2023學年完整公開課版建議信2

如何寫建議信青銅峽市第一中學曹可DearMrsZhang,(稱呼）

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MynameisLiHua.I’maseniorthreestudent.I’mwritingalettertoasksomeadviceformyproblems.Idon’tdowellinEnglish.First

Idon’tunderstandwhattheteachersaysinclass.Secondly,Idon’tunderstandthetexts,especiallywritingisdifficultforme.InfactIwanttolearnEnglishwellbutmyEnglishwasweakinJuniorSchoolandIhavenoconfidencenow

because

Ialwaysfeelthatmyteacherandclassmateslookdownuponme.Asaresult,Iamalone,whichmakesmeupset.HowcanIlearnEnglishwell?Ineedyourhelpeagerly.Iwouldbegratefulifyougivemesometips.

Lookingforwardtoyourreply.（謙稱結束語）

Yours,LiHua（簽名）ReadLiMing’sletterandanswerthequestions:WhatisLiMing’sproblem?ReadLiMing’sproblem,analysethereasonsandgiveoutsomegoodadvice.Hedoesn’tdowellinEnglish,especiallyheisn’tgoodatwriting.ILeadinIIBrainstorming

AnalyseLiMing’sproblemreasons

1.HisEnglishwasweakinJuniorSchool2.notinterestedinEnglish3.notspendsometimelearningit

HowtolearnEnglishwellFirst,believeinyourself

Secondly,

spendalotoftimerememberingnewwordseveryday,reciteusefulexpressionsandsentences.

Howtoimprovewritingability?

Inmyopinion,writemore,keepdiaries,setdownwhatyousawandheard.Themoreyouwrite,thebetteryoucanwrite.

HowtowritealetterofadvicetopicHowtolearnEnglishwellPartIPartII

PartIII

PresenttheproblemGiveyouradviceConclusion（結論）DearXiaoMing,I’msorryyouarehavingdifficultyinlearningEnglish

.However,thesituationiseasytochangeifyoutakemyadvice.Herearesometipstohelpyou:First,

whynot…?

Ifyoudothis,…Secondly,

youshould/can…Then/Thatway,…Thirdly,

itwouldbeagoodideaif…Bydoingthis,…Ihopeyouwillfindtheseideasuseful.Yours,MissZhangOutlineNowstarttowrite!

Whenyoufinishyourwriting,pleasegiveyourlettertoyourpartnerandcheckformistakes.

IVWritingandediting

學生習作糾錯

DearXiaoMing,

I’msorryyouarehavingdifficultyinlearningEnglish.However,thesituationiseasytochangeifyoutakemyadvice.Herearesometipstohelpyou:First,youshouldbelieveinyourselfandspendalotoftimeremembernewwords,expressionseveryday.Nowthetextsareverylong.Therearetoomuchwordsinthem.Ofcourse,youdon’tunderstandthem.Secondly,howtoimproveyourwritingability?Tomyopinion,youshouldpracticewritemore.Youcankeepdiariesandsetdownwhatyousayandhear.Inaword,youwritemore,youcanwritebetter.

IhopeyouwillfindsomegoodwaystoimproveyourEnglish.I’msureyou’llstudyhardmakeprogressinEnglish.Yours,MrsZhangrememberingmanyInwritingThemoreyouwrite,thebetteryoucanwrite.and亮點賞析1.YouarehavingtroubleinlearningEnglish.2.First,youshouldbelieveinyourselfandspendalotoftimerememberingnewwords.3.What’smore,youcankeepdiariesandset

downwhatyousayandhear.4.IhopeyouwillfindsomegoodwaystoimproveyourEnglish.5Inaword,themoreyouwrite,thebetteryoucanwrite.V.Howtoassess（評價）anarticle？1.Areyourideasstated（表達）clearly?2.Areyourideasrelatedtothetopic?（和主題有關）3.Haveyouusedlinkingwords（連接詞）properly?4.Arethereanyspellingmistakes?5.Arethereanygrammatical(語法)mistakes?6.Isyourhandwritingneatoreasytoread?WritingTask

假如你是李明，你的美國筆友Tom寫信給你，說他和好朋友Jack因為一次誤會影響了他們之間的關系，希望你給他提出一些建議，信的開頭以給出。DearTom,YouhaveaskedmeformyadviceonyourfriendshipwithJack,andItrymybesttogiveyousomesuggestions.1.communicatewithhim2.getridofthemisunderstandingbetweenyouandJack5.careforandhelphim

4.thinkaboutthefeelingsoffriend’sYouradviceforTom6.Friendshipisbasedonunderstandingandbelief3.talktohimandfindoutthetruthSu