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0副詞/形容詞1代詞2連詞3811Evaluationonly.CreatedwithAspose.Slidesfor.NET3.5ClientProfile.Copyright2004-2011AsposePtyLtd.DearSir,IamLiHua.Iambornin1992andIamgoingtograduateinseniorhighschool.Iamwillingtobeavolunteerinyourcharityaftergraduate. Iamout-goingandwarm-heartedboy.Ihavemanyhobby.Icanalsodogoodincommunicatingwithother. ThereasonwhythatIwanttobeavolunteeristhatIcanpracticemyselffromtheworkandIlovehelpothers.Thisjobcangivehimachancetomakemydreamscometrue.Ineedsuchexperience. bestwishes, LiHuaEvaluationonly.CreatedwithAspose.Slidesfor.NET3.5ClientProfile.Copyright2004-2011AsposePtyLtd.DearSir,IamLiHua.Iwasbornin1992andIamgoingtograduatefromseniorhighschool.Iamwillingtobeavolunteerinyourcharityaftergraduating. Iamanout-goingandwarm-heartedboy.Ihavemanyhobbies.Icanalsodowellincommunicatingwithothers. ThereasonwhyIwanttobeavolunteeristhatIcanpracticemyselffromtheworkandIlovehelpingothers.Thisjobcangivemeachancetomakemydreamcometrue.Ineedsuchexperience. bestwishes, LiHuaEvaluationonly.CreatedwithAspose.Slidesfor.NET3.5ClientProfile.Copyright2004-2011AsposePtyLtd.短文改錯小練冠詞

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1副詞/形容詞1代詞2連詞1911Evaluationonly.CreatedwithAspose.Slidesfor.NET3.5ClientProfile.Copyright2004-2011AsposePtyLtd.較好拿到的分?jǐn)?shù)有：名詞單復(fù)數(shù)/形容詞副詞/冠詞/代詞做題時應(yīng)注意：敘事性文章首抓全文時態(tài)，以免理解有誤；論述性文章首抓名詞形容詞冠詞代詞錯誤小結(jié)Evaluationonly.CreatedwithAspose.Slidesfor.NET3.5ClientProfile.Copyright2004-2011AsposePtyLtd.Composition假如你是李華，即將高中畢業(yè)，打算畢業(yè)后利用假期時間去一家慈善機(jī)構(gòu)做一名義工?，F(xiàn)根據(jù)以下內(nèi)容寫一封信介紹你自己，希望成為一名志愿者。1.1992年出生2.熱情開朗，興趣廣泛，擅長溝通，語言表達(dá)能力強(qiáng)3.請陳述你想成為志愿者的理由Evaluationonly.CreatedwithAspose.Slidesfor.NET3.5ClientProfile.Copyright2004-2011AsposePtyLtd.DearSir,IamLiHua.Iwasbornin1992andIamgoingtograduatefromseniorhighschool.Iamwillingtobeavolunteerinyourcharityaftergraduating. Iamanout-goingandwarm-heartedboy.Ihavemanyhobbies.Icanalsodowellincommunicatingwithothers.

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