高中英語(yǔ)讀后續(xù)寫講解及練習(xí)課件

讀后續(xù)寫基本流程Tipsforwriting:1.Thoroughreading2.Creativeplotting（構(gòu)思）3.Swiftdrafting4.Carefulpolishing5.Neatcopying續(xù)寫合理流暢生動(dòng)高級(jí)豐滿整潔讀后續(xù)寫基本要求requirements續(xù)寫WritingPractice讀后續(xù)寫

閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語(yǔ)續(xù)寫兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。續(xù)寫的詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右。

Ourunplannedtravelswerepurejoyuntilthisday.ItwasdayeightofafamilytriptoGermanyforOktoberfest,atwo-weekfestivalheldinMunich,Germany,andSwitzerlandforAlpshiking.WewantedtobooktworoomsinMunich.Knowingnonewereavailable,wechosetotryourluckandfindahotelalongthefreeway.

AtFreiburg(aGermancity278kmwestofMunich),wefoundthelocalhotelroomswereallbookedforafestival.Sowejourneyedmerrilydowntheroadtofindrooms.Tooursurprise,allthehotelswecontactedwerebookedup.TherewasnoroomforusinGermany.SowewentacrosstheborderintoSwitzerlandtoBasel.Alargecityinanothercountrywouldprovidetworoomsforus,wethought.

ItwasinBaselthatourbadluckbegan.Idrovewhilemywifeandsonburneduptheirphonesinbrokenself-taughtGermanlookingfortworooms.IrolleduptoastopsignandtheGPSsaid,"Turnleft."Lookingattheroadsigns,Iscratchedmyhead(撓頭)becausesomethingdidn'tseemright.But,ofcourse,IfollowedthecommandofmyGPSpilot.Quicklyitwasclearthatwewerenolongeronaroad,buttraintracks.“Calmdown,”Iinstructedmywifeandson.“I’llsimplydriveabituntilIcangetoffthetracksandbackonaroad.”Thiscalmwasshort-livedasourteenageson,Mitch,noted,“Dad,there'satrainbehindus!”Whilewewereprocessingthisdilemma,anothertramappearedinthedistance.

Ourcarwasnotpressedflatlikeasodacan.Ieaseditoffthetramtracksontoacrowdedpedestrian-only(行人專用的)square.Hundredsofpeoplewereenjoyingtheirweekendoutdoors.Weweresafe,butobviouslynotwherecarswereallowed.ThebestplanIcouldthinkofwasto(丟棄)therentalcar.Whatastupididea!Paragraph1:Aboutthattimeanelderlygentlemanapproachedandknockedonthewindowofourcarwithhisstick.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

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Wewerefreedfromourpainfulexperience,butstillhadnoplacetosleepforthenight!______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________寫作過(guò)程WritingProcess體裁：記敘文時(shí)態(tài)：一般過(guò)去時(shí)原文核心內(nèi)容解讀：一家人外出旅行去參加慕尼黑啤酒節(jié)，路途困難重重，很難預(yù)定到房間的故事。1.解題思路When：ItwasdayeightofafamilytriptoGermanyforOktoberfest.Where：Munich(Germany)Freiburg(Germany)Basel(Switzerland)who：I/mywife/myson,Mitch/anelderlygentleman2.文章脈絡(luò)2.文章脈絡(luò)What:●WewanttobooktworoomsinMunichbutnonewereavailable.●AtFreiburg,allthehotelswerebookedupandtherewasnoroomforussowedecidedtoheadforSwitzerlandtoBasel,hopingtofindtworooms.●ItwasinBaselthatourbadluckbegan.FollowingthecommandofmyGPSpilot,wewerenolongeronaroadbuttraintracks.●Eventually,Idrovemycaroffthetramtracksontoacrowdedsquarewherecarswerenotallowed.兩段首句定一框根據(jù)續(xù)寫的第一段首句與第二段首句確定第一段的框架。（我們找到了停車處）二框二首正能量第二段的框架，由第二段首句與正能量結(jié)尾來(lái)確定。（我們最終找到了住所）

3.寫作思路

詞1）籠統(tǒng)詞變具體詞2）單詞變短語(yǔ)3）詞匯派生4.高分精煉1）籠統(tǒng)詞變具體詞籠統(tǒng)詞具體詞beautifulhandsome(英俊的),attractive(吸引人的),graceful(優(yōu)雅的),fine(精美的)gladexcited(興奮的),pleasant(愉快的),joyful(歡喜的)importantvital(至關(guān)重要的),critical(決定性的),significant(意義重大的),primary(首要的),profound(深刻的)badmean(卑鄙的),evil(邪惡的),selfish(自私的),disgusting(令人厭惡的)goodexcellent(優(yōu)秀的),awesome(令人驚嘆的),outstanding(杰出的)poorPoorly-dressed(穿著破爛),beinrags(衣衫襤褸),needy(貧困的)veryterribly(極度地),extremely(極其),highly(非常),greatly(大大地)2）單詞變短語(yǔ)單詞短語(yǔ)likehaveapassionforlookstareat/glareatbegingetdowntostandStruggle/springtoone’sfeetraiseputforwarddesirelongforusemakeuseofdecidemakeupone’smind3）詞的派生前綴示例un-不；非unconsciously(無(wú)意識(shí)地),untruth(謬誤)in-不；非illogical(不合邏輯的),irrelevance(不相關(guān))non-無(wú)；沒有nonsense(廢話),non-stop(直達(dá)的；不停的)dis-不；非；相反dishonest(不誠(chéng)實(shí)的),disappear(消失)re-

又；再；重新reapply(再申請(qǐng)),reassuring(令人放心的)anti-反對(duì)antifreeze(防凍劑),anticlimax(掃興的結(jié)局)auto-自己(的)，無(wú)人操作（的）autobiography(自傳),automatic(自動(dòng)的)Tomisaboy.Heisastudent.Heworkshard.Thatmakeshisparentshappy.Tom,aboy,whoisastudent,workshard,whichmakeshisparentshappy.Beingastudent,Tom,aboy,workshard,makinghisparentshappy.Beingagoodstudent,Tom,acleverboy,worksespeciallyhard,makinghisbelovedparentsextremelyhappy.Beingamarvelouslearner,Tom,anintelligentteenager,worksespeciallyhardlikeahoneybee,makinghisbelovedparentsextremelyhappy.4.高分精煉羅列合并簡(jiǎn)化美化豐滿替換、文學(xué)句

Forexample:無(wú)靈主語(yǔ)1.Mypeninvoluntarilyhesitates.我不知該從何處下筆。2.

Anxietytoretheboyintopieces.這個(gè)男孩焦慮不安，整個(gè)人都崩潰了。3.

Thethickcarpetkilledthesoundofmyfootsteps.我走在厚厚的地毯上，一點(diǎn)腳步聲也沒有。4.

Allattemptstofindroomsfailed.尋找房間一切嘗試都失敗了。5.Theastonishmentrobbedmeofthepowertosayanything.我震驚得說(shuō)不出話來(lái)。4.高分精煉

Paragraph1:Aboutthattimeanelderlygentlemanapproachedandknockedonthewindowofourcarwithhisstick.Hearingtheknock,Irolleddownthewindowwithmyheartbeatingwildly,wonderingwhatwouldhappentous.“Whydidyouparkyourcarherewithoutpermission?”askedthegentleman,confused.Feelingembarrassed,Iexplainedto5.范文賞析參考范文（一）

5.范文賞析himthedilemmawewerefacedwith.Muchtooursurprise,notonlydidthegentlemanguideustoaparkinglotbutalsoheshowedusaroundthecity,wherewesawalargenumberofpeopledressedinfestivecostumes.Itwasthenthatwefeltasenseofrelief.Paragraph2:Wewerefreedfromourpainfulexperience,butstillhadnoplacetosleepforthenight!Iscratchedmyheadagain,desperateandextremelyexhausted.Havingsensedourawkwardsituation,thegentlemanpolitelyasked,“Ilivealone,wouldyoumindstayingwithmetonight?”“Itissokindofyoutoofferusaccommodation!Sir!”Ireplied,5.范文賞析feelingexcitedandgrateful.Wehadfunwitheachotherandneverbeforehadwehadsuchawonderfulnight.Asyoucansee,nexttimeyouareingreattrouble,keepinmindthatGodwillopenawindowforyouwhenheclosesthedoor!5.范文賞析Aboutthattimeanelderlygentlemanapproachedandknockedonthewindowofourcarwithhisstick.

SheepishlyIrolleddownthewindowandheardtheseseriouswords,“Sir,youcan‘tbehereinthatcar.”"Yes,"Iexplainedwhywewerethere."Makeyourwayslowlyandcarefullytothatstreet,"hesaidnicely,pointinghissti