高中英語話題寫作-3

話題寫作：人物簡介一、寫作內(nèi)容1.age，sex，birth-place，background(概況)2.appearance，character(外表、性格)3.education(教育背景)4.bigeventsinhisorherlife(inorderoftime)(經(jīng)歷、生平)5.evaluation(評價)二、寫作技巧1.介紹概況：同位語結(jié)構(gòu)、分詞結(jié)構(gòu)，使文章簡潔。如：⑴SunShuwei，aworldchampionindiving(一位跳水的世界冠軍)，isaboyof14fromGuangdong.(同位語)⑵BorninMaryland，USAin1985(他1985年出生于美國馬里蘭州)，MichaelPhelpsisafamousswimmer.(分詞短語)2.描寫外貌：巧用with短語。如：Myhistoryteacherisabeautifulwoman，withlonghairandbigeyes(她長著兩只大眼睛，留著長發(fā)).3.生平事跡：盡量用復(fù)合句、并列句、非謂語動詞短語和倒裝等高級語句。如：

⑴Inhislife，hegotmanyhonours，oneofwhichisthe2005CCTVMovingChinaAward(其中包括獲得“2005感動中國年度人物”的稱號).(定語從句)⑵In2006，havingbrokentheworldrecordandgotthegoldmedal(在他打破世界紀錄并獲得金牌之后)，hebecametheidoloftheyouth.(分詞短語)⑶Notonlydoesheshowinterestinscience(他不但對科學(xué)極有興趣)，butalsohehasagiftformusic.(倒裝句式)4.評價：盡量運用短語。如：LeiFengsetangoodexampletous(給我們樹立了一個良好的典范)，soallthepeopleshowgreatrespecttohim(很敬重他).［即時練習(xí)］假設(shè)你是李華，正在美國參加學(xué)習(xí)，課堂上老師要求你簡要介紹我國的名人，你選擇了姚明和劉翔，兩位體育明星，他們的根本情況如下：［寫作要求］只能使用五個句子表達全部內(nèi)容(開頭已經(jīng)為你寫好)。參考詞匯：火箭隊Rocket；110米欄110-metrehurdling，雅典奧運會theAthensOlympicGamesHi，everyone.Iwouldliketointroducetwofamoussportstars，YaoMingandLiuXiang....That’sall.Thankyou!Hi，everyone.Iwouldliketointroducetwofamoussportstars，YaoMingandLiuXiang.YaoMing，borninShanghaiin1980，isaworldfamousbasketballplayer.HeisnowoneofthebestplayersinTeamRocketinNBA，andhehasbeeninAllStarTeamforseveraltimes.LiuXiang，whowasalsoborninShanghaibutthreeyearsyoungerthanYaoMing，isaworldchampioninthe110-metrehurdle.HewonthefirstprizeintheAthensOlympicGamesandbroketheworldrecordsoonafterthat.Bothofthemlovemusic;YaoMinglikeslisteningtopopmusicwhileLiuXianglikessinging.That’sall.Thankyou!話題寫作：地點簡介簡介一個地方，常常會用到以下一些表達：位置：belocated/lie；inthecenterof/intheeastof/totheeastof/onthewestof...歷史：have/withalonghistoryof人口：have/withapopulationof面積：cover/have/withanareaof...環(huán)境：withgreenhillsandbeautifulrivers氣候：neithertoocoldnortoohot，theclimatevariesfromplacetoplace物產(chǎn)：berichin/behighin，aplacerichin，acitywithmuchindustry，mainlygrowcrops，keepsheep特色：befamous/wellknownfor名勝景觀：mountainousareas，aplacewithmanytouristsattractions，placesofinterest［即時練習(xí)］請根據(jù)以下圖及下表所給的信息，用英語介紹斐濟。國名:斐濟群島共和國(TheRepublicofTheFiJiIslands)地理位置:太平洋的中心，新西蘭的北部，澳大利亞的西北部陸地面積:1.8萬平方公里首都:蘇瓦(Suva)人口:大約86.1萬官方語:言英語氣候:氣候溫和，陽光充足，年平均氣溫為22℃～30℃國慶節(jié):每年10月10日交通:水、陸、空便利，太平洋群島的交通中心［寫作要求］只能使用5個句子表達全部內(nèi)容。［評分標準］句子結(jié)構(gòu)準確，信息內(nèi)容完整，篇章結(jié)構(gòu)連貫。

LocatedintheheartofthePacificOcean，theRepublicofTheFiJiIslandsissituatedtothenorthofNewZealandandnorthwestofAustraliawithalandareaof18，376squarekilometers.Fiji，whosecapitalisSuva，hasapopulationof861，000andtheofficiallanguageisEnglish.Ithasawarmclimatewithplentyofsunshineandtheaveragetemperaturerangesfrom22℃to33℃.NationaldayfallsonOctober10theveryyear.Withtheconvenientsea，landandairtransportation，itisthetrafficcenterofthePacificislands.興趣愛好指音樂、舞蹈、表演、體育運動、游戲(包括網(wǎng)絡(luò)游戲)、集郵、閱讀、烹飪、看電影、看電視、聽收音播送、欣賞戲劇、音樂會、觀光旅行、招待客人、訪問博物館、飼養(yǎng)寵物等。［必備語匯］⑴surftheinternet上網(wǎng)

⑵chatonline在線聊天

⑶enjoypopularmusic喜歡流行音樂

⑷befondof/bekeenon喜歡…

⑸havesomehobbies有一些愛好⑹beinterestedin對……感興趣

⑺takeaninterestin對……感興趣

⑻becrazyabout...對……著迷

⑼cometolike...越來越喜歡⑽developagreatlikingfor…漸漸愛上(11)IpreferwatchingaTVshowtogoingtoaconcert.我寧愿看電視表演，而不愿去聽音樂會。(12)Hegoesforplayingon-linegames.他喜歡玩在線游戲。(13)Shoppingismyfavoritehobbyinmysparetime.購物是我閑暇時最喜歡的愛好。(14)Ihatevisitingmuseums，forIthinktheyareboring.我討厭參觀博物館，因為我覺得它們讓人感到無趣。［即時練習(xí)］任務(wù)寫作：該不該迫使孩子學(xué)習(xí)他們不感興趣的才藝培養(yǎng)孩子的興趣愛好是非常必要的，但現(xiàn)在有很多家長一味地追求子女的多才多藝，迫使孩子學(xué)習(xí)他們不感興趣的才藝，請你以大約120個詞談?wù)剬@種現(xiàn)象的看法，內(nèi)容包括：⑴你是否贊同上述家長的做法；⑵以你或你朋友的經(jīng)歷說明你的觀點；⑶呼吁家長們要尊重孩子的意愿。Today’schilrenareluckytohavemanyopportunitiestodeveloptheirtalents.Butontheotherhand，alotofparentspushtheirchildrentoohard.Inthatcase，Idon’tenvythem.Itistruethatgoodhobbiesmakelifemorecolorfulandenjoyable.However，thingsaredifferentifchildrentakenointerestinthe“hobby”thattheirparentschooseforthem.Withoutinterestasmotivation，theyfinditasaburnratherthanahobby.My6-year-oldneighbouroftencrieswhilepractisingthepiano.Sheisbusieronweekendsthanonweekdaysbecauseshehastoattendmanyextracurricularactivities.Hermothercomplainedthatsheevensleptinclass.Therefore，parentsshouldseethebadeffectsfromtheirover-efforttocultivatechildren’stalents.Parentsaresupposedtohelpchildrenlearnwhattheyareinterestedin.Onlyinthiswaycantheylearnwellandbehappy!人際關(guān)系人際關(guān)系指人與人之間的交往與友誼，與家人、朋友、鄰居、親戚或他人之間的情感交流或溝通，如師生關(guān)系、父子關(guān)系、同學(xué)之間的友情等；對他人的感謝、感恩、寬容、抱歉、贊揚、微笑等，請求他人同意和幫助、解決問題、處理矛盾沖突、和解，等等。［必備詞句］⑴learnfromeachother互相學(xué)習(xí)⑵promotethefriendship增進友誼

⑶improvetherelationship改善關(guān)系

⑷showloveandconcernforsb.保護和關(guān)心某人⑸Goodlisteningcanreallyenableustogetclosertoeachother.善于傾聽使我們彼此走得更近。

⑹Agoodrelationshipbetweenteachersandstudentsisofgreatimportanceforourstudies.良好的師生關(guān)系對我們的學(xué)習(xí)很重要。

⑺Tobuildagoodrelationship，weshouldtrusteachother.要建立良好的關(guān)系，我們應(yīng)該彼此信任。

⑻Onlyinthiswaycanweenjoyanequalrelationship.只有這樣我們才能享有平等的關(guān)系。

⑼Theyfinditeasytocommunicatewiththeirteachers.他們覺察很容易和老師溝通。⑽Withtheirhelp，Itriedmybesttostudyhardandsucceededinenteringakeyuniversity.在他們的幫助下，我努力學(xué)習(xí)，成功地被一所重點大學(xué)錄取。(11)Weshouldvaluethisharmoniousrelationshipbetweenteachersandstudents.我們應(yīng)該珍惜師生之間這種和諧的關(guān)系。(12)Withtheencouragementandsupportofmyfather，Ihaveovercomemanydifficultiesinourlife.在父親的鼓勵和支持下，我克服了生活中的許多苦難。(13)Agoodrelationshipwillmakelearningandteachingenjoyablewhileabadonecanmakethemunpleasant.良好的關(guān)系可以使教與學(xué)變得愉快，不好的關(guān)系令人不快樂。［即時練習(xí)］任務(wù)寫作：以約120個詞就“父母與子女的良好關(guān)系”發(fā)表你的看法，包括如下要點：

⑴良好的父母與子女的關(guān)系的重要性；

⑵你希望你與你的父母之間的關(guān)系是怎樣的；

⑶如何才能建立這種關(guān)系？Anidealrelationshipbetweenparentsandchildrenisveryimportantforourgrowth.Theyalwaysshowloveandconcernforus.Theyareourgoodlisteners，advisersandsupporters.Withtheirhelp，wecanovercomemanydifficultiesinourlife.Inmyopinion，therelationshipbetweenparentsandchildrenshouldbeonefilledwithlove，careandunderstanding，inwhichparentsandchildrenshowrespectforeachotherandexchangeideasfreely.Tobuildarelationshipofthiskind，parentsshouldbecomefriendsoftheirchildrenwhilechildrenoughttoplacemoretrustintheirparentsandgivevoicetotheirfeelingsfrankly.Onlyinthiswaycanweenjoyaharmoniousrelationshipbetweenparentsandchildren.節(jié)假日活動節(jié)假日活動是指春節(jié)、新年、國慶節(jié)、植樹節(jié)、教師節(jié)、重陽節(jié)、圣誕節(jié)、復(fù)活節(jié)、情人節(jié)、母親節(jié)等各種中西方節(jié)假日的起源、開展、慶祝方式和假日活動安排，還有生日、周年紀念日、畢業(yè)典禮等各種慶祝活動，以及參加這些活動的經(jīng)歷和感受等。暑期、寒假等的活動、社會實踐活動或者青年志愿者的活動安排及感受等等。［必備語匯］1.中國節(jié)日名稱⑴TheSpringFestival春節(jié)⑵TheDragonBoatFestival端午節(jié)⑶TheMiddleAutumnFestival中秋節(jié)⑷NewYear’sDay元旦⑸NationalDay國慶節(jié)⑹InternationalLaborDay五一勞動節(jié)⑺Teachers’Day教師節(jié)⑻Children’sDay兒童節(jié)⑼Women’sDay婦女節(jié)⑽Tomb-sweepingDay清明節(jié)(11)DoubleNinthFestival重陽節(jié)(12)LanternFestival元宵節(jié)2.西方節(jié)日名稱⑴Christmasday圣誕節(jié)⑵ThanksgivingDay感恩節(jié)⑶Valentine’sDay情人節(jié)⑷AprilFool’sDay愚人節(jié)⑸HalloweenDay萬圣節(jié)⑹EasterDay復(fù)活節(jié)⑺Mother’sDay母親節(jié)3.相關(guān)句子NationalDayiscoming.國慶節(jié)快到了。NationalDayfallsonMondaythisyear.今年國慶節(jié)是星期一。WecelebratedtheNewYearwithadanceparty.我們舉行舞會來慶祝新年。［即時練習(xí)］讀寫任務(wù)：先請閱讀下面一篇150字左右的文章：TodayisMother’sDay.Maybeeveryonewantstodosomethingfortheirmothers.Iknowsomeofmyclassmatesaregoingtohelptheirmotherswiththehousework，whileothersaregoingtobuysomeflowersfortheirmothers.IwanttosaytoherthatIloveherverymuch.Butasaboy，itisabitdifficultformetoshowmyheart.Ithinkonlygirlscandothat.Infact，mymotherisverykindtome.Shetakescareofmealldayandallnight.Sheherselfspendslittlemoney，butbuysanythingformethatIneed.ThistimeIamdeterminedtoshowmylovetomymother.Iamgoingtogiveheracardandwritelikethis，“Iloveyou，mother!”Iwanttogiveherapleasantsurprise.Iamgoingtoputitunderherpillowquietly.［寫作內(nèi)容］1.用大約30個詞概括短文內(nèi)容要點；2.然后以大約120個詞發(fā)表你的觀點，包括如下要點：⑴你是否認為只有女孩才能向父母表達愛；⑵回憶今年的母親節(jié)，你做了什么；⑶你今后應(yīng)當如何做。［寫作要求］1.可以使用實例或其它論述方法支持你的論點，也可以參照閱讀材料的內(nèi)容，但不得直接引用原文中的句子。2.標題自定。LoveourmothersOnMother’sDay，theauthorfoundithardtosay“Iloveyou”tohismother.However，thinkingofthekindnessofhismother，heisdeterminedtogiveheranunexpectedcardwithlove.Whatthewriterdidthistimeisverydutiful.Inmyopinion，boyscanshowtheirrespecttotheirparentsaswellasgirls.Theybothcanexpresstheirappreciationtothem，because，afterall，eachparenthaspaidouttoomuchfortheirchildren’sgrowth.TocelebrateMother’sDaythisyear，Iboughtabunchofprettyflowerswithacardonit，reading，“Youarethebestmomthatadaughtereverhad.Iloveyou，Mum!”Fromnowon，toexpressmylovetomymother，Iamgoingtodomorehouseworkformybelovedmother，cooking，washing，cleaningandshopping，whichseemtobeendless.Bydoingthese，Iwillcometorealizethat，asamatteroffact，mumisverytoilsomeallthetime.飲食健康指各種食物食品、湯水飲料的介紹、健康飲食、綠色食品、飲食文化、快餐、飲食習(xí)慣與喜好、訂餐與供給；健身與鍛煉、保健、個人衛(wèi)生、各種疾病與防治、意外事故、醫(yī)療保險，財富與健康等等。［必備語匯］⑴sufferfrom遭受，患上⑵near-sighted近視的⑶physicalandmentalcondition生理和心理狀況⑷feelweak(well，terrible，sick)感覺虛弱(健康/很糟/惡心)⑸feelstressed/depressed感到緊張/沮喪⑹haveapainin...某處疼痛⑺mentallyunhealthy心理不健康的⑻relaxoneself自我輕松⑼relievepressure緩解壓力⑽beoptimistic/pessimisticabout對……樂觀/悲觀(11)facedifficulties/setbackswithcourage勇敢面對困難/挫折(12)goondiet節(jié)食；properdiet恰當?shù)娘嬍?13)takethreemealsontime按時吃三餐(14)eatmuchjunkfood吃很多的垃圾食品(15)(un)healthyeatinghabits(不)健康的飲食習(xí)慣(16)behigh/low/richin...……含量高/低/豐富(17)Anappleadaykeepsthedoctoraway.每天一只蘋果不用看醫(yī)生。(諺語)(18)Earlytobedandearlytorise，makeamanhealthy，wealthyandwise.早睡早起使人健康、富有和聰明。(英國諺語)［即時練習(xí)］讀寫任務(wù)：閱讀下面的短文，然后按照要求寫一篇150詞左右的英語短文。WithuptoathirdofChinesecollegegraduatesunabletogetajobthenumberofsuicidesissoaring.

ChinesestudentLiuWeiwho，consumedwithguiltaboutherparentsfinancialsacrifices，tookherownlife.ForMissLiu，thedaughterofpoorfarmers，adegreewastobeherpassportoutofalifeofpoverty，awaytoescapeworkinginthefields，ortoilingasahumblemigrantworkerinafar-offfactoryinsouthernChina.Butherdreamwillneverbecomereality.Deeplydepressedandashamedaboutherfailuretofindajob，MissLiubroughtherstudiesandherlifetoanprematureendbydrowningherselfinfreezingditchwater.MissLiu’sreactiontoherpredicament(困境)wasextreme，butnotunusual.InApril，suicidewaslistedastheleadingcauseofdeathamongstudents.Andwithoneinthreeofthisyear’sgraduatesunabletogetajob，MissLiu’sanxietyaboutfindingworkissharedbymoststudents.Thegovernmenthastriedtocalmrisingangerbyofferinggraduatespositionsasteachersandlow-levelgovernmentofficialsinruralareas.Butfewseemkeentoreturntothecountrysidefromwhichtheirdegreesweresupposedtoguaranteeanescape.［寫作內(nèi)容］1.以約30詞概括所閱讀短文的主要內(nèi)容；2.以約120詞就“面對挫折(setback)時如何保持心理健康？”發(fā)表看法，內(nèi)容包括：⑴請舉例描述你遭遇過的挫折；⑵你是怎樣看待挫折的？⑶請就面對挫折如何保持心理健康提出一些建議。［寫作要求］作文中可使用自己的親身經(jīng)歷或虛構(gòu)的故事，也可以參照閱讀材料的內(nèi)容，但不得直接引用原文中的句子。［評分標準］概括準確，語言標準，內(nèi)容適宜，篇章連貫。Despitetheeffortsmadebythegovernment，manycollegegraduatesfailedtogetagoodjobthisyearandfeltdepressedandashamed.What’sworse，someofthemcommittedsuicide，justlikeMissLiuinthisreport.(37words)主要內(nèi)容Icameacrossmanysetbacksinmystudyandlife.Forexample，IfailedinmymathfinalexamwhenIwasinSeniorOne.Knowingtheresult，Icriedhard.Ianalyzedthesituationandstudiedharder.Withallmyeffortsandthehelpofothers，Ifinallybecamegoodatmathandpassedmanyexams.Inmyopinion，setbacksareharshteachers，butthelessonswelearnfromthemcanbeinvaluable.Whensetbackshappen，weshouldbebraveandstayoptimistic.Itisagoodwaytorelievethepaintoturntoourtrustedonesforcomfort，seeafunnymovie，listentomusic，orvisitabeautifulplace.Afterwecooldown，maybewecangainsomethingoutofthispainfulexperience.(127words)世界環(huán)境指對人口增長(popu1ationgrowth)、土地(land)、糧食、住房(housing)、污染(pollution)、環(huán)境保護(environmentalconservation)等問題發(fā)表意見。就公共場所吸煙、隨地吐痰、隨地扔紙屑、課本資料回收等發(fā)表意見。珍惜水資源、使用再生資源、實現(xiàn)經(jīng)濟等的可持續(xù)開展、創(chuàng)立綠色學(xué)校。［必備詞匯］⑴planttrees植樹⑵sortrubbish垃圾分類⑶protecttheecology保護生態(tài)⑷saveenergy/water節(jié)約能源/水⑸gogreen生產(chǎn)或使用綠色產(chǎn)品⑹protecttheenvironment保護環(huán)境⑺ridebicyclestowork騎自行車上班⑻developrenewableresources可再生資源⑼fightagainstpollution與污染作斗爭⑽sustainabledevelopment可持續(xù)開展(11)eco-friendlyproducts生態(tài)友好的產(chǎn)品(12)dealwithrubbishproperly正確處理垃圾(13)recycletextbooks/trash課本/垃圾回收利用(14)bansmokinginpublic禁止在公共場合吸煙(15)improveourlivingconditions改善居住條件(16)keepthebalanceofnature保持自然界的平衡(17)stop/keep/preventsb.fromdoing阻止某人做(18)bantheabuseofplasticbags禁止濫用塑料袋(19)don’tlitter/spiteverywhere不隨地扔垃圾/吐痰(20)makerationaluseofwaterresources合理利用水資源(21)takegoodcareofourforests/farmland保護森林/耕地(22)green/cleanenergy/products/school綠色能源/產(chǎn)品/學(xué)校(23)reducetheuseofsingleservingpackages/containers/chopsticks減少使用一次性包裝/容器/筷子［即時練習(xí)］讀寫任務(wù)：閱讀下面的短文，然后按照要求寫一篇150詞左右的英語短文。Lakes，riversandtheairinmanyplacesinChinaarestillpolluted，someseriously，inspiteofcontinuouseffortstocontrolpollution，aChineseenvironmentalofficialsaidonTuesday.ZhangLijun，DeputyMinisterofEnvironmentalProtection，saidenvironmentalprotectiondepartmentsacrossthecountryshouldpressenterprisesharderonpollutioncontrol.Thequalityofthewatersampledinalmostaquarterofthemonitoringstationssetupalongmajorriversandin28majorlakesaveragedatlevelVI，whichistoopollutedtobeusedevenforfarmirrigation,whiletheairqualityof39.5percentof320citiesofprefecturelevelandaboveaveragedlevelⅢorworse，accordingtoadocumentcirculatedatthemeeting.TheMinistryofEnvironmentalProtectionwasconsideringapolicytodeprivepollutingenterprisesfromenjoyingfavorabletreatmentinsubsidiesandtaxation，usuallygivenbyinvestment-seekinglocalgovernments.Lastyear，156projectswithatotalinvestment