2025屆高考英語復習讀后續(xù)寫誤會故事類一場比賽解開了母子之間的誤會

高考英語讀后續(xù)寫語篇練習誤會故事——一場比賽解開了母子之間的誤會1題目分析讀后續(xù)寫題目再現(xiàn)范文呈現(xiàn)努力方向2Part1題目呈現(xiàn)3續(xù)寫原文“GoingtoNationals!”Wewereallscreamingandjumping.Kate,Jenny,WendyandIembracedeachother,bouncing.“Goodjob,Tara.”SaidKateassheputanarmaroundme.Iamtheyoungestontherelayraceteam,butI'mfast.WhenIrun,Ileavetheskinofmyshynessbehind,andIfeellikeahorsemanontheMongoliangrassland,free,withoutboundaries.Everybodyrantotheirparentsinthebleachers(露天看臺).MyMomdidn’tmakeit.Again.Igrabbedmyphoneandcalledher.Ittookawhileforhertoanswer.“Yes,hidear.”“Mom,wewonstates,andwearegoingtonationals.”Iburstoutinonebreath.“Great!Let’stalklater;I’llpickyouupfromschool.”Iwantedtosay:“Isthatit?Whyaren’tyouproudofme?Allotherparentsarehere,whyaren’tyou?”butallIdidwas“OK,seeyousoon.”Doessheseeme?DoImatter?4續(xù)寫原文Itwaslateafter9PM.Alltheparentspickeduptheirchildren,butmyMomwasn’thereyet.CoachJohnsonwaitedwithme.Wejuststood.Aspeedingcarturnedthecorner;itwasmyMom’sToyota.Coachpattedmeonthebackandleft.“IamsosorryIamlate.Timejustflew.”SaidMom.IwantedtocryindisappointmentandtellherthatIhatetobealwayslasttobepickedupandneverhavehercometomysportingcontests,schoolplays,oranythingelse;askherwhyshewon’tmaketimeforme.ButwhenIlookedatherandsawhertiredeyesandclenchedjaw(咬緊下巴),Ijustsaid:“That'sOK,Mom,Iunderstand.”HerjawhadstayedclenchedsincewecametothiscountryasMomwouldsay:“withtwopiecesofluggage,athree-year-old(me),and$700.”5段首句Paragraph1：NationalsfinallycameandmyMomcameforthefirsttimeever.Paragraph2：IhadleteverybodydownandIranouttohidemyself6Part2題目分析7點1：位于續(xù)寫第一段段首，流暢銜接前面的記敘文和第一段段首語；點2：位于續(xù)寫第一段段尾，流暢銜接第二段段首句；點3：位于續(xù)寫第二段段首，續(xù)寫銜接第二段段首語；點4：文章結尾升華，給予讀者正能量，揭示和強調(diào)主題。情節(jié)構建的重點8續(xù)寫思路分析本文以人物為線索展開，講述了作者和同學贏得了洲際比賽，將要沖向全國的比賽，但是別的同學的父母都到場和自己的孩子一起歡呼時，作者只能打電話給母親，電話那頭母親沒有表示祝賀，作者因此感到很失望，作者希望母親能來現(xiàn)場看比賽，也希望母親能夠早點來接自己，但是想到母親一直咬緊牙關養(yǎng)育自己，作者的內(nèi)心的想法也說不出口。9續(xù)寫思路分析Para1：NationalsfinallycameandmyMomcameforthefirsttimeever.由第一段首句內(nèi)容“全國賽終于來了，我媽第一次來了。”可知，第一段可描寫作者母親來看作者比賽的場景。10續(xù)寫思路分析Para2：IhadleteverybodydownandIranouttohidemyself.由第二段首句內(nèi)容“我讓大家失望了，我跑出去躲起來?！笨芍?，第二段可描寫作者比賽失誤后的羞愧，母親的鼓勵。11續(xù)寫思路分析續(xù)寫線索母親看作者比賽——比賽失誤——作者感到羞愧——母親的安慰和鼓勵——作者和母親誤會解開12續(xù)寫素材可用詞匯：行為類①降低：fall/lower②使失望：disappoint/upset③離開：quit/departfrom情緒類①溫柔的：soft/gentle②激動的：excited/agitated13續(xù)寫素材可用句型：

[高分句型1].IwasbeginningtopickupspeedagainwhenIwassuddenlythrownoffbalance.（由連接詞when引導的時間狀語從句）[高分句型2].IloveyousomuchthatIwantedtobuildastrongerboatforus.(由so…that引導結果狀語從句）14Part3范文呈現(xiàn)15范文呈現(xiàn)NationalsfinallycameandMyMomcameforthefirsttimeever.SeeingmyMominthebleachers,Iwasespeciallyexcited.Iwaslikeracehorsesatthegate:nervouslywaitingandheadsheldhigh.Iwasthelastrunnerinourteam.“Ihavetosealthewin.”Itoldmyself.AfterWendypassedthebatoninmyhand,Iexplodedforward.Thecrowdwerescreaming.Mythoughtsrockedwiththepulseoftheblood.IwasbeginningtopickupspeedagainwhenIwassuddenlythrownoffbalance.JustasIwasregainingcontrol,Ihittheflooranddroppedthebaton.Myworldhadjustended.16范文呈現(xiàn)IhadleteverybodydownandIranouttohidemyself.Mylegswereallbloody,butthat'snotwhathurt.Idisappointedeverybody.Afterawhile,mymom,withredeyes,foundme.“Iwillquittheteam.”Iwhispered.“No,love!Youhadthebesttimeintherace.Itwasanaccident.”Shecontinuedtomakemefeelgood,butIheardonlyhersoftvoicecomingasawarmembraceatme,andthenIcriedoutmysorrow,“You're…neveratmymeets…alwayslate…youdon'thavetime…you'renotproudofme.”Hervoicedropped,“IloveyousomuchthatIwantedtobuildastrongerboatforus.Iamproudofyoueverysecond.”Thirstyforthosewords,Iranintoherarms.Thenextday,Iwentbacktothetrack.WhenIlookedatmyMominthebleachers,wesmiled.17范文譯文國民隊終于來了，我媽媽第一次來了。看到我媽媽在露天看臺上，我特別興奮。我像賽馬一樣在門口緊張地等著，昂首挺胸。我是我們隊最后一個跑者。“我必須鎖定勝局。”我告訴自己。溫蒂把接力棒遞給我后，我猛地向前沖去。人群在尖叫。我的思緒隨著血液的脈搏而顫動。我剛開始加速，突然失去了平衡。就在我恢復控制的時候，我撞到了地板上，把接力棒掉了下來。我的世界剛剛結束。18范文譯文我讓所有人都失望了，我跑出去藏起來。我的腿都是血，但那不是痛的地方。我讓所有人都失望了。過了一會兒，紅著眼睛的媽媽找到了我?！拔乙顺銮蜿??！蔽逸p聲說?！安?，親愛的！你在比賽中度過了最美好的時光。這是一場意外。”她繼續(xù)讓我感覺很好，但我只聽到她溫柔的聲音像溫暖的擁抱一樣向我走來，然后我哭出了我的悲傷，“你……從來沒有參加過我的比