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讀后續(xù)寫之關(guān)愛動(dòng)物

主題內(nèi)容:救治動(dòng)物/幫助動(dòng)物/人與動(dòng)物互相陪伴

常見地點(diǎn):家中/街道/農(nóng)場(chǎng)/野外

主題升華:陪伴/治愈心靈/人與自然和諧相處Task1:AnalysetheoriginalpassageWho:When:Where:What:Why:Result:

I,Matthew(myson),thedovesInthemorningthecourtyardThedovesbuiltanestontopoftherubbertree,butinvain.Astrongwindblew,throwingthedoves’nesttotheground.Thewinddestroyedalltheirhardwork,buttheystartedagain.故事情節(jié)(情節(jié)線+情感線):Iwasrecoveringfromanoperation.(Beginning)Matthewfoundadoveseatedinarubbertree.(Process)Thedovewasbackwithamateandbegantomakeanest.Thenestwasblowntotheground,butthedovesstartedagain.(Climax)IknowIhadtodosomething...(Resolution+Conclusion)

hopelessstrange/excitedtouchedexpectant概括原文故事情節(jié)Iwasrecoveringfromastomach1.________(operate).Stayinginbedalldayandhavingstomachachesmademefeel2.________(hope)aboutthefuture.Suddenly,Matthew,myfour-year-oldson,foundawhitedove3.________(seat)inarubbertree.Itsatthereforafewmonthsandthenflewaway.Thenextmorning,thedovewasbackwithitsmate4.__________(carry)sticks.Duringthewholeweek,theywerebusying5.__________(they)withmakinganest.Matthewwasvery6._________(excite)andalwaystalkedtothebirdswhilethyeworked.Althoughfilledwith7.______(sad),Ilookforwardtothedoves’visitstoo.But8.__________(fortunate),therubbertree’sleaveswereunstable.Onenight,astrongwindthrewthedoves’nesttotheground.Thedovesdidn’tflyawaybutstartedoverandoveragain.operationhopelessseatedcarryingthemselvesexcitedsadnessunfortunatelyTask2:Predicttheplot1.構(gòu)思情節(jié)續(xù)寫第一段情節(jié):______________________________________續(xù)寫第二段情節(jié):______________________________________情感:________________________________________________

不再覺得生活無(wú)望,而是開始熱愛生活“我”在安全的地方給鴿子搭了一個(gè)新鳥窩。

鴿子留在了新窩,給“我”的生活帶來(lái)了希望和快樂。2.構(gòu)思續(xù)寫“四點(diǎn)”內(nèi)容para.1IknewIhadtodosomething.

①(承上)WhatdidIdo?madeanestandfixedittothewall

②(啟下)WhatdidIdoafterIhelpedthedoves?watiedforthedovesreturningpara.2“Itworks!Thebirdsareback!”Matthewannounced.

③(承上)Myreaction:heardmyson’svoiceandlookedup.

④Theme:Ifeltthestrengthoflifeandthedimgraynessofmyheartdisappeared.3.構(gòu)思細(xì)節(jié)

para.1IknewIhadtodosomething.

①(承上)WhatdidIdo?

madeanestandfixedittothewall

How

②(啟下)WhatdidIdoafterIhelpedthedoves?watiedforthedovesreturning+careful/serious/patient+expectantpara.2“Itworks!Thebirdsareback!”Matthewannounced.

③(承上)Myreaction:heardmyson’svoiceandlookedup.

WhatdidIsee?(鴿子看到新窩的反應(yīng))

Matthew’sreaction

④Theme:Ifeltthestrengthoflifeandthedimgraynessofmyheartdisappeared.+excited/joyfulTask3:Upgradethesentences動(dòng)作鏈

非謂語(yǔ)

修辭

倒裝強(qiáng)調(diào)無(wú)靈主語(yǔ)

獨(dú)立主格

從句形副介短語(yǔ)精確性動(dòng)詞v1,v2andv3非人稱主語(yǔ)主語(yǔ)+非謂語(yǔ),主句rush,drag,runinto...Para.11.鴿子啟發(fā)了我,生活中仍然有一些事情可以期待和追逐,即使在最灰暗的時(shí)候.

Thedoves____________methattherewasstillsomethinginlifeto_____________________________,evenonmydarkestdays.2.我如此感動(dòng),所以想幫助他們。

連詞:

Iwas________touched________Iwantedtohelpthem_______.

形容詞__________,Ibelieved________________________(是時(shí)候幫助他們了).inspired

lookforwardtoandgoforsothatinreturnTouchedItwastimetohelptheminreturn3.Imadeanestandfixedit.(用cut,form,secure)

動(dòng)作鏈

I______apieceofhardwarecloth,______itintotheshapeofanestand__________theends.

非謂語(yǔ)

I______apieceofhardwarecloth,______itintotheshapeofanestand__________theends.

使用動(dòng)詞hammer描述將鳥窩固定在橡膠樹旁的墻上的過(guò)程

Ithen____________________________nexttothe__________.cutformedsecuredcutformingsecuringhammeredthenestintothewallrubbertree4.幾個(gè)小時(shí)的努力后,我們站在滑動(dòng)玻璃門旁,等待著,希望著。

非謂語(yǔ):

Afterseveralhours’efforts,MatthewandIstoodbytheslidingglassdoor,________________________.waitingandhopingPara.21.Iheardmyson’sexcitedvoiceandlookedup.

非謂語(yǔ)

________________________________,Ilookedup.

修辭+定從,形容兒子的聲音如鈴聲般清脆(clear,bell)

_______________________________,____________________________,Ilookedup.

Hearingmyson’sexcitedvoiceHearingmyson’sexcitedvoicewhichwasasclearasabell2.Theywerehappyandtriedtoaddsometwigstotheirnewhome.

使用動(dòng)作描寫(swoopandcircle)描述鴿子的開心之情________________________________nearthenestandtriedtoaddsometwigstotheirnewhome.

非謂語(yǔ)_________________________________nearthenest,_________________________totheirnewhome.TheywereswoopingandcirclingTheywereswoopingandcirclingtryingtoaddsometwigs3.他的臉在看到鴿子時(shí)發(fā)光了。他雀躍地跳起來(lái),沖到院子去了。

Hisface_________________________thedove.Hejumpedonhisfeet______________andrushedtothecourtyard.

獨(dú)立主格

Hisface_____________,hejumpedonhisfeet___________andrushedtothecourtyard.litupatthesightofcheerfullylightingupcheerfully4.望著他們飛來(lái)飛去的身影,聽著嘰嘰喳喳的聲音,我感到內(nèi)心的灰暗消失了。

從句:

______Ilookedattheirflitteringshadowsandheardthemchirp,Ifeltthedimgraynesswithinmyheartdisappeared.

非謂語(yǔ)_________________________________and________________

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