高三英語(yǔ)一輪復(fù)習(xí)讀后續(xù)寫寫作給媽媽的節(jié)日花籃講義

閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語(yǔ)續(xù)寫兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。

AtonetimechildrenmadeMayDaybasketstocelebratespringandenjoytherewardsofgivingsurprisinggiftstotheirbelovedones.WhenIwasinperhapsthethirdgrade,ourclasstookonsuchanadventure.Forseveraldays,weworkedoncreatingpaperbaskets.Wecutcolorfulstripesofconstructionpaperandwovethemtogether,followingourteacher,MissAnderson.Wecutandwoveandglued.Thenwedecoratedthemwithourcrayonsandmorecuttingandgluing.Finally,wefittedpaperhandlesontothetopssothatwecouldsecretlyhangourcreationsonthedoorsofunsuspectingreceivers:surelyourmothers.

Wewerefinishedrightontime.MissAndersonbroughtarmloadsofflowersforustouseinstuffingourprizes.Lilacsandtulipsandalthecolorfulflowersofspring.Wehadtowaituntilthedaywasnearlyoverbeforewewereallowedtochoosetheflowersthatwerejustrightforourbaskets.Ichosethebiggest,mostbeautifulblossoms,allowingmyselftobeselfishforthesakeofmymother.Thenwefidgeted(煩躁)awaywhatremainedofourday,waitingfortheclocktotickdowntheminutestoourrelease.

Finally,mercifully,thebellrang!Wethrewonourcoats,gatheredourhomeworkandourlunchboxes,tiedonourscarvesandthen,carefully,wecradledourofferingsofloveandoffwerantoourindividualhomes!Iwassoexcited!IranasfastasIcoulddownthehill,acrossthestreet,uptheblock,headinghome.Ipausedatthecornerofmyhouse,tocatchmybreathandsavorthemoment.ThenIglanceddowntoadmiremyofferingonelasttimebeforeIhungitlovinglyoverthedoorknob.Horrors!Shock,dreadanddepression!Myflowersweregone!Apparently,bouncingoutonmymaddashhome,allthatwasleftwasasad,messedup,wrinkledlittleemptybasket!Istoodonthedoorwayandburstintomournfulsobbingtears.注意：1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右2.請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答Para1Byandby,mymomcametothedoortodiscoverthesourceofthesorrow.Para2Soon,mynewlydecoratedbasketwasreadytobeofferedagain.文本分析：故事大意：本次寧波一模續(xù)寫話題是一個(gè)很常規(guī)的母女親情話題。“我”在學(xué)校做了一個(gè)漂亮的花籃準(zhǔn)備送給媽媽，但是回家的路上，由于“我”跑得太匆忙，花籃里的花散落了?；氐郊摇拔摇卑l(fā)現(xiàn)后，傷心欲絕。媽媽走過來(lái)了解情況后，安慰“我”，“我”恢復(fù)平靜后，又重新去采摘花朵，做了一個(gè)花籃給媽媽。文章的主題：原來(lái)的驚喜沒有了，但是通過這件事，我明白家人之間的關(guān)愛最重要。文化背景解析MayDay對(duì)于孩子來(lái)說的意義：傳播善良和愛對(duì)于北半球的各種文化來(lái)說，5月1日是五一勞動(dòng)節(jié)，幾個(gè)世紀(jì)以來(lái)，這是一個(gè)慶祝春天的好天氣和豐收的時(shí)刻，也是春分和夏至之間的中間點(diǎn)。他們最喜歡的五一勞動(dòng)節(jié)傳統(tǒng)之一是制作和交付簡(jiǎn)單的五月籃子。您的鄰居和朋友會(huì)得到驚喜和喜悅！

如何制作：拿起一些紙、罐子或罐子，按照簡(jiǎn)單的步驟制作一個(gè)簡(jiǎn)單的、看起來(lái)像大人和孩子制作的籃子。然后，在小籃子里裝滿鮮花，如果你愿意，還可以吃一兩朵?；ǘ淇梢允且吧模踔量梢允羌埖?，也可以像孩子一樣。目標(biāo)是傳播一些春天的歡樂，讓你的鄰居和朋友高興。想象這樣的場(chǎng)景：在五一勞動(dòng)節(jié)的早晨，當(dāng)你偷偷溜過去，把籃子放在鄰居的門廊、彎腰或門口時(shí)。這是一個(gè)隨機(jī)善意的家庭行為，我們沒有立即得到贊譽(yù)，但卻得到了極大的快樂。當(dāng)你走過每一步時(shí)，和孩子們談?wù)勀愕泥従涌赡芟矚g什么，或者拿到你的籃子會(huì)給他們帶來(lái)什么感覺。這個(gè)節(jié)日給孩子們帶來(lái)什么：從他人的角度思考和行動(dòng)可以培養(yǎng)同理心，這是孩子們建立牢固關(guān)系和駕馭社會(huì)動(dòng)態(tài)所需的技能。它還可以吸引孩子們的善良。整個(gè)過程還將孩子與鄰居聯(lián)系起來(lái)，使這些成年人更加熟悉并創(chuàng)造一種社區(qū)感。即使你有一個(gè)非常年輕的孩子，他或她也可以通過采摘或拿著鮮花來(lái)參與這個(gè)過程，這是一種奇妙的感官體驗(yàn)，并觀察你花時(shí)間給別人一些可愛的東西。參考范文一，

Byandby,mymomcametothedoortodiscoverthesourceofthesorrow.

Seeingmytearfulface,shewasanxiousandhuggedmeinherchest,“Whathappened?Mybaby!”Isobbeduncontrollably,showedhertheemptybasketandexplainedeverything.ThemoreIsaid,themorefrustratedIbecame.HowIwished

Ihadbeenmorecarefully!Ormomwouldbesurprisedandbehappynow.Hearingthat,mombeamedandstrokedmyhairgently,“Honey,Ibelieveitisbeautiful.Yourheartistotallyworthit.Howaboutmakinganotherone.I’msureyoucandoit.”Likeaninspirationstruck,Istoppedweeping,struggledmywaytotheyardandbegantopickupflowersthere,determinedtomakeabrandnewflowerbasket.

Soon,mynewlydecoratedbasketwasreadytobeofferedagain.

Itwassmallerandlessimpressivethanmypreviousone,whichmademealittledisappointed.However,whenIhungitontheknobofmom’sroomandknockedatthedoor,allmyuncertaintyandanxietywasgoneimmediately.Momjust

heldithighandadmireditearnestly,“Whatasurprise!ItisdefinitelythemostbeautifulflowerbasketIhaveeverreceived.”Thenshebentdownandkissedmehardonmyforehead,“Thankyouforgivingsuchabigsurprise,son!”Thesenseofprideoverwhelmingme,Igiggledandhuggedhertightly.Withlaughterlingeringintheroom,wesatdownandenjoyedthehappytimeofmotherandson.

參考范文二，

Byandby,mymomcametothedoortodiscoverthesourceofthesorrow.

Seeingmytearstreakedfaceandthepitifullyemptybasket,sheinstinctivelyknewsomethinghadgoneawry.Afterexplainingtheunfortunateincident,shedidn'tscoldorchastisebutratherfortedmewithawarmhug.UnderstandingtheeffortIhadputintocreatingtheMayDaysurprise,shereassuredmethatthegestureitselfwaswhatmatteredmost.Withhersupport,disappointmentturnedintoreliefandImadeupmymindtoremaketheflowerbasket.

Soon,mynewlydecoratedbasketwasreadytobeofferedagain.

Thistime,Ichoseamixofvibrantwildflowers,carefullysecuringtheminthebasketwithasenseofdetermination.Thesetbackhadn'tdampenedmyspirit;ithadignitedarenewedenthusiasmtomakethesurpriseevenmorespecial.AsIapproachedourfrontdooroncemore,thelessonslearnedfromthemishapresonatedinmymind.Thejoyofgiving,Irealized,surpassedthefleetingdisappointmentofamishap.Withaheartfeltsmile,IhungtheMayDaybasket,notjustasatokenofspring,butasasymbolofresilience,love,andthebeautyfoundinunexpectedmoments.參考范文三：Para1:Byandby,mymomcametothedoortodiscoverthesourceofthesorrow.AsItearfullyexplainedtheunfortunateincident,shefortedmewithawarmhug.Together,weexaminedtheemptybasket,searchingforanyremainsofthelovelyflowersthathaddecorateditjustmomentsago.Despitetheinitialdisappointment,mymom'ssoothingwordsandgentleencouragementinspiredasenseofrenewedstrengthwithinme.DeterminedtosavetheMayDaysurprise,mymomandIbedthegardenforreplacementblooms.Wegatheredanexquisiteselectionofwildflowers,carefullyarrangingthemintherevivedbasket.Para2:Soon,mynewlydecoratedbasketwasreadytobeofferedagain.Witheachleafandstem,afreshexcitementfilledtheair.Aswehungthebasketonthedoorknob,itbecameasymbolofresilience,love,andtheunyieldingspiritofMayDay.Theincidenttaughtmethatevenwhenfacedwithunexpectedsetbacks,thejoyofgivingandcelebratingcherishedmomentscouldalwaysberekindledwithatouchofcreativityandamother'sunwaveringsupport.參考范文四：

Byandby,mymomcametothedoortodiscoverthesourceofthesorrow.

Whensheopenedthedoor,letmeinandrelievedmeofmysituationatschool,Itriedtotellthestoryofmyterriblepredicamentandthedepthofmysadness.Mymotherlistenedattentively,andherfortingappearancebroughtaglimmerofhopetomydisappointedheart.Shegentlywipedmytearsandhandedmethescissorsfromthekitchen,suggestingthatIfindsomereplacementflowersfromthegarden.Thistime,Ichosesmallerandmoreelasticf