讀后續(xù)寫人際關(guān)系類+a+lead+rope+講義 高三英語復(fù)習(xí)寫作專項(xiàng)

讀后續(xù)寫人際關(guān)系類---aleadropeDadandMadisonwerewalkingtroughthepartystore,gatheringdecorationsforMadison'supcomingbirthdayparty.“ButIdon'twanttoinviteLucyGilbert!Idon'tlikeher!"“Madison,youarebeingunreasonable.Ifeverygirlinyourclassisinvitedtopartybutyou,you'llfeelleftout.ItwouldbeabigmistaketonotinviteLucy1otheparty.""“Shenevereventalkstome!"Dudsighedandmoveddowntheaisle."Lucyisanewgirlinclass.Shejustmovedherealittleoveramonthago.Thinkabouthowthatmustfeel.Shedoesn'tknowonesinglepersonintheschool.Sheleftallofheroldfriendsbehindandnowshehastotrytomakenewfriends.Yourpartywillbeagreatchanceforhertogettoknoweveryone,"“No,itwon'tShewillprobablysitinthecornerandnottalktoanyone.Everydayatlunchshesitsallbyherself.Shewantstoeatalone!"Madisonshruggedandrolledhereyes.“Madison,I'mdonediscussingthis.Youwillinviteeverygirlinyourclass.IncludingLucyGilbert!”O(jiān)nSaturdaymorning,thefamilyblewupballoonsanddecoratedthehousecheerfully.Madisonwasdressedbeautifullyfortheday,wearinghernewbluedress.Itwasnottypicalofhertodressherselflikethis.SheusuallyworesportsclothesbecauseshelovedtobeoutsideridingherhorseStarwithaleadrope(韁繩).Madisongreetedherfriendsatthedoorstep,picturingvariouspresentsherfriendswouldbringher.Inthemeanwhile,shewaswonderingwhetherLucywouldruinthepartyifshecame.Anyhow,allthegirlssheinvitedcamefinally,includingLucy.ThegirlshadafantastictimebysinginganddancingwhileLucysatinthecornersilentlyalone.Later,allthegirlsgatheredaroundthetableasMadisonopenedherpresents.Openingthemonebyone,Madisonthankedherfriends,withabrightsmileonherface.Paragraph1:Lucy’spresentwastheverylasttobeopened.______________________________Paragraph2:Deeplymovedbywhatshesaid,Madisonheldtheleadropetightlyinherhands.________文本分析:MainideaofthestoryMadisondidnotwanttoinviteLucyGilbert,a/an________girlinherclass,toher__________.Butherfather________hertodothatbecauseherpartywillbea________forLucytogettoknoweveryone,soshehadtoinviteher.Onthatday,thegirlshadfun_______Lucysatinthecorner________.sheopenedthe________herfriendsgaveher,includingLucy’s.Themeofthestory有關(guān)朋友之間的真心,友誼,接納等思路分析:第一段:Lucy的禮物是最后一個(gè)要被打開的.Madison打開Lucy的禮物時(shí)的心理活動(dòng)和動(dòng)作----Lucy的禮物是什么樣子的----Madison(可以包括女孩們)看到禮物后的反應(yīng)----Lucy說的話(可能是解釋為什么選擇這件禮物)第二段:被她的話深深地打動(dòng)了,Madison把那根韁繩緊緊地拿在手里.Madison此時(shí)的感受(內(nèi)疚,慚愧,后悔,感動(dòng)等),動(dòng)作神態(tài)和語言----Lucy的回應(yīng)----Lucy成為Madison的新朋友,進(jìn)而融入女孩們的群體OnepossibleversionLucy’spresentwastheverylasttobeopened.Madisonpickedupthepresentreluctantly,wonderinghowembarrassingitwouldbeifitwasnotingoodtaste(得體,適度).Sheslowlyrippedopen(撕開)thegift-wrappaper,onlytofindthatinsidewasabeautifulhand-madeleadrope.Shocked,MadisonlookedupatLucy,whoclearedherthroatandspokeinalowvoice.“It’saleadropeforyourhorseStar.Imadeitmyself.”Madisonpulleditoutoftheboxandplaceditonherlap(大腿),amazedatitsbeauty.Lucyadded,“Iheardyoutalkingaboutyourhorseatschool.That’swhenIgottheideatomakeyoualeadrope.” Deeplymovedbywhatshesaid,Madisonheldtheleadropetightlyinherhands.Itwas,byfar,herveryfavoritebirthdaypresentoftheday.ShesuddenlyfeltsobadbecauseshehadbeensomeantoLucy.Withmixedfeelingsofregretandgratitude,sheblinkedhardtofightthetearsinhereyes.“Thankssomuch.Iloveit!Wouldyouliketojoinusandbeourfriends?”ThemomentLucynoddedcheerfully,Madisonputherarmsaroundhershoulders.Withapplauseandlaughterechoingthroughthehouse,Lucyjoinedtheothergirlstoenjoytheparty,notjustonthatday.下水文1:Lucy'spresentwastheverylasttobeopened.

Frowningherforeheadintoaknot,MadisonwonderedwhatLucyhadinstoreforher.Assheremovedthelidfromthegiftbox,adelicatelydecoratedleadropegreetedhereyes,attheendofwhichacolorfultassel(流蘇,纓,穗)wasattached.Thisamazinglyshininggiftinvited(引發(fā),招致)aroundof“wows”and“ohs”fromMadison'sfriends,whoseeyesallfelluponLucy.“IoverheardyourodeyourhorseStar,soIbetthishand-maderopemightbeofuse.Ifthereisanythingyoudon'tlike,Icanmodify(修改)basedonyourpersonalpreference.”Deeplymovedbywhatshesaid,Madisonheldtheleadropetightlyinherhands.

“Thankyou,Lucy!ThisisthebestgiftI'veeverreceived.”Madisonchokedout.Meanwhile,guilt,shameandself-blamerosewithinherheartforherpreviouscoldattitudetowardssuchanangelic(善良的,天使般的)soulasLucy.Throwingherarmsaroundthenewcomer,Madisongentlyinvited,“Willyouplaywithusandnolongersitaloneinaquietcorner?”Noddingherheadfirmly,Lucysteppedforwardandjoinedthegirlsinsinginganddancing.Sometimes,thefloweroffriendshipcanbud(發(fā)芽),matureandblossomaslongaswegiveeachotherachance.下水文2:Lucy’spresentwastheverylasttobeopened.

Madison

hadneverexpected

Lucy

wouldcometothebirthday

party,letalonebringthe

present.However,curiositydroveMadisontoopenit,which,beyondanyone’sthoughts,wasneitheraflowernorafashionableaccessory(配飾).Insidetheboxwasanelegant

leadrope.“That’sspeciallymadeforyou,who

haveinvited

metoattendyourbirthdayparty,Madison.”Lucysaid,“Hearingyouo