高三9月月考愛(ài)的傳遞+(1)讀后續(xù)學(xué)案

新高三月考的一份「讀后續(xù)寫」，讀后續(xù)寫原題目：EricraisedhisdaughterRileyalone.Oneday,Ericnoticedayoungteenageboystandinginfrontofadrugstore.Heapproachedhim,andfoundout

thattheboywantedtobuymedicineforhissickmother,buthadnomoney.Theboycriedout,“IfIdon’tbringhomemedicine,mymomwilldie.ButIwon’tbeabletohandleit.”孫獨(dú)自撫養(yǎng)女兒萊利。一天，孫注意到一個(gè)十幾歲的小男孩站在一家藥店前。他走近他，發(fā)現(xiàn)男孩想給生病的母親買藥，但沒(méi)有錢。男孩大聲喊道：“如果我不把藥帶回家，我媽媽會(huì)死的。但我無(wú)法應(yīng)付?！盪ponhearingthis,Ericdidn’thesitatetopayforthemedicine.

“I’llpayforthemedicineonhisbehalf,”

hesaid,handingthepharmacist(藥劑師)acoupleofbillsfromhispocket.TheboylookedatEricwithgratefuleyes,andcried,

“Thankyousomuch.Youareheaven-sent.”聽(tīng)到這些，孫毫不猶豫地付了醫(yī)藥費(fèi)?！拔視?huì)替他付醫(yī)藥費(fèi)的，”他說(shuō)著遞給藥劑師(藥劑師)他口袋里的幾張鈔票。男孩用感激的眼光看著孫，哭著說(shuō)：“太感謝你了，你是天賜的?！薄癟herewillalwaysbepeoplewillingtohelpyou,son,”Erictoldhimbeforehandinghimtwoportionsoffood.“Here,takethistoyourmomandhaveahotmealwithher,”hesaidbeforelettingtheboygo.“總會(huì)有人愿意幫助你，兒子，”埃里克在遞給他兩份食物之前告訴他?！敖o，把這個(gè)拿給你媽媽，和她一起吃頓熱飯，”他在放走男孩之前說(shuō)。HisdaughterRileysawthewholesceneandsaid,“Dad,wehavebarelyenoughmoney.Whydidyoupayforthemedicine?”“Riley,thegoodyouputoutintotheworldwilleventuallyfinditswaybacktoyou.Justkeepdoinggood,”Erictoldhisdaughter.他的女兒萊利看到了整個(gè)場(chǎng)景，說(shuō)：“爸爸，我們幾乎沒(méi)有足夠的錢。你為什么要付藥的錢？”“萊利，你給這個(gè)世界帶來(lái)的好處最終會(huì)回到你身上。繼續(xù)做好事吧，”埃里克告訴女兒。WhenRileyturnedthirty,sheneededanoperationurgentlyafterbeingtoldtherewassomethingwrongwithherheart.Withdifficultybreathing,EricrushedRileytothehospitalinanambulance.“You’llbeallright,Riley,”hecried.“Don’tworry;

Daddyishere.We’llgetthroughthistogether,”hepromisedher.萊利30歲時(shí)，被告知心臟有問(wèn)題，急需動(dòng)手術(shù)。由于呼吸困難，埃里克用救護(hù)車將萊利緊急送往醫(yī)院。“你會(huì)沒(méi)事的，萊利，”他喊道?！皠e擔(dān)心，爸爸在這里。我們會(huì)一起度過(guò)難關(guān)的，”他答應(yīng)她。Ericdidtryhisbesttofindthemoneyforhisdaughter’soperation.Heaskedallofhisfriends,butitwasstillnotenough.Therefore,Ericdecidedtoselltheirhouse.Itwasenoughtopayforheroperation,buttheywouldbeleftwithnothing.“It’sokay,”hetoldhimself.“Iwillbeabletoearnmoneyagain,butifIlosemydaughter,nothingwilleverbringherback.”孫確實(shí)盡力為他女兒的手術(shù)籌集資金。他問(wèn)了所有的朋友，但仍然不夠。因此，孫決定賣掉他們的房子。這足以支付她的手術(shù)費(fèi)用，但他們將一無(wú)所有?！皼](méi)關(guān)系，”他告訴自己?！拔铱梢栽賿赍X了，但如果我失去了女兒，就再也沒(méi)有什么能讓她回來(lái)了?！盉ythetimeEricmadeitbacktothehospital,Rileywasinherhospitalroom,weakandpale.Hesatbesideherbedandheldherhand.“You’llbeokay,mysweetdaughter.We’llsoonhavethemoneyfortheoperation,”hepromisedher.當(dāng)埃里克回到醫(yī)院時(shí)，萊利已經(jīng)在病房里了，虛弱而蒼白。他坐在她的床邊，握著她的手?！澳銜?huì)好起來(lái)的，我親愛(ài)的女兒。我們很快就會(huì)有錢做手術(shù)，”他向她保證。Paragraph1:Ericsuddenlynoticedanenvelopeonthebed.

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......文章大意：Eric獨(dú)自一人撫養(yǎng)著他的女兒Riley。有一天，Eric發(fā)現(xiàn)有一個(gè)男孩站在藥店門口，詢問(wèn)后才知道這個(gè)男孩的母親生病了，沒(méi)有錢買藥。于是，Eric不但給小孩的母親買了藥，而且還給了男孩兩包食物。男孩自然是很感激Eric的舉動(dòng)，道謝后離去。多年后，Eric的女兒Riley生病需要手術(shù)，手術(shù)費(fèi)很貴，于是，Eric決定變賣房產(chǎn)救女兒，最后他來(lái)到醫(yī)院發(fā)現(xiàn)女兒的病床上有一個(gè)信封......作文主題：滴水之恩，當(dāng)涌泉相報(bào)；多行好事，莫問(wèn)前程情節(jié)續(xù)寫：第一段：打開(kāi)信封，發(fā)現(xiàn)里面的有錢和一個(gè)便簽便簽上說(shuō)很感激當(dāng)年Eric的舉動(dòng)，就是給那個(gè)小孩買藥和食物Eric很感動(dòng)，想知道到底是誰(shuí)送來(lái)了這個(gè)信封，詢問(wèn)護(hù)士后，得知只有醫(yī)生來(lái)過(guò)病第二段：Eric明白了一切，和醫(yī)生相擁互相表達(dá)各自的心情（除了感動(dòng)，還是感動(dòng)）醫(yī)生允諾會(huì)治好Riley的病，且提供最好的醫(yī)療服務(wù)主旨升華：多行善事，莫問(wèn)前程語(yǔ)言積累翻譯：（答案在原文和范文中）他走近他，發(fā)現(xiàn)男孩想給生病的母親買藥，但沒(méi)有錢。一聽(tīng)到這些，孫毫不猶豫地付了醫(yī)藥費(fèi)?！拔視?huì)替他付醫(yī)藥費(fèi)的，”他說(shuō)著遞給藥劑師(藥劑師)他口袋里的幾張鈔票?！叭R利，你給這個(gè)世界帶來(lái)的好處最終會(huì)回到你身上。繼續(xù)做好事吧，”埃里克告訴女兒。由于呼吸困難，埃里克用救護(hù)車將萊利緊急送往醫(yī)院。當(dāng)埃里克回到醫(yī)院時(shí)，萊利已經(jīng)在病房里了，虛弱而蒼白。下水文：第一段：Eric突然注意到有一個(gè)信封在病床上①

這封信是寫給他的。當(dāng)他打開(kāi)信封時(shí)，發(fā)現(xiàn)里面有一張支票和一張便條，他越來(lái)越驚訝參考：Theletterwasintendedforhim.Asheopenedit,hissurprisegrewuponfindingacheckandanoteenclosed.②

紙條上寫著:“多年前你救了一個(gè)男孩的母親。謝謝你的三包藥和兩份食物?！眳⒖迹篢henoteread,"Yousavedaboy'smothermanyyearsago.Thankyouforthethreepacksofmedicineandtwo

portionsoffood."

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Eric的眼中頓時(shí)涌出了淚水，因?yàn)樗庾R(shí)到，多年前他對(duì)這個(gè)十幾歲的男孩的好意，現(xiàn)在正以一種最意想不到的方式回報(bào)給他。參考：Instantly,tearswelled

upinEric'seyesasherealizedthatthekindnesshehadshowntotheteenageboyyearsagowasnowcomingbacktohiminthemostunexpectedway.④

他走到護(hù)士站，詢問(wèn)最近來(lái)探望Riley的人參考：Heproceededtothenurse'sstationtoinquireabouttherecentvisitorstoRiley.⑤

護(hù)士告訴他，除了醫(yī)生沒(méi)有人來(lái)過(guò)。在那一刻，Eric深刻地意識(shí)到——這位醫(yī)生實(shí)際上就是他曾經(jīng)幫助過(guò)的那個(gè)男孩。參考：Thenurseinformedhimthatnoonehadvisitedexceptforthedoctor.Inthatmoment,Ericcametoaprofoundrealization-thedoctorwas,infact,thatsameboyhehadoncehelped第二段：他立刻跑到醫(yī)生的辦公室，緊緊抱住了那個(gè)醫(yī)生①

“謝謝你，醫(yī)生，”Eric大聲說(shuō)道，感激之情溢于言表。參考："Thankyou,Doctor"Ericexclaimed,overwhelmedwithgratitude.②

醫(yī)生回答說(shuō):“不，應(yīng)該是我感謝您。那天，您救了我母親的命。從那一刻起，我發(fā)誓要努力學(xué)習(xí)，成為一名醫(yī)生，盡我所能幫助更多的人?，F(xiàn)在，我實(shí)現(xiàn)了這個(gè)夢(mèng)想。”參考：Thedoctorreplied,"No,it'smewhoshouldbethankingyou.Thatfatefulday,yousavedmymother'slife.Fromthatmoment,Imadeavowtostudydiligently,tobecomeadoctorandhelpasmanypeopleasIcould.Now,I'vefulfilledthatdream."③

Eric滿臉自豪地說(shuō):“我為你感到無(wú)比驕傲?！眳⒖迹篍ricbeamedwithprideandsaid,"Iamimmenselyproudofyou."④

醫(yī)生熱情地微笑著，向Eric保證，他會(huì)立即親自為Riley安排手術(shù)，并在住院期間為她提供最好的照顧。參考：ThedoctorsmiledwarmlyandassuredEricthathewouldpersonallyarrangetheoperationforRileywithoutdelayandprovideherwiththebestcar