人教2013版九年級(jí) Unit 7 寫作課課件

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？1.認(rèn)真審題---確立時(shí)態(tài)人稱，題材格式。2.找全信息點(diǎn)---緊扣主題，突出重點(diǎn)。3.成文---表述正確，文字流暢。4.出彩---文章結(jié)構(gòu)清晰，重點(diǎn)句型出彩。5.檢查---信息點(diǎn)是否全面；時(shí)態(tài)人稱是否一致。

句子結(jié)構(gòu)是否清晰；短語(yǔ)單詞是否正確。Writingsteps:Rulesathome(task3)Writeadiaryentryexplainingwhichrule(s)youdonotagreewithathomeandhowyouthinktherule(s)shouldbechanged.Rulesathome

Whatinformationcanyougetfirst?............What?/Where?/Who?/Why?(task3--1)watchTVplaycomputergamesstayoutsidelateusemymobilephone…Can’tWhatcan’tyoudo?getupbefore6:00a.m.washhandsbeforemealscan’tgotobeduntil…finishhomeworkbefore24:00…HavetoWhatdoyouhavetodo?Writeadiaryentryexplainingwhichrule(s)youdonotagreewithathomeandhowyouthinktherule(s)shouldbechanged.3aIbelieveyoucan!Writeadiaryentryexplainingwhichrule(s)youdonotagreewithathomeandhowyouthinktherule(s)shouldbechanged.3a日記1.認(rèn)真審題---確立時(shí)態(tài)人稱，題材格式。一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)第一人稱Thursday,November3rd_____________________________________________________________________________________________【日記格式】周，月日2.找全信息點(diǎn)---緊扣主題，突出重點(diǎn)。

Ruleagreeordisagreecan’tplaycomputergamesagree—Ithink…playingtoomanycomputergamesisn’tgoodforeyes(task3--2)3.成文---表述正確，文字流暢。can’twatchTV……Disagree-----I(don’t)think…alltheTVprogramsarebadforstudents;needtorelaxshouldspendallthetimestudying4.出彩---文章結(jié)構(gòu)清晰，重點(diǎn)句型出彩。常用連接詞；長(zhǎng)短句結(jié)合使用；動(dòng)名詞做主語(yǔ)；It's結(jié)構(gòu)要出現(xiàn)；盡量來(lái)句名言或俗語(yǔ)；。。。【參考范文】

Thursday,November10thTherearemanyrulesinmyhouse.OneofthemisthatImustn’tmakemyowndecisions.Forexample,Ilikeplayingthepianoverymuch.ButmyparentsthinkIshouldn’tlikethat.Ishouldspendmoretimeonmyschoolwork.Idonotagreewithmyparents.IthinkIshouldbeallowedtohavemyownideasbecauseIhavegrownup.IwouldliketopracticeplayingthepianoasmuchasIwant.IfIwereallowedtodothat,Icouldachievemydream.

What’sworse,Ican’t…Ithink…Because…IYoucanyouup!5.檢查---信息點(diǎn)是否全面；

時(shí)態(tài)人稱是否一致；

句子結(jié)構(gòu)是否清晰；

短語(yǔ)單詞是否正確。(task3--3)

八、書面表達(dá)

評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)一類（13-15分）語(yǔ)句流暢、格式正確、無(wú)或基本無(wú)單詞拼寫、標(biāo)點(diǎn)、語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤，字?jǐn)?shù)達(dá)到要求；二類（10-12分）寫出大部分內(nèi)容，語(yǔ)句較流暢，基本無(wú)格式、語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤，有個(gè)別拼寫、標(biāo)點(diǎn)錯(cuò)誤；三類（7-9分）

寫出部分要點(diǎn)，語(yǔ)句基本通順，有少量拼寫、標(biāo)點(diǎn)、格式、語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤，但不影響句意理解；四類（4-6分）寫出少量?jī)?nèi)容要點(diǎn)，語(yǔ)句不夠通順，

語(yǔ)法、拼寫、標(biāo)點(diǎn)錯(cuò)誤較多；五類（1-3分）基本上沒(méi)有寫出內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)，語(yǔ)法、拼寫錯(cuò)誤多?；旧蠜](méi)有通順句子。Chinglish!!!Oftenchangethesentencepatte