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東營行知實驗學校內(nèi)部資料魯教版四年制使用中考英語寫作主講：崔建波目錄英語寫作之遣詞、造句、謀篇 2遣詞 2造句 5謀篇 10英語寫作之真題篇 17全國中考英語寫作真題之學習方法類 17全國中考英語寫作真題之健康類 21全國中考英語寫作真題之環(huán)保類 24全國中考英語寫作真題之假期計劃類 28全國中考英語寫作真題之利與弊議論類 30全國中考英語寫作真題之考前減壓類 32語法和句型學生常見九大錯誤 35九大錯誤 35大家來找茬！?。?36極致篇 38英語寫作之遣詞、造句、謀篇遣詞詞義篇exit 出口出口export LifeinmyJuniorhighmakesmeunforgettable.“用”：use/with/bydoing/spend/cost/take培養(yǎng)英語思維詞的搭配大雨 heavyrain大橋 longbridge大樓 tallbuilding大錯 serious/terriblemistake大寫 capitalletter大病 seriousillness大地震 majorearthquake詞性成功（n.） success（v.） succeed（adj.） successful（adv.） successfullyIwillneverforgethisbraveandhonest.感情色彩share？happyandsadmoments 同…共…commonhobby 有著共同的…h(huán)ousework 分擔…Ishareyourfeeling.詞匯升級goodexcellentwonderfulfantasticawesomeperfect →cannotbebetter良師益友 詞匯全面升級見到名詞：1. 上形容詞 Sheisalwayswearingasmile. beautiful/pleasant2. 上定從 Sheisalwayswearingbeautifulsmile→ thatmakespeoplearoundherfeelcomfortable.見到動詞上副詞 Iagree. Icompletely/partly/hardlyagree. Healwaysshareshisstudymethodswith us. Healwaysshareshispracticalstudymethodswithusselflessly.見到形容詞、副詞1. 升級 agoodteacherandgreatfriend anexcellentteacherandwonderfulfriend2. 變比較級 tryhard tryharder freshair fresherair熟詞的不俗的用法：interestI’minterestedinreading. (adj.)Ialwaysshowgreatinterestinreading.(n.)Readingalwaysinterestsmealot. (v.)粗心的童鞋們Iadviceyouto…Ihopeyouwillexceptmyopinion…Inaworld,… Ifell…細節(jié)決定成敗broadb+roadabroada+broadboard名詞/動詞造句與Cinglish斗爭到底ZhouYubeatHuangGai,oneishappy,theotherishappytoo.knowisknow,noknowisnoknowThekingwantsyoutodie,youfacebook.Fourgladmeatballs.傻小子涮英國老太太 老太太問：Didueatanythingyet?我說：No.她聽后重復了一遍soudidn'teatanything.我說：Yes...老太太猶豫了下,又問：Didueat？我說：No.她接著說soudidn'teat.我說：Yes... 句的表達注意漢英差異一、狀語e.g.她一周有三個下午在一家百貨公司做兼職。 Shedoesaparttimejob inadepartmentstore threeafternoonsaweek.寫做法：計劃類+建議類一級補充： how why 方式 原因/目的其他補充： 地點、時間、條件等初中生版who + do + whathow whywhen where計劃類作文之提示詞語拓展2011呼和浩特 你將在爺爺奶奶家度過暑假，至少寫出你將要做的三件事。

參考詞匯： summer; grandparents; relaxoneself; housework; visit;

oldfriendsandrelatives方式bydoing1.relax Iwillrelaxmyself.方式Iwillrelaxmyselfbyswimming.地點willrelaxmyselfIbyswimminginabeautifullakenearmygrandparents’house.時間Iwillrelaxmyselfbyswimminginabeautifullakenearmygrandparents’housewhentheweatherisfine.原因because…2.housework Iwilldosomehouseworkformygrandparents.原因Iwilldosomehouseworkformygrandparentsbecausetheyusedtolookafterme.時間IwilldosomehouseworkformygrandparentsbecausetheyusedtolookaftermewhenIwasalittlekid.感情IwilldosomehouseworkformygrandparentsbecausetheyusedtolookaftermewhenIwasalittlekidandIamsothankfultothem.目的inordertodo/that…3.visit, oldfriendsandrelativesIwillvisitmyoldfriendsandrelatives.目的Iwillvisitmyoldfriendsandrelativesinordertodeepenourfriendship.二、謂語動詞 漢語：無動詞或多動詞 英語：單動詞e.g. 我媽媽很漂亮。Mymotherispretty.e.g.我喜歡看書和游泳。 Ilovereadingandswimming.判斷正誤： Iamtrytolearnfromhim.三、主語e.g.保護環(huán)境是很重要的。 Itisimportanttoprotecttheenvironment. 昨天找到了丟失的鋼筆。Thelostpenwasfoundyesterday. 行動起來，保護環(huán)境。 Weshouldtakeactionstoprotectthe environment.四、定語“的”漢：常常是前置定語英：前置和后置定語(1.介詞短語作后置定語）e.g.（我們學校的）所有學生 allthestudents（inourschool） （英國人的）日常生活 everydaylives（oftheBritish）（2.動詞不定式作后置定語）（玩/放松的）時間 time（toplay/relax）（當一個音樂家的）計劃 theplan（tobeamusician）（供人休息的）安靜場所 （aquiet）place（forpeopletorest)（3.分詞、定語從句等作后置定語）（坐在我旁邊的）女孩兒 thegirl（sittingbesideme）（被扔進池塘里的）石頭 arock（thrownintoapond)（我曾經(jīng)生活的）村莊 thevillage（whereIlived）（我昨晚吃的）某樣東西 something（thatIatelastnight）句子的靈活應用最高級VS比較級VS原形Lucy是她們班最好的學生。Lucyisthebeststudentinherclass.Lucyisbetterthananyotherstudentinherclass.NootherstudentisbetterthanLucyinherclass.NootherstudentisasgoodasLucyinherclass.肯定VS否定在Mary的幫助下，我取得了成功。WithMary’shelp,Isucceeded.IcouldneversucceedwithoutMary’shelp.人稱主語VSdoing主語Sheisgoodatplayingtennis.Playingtennisisherfavoritesportgame.Iwillreusepaper.Reusingpaperwillbemychoice.主動VS被動Therearespecialseatsonbuses.Specialseatsareofferedonbuses.Icanremember.Iwasdeeplyimpressed.一般時態(tài)VS混搭時態(tài)一般現(xiàn)在： Ilookforwardtothevacation.現(xiàn)在進行： Iamlookingforwardtothe vacation.現(xiàn)在完成進行：Ihavebeenlookingforwardto thevacation.簡單句VS復合句/并列句Icouldn’tlearnMathwell.Justthen,myteachercametohelpme.Icouldn’tlearnMathwelluntilmyteacher,Mr.Leecametohelpme.LinHaoisastudent. Heisnineyearsold.LinHaoisastudentwhoisnineyearsold.謀篇書面表達評分標準： 第一檔：(15-13分)完全符合題目要求， 觀點正確,要點齊全。 句式多樣，詞匯豐富。 語言準確，語意連貫， 表達清楚，具有邏輯性。第二檔：(12~9分)基本符合題目要求，觀點正確,要點齊全。語法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯基本滿足文章需要。語言基本通順，語意基本連貫，表達基本清楚。雖然有少量語言錯誤，但不影響整體理解。第三檔：(8~5分)部分內(nèi)容符合題目要求，要點不齊全。 語法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯錯誤較多， 語言不通順，表達不夠清楚，影響整體理解。 第四檔：(4~0分)與題目有關(guān)內(nèi)容不多， 只是簡單拼湊詞語， 所寫內(nèi)容難以理解。10字原則： 結(jié)構(gòu)+ 要點+ 邏輯+ 語法+ 亮點官方范文是個寶汶川地震（WenchuanEarthquake）發(fā)生后，9歲學生林浩（LinHao）救了兩名同學，然后步行7小時到達安全地點。 請你就林浩同學的事跡，以“LearnfromtheHero”為題，給你校英語?？陡濉?nèi)容包括林浩同學的事跡簡介，你對這件事的感受，以及你要向他學習什么。提示詞語：astudent, nineyearsold, happen,save, walk, tosafety, bedeeplymoved, brave, giveup官方范文： LinHaoisastudent.Heisonlynineyearsold.AfterWenchuanEarthquakehappened,hesavedtwoofhisclassmates.Thenhewalkedforsevenhourstosafety. Iwasdeeplymovedbyhisstory.Ithinkheisabraveboy.Hedidhisbestwhenhefacedgreatdanger. Ishouldlearnfromhim.Iwillthinkofothersfirstandhelpthemasmuchaspossible.IwillnevergiveupwhenIfaceanydifficulties.改寫范文亮點句LinHaoisastudent.Heisonlynineyearsold.LinHaoisastudentwhoisonlynineyearsold.Ithinkheisabraveboy.IthinkheisthebravestboythatIhaveeverheardof.12分作文=官方范文=單選語法點2012年北京市中考官方范文VS2012年北京市中考單選13–15分作文=閱讀、完形、教材語言點2010年北京市中考 閱讀C篇“Whenasentencedoesn’tmakesense”2011年北京市中考 閱讀D篇“Perhapsweshouldgiveteenagersalittlemoretrustanyway.”2011年中考滿分作文“Icanabsolutelymakesenseofwhatyousaid”“Butifwemakeupourmindtohelpourfriends,weshouldgivethemalittlemoretrustanyway.話題篇一、周圍的人二、難忘的經(jīng)歷三、學習方法類四、假期計劃類五、利與弊議論六、中學生健康問題七、環(huán)保主題八、時事類九、周圍環(huán)境描述十、有效解壓真題一：關(guān)鍵詞模板2009河南“ApersonIwillneverforget”話題：家人、朋友和周圍的人寫人七大要素：外貌、性格、愛好、學習成績、描述讓你難忘（幫助過你）的一件事情、感想（體會）、祝福（祝愿）一、外貌：1. MyfavoriteteacherisMr.Wang.Heis handsomeandofmediumbuild.2. MybestfriendisLinda.Sheisabeautiful girlwithlongblackhair.二、性格：1. Ms.Wangisnotonlyawonderfulteacher, butalsoanexcellentfriend..2. LiLeiisanoutgoingboywhoisalways willingtohelpothers.三、愛好：1. Heisnotonlygoodatplayingbasketballbutalsodoeswellinplayingchess.Swimmingishisfavoritethingtodoinhisfreetimeandhealsoshowsgreatinterestinplayingsoccer.四、學習成績1.SheisverygoodatlessonsespeciallyEnglish,sosheisoneofthetopstudentsinourclass.五、描述讓你難忘（幫助過你）的一件事情： 模板一 Webecamefriendsbyaccident. Onedayhewasplayingbasketballontheplayground. HediditsowellthatIwantedtolearn. Therefore,Iaskedifhecouldteachme. Iwasgratefulwhenheagreed.EverytimewhenIwantedtogiveuphalfway,itwasXXXwhoencouragedme. Withhishelp,Icanplaybasketballaswellashedoesnow.六、感想（體會） Ifeelluckytohavesuchagoodteacher/friend.Healwaysholdsontoachievehisdream.ThatishisbestqualityIshouldlearnfromhim.Ifeelluckytohavesuchagoodteacher/friendwhoalwaysholdsontoachievehisdream,whichishisbestqualitythatIshouldlearnformhim.感想/體會/感受模板：感覺 Iamdeeplymoved/grateful.為什么？BecausehehelpedandencouragedmewhenIwasintrouble.決定 Therefore,Ihavemadeupmymindtolearnfromhim.學什么？Iwillbethepersonjustlikehimwhoalwaysofferstimelyhelpandsupporttootherpeoplewhentheyareinneed.七、祝福（祝愿）ncerelyhopeLiLeiwillmakegreaterprogressinanewhighschool.Ialsowishhewillhaveabrightfuture.真題二：關(guān)鍵詞借鑒2014北京市東城區(qū)上學期期末AnUnforgettableSchoolActivity話題：描寫經(jīng)歷借鑒靈感 人教版9年級英語教材P6Beingavolunteerisgreat!節(jié)選：Ourschoolishometothreespecialyoungpeoplewhoallvolunteertheirfreetimetohelpothers.Huipinglovestoread,andsheputsthislovetogoodusebyworkingintheafter-schoolcarecenteratherlocalelementaryschool.Here,shehelpsyoungchildrentoread.ZhuMingwantstobeaprofessionalsinger.Hesingsforgroupsofpeopleatthecityhospitaltocheerthemup.“Volunteeringisgreat!”saysHuiping.“NotonlydoIfeelgoodabouthelpingotherpeople,butIgettospendtimedoingwhatIlovetodo.”真題三：關(guān)鍵詞貫通2013北京東城區(qū)一模 假設你叫李華，是英國中學生彼得的筆友，你收到了他的來信。請給彼得寫 一封回信，回答他的有關(guān)壓歲錢（luckymoney）的問題，提出你的建議。Didyougetluckymoneythisyear?Howdoyouusuallyspendit?AndwhatcanIdowiththemoney?同類話題：2011年北京市海淀一模SurveyofPocketMoneySpendingbuybooks （課余生活、興趣愛好、減壓）buysnacks （健康）saving fortraveling （課余生活、興趣愛好、假期計劃、減壓） forbuyinggifts（感恩）donation/environmentprotection真實考場滿分作文2011北京該不該把錢借給朋友話題：與周圍的人相處，情感類成長中每個人都要面對煩惱，并解決問題。 假設你叫劉明，是美國中學生愛莉絲的朋友。 你收到她的電子郵件，請給她回復， 回答她的問題，提出你的建議， 并就此事談談你的看法。Hi!LiuMing, I’msosad.Angelaisaclosefriendofmine.Thismorningshewantedtoborrowsomemoneyfromme.IfIlendherthemoney,I’mafraidshewon’tpaymeback.Idon’tknowwhattodo.Doyouhavethesameproblem?Ineedyourhelp.I’mlookingforwardtohearingfromyousoon.Yours,AliceDearAlice, I'mgladtohearfromyou.Isometimeshavetheproblemlikeyours,soIcanabsolutelymakesenseofwhatyousaid.Don'tworryaboutit,I'llhelpyou. Inmymind,truefriendshipismoreimportantthanmoneysoifshedoesn'taskfortoomuch,youaresupposedtolendittoher.But,ifthemoneyshewantedisoutofyourexpectation,personally,Isuggestyou'dbetterturndownherrequestandtellhertoaskherparentsforhelp. Meanwhile,whenyoueventuallydecidetogiveherahand,youshouldbelievehercompletely,sheisyourclosefriendafterall.Asteenagers,wedon'thavetheabilitytomakemoney,soifourfriendswanttoborrowmoneyfromus,wemustconsideraboutitseriously.Butifwemakeupourmindtohelpourfriends,weshouldgivethemalittlemoretrustanyway.英語寫作之真題篇全國中考英語寫作真題之學習方法類2011湖南懷化“學習漢語的建議”話題：學習方法類其他真題案例：2011雞西；山西；蘭州；哈爾濱2010宜昌；哈爾濱；黃岡等假如你是張華，你的加拿大朋友Dave來信向你了解學習漢語的方法，請根據(jù)以下要點用英語寫封回信。除以下要點外再提出一條建議。要點：1.加入漢語班學習，可向老師學習并與同學練習漢語；2.看中文電視、讀中文書、報紙、雜志；3.聽、唱漢語歌，擴大漢語詞匯；4.交中國朋友，既可以練口語又可了解中國。要求：要點齊全，可適當發(fā)揮；80詞左右（開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總數(shù)）；文中不能出現(xiàn)自己的地址，姓名及所在學校的名稱。DearDave, I’mgladtogetyourletteraskingformyadviceonhowtolearnChinesewell.Hereismyadvice.First,_________________________官方范文： I’mgladtogetyourletteraskingformyadviceonhowtolearnChinesewell.Hereismyadvice. First,…1加入漢語班學習，可向老師學習并與同學練習漢語 itisveryimportantforyoutotakeanactivepartinaChineseclass,andyoucanaskyourteachersforhelp.2.看中文電視、讀中文書、報紙、雜志； Second,watchingChinesemoviesandreadingChinesebooks,newspapersareveryhelpful.3.聽、唱漢語歌，擴大漢語詞匯 Third,youhadbetterlistentosomeChinesesongsandsingthemtoenlargeyourChinesecharacters.4.交中國朋友，既可以練口語又可了解中國。 Mostimportantly,makingChinesefriendsisverynecessary. Inmyopinion,practicingconversationswithfriendscanimproveyourspeakingskills.寫作思路之點、線、面拓展法語言學習：（點）（具體）1. 聽 listento 2. 說 speak 3. 讀 read 4. 寫 write （概括）5.老師指導 teacher’sinstruction6.信心 confidence7.合作 group點線1.聽 listento(what) listento(English)songsandradio(why) inordertoimproveyour(English)pronunciation(when+where) everymorningonyourwaytoschoolYoucanlistentoEnglishsongsandradioinordertoimproveyourEnglishpronunciationeverymorningonyourwaytoschool. 語言潤色：itis+adj.+(forsb.)+todo ItisofgreathelpforyoutolistentoEnglishsongsandradioinordertoimproveyourEnglishpronunciationeverymorningonyourwaytoschool.2.說 speak(withwhom) speak(English)withnativeEnglishspeakers(why) sothatyouwillknowthecultureofEnglishspeakingcountriesbetterandspeak EnglishfluentlySpeakEnglishwithnativeEnglishspeakerssothatyouwillknowthecultureofEnglishspeakingcountriesbetterandspeakEnglishfluently.語言潤色：避免重復+被動 ItisstronglysuggestedtomakefriendswithnativeEnglishspeakerssothatyouwillknowthecultureofEnglishspeakingcountriesbetterandspeakthelanguagefluently.3.讀 read(what) readEnglishnewspapersandmagazines/books(why) toenlargeyourEnglishvocabularyYou’dbetterreadsomeEnglishnewspapersandbookstoenlargeyourEnglishvocabulary.語言潤色：doing作主語+被動+副詞 ReadingsomeEnglishnewspapersandbookswillbeagoodidea,thisway,yourEnglishvocabularywillbeenlargedeffectively.4.寫 write(towhom) toyourpenpalwholivesinAmerica(why) inordertoimproveyourwritingskillsYoushouldwritetoyourpenpalwholivesinAmericainordertoimproveyourwritingskills.語言潤色：虛擬語氣+原因狀從+被動 IfIwereyou,IwouldwritetomypenpalwholivesinAmericabecausebydoingso,mywritingskillswillbeimproved.5.老師指導 teacher’sinstruction HavingaEnglishteacherisofgreatimportance.BecauseyoucanhardlylearnEnglishwellwithoutinstruction.語言特色：doing作主語+雙重否定6.信心 confidence Ifyoubelieveinyourself,youwillbestrongenoughtoovercomeanydifficultythatyoufaceinstudyingEnglish.語言特色：條件狀從+定語從句 Nothingcoulddefeatamanwhonevergivesup.語言特色：引用俗語7.合作 groupstudywithagrouphow1 bydiscussingwhat problemsthatyoucan’tsolveby yourselfhow2 bysharingwhat practicalstudymethodsselflesslyStudywithagroupbydiscussingproblemsthatyoucansolveandlearnfromthepracticalstudymethodssharedselflesslybyothers.語言特色： 祈使句+并列句+定語從句+分詞作定語線面 Tobeginwith,ItisofgreathelpforyoutolistentoEnglishsongsandradioinordertoimproveyourEnglishpronunciationeverymorningonyourwaytoschool.（或）Atfirst,havingaChineseteacherisofgreatimportance.BecauseyoucanhardlylearnChinesewellwithoutinstruction.What’smore,itisstronglysuggestedtomakefriendswithnativeEnglishspeakerssothatyouwillknowthecultureofEnglishspeakingcountriesbetterandspeakthelanguagefluently.（或）Besides,readingsomeEnglishnewspapersandbookswillbeagoodidea,thisway,yourEnglishvocabularywillbeenlargedeffectively.（或）Inaddition,ifIwereyou,IwouldwritetomypenpalewholivesinAmericabecausebydoingso,mywritingskillswillbeimproved.Lastbutnottheleast,ifyoubelieveinyourself,youwillbestrongenoughtoovercomeanydifficultythatyoufaceinstudyingEnglish.全國中考英語寫作真題之健康類2011宜賓談“關(guān)愛健康”話題：中學生健康其他真題案例：2011長沙；2010成都；大連；濰坊等健康一直是人們關(guān)注的問題，你校要舉行“關(guān)愛健康”為題的主題班會。請根據(jù)以下提示寫一篇發(fā)言稿。保持健康的重要性；保持健康的方法：多吃水果蔬菜；每天鍛煉一小時；早睡早起；勤洗手；自己的看法（至少一條）官方范文： Boysandgirls, Itisveryimportantforusstudentstokeephealthy. Therearemanywaystobehealthy. We’dbettereatmorefruitsandvegetables. Takeexerciseforatleastonehoureveryday. Weneedenoughsleepandrestsoitisimportanttogotobedearlyandgetupearly.Besides,weshouldwashourhandsasoftenaspossible. Inmyopinion,wemustn’tdrinkwineorsmoke. Theyarebadforourhealth. Thankyou.寫作思路之點、線、面拓展法健康（點）吃 eat運動 dosports睡 sleep點線吃 eat(what) eathealthyfood,suchasfruitandvegetables(why) whichwillbenefitusalot(對比) insteadof/ratherthanjunkfooddiet keepabalanceddiet Eatinghealthyfood,suchasfruitandvegetablesandkeepingabalanceddietwillbenefitusalot.或：Itiswellknownthatbreakfastplaysanimportantroleinourdailylife.語言特色：被動+playanimportantrolein…2.做運動 dosports 室內(nèi)/室外 個人/團體 gojogging(where) inapark(why) tobreathefreshairwhichwillrefreshyourmindandmakeyouenergeticenoughtoconcentrateonyourstudybetterItisofgreathelptogojogginginaparktobreathefreshairwhichwillrefreshyourmindandmakeyouenergeticenoughtoconcentrateonyourstudybetter.或： Itisgenerallyrecognizedthatdoingexercisesshouldbevaluedbecausewecannotstudyverywellwithoutastrongbody.語言特色：虛擬主語+被動+雙重否定3.睡 sleepwhy俗語 becausethereisasayingthat“Earlytobed,earlytorise,makesamanhealthy,wealthyandwise.”Itisnecessarytogetenoughsleep,becausethereisasayingthat“Earlytobed,earlytorise,makesamanhealthy,wealthyandwise.”或： Toooften,goingtobedissimplyviewedasanunnecessaryactbutactuallyitdeservesmoreattention.語言特色：doing作主語+被動+欲揚先抑面連接詞：首先 Tobeginwith,/Atthefirstplace,…其次 Besides,/What’smore,/Furthermore, /Inaddition,…最后 Lastbutnottheleast,…總之 Inaword,/Tosumup,…全國中考英語寫作真題之環(huán)保類環(huán)保主題（點）具體做法羅列：種樹 騎車、走路上學關(guān)水龍頭使用購物袋重復利用紙張乘坐公交車 ……歸類 （按目的/原因）種樹 凈化空氣，美化環(huán)境走路、騎車、坐公交車上學 減少有害氣體排放3. 關(guān)水龍頭、關(guān)燈、重復利用紙張、使用購物袋 節(jié)約資源點線1.種樹 planttreeswhere inaparkwhen onweekendswithwhom withyourparents/friendswhy tomaketheairfresherandmaketheenvironmentmorebeautiful潤色過程：Doing…willbeagoodchoicetobecausebydoingso…（原因狀從）maketheairfresher theairwillberefreshed（被動）4. maketheenvironmentmorebeautiful theenvironmentwherewelive（定從） willbebeautified（被動）成品： Plantingtreesinaparkonweekendswithyourfriendswillbeagoodchoice.Becausebydoingso,theairwillberefreshedandtheenvironmentwherewelivewillbebeautified.2.走路上學 walktoschool對比 insteadofdrivingwhy inordertoreduceharmfulgas潤色：虛擬語氣：IfIwereyou,Iwould…定語從句：thegasthatdoesharmtoourhealth被動： willbereduced副詞： effectively成品： IfIwereyou,Iwouldwalktoschoolinsteadofdrivingsothatthegasthatdoestoourhealthwillbereducedeffectively.3.關(guān)水龍頭 turnoffthetapwhenafterwashinghandswhytosavewater潤色：順序顛倒（先目的再做法）tosavewaterbyturningoffthetapafterusing.or（要不然的話）orwe’llrunoutoffreshwaterverysoon成品： Itisnecessarytosavewaterbyturningoffthetapafterwashinghands. Orwe’llrunoutoffreshwaterverysoon.面1. 開頭（theimportanceof/why環(huán)保）2. 做法（thewaysto/howto環(huán)保）結(jié)尾（強調(diào)重要性/號召大家行動 /展望美好未來）開頭（零件）：重要性極高：beofextremeimportanceto…過低碳生活：leadalow-carbonlifestyle環(huán)保的： environmentallyfriendly成品： Itisofextremeimportancetoprotecttheenvironmentbyleadingalow-carbonlifestylewhichisenvironmentallyfriendly.或： Scientistshavepointedoutthatenvironmentalpollutionhaslong-termeffectsonourearth. 或： Astheproblemofpollutionisgettingworsethanitusedtobe,theawarenessofenvironmentprotectionamongthegeneralpublicshouldberaised.結(jié)尾： Theenvironmentalprotectionisnotonlythebusinessofthegovernment,butalsotheresponsibilityofeachofus. Evenasmalleffortcanmakeagreatdifference,solet’stakeactionsfromnowontoprotectourenvironment.或： Idobelievethatthemorewedoforourearth,thebetterenvironmentwewillhaveandenjoy.一、周圍的人二、難忘的經(jīng)歷三、學習方法類四、假期計劃類五、利與弊議論六、中學生健康問題七、環(huán)保主題八、時事類九、周圍環(huán)境描述十、有效解壓全國中考英語寫作真題之假期計劃類2011呼和浩特 假設你是張林，即將初中畢業(yè)，你的美國筆友Bob來信詢問你的暑假計劃,現(xiàn)在請你寫一封回信，告訴他你將在爺爺奶奶家度過這個假期。

1.至少寫出你將要做的三件事。

2.回信至少不少于80詞，信的開頭結(jié)尾已給 出，不計入總詞數(shù)。

3.所給英語詞匯僅供參考。參考詞匯： summer; grandparents; relaxoneself; housework; visit;

oldfriendsandrelatives Hi,Bob,

Summervacationiscomingsoon. ________________________________Onepossibleversion：Hi,Bob,Thesummervacationiscomingsoon.Afteratiringschoolyear,I’mgoingtorelaxmyself.Iwillspendmyvacationwithmygrandparents.Iwillstaywiththemforaboutthreeweeks.Ofcourse,Iamgoingtohelpthemdosomehousework.Perhapswewilltakesomeshorttrips.Besides,Iamgoingtovisitsomeofmyfriendsandrelatives.Ithinkwewillhaveahappytimetogether. What’smore,Iwillbeaseniorhighschoolstudentinanewterm,soIamgoingtomakesomepreparations. Howwillyouspendyourholiday?Bestwishes.Yours,ZhangLin方式bydoing1.relax Iwillrelaxmyself.方式Iwillrelaxmyselfbyswimming.地點Iwillrelaxmyselfbyswimminginabeautifullakenearmygrandparents’house.時間Iwillrelaxmyselfbyswimminginabeautifullakenearmygrandparents’housewhentheweatherisfine.原因because…2.housework Iwilldosomehouseworkformygrandparents.原因Iwilldosomehouseworkformygrandparentsbecausetheyusedtolookafterme.時間IwilldosomehouseworkformygrandparentsbecausetheyusedtolookaftermewhenIwasalittlekid.感情IwilldosomehouseworkformygrandparentsbecausetheyusedtolookaftermewhenIwasalittlekidandIamsothankfultothem.目的inordertodo/that…3.visit, oldfriendsandrelativesIwillvisitmyoldfriendsandrelatives.目的Iwillvisitmyoldfriendsandrelativesinordertodeepenourfriendship.做事要有理由： Iwillgotovisitmygrandparentsandspendmysummervacationthere because… beautifulnaturalviewsofthatsmallcountryalwaysflashinmymindduringthebusyschooldays. IwasbroughtupbythemandIalwaystaketheplaceasmysecondhometown.Iamgoingtohelpthemwithsomehouseworkbecause…1.theyalwaystreatmesowarmlythatIamverygratefultothem,andIreallywanttodosomethinghelpful.2.asateenager,Iamsupposedtohelpandtakecareoftheelderly,letalonemydearestgrandparents. Iamgoingtovisitmyoldfriendsandrelativesbecause… 1.it’sagreatchancetolearnfromtheirvaluableexperiencesduringourtalk.2.ourtalkwillremindmeofmysweetchildhoodwhichwasspentwiththemanddeepenourfriendship.糾錯或改善：I’msurethatitwillnotbemoreinterestingandbetter.I’msurethattherewillbenothingmoreinterestingthanit.I’mgoingtovisitmyoldfriendsandrelatives. VisitingmyoldfriendsandrelativeswillbethesecondthingthatIplantodo. 全國中考英語寫作真題之利與弊議論類政府取消了“五一”黃金周（“Maygoldenweek”)，但是，最近有些人又提出要恢復7天的長假。同學們也在校園網(wǎng)的“自由論壇”上展開了激烈的討論。請你選用下面表格所提供的信息，寫一篇短文，談談恢復長假的利與弊，并簡述你的觀點，給出一至兩條理由。注意： 1、字數(shù)不少于60. 2、所給的開頭句不必抄寫在答題紙上In2008,‘Maygoldenweek’wascanceled,butthisyearpeoplehavediscussedtheproblemwhetherweshouldrenew‘Maygoldenweek’ornot.Somepeoplethinkthe7-dayholidayisveryimportant.Firstly,wecouldhaveagoodrestandrefreshourselvesafterseveralmonthsofhardwork.Secondly,wecouldspendmoretimestayingwithourfamily.Thirdly,wewillbeabletousetheone-weekvacationtotraveltosomefartherplacessuchasforeigncountries.However,otherpeopleholdtheoppositeview.Theythinkitcausesalotofproblems.Itmayleadtotrafficjamandvisitorswillnotenjoythemselvesifthetravelingspotsareover-crowded.Asastudent,Iprefera7-dayholiday.NotonlycanIsleepwellanddoexercise,butalsoIcanreadsomeinterestingbooks. HowIwisha7-Dayholidaywouldcomesoon!優(yōu)/缺點；表示對比advantage(s)disadvantage(s)strength(es)weakness(es)pro(s)con(s)Ononehand…Ontheotherhand…Everycoinhastwosides.Everyswordhastwoblades.在最近的一次主題為中學生課余時間上網(wǎng)的英語班會上，同學們對上網(wǎng)的利弊爭論不休，意見不能統(tǒng)一。作為班長，請你根據(jù)下列信息，作總結(jié)性發(fā)言。大多數(shù)同學時間是自己的網(wǎng)絡使我們的交流方便，可獲得國內(nèi)外新知識及最新信息豐富了學生業(yè)余生活少數(shù)同學上網(wǎng)可以，但必須限時多數(shù)人上網(wǎng)是玩游戲、聊天而不是真正學習或查閱資料個別同學沉迷網(wǎng)絡游戲而逃學優(yōu)秀例文：Attention,please!I’mgoingtogiveyouasummaryoftoday’sdiscussionaboutwhetherweshouldgoonlineinoursparetime.Manystudentsthinkwecangoonlineasmuchaspossibleinoursparetimebecausewearefreethen.ThroughtheInternet,wecangainplentyofthenewestknowledgeandthelatestinformationathomeandabroad.What’smore,networkoffersusaconvenientwaytocommunicatewitheachother.TheInternetmakesourlivesoutsideclasscolorfulandvarious. Ontheotherhand,afewstudentspartlyagreetothisidea.Goingonlineispartofourdailylife.Buttheysuggestatimelimit.They’vefoundthatmorestudentsareplayingcomputergamesorchattinginsteadofstudyingtheirlessonsorlookingupmaterials.Thereareafewstudentswhoareoftenabsentfromschoolinordertogoonlineforfun.全國中考英語寫作真題之考前減壓類2012年上海 Writealetterinatleast60wordsaccordingtothegivensituation（根據(jù)所給情景寫一封不少于60詞的信） SupposeyouareJoe.YourfriendBettyisupsetaboutacomingexamforshecarestoomuchabouttheresult.Whatdoyouthink?Trytoofferhersomeadvice.（假設你是Joe，你的好朋友Betty因為過于在意考試結(jié)果而感到焦慮。請給她寫一封信，談談你的看法，并給她一些建議。） （注意：文中不得出現(xiàn)具體姓名、校名及其他相關(guān)信息，否則不予評分。）官方范文：DearBetty, Knowingthatyoucaretoomuchabouttheresult,Iamquiteworried.Actually,itisnousebeingupset,althoughsometimestheresultisimportant.Therearelotsofwaystocalmdown. First,believeinyourself.Then,youshouldspendmoretimeonoutdooractivitiestorelax.Third,talktoyourparentsandfriends,whoarealwaysreadytocomfortyou.Finallyyoushouldtellyourselfthatprocess,fromwhichwecangainmore,ismuchmoreimportantthanresult.Iamsureyouwillgetthroughthissituation.滿分作文一：……Ithinkitisnotnecessaryorwisetoworrytoomuchabouttheresult.Firstly,you’dbettermakeagoodreviewofthelessons.Don’twaituntilthelastminute.Secondly,beconfidentinyourself.Itisthefirstandthemostimportantsteptosuccess.Thirdly,havingarelaxedmoodisequallyimportant,whichmaykeepyouacoolhead.Pleasealwayskeepinmindthatlifeismoreaboutthejourneythanthedestination.Goodluck.滿分作文二：……Inmyopinion,itwouldbemuchworseifyoualwayspaytoomuchattentiontoit.Asthesayinggoes,“Attitudedecideseverything.”So,youshouldhaveapositiveattitude.Ontheotherhand,itisofgreatimportancetorelaxyourself,whichhelpsyoumakefewermistakesintheexam.Besides,whenyouareconfidentyoucangetasgoodaresultasyouexpected.Lastbutnotleast,communicatingwithyourparentsorgoodfriendsalsomakeiteasier.Iwishyoucangetagoodmarkintheexam.壓力（名詞）stress/pressure有壓力的（形容詞）（人）beunder(great)stress/pressure bestressedout（客觀事/物）(be)stressful2010臺州 許多學習生活中的煩惱都會使人產(chǎn)生壓力，為了更好地發(fā)現(xiàn)及解決同學們中存在的心理壓力問題，你們班特意開展了一次以“Lesspressure,betterlife”為主題的英語演講比賽，你將準備發(fā)言稿，談談你的一些緩解壓力的好辦法，與同學分享。內(nèi)容包括：同學們中普遍存在的壓力是什么；我的壓力是什么；我是如何成功緩解我的壓力的。注意：文中不得出現(xiàn)真是的姓名和校名。官方范文：Hello,boysandgirls! Pressureisaseriousproblemintoday’sworld.Studentsinourclassareundertoomuchpressure.