專題12讀后續(xù)寫(xiě)構(gòu)造“動(dòng)作鏈”兩大句式仿寫(xiě)20例及高考真題片段運(yùn)用

專題12讀后續(xù)寫(xiě)構(gòu)造“動(dòng)作鏈”兩大句式仿寫(xiě)20例及高考真題片段運(yùn)用講義CONTENTS構(gòu)造動(dòng)作鏈句式一：主語(yǔ)+動(dòng)作A+動(dòng)作Band動(dòng)作C構(gòu)造動(dòng)作鏈句式二：Havingdone…,主謂賓【高考實(shí)戰(zhàn)運(yùn)用一】(2023年新高考I卷讀后續(xù)寫(xiě)片段)【高考實(shí)戰(zhàn)運(yùn)用二】(2023年1月浙江卷讀后續(xù)寫(xiě)片段)【高考實(shí)戰(zhàn)運(yùn)用三】(2023年1月浙江卷讀后續(xù)寫(xiě)片段)【高考實(shí)戰(zhàn)運(yùn)用四】(2022年新高考I卷讀后續(xù)寫(xiě)片段)【高考實(shí)戰(zhàn)運(yùn)用五】(2021年新高考I卷讀后續(xù)寫(xiě)片段)PARTONE01

構(gòu)造動(dòng)作鏈句式一：主語(yǔ)+動(dòng)作A+動(dòng)作Band動(dòng)作C(三個(gè)并列謂語(yǔ),動(dòng)作依次發(fā)生)【示例】歌手瞥一眼觀眾，深呼吸一下，就開(kāi)始唱起來(lái)。Thesingerglancedattheaudience,tookadeepbreathand

begantosing.仿寫(xiě)1:Hetookataxitothepolicestation.翻譯:他攔下一輛的士，拿著手提箱跳進(jìn)去沖著司機(jī)說(shuō)，“去”改寫(xiě):He_____ataxi,_______inwiththesuitcaseand_____thedriver,“Gotothepolicestation,please.”

tookjumpedtold【示例】歌手瞥一眼觀眾，深呼吸一下，就開(kāi)始唱起來(lái)。Thesingerglancedattheaudience,tookadeepbreathand

begantosing.仿寫(xiě)2:Theboysjumpedintothelaketoplay.翻譯:男孩們興奮地跑到湖邊，脫下衣服，跳入湖中玩耍。改寫(xiě):Theboysexcitedly

______tothelake,quickly_____offtheirclothesand_______intothewatertoplay.rushedtookjumped【示例】歌手瞥一眼觀眾，深呼吸一下，就開(kāi)始唱起來(lái)。Thesingerglancedattheaudience,tookadeepbreathand

begantosing.仿寫(xiě)3:Shehuggedhersontightly.翻譯:她沖上前，跪下，把兒子抱在懷里。改寫(xiě):She______forwardwithouthesitation,_______downand_________hersonintoherarmstightly.

dashedkneltgathered【示例】歌手瞥一眼觀眾，深呼吸一下，就開(kāi)始唱起來(lái)。Thesingerglancedattheaudience,tookadeepbreathand

begantosing.仿寫(xiě)4:Irushedhometogetthecottoncat.翻譯:我沖回家，翻遍我收集的帽子，拿起那頂棉質(zhì)的。改寫(xiě):I______home,_______throughmycollectionofhatsand_________thecottonone.

rushedsearchedgrabbed【示例】歌手瞥一眼觀眾，深呼吸一下，就開(kāi)始唱起來(lái)。Thesingerglancedattheaudience,tookadeepbreathand

begantosing.仿寫(xiě)5:ShelookedatthetrophyandthankedTUNTUN.翻譯:她先看一下獎(jiǎng)杯，深吸一口氣，說(shuō)道：“謝謝吞吞！”改寫(xiě):She_______atthetrophy,______adeepbreathand_____,“ThankTUNTUN!”glancedtooksaid【示例】歌手瞥一眼觀眾，深呼吸一下，就開(kāi)始唱起來(lái)。Thesingerglancedattheaudience,tookadeepbreathand

begantosing.仿寫(xiě)6:Macjumpedoffthebicycletoshutthedoor.翻譯:麥克毫不猶豫跳下自行車，沖向車的后門，猛然地關(guān)上車門。改寫(xiě):Mac_______offthebicyclewithoutanyhesitation,________tothebackdoorand________thedoorheavily.jumpeddashedslammed【示例】歌手瞥一眼觀眾，深呼吸一下，就開(kāi)始唱起來(lái)。Thesingerglancedattheaudience,tookadeepbreathand

begantosing.仿寫(xiě)7:Iwenttoschoolinahurrythismorning.翻譯:翻譯：我早上匆忙穿上大衣，抓起書(shū)包，騎著自行車匆忙去上學(xué)了。改寫(xiě):I_____onmycoathurriedly,________mybagand_______toschoolhurriedlythismorning.putgrabbedcycled【示例】歌手瞥一眼觀眾，深呼吸一下，就開(kāi)始唱起來(lái)。Thesingerglancedattheaudience,tookadeepbreathand

begantosing.仿寫(xiě)8:Mymumgavefiftydollarstothepooroldman.翻譯:媽媽打開(kāi)錢包，拿出五十元錢，遞給那個(gè)貧困的老人。改寫(xiě):Mymom_______thepurse,______outfiftydollarsand_______ittothepooroldman.openedtookhanded【示例】歌手瞥一眼觀眾，深呼吸一下，就開(kāi)始唱起來(lái)。Thesingerglancedattheaudience,tookadeepbreathand

begantosing.仿寫(xiě)9:Shepickedupthephotoandplaceditintothealbum.翻譯:她拿起照片，盯著看一會(huì)兒，仔細(xì)放進(jìn)相冊(cè)里。改寫(xiě):She________upthephoto,_______atitforawhileand_______itcautiouslyintothealbum.

pickedstaredplaced【示例】歌手瞥一眼觀眾，深呼吸一下，就開(kāi)始唱起來(lái)。Thesingerglancedattheaudience,tookadeepbreathand

begantosing.仿寫(xiě)10:Jimmyquicklythrewthemeatatthefiercewolf.翻譯:吉米快速拿出肉，瞄準(zhǔn)，徑直朝兇猛的狼扔過(guò)去。改寫(xiě):Jimmy______outthemeat,_______atthewolfand_______itstraighttothefierceanimal.pulledaimedthrewPARTTWO02構(gòu)造動(dòng)作鏈句式二:Havingdone…,主謂賓(表示先做了某事,再發(fā)生核心動(dòng)作)【示例】在銀行排隊(duì)等了一個(gè)小時(shí)后，這個(gè)女人變得不耐煩，然后離開(kāi)了。Havingwaited

inlineforanhouratthebank,thewomangrewimpatientandleft.仿寫(xiě)1:Afterhavingqueuedfor3hours,hewastoldthattheticketshadbeensoldout.翻譯:排了三個(gè)小時(shí)隊(duì)后，他被告知票賣完了。改寫(xiě):_______________for3hours,hewastoldthattheticketshadbeensoldout.

Havingqueued【示例】在銀行排隊(duì)等了一個(gè)小時(shí)后，這個(gè)女人變得不耐煩，然后離開(kāi)了。Havingwaitedinlineforanhouratthebank,thewomangrewimpatientandleft.仿寫(xiě)2:Shewanderedaimlesslyinthestreetforhours,thenshefeltalittlehungryandwishedforsomethingtoeat.翻譯:她在街上漫無(wú)目的地逛了好幾個(gè)小時(shí)，感到有點(diǎn)餓，想吃點(diǎn)東西。改寫(xiě):___________________aimlesslyinthestreetforhours,shefeltalittlehungryandwishedforsomethingtoeat.

Havingwandered【示例】在銀行排隊(duì)等了一個(gè)小時(shí)后，這個(gè)女人變得不耐煩，然后離開(kāi)了。Havingwaitedinlineforanhouratthebank,thewomangrewimpatientandleft.仿寫(xiě)3:Afterhetoldthetruth,hefeltateaseinhismindandreturnedhomewithalighterheart.翻譯:說(shuō)出真相后、他心里輕松了很多、心情放松地回家了。改寫(xiě):___________thetruth,hefeltateaseinhismindandreturnedhomewithalighterheart.Havingtold【示例】在銀行排隊(duì)等了一個(gè)小時(shí)后，這個(gè)女人變得不耐煩，然后離開(kāi)了。Havingwaitedinlineforanhouratthebank,thewomangrewimpatientandleft.仿寫(xiě)4:Aftergettingmypromiseoftendingtomymother,myfatherfeltassuredandloadedhisluggageintothecar.翻譯：得到了我會(huì)好好照顧母親的承諾后，爸爸放心地把行李放進(jìn)車?yán)铩８膶?xiě):____________mypromiseoftendingtomymother,myfatherfeltassuredandloadedhisluggageintothecar.Havinggot【示例】在銀行排隊(duì)等了一個(gè)小時(shí)后，這個(gè)女人變得不耐煩，然后離開(kāi)了。Havingwaitedinlineforanhouratthebank,thewomangrewimpatientandleft.仿寫(xiě)5:Afterfightinginthewarforyears,thesoliderreturnedtohishome,onlytofindhisfamilieshadmovedaway.翻譯:征戰(zhàn)多年后，戰(zhàn)士回到家中，發(fā)現(xiàn)家人已經(jīng)搬走了。改寫(xiě):_____________inthewarforyears,thesoliderreturnedtohishome,onlytofindhisfamilieshadmovedaway.Havingfought【示例】在銀行排隊(duì)等了一個(gè)小時(shí)后，這個(gè)女人變得不耐煩，然后離開(kāi)了。Havingwaitedinlineforanhouratthebank,thewomangrewimpatientandleft.仿寫(xiě)6:AfterIpromisedthatwewouldgettherebeforefive,Iwasseizedwithpanicwhenthecarbrokedown.翻譯:因?yàn)槌兄Z了五點(diǎn)之前我們一定到那兒，所以當(dāng)車拋錨的時(shí)候，我非?；艔垺８膶?xiě):_______________thatwewouldgettherebeforefive,Iwasseizedwithpanicwhenthecarbrokedown.

Havingpromised【示例】在銀行排隊(duì)等了一個(gè)小時(shí)后，這個(gè)女人變得不耐煩，然后離開(kāi)了。Havingwaitedinlineforanhouratthebank,thewomangrewimpatientandleft.仿寫(xiě)7:Aftershemadefullpreparations,shestoodbythewindowandexpectedthearrivalofherdaughter.翻譯:做好充分的準(zhǔn)備后，她站在窗邊，期待著女兒的到來(lái)。改寫(xiě):_____________fullpreparations,shestoodbythewindow,expectingthearrivalofherdaughter.Havingmade【示例】在銀行排隊(duì)等了一個(gè)小時(shí)后，這個(gè)女人變得不耐煩，然后離開(kāi)了。Havingwaitedinlineforanhouratthebank,thewomangrewimpatientandleft.仿寫(xiě)8:AfterreceivingtheNimbus2000,HarryPotterwassohappythathedidn’tknowwhattodo.翻譯:哈利波特收到光輪2000后高興得不知所措。改寫(xiě):_______________theNimbus2000,HarryPotterwassohappythathewasatalosswhattodo.

HavingreceivedHavingwaited【示例】在銀行排隊(duì)等了一個(gè)小時(shí)后，這個(gè)女人變得不耐煩，然后離開(kāi)了。Havingwaitedinlineforanhouratthebank,thewomangrewimpatientandleft.仿寫(xiě)10:Afterexperiencingsomanyfailuresoneafteranother,shefinallypickedherselfup.翻譯:她接連經(jīng)歷了那么多次失敗后，終于振作起來(lái)了。改寫(xiě):__________________somanyfailuresoneafteranother,shefinallypickedherselfup.HavingexperiencedPARTTHREE03高考實(shí)戰(zhàn)運(yùn)用一(2023年新高考I卷讀后續(xù)寫(xiě)片段)運(yùn)用讀后續(xù)寫(xiě)“動(dòng)作鏈”技巧，把下面的語(yǔ)篇補(bǔ)充完整。（再三仔細(xì)檢查后，我再也無(wú)法控制自己，立即與我的英語(yǔ)老師分享了這個(gè)消息）Withoutherhelp,Iwouldneverhavehadthechancetoobtainthehonor.MyfacelitupwithjoyasIacceptedtheaward,mysmilefilledwithpride.Ifeltaburstofgratitudewellingupinmyheartandsurgingthoughme.Havingdouble-checkedit,IcouldnolongercontainmyselfandpromptlysharedthenewswithmyEnglishteacherPARTFOUR04高考實(shí)戰(zhàn)運(yùn)用二(2023年1月浙江卷讀后續(xù)寫(xiě)片段)

運(yùn)用讀后續(xù)寫(xiě)“動(dòng)作鏈”技巧，把下面的語(yǔ)篇補(bǔ)充完整。Afewweekslater,Iwenttothefarmagain.AsmycarneareditmythoughtsdriftedbacktothemomentwhenIrescuedthehummingbirdfromthespider’sweb.Passingthedesertedhouse,Ispottedthebrokenglass,whichhadbeenfixedperfectly.Itremindedmeofthehummingbird,thetinycutecreature.__________________________________________________________________________________________（在和主人聊了一會(huì)兒之后，我被告知她從那天起就再也沒(méi)有回來(lái)過(guò)。）“Perhapssheisenjoyingthevaluablefreedomatthismoment,”Isaidtomyself.Hourslater,thesunbegantosink.Havinghadasmallchatwiththehost,IwasinformedthatshePARTFIVE05高考實(shí)戰(zhàn)運(yùn)用三(2023年1月浙江卷讀后續(xù)寫(xiě)片段)運(yùn)用讀后續(xù)寫(xiě)“動(dòng)作鏈”技巧，把下面的語(yǔ)篇補(bǔ)充完整。Afewweekslater,Iwenttothefarmagain.

Istillrememberedmyfriends‘promisesoIwentpasttheabandonedmilkinghousetoseeiftheyhadfixedthebrokenwindow.To

my