初中九年級(jí)英語(yǔ)課件Module12SaveourworldUnit2Period2Wr

Module12SaveourworldUnit2WritingMakeagreenschoolByChenXuelianWhatdoyouthinkofMaoming?Freetalk:HowtomakeagreencityInourdailylife,wecandomanylittlethings.

reducereuserecycleHowtobegreenLet’slistentoaconversationandfindoutothergoodadvice.AdviceReasonsRecycle1.Don’tthrowawaythingsmadeof_________,plasticandpaper.It’sa_________tothrowusedthingsaway.Reuse2.Reusethe________plasticbagswhenyoucanandtakeabagwithyouwhenyougoshopping.Plasticbagsare_______to

recycle.Reduce3.__________electricityandoil.4.Don’tleavelights________andwasteelectricity.5._________orcycleanddon’toftendriveyourcar.Wecanreduce_________.AdviceReasonsRecycle1.Don’tthrowawaythingsmadeof_________,plasticandpaper.It’sa_________tothrowusedthingsaway.Reuse2.Reusethe________plasticbagswhenyoucanandtakeabagwithyouwhenyougoshopping.Plasticbagsare_______torecycle.Reduce3._________electricityandoil.4.Don’tleavelights________andwasteelectricity.5._________orcycleanddon’toftendriveyourcar.Wecanreduce_________.Report:….because…….sothatwecan…glasswasteoldhardUselessonWalkpollutionWhatadvicecanyougivetothestudents?Youshouldturnoffthetapafterwashing.Youshouldturnoffthelightswhileleaving.Youshouldn’tthrowawaytherubbishonthefloor.

reducereuserecycleHowtobegreenItisbetterto….because…..Weshould….sothat….Don’t…..because…Groupwork:Howtomakeagreenschool創(chuàng)文圖

希望源于綠色，保護(hù)環(huán)境是我們的共同職責(zé)。請(qǐng)你為學(xué)校寫(xiě)一份倡議書(shū)，讓大家一起行動(dòng)，共同創(chuàng)建一個(gè)綠色校園。

內(nèi)容包括：1.建設(shè)綠色校園的重要性。

2.綠色校園里不環(huán)保的現(xiàn)象。

3.提議如何建設(shè)綠色校園。（至少3個(gè)）4.呼吁創(chuàng)建綠色校園，從我做起。Asweknow,ourschoolisaplacewherewestudytogether.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________WritingStep1.審題：人稱(chēng)________,時(shí)態(tài)_________Step2.結(jié)構(gòu)：Part1.Importance:It’sveryimportant/necessaryto….Part2.Someproblems:Therearesome…Forexample,…Part3.Advice:Weshould….Because…It’sbetterto….sothat…Part4.Callon:Let’s…/Ihope…Step3.善用連接詞（First,Second,What’smore）善用從句：When….,If…..善用過(guò)渡語(yǔ)：Inorderto…,Inaword….Tips檔次內(nèi)容結(jié)構(gòu)表達(dá)第一檔13-15分要點(diǎn)齊全，語(yǔ)句流暢，句式結(jié)構(gòu)較復(fù)雜，詞匯較高級(jí)段落清晰，銜接豐富，結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊基本無(wú)語(yǔ)法和詞匯錯(cuò)誤第二檔10-13分大部分要點(diǎn)，語(yǔ)句較流暢段落清晰，銜接較好，結(jié)構(gòu)較緊湊少量語(yǔ)法和詞匯錯(cuò)誤第三檔7-9分部分要點(diǎn)，語(yǔ)句基本通順有分段，有基本銜接有一些語(yǔ)法和詞匯錯(cuò)誤第四檔4-6分少量要點(diǎn)，語(yǔ)句不通順幾乎無(wú)分段或銜接少量句子表達(dá)正確，語(yǔ)法和詞匯錯(cuò)誤較多第五檔0-3分基本無(wú)要點(diǎn)無(wú)分段，無(wú)銜接只寫(xiě)一些單詞，不知所云打分細(xì)則/名字S1S2S3S4S5S6內(nèi)容引入1分原因1分/個(gè)X2建議2分/個(gè)X3結(jié)尾1分結(jié)構(gòu)2分表達(dá)3分總分

Asweknow,ourschoolisaplacewherewestudytogether.Weneedahealthyenvironment.Asaresult,it’simportantforustomakeagreenschool.However,therearesomebadbehaviourstotheenvironmentatschool.Forexample,somepeopledon’tturnoffthelightwhentheyareleaving.Inordertomakeagreenschool,weshouldrememberthreewordsdaily:reduce,reuse,andrecycle.First,weshoulduselesselectricityandwater.Pleaseturnoffthemafterusing.Second,it’sbettertoreusesomethinguseable,suchasbooksandpaper.Becauseithelpssavemanytrees.What’smore,it’snecessarytodividerubbishandrecycle.Inaword,let’smakeagreenschoolfromnowonanddoitfromourselves.W