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ReadingforWritingWriteaLetterofAdvicePeriod6Analysetheproblemsteenagersmayfaceinthelifeandstudyandgiveadviceproperly.Bytheendofthisperiod,youwillbeabletoUnderstandthebasicformat,structureandlanguagefeaturesoftheletterofadvice.
Completealetterofadvicetocopewithteenager'sproblems.Setupagoodattitudetothedifficultiesandsetbacksinstudyandlife.Objectives:12345Step1.Lead-inFreetalk:1.Asateenager,whatproblemsdoyouhaveinyourdailylife?problemshighexpectationsfromparentsandteachersfeelinglonelyandisolatedbeingaddictedtomobilegamesgenerationgapwithparentsgreatpressurefromheavyschoolworkpuppyloveconflictsbetweenfriends/classmatesStep1.Lead-in2.Facingtheseproblems,howdoyouusuallydealwiththem?solutionsturntotrustworthyfriendsforhelpcommunicatesincerelywiththepersonconcernedaskforhelponsocialmediaringhelphotlineswritealettertoaprofessionaladviserStep2.Pre-writingSkimthetext1.WhatisWorriedFriend'sproblem?DiscussionReading2.Whatsuggestions
doesSusanLuogivetoWorriedFriend?3.Besidessuggestions,whatelse
doesSusanLuosayinherletter?SheunderstandsWorriedFriend'sfeelingandtalksaboutthenegativeeffectsofcomputeraddiction.Thinking1.DoyouthinkSusanLuo'sadviceisuseful?Whyorwhynot?Perhapstheadviceisuseful,becauseitisalwaysgoodtotalktoafriendabouthisorherproblemsandofferadvice.2.Whatotherkindsofadvice
wouldyougive?IwouldtellChenLeithatheshouldspendhistimemoreproductivelywithaneyeonhisfuture.Forexample,insteadofplayingcomputergames,hecouldlearncomputerprogramming.Whoknows?Hemightbecomeagreatfigureinthatfieldwhenhe'solder.Organization1.Findouttheorganizationoftheletter.DateGreetingBodyCloseSignatureBritishEnglish:day,month,yearAmericanEnglish:month,day,year2.Findandmarkthepartsoftheletterthatmatchthefollowingpoints.A.Iknowwhattheproblemis.B.Iunderstandhowyoufeel.C.Thisismyadviceandreason.D.Ithinkmyadvicewillhelp.GoodluckBestwishesforyouLookingforwardtoyourearlyreplyLanguagefeatures1.WhatexpressionsdoesSusanLuousedtomakesuggestions?Circlethemintheletter.2.Canyouthinkofmoreexpressionsofmakingsuggestions?a.Whydon'tyou...b.Itcouldbebetterifyoucould...c.Ithinkitcouldbebeneficialifyou...d.I'dliketoproposethatyoushould...e.It'srecommended/advisabletodo...f.Youmayconsiderdoing...g.Frommypointofview,itwouldbewise/reasonable/agoodideatodo...h.Youmay/mightaswelldo...Step3.While-writingGroupdiscussionChooseoneofthethreesituationsanddiscusshis/herproblem.Listpossiblesuggestionsandreasons.___________
Dear_______,Youwrotethat___________.Iunderstandthat_________.Ithink___________________because__________________.I'msurethat______________.Bestwishes,__________DraftyourletterWritethedateandgreetthereader1.Showthereaderthatyouknowwhattheproblemis.2.Tellthereaderthatyouunderstandhowhe/shefeels.3.Tellthereaderwhatyouthinkhe/sheshoulddo.4.Explainyourreason(s).5.Tellthereaderwhatyouthinkwillhappen.Closeandsigntheletter建議信寫作標(biāo)準(zhǔn)信:具體內(nèi)容信息點(diǎn)無一遺漏,寫信的目的,理解安
慰并提出建議達(dá):語氣真誠友善,給出的建議充分合理雅:高大上的詞匯的使用,復(fù)句的設(shè)計(jì),語篇
的銜接和連貫(注意事項(xiàng):語言要委婉、禮貌,顧及對(duì)方感受。)Atthebeginning,youcanwrite...EXPRESSIONe7d195523061f1c03a90ee8e42cb24248e56383cd534985688F9F494128731F165EE95AB4B0C0A38076AAEA07667B1565C446FC45FF01DFB0E885BCDBDF3A284F3DB14DA61DD97F0BAB2E6C668FB4931DED5FAA0CB712CCE3A8845E13BB5882E1352BF22D26D5F889C90B42F014C0DB8B9700B82FD7A626842B96845E6A0164C1A1A1CC5D02DFC6CIamgladtoreceiveyourletteraskingformyadviceon...I’msorrytoknowthatyouarehavingtroublein...
Thanksfortrustingme.It’smypleasuretogiveyousomesuggestions/advice.I
feelsorryaboutyoursufferingatthemoment./CreateDesignSystems\Bodye7d195523061f1c03a90ee8e42cb24248e56383cd534985688F9F494128731F165EE95AB4B0C0A38076AAEA07667B1565C446FC45FF01DFB0E885BCDBDF3A284F3DB14DA61DD97F0BAB2E6C668FB4931DED5FAA0CB712CCE3A8845E13BB5882E1352BF22D26D5F889C90B42F014C0DB8B9700B82FD7A626842B96845E6A0164C1A1A1CC5D02DFC6Csuggestionsandreasons?Thefollowingaremysuggestions./Mysuggestionsareasfollows.?Ithinkitwouldbemorebeneficialifyoucould...?Iwouldliketosuggestthat...?IfIwereyou,Iwould...話題句式1.Firstly,Besides,inaddition.2.Firstly,Secondly,Thirdly/Finally.3.First,Then,Finally.4.Firstofall,What’more,lastbutnotleast.Intheend,youcanwrite...-Ihopeyouwillfindthesesuggestionsuseful/helpful.-Ihopeyouwouldtakemyadviceintoconsideration.-I'mconvincedthatyouwillmakeit!-Ihopemyadvicecanmakeabigdifference.AndI'mlookingforwardtohearingyourgoodnews.e7d195523061f1c03a90ee8e42cb24248e56383cd534985688F9F494128731F165EE95AB4B0C0A38076AAEA07667B1565C446FC45FF01DFB0E885BCDBDF3A284F3DB14DA61DD97F0BAB2E6C668FB4931DED5FAA0CB712CCE3A8845E13BB5882E1352BF22D26D5F889C90B42F014C0DB8B9700B82FD7A626842B96845E6A0164C1A1A1CC5D02DFC6CNameSuggestionReasonEric
?Trylisteningtoyourparents.?Invitethemoutforsomethingtoeat.?Thattheyaren’tlisteningtoyouisperhapsbecauseyoudon’tlistentothem.?Thiswillgiveyouachancetospeaktothemwithoutdistractions(不分心地;專心致志地)NameSuggestionReasonXuTing
?Joinavolunteergroup.?Connectwithyourparentsonline.?Thiswillgiveyouachancetobearoundotherpeople,andhelpyourealisethatotherpeoplehaveproblems,too.?Justbecausetheyarefaraway,itdoesn’tmeanthatyoucan’ttalktothem.
NameSuggestionReasonMinHo
?Askamutualfriend(一個(gè)共同的朋友)tointroduceyoutoher.?Findchancestogettogetheringroupswheresheisagroupmember.?Yourfriendwillbeabletohelpyoubreaktheice(破冰,打破沉默,打破僵局)withherandprovideencouragementtoyou.?Ifyouareinagroup,ittakesallthepressureoff(消除所有壓力),andyoucaninteractwithherinarelaxingsetting.
Step4.Post-writingExchangedraftsUsethechecklisttogivefeedbackonyour
partner'sdraft.Areallthepartsofaletterincludedandorganisedingoodorder?Doesthewritergivereasonsfortheadvice?Doesthewriteruseproperexpressionstogivesuggestions?Doesthewriterusecommasandstopscorrectly?Isthehandwritingeasytoread?Reviseandsharethedraft15April2021DearEric,Youwrotethatyourparentswon’tlistenwhenyoutellthemthings.Iquitewellunderstandyoufeelupsetandfrustrated.Actually,youarenotalone,sincegenerationgapissomethingthatmustbeexperiencedasateenager.Irecommendthatyoushouldtalktoyourparentsaboutyourfeelingsfacetoface.Maybeyourparentshaveneverrealizedthattheirbehaviourmisledyoutofeelignored.Inaddition,itwillbeofgreathelptoshareyourthoughtswithyourbestfriends,whoareofyourageandsuretogiveyouvaluablesuggestions.Finally,dorememberthatwhatevertheydoisforthebenefitofyou.Wheneveramisunderstandingoccurs,pleasedowhateveryoucantogetitsolvedinnotime.Iamsurethatyourparentswilllistentoyouandyoucanfindwaystogapthegeneration.Bestwishes.possibleversionDearXuTing,Youwrotethatyoualwaysfeellonelyafterschoolbecauseyourparentsworkinanothercity.Iunderstandquitewellwhatyouaregoingthrough.However,thereasonwhyyouparentsdon’tstaywithyouathomeisthattheywanttoprovideyouwithabetterfuture.Irecommendthatyoushouldgiveyourparentsacallonaregularbasis.Notonlycanyoukeeptheminformedofyourupdates,butgetaknowledgeofhoweverythingisgoingwiththem.Inaddition,trytoadaptyourselftothenewschoolbymakingfriendswithyourclassmates.Youcanshareyoursorrowandhappinesswiththemandtakepartinasmanyactivitiesaspossibletogether.Lastbutnotleast,haveyourfullattentionfocusedonstudy.Onlyinthiswaycanyouliveuptoyourparents’devotionandexpectations.Aslongasmysuggestionscanbetaken,itwon’tbealongtimebeforeyougetyourtroublesettled.Allthebest,possibleversionDearMinHo,Youwroteyoulikeagirlinyourclassbutyouaretooshytotalktoher.Iundersta
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