Unit 4 Reading for Writing 課件-2022-2023學(xué)年高中英語(yǔ)人教版（2019）必修第三冊(cè)

新人教版高中英語(yǔ)必修三Unit4SpaceExploration

ReadingforWritingHowmuchmoneyhasChinaspentonitsspaceprogram?Lead-in

NASAmayspend24,801,500,000dollarsin2022.Ithavetaken65yearstodevelopspaceexploration.Theearthisstillfacingpoverty,hunger,pollution,disease......However......Lead-in

Isexploringspace

a

wasteoftimeandmoney?1 Whatgenreisthisarticle?（題材）2 Whatistheissue(議題)?It’sanargumentativeessay.Isexploringspaceawasteornot?Tip1:Topicsentenceisusuallythefirstorthelastsentence.Pickoutthetopicsentenceofeachparagraph.Pre-reading

Para1Para2Para3Para4Para5Firstly,exploringspacehasalreadymadeadifferenceinthefightagainstworldhunger.Secondly,spaceexplorationhasalreadypromotedtechnologicalimprovementsthatbenefitusall.Finally,sendingastronautsintospacehashelpedpeopletothinkabouttheworld'sproblemsandeventofindwaystosolvethem.Somepeoplearguethatweshouldstop....However,othersfeelthisisashallowview...Inclosing,exploringspaceprovidestheworldwithmanydifferentbenefits.IntroductionBodyConclusionDifferentpointsReadforstructure

Evidence1Evidence2Evidence3TosummarizetheargumentTorepeatthepoint

Countriesaroundtheglobearespendingbillionsofdollarsandlotsoftimeonvariousspacemissions,whethertoMarsorotherplanetsmuchfurtheraway.Somepeoplearguethatweshouldstopwastingtimeandmoneyexploringspace.Instead,weshouldfeedtheworld’spoorandfindimmediatesolutionstootherproblems,suchaspollutionandfataldiseases.However,othersfeel

thisisashallowviewwhichfailstorealizehowexploringspacehelpsus.PointIntroducethetopicDifferentpoints

Firstly,exploringspacehasalready

madea

difference

inthefight

against

worldhunger.It

hasdirectly

resultedin

themanysatellitesthat

noworbitEarth.

Anumberof

thesatellitesrecorddataonlandandweatherpatterns.Thenthedataistransmittedtoscientistson

Earth.Aftercarefulanalysis,thescientists

canprovideusefulrecommendationsand

adviceforfarmers.

Asaresult,space-based

sciencehashelpedfarminginitseffortsto

growenoughfoodtofeedEarth’s

increasing

population.Howdoesthewritersupporttheargument?Byexamplesarguement1

Secondly,spaceexplorationhasalreadypromoted

technologicalimprovementsthatbenefitus

all.

High-endproductsaroundtheworldaremade

toahigherstandardnowbecauseof

advanced

technologywhichwasfirstcreatedtomeetthe

requirementsforspaceexploration.

Forexample,

spacetechnologieshavehelpedtheresearch

anddevelopmentofdifferenttypesofnew

material.Theyhavealsohelpedcompaniesmakebetterheart

monitors

andothermachinesthat

doctorsregularlyuse.Today,spacetechnologies

arewidelyusedinallkindsofindustries,and

everydayproductssuchasGPS,memoryfoam(乳膠泡沫)

pillows,andsmartphonecamerasarechanging

ourlives.Bygivingexamples

Howdoesthewritersupporthisargument?

Finally,sendingastronautsintospacehashelped

peopletothinkabouttheworld'sproblemsand

eventofindwaystosolvethem.Seeingpictures

ofourplanetasanislandinablackseamadepeoplerealisethatourplanetsresourcesare

limited.Inordertoprovideforsucharapidlyincreasingpopulation,scientistsaretryingto

findotherplanetsthatcouldonedaybeournew

home.Thegreatestattentionatpresentison

MarsbecauseitisclosertoEarth.Inthefuture

humansmayliveonbothplanets.

Howdoesthewritersupporthisargument?Byexplainingarguement2arguement3BodypartAnalysisparagraph2論點(diǎn)1fightagainst

worldhungerSupportingdetailsparagraph3論點(diǎn)2promotedtechnologicalimprovementsSupportingdetailsparagraph4論點(diǎn)3thinkabouttheworld’sproblemsSupportingdetailsrecorddata,providerecommendationandadvice,growenoughfoodnewmaterial,machine,changingourlivespicture,resources,MarsTip2:Inordertomakeourargumentstrong,weneedtoprovidesuitablesupportingdetail.Tip3:Inordertomakeourarticlemorecoherent,weshouldexpressouropinionandendintheclosingpartproperly.Underlinethesentencethatrepeatsthewriter'sopinioninthelastparagraph.結(jié)尾重申主題首尾呼應(yīng)Introduction

Mainbody

Mainbody

Mainbody

ConclusionThe

structureofthepassageisgeneral-particular-general(總-分-總）However

Firstly

Secondly

FinallyInclosingTheauthorusedmanytransitionalwordstodevelopineveryparagraphs.Whatarethey?Tip4:Tomakeourarticlemorelogical,weshouldusesomelinkingwords.（連詞）Languagefeaturesofanargument體裁：議論文人稱：第三人稱、第一人稱時(shí)態(tài)：一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主結(jié)構(gòu)：總-分-總主干：2.1分論點(diǎn)1+細(xì)節(jié)證據(jù)

2.2分論點(diǎn)2+細(xì)節(jié)證據(jù)

2.3分論點(diǎn)3+細(xì)節(jié)證據(jù)

Writing

引出話題1.Thereisawidespreadconcernovertheissuethat+主題

人們普遍擔(dān)憂關(guān)于……的問(wèn)題2.Nowadays,……isbecomingincreasinglypopular/serious.現(xiàn)在，……變得越來(lái)越流行/嚴(yán)重3.With

thedevelopmentof…,moreandmorepeoplechoosetodo隨著……的發(fā)展，越來(lái)越多的人選擇做……闡明觀點(diǎn)Theopinionsconcerningthishottopicvaryfrompersontoperson.Peopletakedifferentattitudestowards/holddifferentopinionson/takedifferentviewsonthisproblem/thisissue.人們對(duì)此有不同看法：1.Some/Mostholdtheopinionthat...一些/大多數(shù)認(rèn)為……2.Some/Mostareinfavoroftheideathat...一些/大多數(shù)贊成……的觀點(diǎn)3.Peoplewhoarefor/againsttheideathinkthat...支持/反對(duì)這個(gè)想法的人認(rèn)為……4.Somepeopleholdtheviewthat...whileothersarguethat...有些人認(rèn)為…而另一些人認(rèn)為…如何過(guò)渡Fromtheir/mypointofview,therearethreefactorscontributingtothisattitude/problem,whichareasfollows.在我看來(lái)，導(dǎo)致這種態(tài)度/這個(gè)問(wèn)題的原因有三，具體如下。Itcanbeillustratedfromthefollowingpoints.可以從以下幾點(diǎn)解釋。Itturnsoutbeneficial/harmfulfromthefollowingaspects.從以下幾方面來(lái)說(shuō)，它是有益的/有害的。Para1模板：主題觀點(diǎn)+闡述+論點(diǎn)過(guò)渡

Thereisawidespreadconcernovertheissuewhether/that

……．Butitiswellknownthat

theopinionsconcerningthishottopicvaryfrompersontoperson.

（主題）Some/Mostholdtheopinionthat...，whilePeoplewhoarefor/againsttheideathinkthat...（闡述）Itcanbeillustratedfromthefollowingpoints.（論點(diǎn)過(guò)渡）

如何增加支撐性細(xì)節(jié)邏輯細(xì)節(jié)——補(bǔ)充條件、原因、結(jié)果、目的等邏輯性內(nèi)容First,itisimportanttotakeaChinesecourse.First,itisimportanttotakeaChinesecourse,asyou’llbeabletolearnfromtheteacherandpracticewithyourfellowstudents.Equallyattractivearethesuccessstoriesofworld-famouspeople.Equallyattractivearethesuccessstoriesofworld-famouspeople,whichhelpmeunderstandhowapersoncanworkhardtomaketheworldabetterplace.

Iamplanningtotakeapart-timejobinaforeigncapitalcompany.Inordertogetsomepracticalexperience,Iamplanningtotakeapart-timejobinaforeigncapitalcompany.事實(shí)細(xì)節(jié)——列舉具體的實(shí)例；補(bǔ)充相關(guān)信息Ilikereadingbooks.Ilikereadingbooks,suchasnovels,shortstories,magazinesandnewspapers.I'dliketoseekapenpalwhoisinterestedintravelingjustlikeme.I'dliketoseekapenpalwhoisinterestedintravelingjustlikeme.Ifpossible,wecantraveltogetherorsharetravelingexperiences.數(shù)據(jù)細(xì)節(jié)——羅列相關(guān)數(shù)據(jù)Studentstookanactivepartinthewritingcompetition.Studentstookanactivepartinthewritingcompetition.Totally758studentssubmittedtheirworksand100ofthemwonaprizebecauseoftheircreativemindsandexpressivewords.引用——引用諺語(yǔ)或名人名言，增加說(shuō)服力和可讀性Ifirmlybelievethatyouwillsucceed.Chancefavorsthepreparedmind.Ifirmlybelievethatyouwillsucceedaslongasyousparenoeffortforit.表示遞進(jìn)關(guān)系：Inthefirstplace;firstofall;tobeginwith;firstly；what’smore;furthermore;moreover;besides;what'sworse;tomakemattersworse;

worsestill表示列舉事實(shí)：suchas;

forexample/instance;

take...forexample;

表示解釋：thatistosay;inotherwords表示觀點(diǎn)：inone’sopinion,

inone’sview,

fromone’spointofview,asfarasIamconcerned,asforsb,

personally

如何銜接論據(jù)？Para2

Somepeoplebelieve(正方觀點(diǎn))

Therearetwofactorscontributingtothisattitude，whichareasfollows：inthefirstplace，

(原因一)

．Furthermore，(原因二)

．Para3

However，theflipsideofthecoinis(反方觀點(diǎn))．Ontheonehand，(原因一)．Ontheotherhand，(原因二)．

Para4

Inmyopinion，(個(gè)人觀點(diǎn))．Firstofall，_________.Inaddition，_________.Inaword，onlythrough...canwehaveabrightfuture

總之，只有通過(guò)……我們才能有一個(gè)光明的未來(lái)重申觀點(diǎn)，鏗鏘有力表示總結(jié)：inshort;inbrief;inconclusion;ina/oneword;tosumup;allinall;onthewhole;ingeneral增強(qiáng)語(yǔ)氣：There’snodoubtthat…There’snodenyingthat…強(qiáng)調(diào)句雙重否定Never/Bynomeanscan/shouldwedo…【典題演練】最近,你班同學(xué)就“太空是否值得探索”這一話題展開了一場(chǎng)討論。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下表提供的信息,用英語(yǔ)寫一篇短文介紹討論的情況,并談?wù)勛约旱目捶ā?0%的同學(xué)認(rèn)為太空不值得探索。理由:1.離我們及我們的日常生活太遙遠(yuǎn)。2.浪費(fèi)金錢。70%的同學(xué)認(rèn)為太空值得探索。理由:1.已使用衛(wèi)星進(jìn)行通訊傳播、天氣預(yù)報(bào)。2.有望解決人口問(wèn)題。注意:1.詞數(shù)80左右;2.可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié),以使行文連貫。【遣詞】1.進(jìn)行了一次熱烈的討論_____________________

2.持有不同的觀點(diǎn) __________________3.離…太遙遠(yuǎn) __________________

4.解決人口問(wèn)題 __________________________

5.在我看來(lái) ____________________

6.值得做某事 _____________

7.從…中受益 ____________8.促進(jìn) ________haveaheateddiscussionholddifferentideas

toofarawayfrom...solvethepopulationproblemsasfarasI’mconcernedbeworthdoingbenefitfrom

promote【造句】1.完成句子(1)最近我們班進(jìn)行了一次熱烈的討論。_____________________________________

(2)討論的話題是太空是否值得探索。________________________________________

(3)30%的同學(xué)認(rèn)為不值得探索。_____________________________________________

(4)他們認(rèn)為太空探索離我們及我們的日常生活太遙遠(yuǎn)并且浪費(fèi)金錢。_______________________________________________________________________________________Recentlyourclasshadaheateddiscussion.Thetopiciswhetherspaceisworthexploring.30%ofusthinkspaceexplorationisnotworthwhile.Theyholdthebeliefthatspaceexplorationistoofarawayfromusandourdailylifeandisawasteofmoney.(5)然而70%的同學(xué)認(rèn)為值得探索。________________________________________

(6)我們從中受益很多,如使用衛(wèi)星進(jìn)行通訊傳播、天氣預(yù)報(bào)。___________________________________________________________________________________

(7)在我看來(lái),探索太空是值得的。______________________________________________________

However,70%thinkspaceisworthexploring.Wehavebenefitedalotfromit,suchasusingsatellitesforcommunicationandweatherforecast.AsfarasIamconcerned,itisworthwhiletoexplorethespace.2.句式升級(jí)(8)用whether引導(dǎo)賓語(yǔ)從句,將(1)(2)句連接起來(lái)_____________________________________________________________________

(9)用非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞連接(3)(4)句__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________(10)用because引導(dǎo)原因狀語(yǔ)從句連接(5)(6)句_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Recentlyourclasshadaheateddiscussiononwhetherspaceisworthexploring.30%ofusthinkspaceexplorationisnotworthwhile,holdingthebeliefthatspaceexplorationistoofarawayfromusandourdailylifeandisawasteofmoney.However,70%thinkspaceisworthexploringbecausewehavebenefitedalotfromit,suchasusingsatellitesforcommunicationandweatherforecast.【成篇】

Recentlyourclasshadaheateddiscussiononwhetherspaceisworthexploring.Studentsholddifferentideasaboutit.

30%ofusthinkspaceexplorationisnotworthwhile,holdingthebeliefthatspaceexplorationistoofarawayfromusandourdailylifeandisawasteofmoney.

However,70%thinkspaceisworthexploringbecausewehavebenefitedalotfromit,suchasusingsatellitesforcommunicationandweatherforecast.What’smore,withfurtherspaceresearch,wemaysolvethepopulationproblembymovingtootherplanetsoneday.

AsfarasIamconcerned,itisworthwhiletoexplorethespace.Notonlycanitpromotethedevelopmentofsocietybutalsoenrichourlife.

Countriesaroundtheglobearespendingbillionsofdollarsandlotsoftimeon

variousspacemissions,whethertoMarsorotherplanetsmuchfurtheraway.Somepeoplearguethatweshouldstopwastingtimeandmoneyexploringspace.Instead,weshouldfeedtheworld’spoorandfindimmediatesolutionstootherproblems,suchaspollutionandfataldiseases.However,othersfeelthisisashallowviewwhichfailstorealizehowexploringspacehelpsus.aroundtheglobe世界各地

人+spend+time/moneyonsthvariousspacemissions各種各樣的太空任務(wù)whether……or……不管是……還是……arguethat……認(rèn)為……waste+time/money+doingsthInstead相反地feedv喂養(yǎng)；養(yǎng)活immediatesolutionsasolutionto……的解決方案fatal致命的shallow膚淺的failtodo沒(méi)能做成某事LanguagePoints

Firstly,exploringspacehasalready

madea

difference

inthefight

against

worldhunger.It

hasdirectly

resultedin

themanysatellitesthat

noworbitEarth.

Anumberof

thesatellitesrecorddataonlandandweatherpatterns.Thenthedataistransmittedtoscientistson

Earth.Aftercarefulanalysis,thescientists

canprovideusefulrecommendationsand

adviceforfarmers.

Asaresult,space-based

sciencehashelpedfarminginitseffortsto

growenoughfoodtofeedEarth’s

increasing

population.makea

difference

起作用

resultin

導(dǎo)致orbitv繞軌飛行n軌道

satellite

人造衛(wèi)星Anumberof

許多+可數(shù)名詞復(fù)數(shù)，謂語(yǔ)復(fù)數(shù)recordv/n記錄pattern模式

花樣

圖案transmitv傳輸

analysisn分析（planalyses）vanalyseprovidev提供

recommendationn建議asaresult

因此

farmingn農(nóng)業(yè)

effortto

do做……的努力

Secondly,spaceexplorationhasalreadypromoted

technologicalimprovementsthatbenefitus

all.

High-endproductsaroundtheworldaremade

toahigherstandardnowbecauseof

advanced

technologywhichwasfirstcreatedtomeetthe

requirementsforspaceexploration.

Forexample,

spacetechnologieshavehelpedtheresearch

anddevelopmentofdifferenttypesofnew

material.Theyhavealsohelpedcompaniesmakebetterheart

monitors

andothermachinesthat

doctorsregularlyuse.Today,spacetechnologies

arewidelyusedinallkindsofindustries,and

everydayproductssuchasGPS,memoryfoam(乳膠泡沫)

pillows,andsmartphonecamerasarechanging

ourlives.promotev提高，促進(jìn)

benefitn/v獲益

受益High-endproduct

高端產(chǎn)品

toahigherstandard

按照一個(gè)更高的標(biāo)準(zhǔn)advanced

technology高端科技

meetthe

requirement

滿足要求material

材料

everydayproduct

日常產(chǎn)品

Finally,sendingastronautsintospacehashelped

peopletothinkabouttheworld'sproblemsand

eventofindwaystosolvethem.Seeingpictures

ofourplanetasanislandinablackseamadepeoplerealisethatourplanetsresourcesare

limited.Inordertoprovideforsucharapidlyincreasingpopulation,scientistsaretryingto

findotherplanetsthatcouldonedaybeournew

home.Thegreatestattentionatpresentison

MarsbecauseitisclosertoEarth.Inthefuture

humansmayliveonbothplanets.1.solvev解決2.as

像；因?yàn)?；作為；正如；?dāng)……時(shí)候3.resource資源4.source來(lái)源5.limited

有限的

Inorderto

為了做某事Inclosing,exploringspaceprovidestheworldwithmanydifferentbenefits.Therefore,itshouldcontinuesoastoprovidenewandbettersolutionstopeople’sshort-termandlong-termproblems.Inclosing總的來(lái)說(shuō)providesbwithsth=providesthforsb提供給某人某物Therefore因此soastodo為了做某事short-term短期的教材原句Somepeopleargue

thatwe

should

stopwasting

timeand

money

exploring

space.arguethat主張、認(rèn)為……narguementarguefor/against(doing)sth贊成、反對(duì)做某事arguesbinto/outofdoingsth說(shuō)服某人做/不做某事arguewithsbabout/oversth就某事與某人爭(zhēng)吵/爭(zhēng)論小測(cè)試①The

childrenhadaheated__________(argue)

aboutwhatgametoplay.②Weargued_______thewaiter______thepriceofthemeal.③Wearguedher_______joiningusin

playingtennis.④Heargues________smoking,foritis

harmfultohealth.arguementwithaboutintoagainstInstead,weshouldfeed

theworld'spoor

andfindimmediatesolutionstootherproblems,

suchaspollutionandfataldiseases.solution1.解決辦法，處理手段asolutionto---------的解決辦法comeupwith/find/seekasolution想出/找到/尋找解決辦法

拓展：常與to搭配的其他名詞key/way/answer/entrance/approachto

1.語(yǔ)法填空①Thenewgovernmentmustsetaboutfindingsolutions_____thecountry's

environmentproblems.②

Coloristhekeyto___________(make)a

roomfeelthewayyouwantittofeel.③

Facinguptoyourproblemsratherthanrunningawayfromthemisthebestapproachto__________(work)thingsout.試圖找到解決辦法的種種努力全都失敗了。Allkindsofattemptsto_________________havefailed.tomakingworkingfindasolution教材原句Exploringspacehasalready

madea

difference

inthe

fight

against

worldhunger.

It

hasdirectly

resultedin

themanysatellitesthat

noworbitEarth.

如今環(huán)繞地球運(yùn)行的眾多衛(wèi)星都直接歸功于太空探索。resultin造成，導(dǎo)致in后接名詞或v-ing作賓語(yǔ)Actingbeforethinkingoftenresultinfailure.辨析：resultin/resultfromresultfrom由……造成（后接原因）resultin（=leadto/bringabout)導(dǎo)致(后接結(jié)果）asaresult結(jié)果asaresultof由于makea/thedifference

有影響，有作用Whatevershedid,itmadenodifference.Onemorepersonwouldn'tmakeanydifferencetothearrangements.Itcouldmakethedifferencebetweenmissingyourtrainandgettingtoworkontime.語(yǔ)境串燒托比昨晚沒(méi)睡好。由于缺乏睡眠，開車時(shí)他昏昏欲睡。他的粗心駕駛導(dǎo)致了一場(chǎng)事故。結(jié)果，一個(gè)行人受傷了。所以，開車的時(shí)候一定要非常小心，因?yàn)檐嚨湸蠖嗍怯善隈{駛造成的。Tobydidn'tsleepwelllastnight.Asaresultoflackingsleep,hefeltquitesleepywhiledriving.Hiscarelessdriving

resultedin

anaccident.Asaresult,apasser-bygothurt.Therefore,onemustbeverycarefulwhiledriving