabilityandnolongerworkhardattheirstudies.句式單一，平鋪直敘書寫不規(guī)范詞匯,句型（高級）和語法多樣化（較復(fù)雜）

1.覆蓋所有要點(diǎn)2.語法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯不單一3.注意語句間的連接成分和連貫性，全文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊4.語言得體規(guī)范要點(diǎn)全連接詞如何算是一篇好文章？語言地道規(guī)范改變句子的開頭方式，不要一味地都是主語開頭，接著是謂語、賓語，最后再加一個狀語?？梢园褷钫Z置于句首，或用分詞做狀語等。Theboyisveryhungryandhehurriedhome.Hungry,theboyhurriedhome.Theboy,hungry,hurriedhome.巧用句型轉(zhuǎn)換把其中一句改為分詞短語

Hehadfinishedsupper.Hewentouttohaveawalkthen.Havingfinished

supper,hewentouttohaveawalk.A.合并為簡單句2.把其中一句改為介詞短語Hewasbroughtin.Hishandsweretiedbehindhisback.Hewasbroughtin

withhishandstiedbehindhisback.B.合并為復(fù)合句TheChineseartistsweretoperformherethatnight.Thenewscheeredeveryoneofus.Thenews

thattheChineseartistsweretoperformherethatnight

cheeredeveryoneofus.2.Inrecentyears,Beijinghasbeenadvancingveryfast.Allthesemakepeople’slivesconvenient,pleasantandcolorful.

which

Inrecentyears,Beijinghasbeenadvancingveryfast,

makespeople’slivesconvenient,pleasant…Withthedevelopmentof

sothat

Beijing,people’slivesarebecomingmoreandmoreconvenient,pleasantandcolorful.Nowadays,Beijingisdevelopingfastpeople’slivesaregettingmoreconvenient,pleasantandcolorful.C.把復(fù)合句改為簡單句Shewasanxioustofindajobaftershefinishedherstudies.Havingfinished

herstudies,shewasanxioustofindajob.1.把從句改為分詞短語C.把復(fù)合句改為簡單句2.把從句改為介詞短語Iinsistedthatheshouldgo.Iinsistedonhimgoing.三.靈活運(yùn)用諸如倒裝句、強(qiáng)調(diào)句、主從復(fù)合句、分詞狀語Thoughheiswealthy,heworkshard.Wealthyasheis,heworkshard.Inspiteof/Despitehiswealth,heworkshard.Hedidn’tgetupuntil7o’clock.Itwasnotuntil7o’clockthathegotup.Notuntil7o’clockdidhegetup.Assoonaswearrivedatthevillage,wewerewarmlywelcomedbythevillagers.Onarriving

atthevillage，wewerewarmly….

Themomentwearrivedatthevillage,wewere…Wewerewarmlywelcomedbythevillagersimmediatelywearrivedatthevillage.Nosooner

hadwearrivedatthevillage

than

we……Hardly

hadwearrivedatthe

villagewhen

we….注意使用詞組、習(xí)語諺語、表強(qiáng)調(diào)的詞來代替一些單詞，以增加文采Don’tworryaboutyourexpensesforuniversityeducation,andwewilltrytohelpyou.……andwewill

makethegreatesteffort/doourbest/tryeverymeansto

helpyou.Atthattimethetaxidriverhadto

askthetouristforhelp.Atthattimethetaxidriver

hadnochoicebuttoturnto

thetourist.I

cameupwith

agoodidea.Ihadagoodidea.Agoodidea

oc