讀后續(xù)寫技能微提升課件高考英語一輪復(fù)習(xí)作文專項

寫作技能微提升

Topic:showknidnesstoyourclassmates

TeachingaimsInthisclass,youwill1.learnsomeusefulwordsexpressionandsentencestructures.2.gettoknowhowtomakeupasentence.3.polishyoursentence..

StepI:Preview[積累常誦]

“痛苦”【n】sadness/sorrow悲傷；depression沮喪；抑郁frustration挫??；loneliness孤獨【adj】sad/sorrowful悲傷的；frustrated挫敗的；lonely孤獨的；upset心煩意亂的；depressed抑郁的；沮喪的【adv】sadly悲傷地“哭泣【n]tear眼淚【v】cry哭泣；sob啜泣；weep流淚【a】dv.]bitterly傷心地“安慰”【n】patience耐心；warmth溫暖【v】comfort安慰；hug擁抱【adj】warm溫暖的；comforting令人安慰的【adv】patiently耐心地；gently溫柔地常見詞塊staypositive保持樂觀；silverlining不幸中的一線希望；beleftalone被留下單獨一人；belostinsadness沉浸在痛苦中staypositive保持樂觀；silverlining不幸中的一線希望；beleftalone被留下單獨一人；belostinsadness沉浸在痛苦中StepII:Self-learning[小試牛刀]1.教室里的每個人都興奮地在聊天，而簡（Jane）獨自坐在角落里。

2.我能感覺到她沉浸在巨大的悲傷中，這讓我心碎。3.我?guī)е鴾嘏男?，走近并坐在了簡的旁邊?.我剛開口說話，簡就抬起頭來，眼淚順著臉頰流了下來。5.我輕輕地拍了拍她的背，耐心地安慰她。6.她告訴我她因為膚色而被人嘲笑，我鼓勵她保持樂觀。7.每一片烏云都有銀邊。StepⅢ:Group-learning/StepⅢ:Further-learning[句式升級]1.教室里的每個人都興奮地在聊天，而簡（Jane）獨自坐在角落里。（while引導(dǎo)并列句，意為“而”；形容詞作狀語）EveryoneintheclassroomwaschattingwithgreatexcitementwhileJanewassittinginthecorner，

alone.

withgreatexcitement=excitedly激動地sitlonely副詞修飾動詞；或者形容詞作狀語，放于句尾；Jane...alone.StepⅢ:Group-learning/StepⅢ:Further-learning[句式升級]2.我能感覺到她沉浸在巨大的悲傷中，這讓我心碎。（which引導(dǎo)非限制性定語從句）Icouldsenseshewaslostinenormoussadness，

whichbrokemyheart.

belostin/beimmmersedin沉浸于...feel/sense感覺breakmyheart=makemyheartbroken使我心碎StepⅢ:Group-learning/StepⅢ:Further-learning[句式升級]StepⅢ:Group-learning/StepⅢ:Further-learning[句式升級]4.我剛開口說話，簡就抬起頭來，眼淚順著臉頰流了下來。（nosooner...than引起的部分倒裝；with復(fù)合結(jié)構(gòu)）NosoonerhadIbegunspeakingthanJanelookedup，withtearsrunningdownherface.

眼淚流下來:withtearsrollingdowntheface/cheekwithtearsrunningdowntheface/cheek一...就:NosoonerhadsbdonesththansbdidsthHardlyhadsbdonesthwhensbdidsthThemoment/Theminute+時間狀從StepⅢ:Group-learning/StepⅢ:Further-learning[句式升級]StepⅢ:Group-learning/StepⅢ:Further-learning[句式升級]6.她告訴我她因為膚色而被人嘲笑，我鼓勵她保持樂觀。（tellsbaboutsth/tellsbthat...）ShetoldmeaboutherbeinglaughedatbecauseofherskincolourandIencouragedhertostaypositive.

嘲笑某人：laughatsb/makefunofsb/mocksb咕嚕某人做某事：encourage/inspiresbtodosth7.每一片烏云都有銀邊（黑暗中總有一線光明）。（暗喻）Everycloudhasasilverlining.

each/every/everyone做主語時，謂語動詞用單數(shù)StepV:Evaluation[學(xué)以致用]1.Whilearrivingatthedoor,greatconcernandhorroroverwhelmedme.（用nosooner...than句型改寫）NosoonerhadIarrivedatthedoorthangreatconcernandhorroroverwhelmedme.2.Icouldn’tcontainmyselfandburstintotears.（用with復(fù)合結(jié)構(gòu)改寫）Icouldn’tcontainmyself,withteasrollingdownmyface.3.Momshedtears(流淚)aswell.Shetouchedmyhairandwipedmytearsgently.（用動詞-ing短語作狀語合并句子）Monshedtearsaswell,touchingmyhairandwipingmytearsgently.Whatusefulsentencestructureha