英語(yǔ)敘事作文練習(xí)和范文

PAGEPAGE1看圖作文寫作指導(dǎo)一、高考看圖作文技巧:1.仔細(xì)審題:包括文體,人稱,時(shí)態(tài).//理解到位：整體把握一組圖的連貫性理解及題目要求。2.歸納要點(diǎn):保證文章內(nèi)容的完整.//基礎(chǔ)到位：用簡(jiǎn)單句寫出每幅圖的主題句。3.擴(kuò)展成句:注意英語(yǔ)表達(dá)的習(xí)慣,根據(jù)提綱擴(kuò)展句子.//細(xì)節(jié)到位：注意每幅圖的次要內(nèi)容（時(shí)間，地點(diǎn)，方式，原因等）4.連句成篇:利用一些表示轉(zhuǎn)折,因果,選擇等關(guān)系的關(guān)聯(lián)詞和過(guò)渡句,把句子連接起來(lái).//表達(dá)到位：按情節(jié)發(fā)展先后，承上啟下整理成文。5.全面檢查:格式文體要點(diǎn)語(yǔ)法字?jǐn)?shù)等.//檢查到位：對(duì)照各幅圖，檢查全文定稿。二、看圖作文的體裁:記敘文：要抓住記敘文的六要素：when,where,who,what,why,how.即五個(gè)“W”和一個(gè)“H”。要注意人物與空間的關(guān)系，畫面與畫面的關(guān)系，要點(diǎn)與發(fā)揮的關(guān)系。三、常用句型：1.Oneday/theotherday/acoupleofdaysago/whilehewas…,he..2.Itwassnowing/rainingheavilyonMonday/Sundaymorning…when…3.Seeingthis,Iranovertohimassoonaspossible.4.Withouthesitation,Idecidedtogivehimahand.5.Itturnedoutthathewasathief.6.Tiredaswewere,wewereverydelightedbecausewemadecontributionstoenvironmentalprotection.7.Thefollowingday,wevisitedalotofattractionsinLondon.8.I’llforgetthedaywhenwevisitedonthefarm.四．范例A．假設(shè)你是紅星中學(xué)高三一班的學(xué)生李華，為?？⒄Z(yǔ)園地寫一篇題為“OurSpringOuting”的英文稿件。請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下四幅圖的先后順序，敘述上周你們班從準(zhǔn)備春游到春游結(jié)束的完整過(guò)程。注意：詞數(shù)不少于60.提示詞：游樂(lè)園amusementpark垃圾箱binSample:LastThursday,wehadaclassmeetingtodiscusswheretogoforourspringouting.Wecameupwithseveralchoicessuchasgoingboating,climbingamountain,andgoingtoanamusementpark.Finally,wedecidedtogomountainclimbing.Thenextday,wesetoffearlyinthemorning.Whileclimbingthemountain,weenjoyedthewarmsunshineandabeautifulview.However,whenreachedthetop,wewereshockedtoseelitterhereandthere,suchasbottlesandbananapeels.Thenwestartedtopickupthelitter.Afterwards,weputtherubbishintothenearbyrecyclingbinandnon-recyclingbinrespectively.Weweretiredbuthappy.B．假設(shè)你是紅星中學(xué)高三一班的學(xué)生李華為響應(yīng)綠化祖國(guó)的號(hào)召,你班四月十二日去郊區(qū)植樹。請(qǐng)根據(jù)一下四幅圖的先后順序,介紹植樹活動(dòng)的全過(guò)程,給某英文雜志的“綠色行動(dòng)”專欄寫一篇以“GreenActioninOurClass”為題的英文稿件。注意:字?jǐn)?shù)不少于60。提示詞:郊區(qū)suburbsSample:GreenActioninOurClassApril12ismemorablebecauseourclasshadameaningfulexperienceonthatday.(背景)Inthemorning,webicycledtothesuburbstoplanttrees,talkingandlaughingalltheway.Uponarrival,webegantoworkimmediately.Somewerediggingholes.Somewerecarryingandplantingyoungtrees.Otherswerewateringthem.Aftergettingtheworkdone,weputupaboardremindingpeopletoprotectthetrees.Beforeleavingwetooksomephotostorecordourgreenaction.（過(guò)程）Seeingthelinesoftrees,weallhadasenseofachievement.Wefeelit'sourdutytoprotectandbeautifyourenvironment.（感受）C．下面4幅圖片描述的是是星期天上午在中山公園里發(fā)生的一件事。請(qǐng)根據(jù)圖片把提供的信息用英語(yǔ)為你校的“英語(yǔ)園地”寫一篇短文。注意：字?jǐn)?shù)不少于60。參考詞匯：貨攤stand(n)；搶奪snatch(v)；逮捕arrest(v)OneSundaymorning,thereweresomepeopleinZhongshan參考范文：OneSundaymorning,thereweresomepeopleinZhongshanPark.Atastand,awomanwasbuyinganice-creamwhenayoungmanbehindhersnatchedherhandbagaway.Hearingtheshouting“stophim”,afewpeoplebegantorunafterhim.Therewasanoldmansittingquietlyonabenchnearbyandasthesnatcherwasrunningpasthim,theoldmanquicklypickeduphisumbrellaandputitbetweenthesnatcher’slegs,sotheyoungmanfelldownonthegroundhard.Soontwopolic