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Mymother’sgift

Adandelion(蒲公英)inmydictionaryalwaysremindsmeofmylunchtimeswithmymother.

WhenIwasinthethirdgrade,Iwaspickedtobetheprincessintheschoolplay,andforweeksmymotherhadpainstakingly(費力地)practisedmylineswithme.ButnomatterhoweasilyIdeliveredthemathome,assoonasIsteppedonstage,everyworddisappearedfrommyhead.Finally,myteachertookmeaside.Sheexplainedthatshehadwrittenanarrator’sparttotheplay,andaskedmetoswitchroles.

Ididn’ttellmymotherwhathadhappenedwhenIwenthomeforlunchthatday.Butshesensedmyunease,andinsteadofsuggestingwepracticemylines,sheaskedifIwantedtowalkintheyard.

Itwasalovelyspringdayandtheroseleaveswereturninggreen.Wecouldseeyellowdandelionspoppingthroughthegrassinbunches,asifapainterhadtouchedourlandscapewitha

littlebitofgold.

Iwatchedmymothercasuallybenddownbyoneofthedandelions.“IthinkI’mgoingtodigupalltheseweeds,”shesaid,suddenlypullingaflowerupbyitsroots.“Fromnowon,we’llhaveonlyrosesinthisgarden.”

“ButIlikedandelions,”Iprotested.“Allflowersarebeautiful—evendandelions.”Mymotherlookedatmeseriously.“Yes,everyflowergivespleasureinitsownway,doesn’tit?”sheaskedthoughtfully.Inodded,pleasedthatIhadwonherover.“Andthatistrueofpeopletoo,”sheadded.“Noteveryonecanbeaprincess,butthereisnoshameinthat.”Relievedthatshehadguessedmypain,IstartedtocryasItoldherwhathadhappened.

“Butyouwillbeabeautifulnarrator,”shesaid,remindingmeofhowmuchIlovedtoreadstoriesaloudtoher.“Thenarrator’spartisasimportantasthepartofaprincess.”

Overthenextfewweeks,withherconstantencouragement,Ilearnedtotakeprideintherole.LunchtimeswerespentreadingovermylinesandtalkingaboutwhatIwouldwear.Backstageonthenightoftheperformance,Ifeltnervous.

____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Aftertheplay,ItookhometheflowerIhadplacedinthepocket.

Readforthemainidea：Mainidea:Myteacherchangedmyrolefromprincesstonarrator,whichmademesadanddisappointed.Mymotherledmeintotheyard,tryingtoencouragemeandhelpmeunderstandsomerealmeaningoflife.摘蒲公英動作鏈：noticethesmallflower--benddownreachoutmyhandpullituphandittohim媽媽鼓勵我的動作和語言描寫：Iwatchedmymothercasuallybenddownbyoneofthedandelions.“IthinkI’mgoingtodigupalltheseweeds,”shesaid,suddenlypullingaflowerupbyitsroots.“Fromnowon,we’llhaveonlyrosesinthisgarden.”

“ButIlikedandelions,”Iprotested.“Allflowersarebeautiful—evendandelions.”Mymotherlookedatmeseriously.“Yes,everyflowergivespleasureinitsownway,doesn’tit?”sheaskedthoughtfully.Inodded,pleasedthatIhadwonherover.“Andthatistrueofpeopletoo,”sheadded.“Noteveryonecanbeaprincess,butthereisnoshameinthat.”主題：Relievedthatshehadguessedmypain,IstartedtocryasItoldherwhathadhappened.Shelistenedandsmiledreassuringly.Thedevelopmentoftheplot:Whatwillpara.1mainlytalkabout?Para.1“Butyouwillbeabeautifulnarrator;"shesaidMymothercontinuedtoencourageme.Mymothersentmethedandelionasagift.照應(yīng)題目Mother’sgiftIfeltcheeredup,andperformedwellintheplayPara.2Aftertheplay,Itookhometheflower.搭建第一段的腳手架：（給出關(guān)鍵動詞）Buildupthewordbankeyes:lookatsb.gentlyintheeye2cast(投以)acomfortingglanceatsb3stareatsb.arms:hold/hug/foldsb.inone'sarmsgently;2throwone'sarmsaroundsbtightlywithouthesitationface:wearashiningsmileonone'sfacehands:wipeouttearsfromone'scheekstroke(輕撫)one’shairpatsb.ontheshoulderAppreciateoneversionPara.1“Butyouwillbeabeautifulnarrator;"shesaid,encouragingandcomfortingmeasalwaysasshedoes.Mybelovedmom,wearingashiningsmileonherscarletface,addedsincerely,“Lifeisnotabedofroses.Eventhoughthenarrator'spartissmall,justlikethedandelion,it'salsoofgreatimportance.Thenshecastacomfortingglanceatme,wipedoutmytears,andpassedadandeliontome.升華結(jié)尾：1.Lifeisnotabedofroses.Nomatterhowdisappointingthesituationis,nevergiveup.2.Again

Ithrewmyarmsaroundher.

Whatiscrucialinchildren'sgrowthismother'slove.

3.Thisexperienceislikeaneverlastingflower,

bloomingintheriverofmymemories.參考范文：Backstageonthenightoftheperformance,Ifeltnervous.Myforeheadsweating,Iwasworriedthatthelineswouldescapemymind.Toreleasemynerves,Iopenedthescript,turnedthepagerandomlyandsuddenlysawacurleddandelionbetweenthepages.Mother'sfaceandourlunchtimetalkscrossedmymind.Gradually,Icalmedmyselfdownandregainedmyconfidence.Puttingitinmypocket,Isteppedonstagewitheaseanddeliveredmynarrationsemotionallyandvividly.Ourperformanceyonapplause.(75)Aftertheplay,ItookhometheflowerIhadplacedinthepocket.Uponarrival,Icouldn'twaittothrowmyselfintoherarms,handedittoherandsharedthegoodnews.Shehuggedmet