統(tǒng)考版2024屆高考英語(yǔ)二輪專項(xiàng)分層特訓(xùn)卷35分寫(xiě)作規(guī)范練五

35分寫(xiě)作規(guī)范練(五)寫(xiě)作(共兩節(jié)，滿分35分)第一節(jié)短文改錯(cuò)(共10小題；每小題1分，滿分10分)假定英語(yǔ)課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫(xiě)的以下作文。文中共有10處語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯(cuò)誤僅涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)(∧)，并在其下面寫(xiě)出該加的詞。刪除：把多余的詞用斜線(\劃掉。修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下畫(huà)一橫線，并在該詞下面寫(xiě)出修改后的詞。注意：1．每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；2．只允許修改10處，多者(從第11處起)不計(jì)分。[2023·哈爾濱市高三大聯(lián)考]Arecentsurveyhasshownthatarethehobbiesofthe1，500studentsinourschool.Theresultshowedthatover40%ofthemarefondofplayingmusicalinstrumentsbecausetheycanimprovetheirlifequality.About35%enjoysurftheInternet,whichhelpsthemknowaboutworldaffair.Tooursurprise,anumberofthestudentspayingmuchattentiontoreadingissmall.Itonlytakesupfor12%,ifreadingisthebestwaytogainknowledge.Therefore,morestudentsarestronglyadvisedtakeupreading.Plus,theyshouldtakeanactivepartinsportsanddevelopotherhobbiesproperbesidesentertainment.第二節(jié)書(shū)面表達(dá)(滿分25分)[2023·皖江名校高三摸底考試]假定你是李華。志愿者們最近對(duì)你校學(xué)生的周末時(shí)間分配進(jìn)行了調(diào)查。請(qǐng)你結(jié)合下表內(nèi)容，給校報(bào)英語(yǔ)專欄編輯Mr.Johnson寫(xiě)封信，反映這次調(diào)查的結(jié)果。內(nèi)容要求：1．描述圖表內(nèi)容；2．分析所反映的問(wèn)題；3．提出你的看法。注意：1．詞數(shù)100左右；2．可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；3．信的開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已為你寫(xiě)出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。DearMr.Johnson，Recentlyvolunteershaveconductedasurveyabouthowthestudentsspendtheirweekends.Yours，LiHua35分寫(xiě)作規(guī)范練（五）寫(xiě)作第一節(jié)第二節(jié)參考范文：DearMr.Johnson，Recentlyvolunteershaveconductedasurveyabouthowthestudentsspendtheirweekends.Ascanbeseenfromthepie,amongthesurveyedstudents,about51%oftheirtimeisspentonhomeworkwhileonlineactivitiesaccountfornearly35%.Meanwhile,doingphysicalexercisetakesupabout7%oftheirtime,sharingthesamepercentagewithreadingbooks.Thesurveycertainlyleavesmedeepinthought.Toomuchhomeworkleavesthestudentsnotimeforphysicalexerciseorreading,affectingtheirhealthandfurtherdevelopment.Evenworse,manyofthesurveyedwastemuchtimeonline,someevenaddictedtocomputergames.Somoreattentionshouldbegiventothiscase.Studentsshouldhavemorefreedomtosomethingmoremeaningful,r