2024屆高考英語高分寫作方法指導（一）課件

2024屆新高考英語高分寫作方法指導(一)方法：使用無靈主語動詞有靈無靈主語有哪些？翻譯擂臺1.有人來看你。2.我說不出話來。3.我想不起他的名字了。Someonecomestoseeyou.Icannotspeak.Iwasunabletoutteraword.Icouldhardlysayanything.Icouldn'trememberhisname.Iforgothisname.地道表達：Youhaveavisitor.Wordsfailme.Hisnameescapedme.Hisnameslippedmymind.思維模式?jīng)Q定了語言表達IhavestudiedEnglishfortwoyearsandahalf.ButIhavesomedifficultiesinlearningit.Twoyearsago,myEnglishwasverypoor.Ifailedmanytimesintheexams.Iwasveryworried,butIdidnotgiveup.Imadeupmymindtolearnitwell.IaskedmyclasSmateswholearnedEnglishwelltohelpme.IdidmoreEnglishexercisestoimprovemyself.Ireadaloudtomyteachersandclassmates.Ialsofoundmethodsonweb.Ilearnedalotfromit.ImadegreatprogressinEnglish.拒絕一"I”到底的枯燥寫作表達！1.有人來看你。Youhaveavisitor.2.我說不出話來。Wordsfailme.DISAPPOINTSB使失望6.[VN]todisappointsb;tobeunabletohelpwhenneeded使失望；有負于；無能為力·Whenhelosthisjob,hefelthehadfailedhisfamily.他失去工作以后，感到辜負了他的家庭。Shetriedtobebrave,buthercouragefailedher.她想勇敢，但卻鼓不起勇氣。(figurative)Wordsfailme(=IlcannotexpresshowIfeel),我無法表達自己的感受。Agoodideaflashedthroughmymind.Aterriblethoughtsuddenlystruckmethat..Suddenly,anideacameacrossmymind.Ithitmethat.Itoccurredtomethat.…Itdawnedon/uponmethat...(以上動詞都采用了過去式)dawnonsb.使開始明白；使?jié)u漸領悟；使開始理解對比:Suddenly,Icameupwithagoodidea.解鎖翻譯新思路！1.我突然失去了自信心。Isuddenlylostmyconfidence.Myconfidencesuddenlydesertedme.v.背離，使失望2.(當我)想/看到這個情景，Iwasscared/terrifiedwhenIthoughtofthescene.我內(nèi)心充滿了恐懼。FearfilledmyheartwhenIthoughtofthescene.Thesightofthescenefilledmewithhorror.走出主體思維“人”看到客觀世界里的..情緒動作抽象概念情緒作主語joy/delight/happiness/pleasureexcitement/thrillgratitude/appreciation/admirationsatisfaction/contentmentsurprise/shock/amazement/astonishmentdepression/frustration/disappointmentregret/guilt/remorsesadness/sorrow/grieffear/terror/fright/panicannoyance/anger/rage/furydespair/desperation/hopelessnessrelaxation/reliefFearcameoverhim.他感到一陣恐懼。Astrangepeacecameoverherwhenshewasalone.她獨處時感到一種特殊的安寧。Fearslowlycreepsuponher.恐懼慢慢地蔓延到她身上。Afeelingoffearslowlycreptonhim.他慢慢感到一絲恐懼。Aslightfeelingofsuspicioncreptoverme.我漸漸地產(chǎn)生了一絲疑慮。Awaveoftirednesssweptoverher.她感到渾身疲憊。Agreatsenseofrelieffloodedoverhim.他深感寬慰。Awaveofself-consciousnesscanwashoverherwhensomeonenewenterstheroom.當有陌生人進入房間時，她會感到不自在。Fearsurroundedhim,makinghimfeeltrappedanduneasy.恐懼環(huán)繞著他，使他感到束手無策和不安。Sadnessenvelopedher,castingashadowoverhereverythoughtandaction.悲傷籠罩著她，給她的每一個思想和行動都投下了陰影。Asenseoflonelinessanddespairblanketedhim,isolatinghimfromtheworldaroundhim.孤獨和絕望的感覺將他籠罩，使他與周圍的世界隔絕。Anxietyseized/eaptured/caught/tookholdofhim.他焦慮不已。Arushofexcitementtookholdofherwhenshesawherfavoritebandperforminglive,envelopingherinpurebliss.當她看到自己最愛的樂隊現(xiàn)場表演時，一股興奮之情占據(jù)了她的內(nèi)心，將她包裹在純粹的幸福中。Despairchokedhiswords.絕望使得他說不出話來。WhenIheardtheapproachofthewritingcontest,awaveofnervousnessoverwhelmedme.當我聽到寫作比賽的臨近時，一陣緊張使我不知所描。Asurgeoffearpreventedhimfromtakingasinglestepforward.一股恐懼涌上心頭，使他無法邁出一步。Arushoffearpreventedherfromspeaking,ashervoicecaughtinherthroat.一陣恐懼涌上心頭，使她無法開口，聲音卡在了喉嚨。Failingtheexamdeprivedhimofconfidence,leavinghiminastateofself-doubtandinsecurity.考試不及格讓他失去了信心，使他陷入了自我懷疑和不安的狀態(tài)中。Hisanxietygavewaytoreliefwhenhefoundoutthatthetestwaspostponed.他的焦慮在他得知考試推遲后轉(zhuǎn)為了寬慰。Hisfrustrationgavewaytosatisfactionwhenhefinallycompletedthechallengingtask.當他終于完成了困難的任務時，他的挫敗感轉(zhuǎn)為了滿足感。Hersadnessgavewaytohappinesswhenshereceivedasurprisevisitfromherlon