讀后續(xù)寫指導(dǎo)P17話題01個人成長篇課件-高三英語作文復(fù)習(xí)專項

讀后續(xù)寫指導(dǎo)：話題01個人成長篇讀后續(xù)寫P17話題01個人成長篇Para.1representtheschoolinthelongjumpandrelayevents代表學(xué)校參加跳遠(yuǎn)和接力賽putinalotofhardworkanddedication投入大量的勤奮和奉獻(xiàn)didcountlessdrills做了無數(shù)次的訓(xùn)練pushingourselvestodobetterandachieveourgoals敦促我們自己做得更好，實現(xiàn)我們的目標(biāo)Para.2Themeetlastedtwodays運動會持續(xù)2天noeventsscheduledforthefirstday第一天沒有被安排的項目Ikeptmyselfbusybywatchingtheotherscompete.通過觀看別人比賽，我讓自己一直忙碌著。Despitebeingassignedthelasttentthatwasfurthestformthetrack盡管被分配了一頂離跑道最遠(yuǎn)的帳篷creatingasupportiveatmosphere營造了支持的氛圍Para.3Iwasvastlyoutclassed.vastly=veryvast(adj.)巨大的outclass（v.)遠(yuǎn)勝，遠(yuǎn)超justmissingoutonamedal錯過Para.4forwhichIwasassignedtorunthefifthleg我在接力賽中被指定跑第五棒Wefiledintoourassignedspots我們有序地進(jìn)入到指定地點，準(zhǔn)備比賽。gooff發(fā)出(聲音)takeoff(常指突然且出人意料地)離開Keepupwith跟上MyturnarrivedandItookthebatoncleanlyandbeganmyrun.Asaresult,Ileftthemeetempty-handed.干凈利落的，說明開局不錯?？帐侄鴼w，2個比賽項目都無緣獎牌。WhyMyturnarrivedandItookthebatoncleanlyandbeganmyrun.Asaresult,Ileftthemeetempty-handed.跑的過程中出現(xiàn)意外失敗的感悟，由此得到的教訓(xùn)銜接1：描寫跑得很快（動作，環(huán)境）銜接2：闡明失敗的原因誰遇到了意外？意外是什么？還接著跑嗎？銜接3：如何面對失?。▓F(tuán)隊，個人）動作、語言、心理描寫、“成功”與“失敗”的名人名言MyturnarrivedandItookthebatoncleanlyandbeganmyrun.銜接1：描寫跑得很快（動作，環(huán)境）Goldensentences:1.Asthoughpropelledbyanunseenforce,mylegscarriedmyeffortlesslythroughthetrack.仿佛被看不見的力量推動一樣，我的腿毫不費力地沿著跑道飛奔。2.Asifdrivenbyanunyieldingspirit,Idashedthroughthetrack,mydeterminationevidentineverypowerfulstride.仿佛被一種不屈的精神所驅(qū)使，我如閃電般在跑道上飛奔，每一個有力的腳步都彰顯著我的決心。MyturnarrivedandItookthebatoncleanlyandbeganmyrun.跑的過程中出現(xiàn)意外誰遇到了意外？意外是什么？還接著跑嗎？Goldensentences:3.Unfortunately,astonelyingonmypathmademefalldown.Myexposedskinfeltasthoughitwereburning.倒霉的是我的跑道上的一塊石頭絆倒了我。我破裂的皮膚感覺像火燒一樣疼。4.Aboyranacrossfromthetrackintomypathoutofnowhere.Icouldn’tgetawayfromhimfastenough.Weweresentsomersaultingoverhimaftercollidingwithacrunch.

MyturnarrivedandItookthebatoncleanlyandbeganmyrun.跑的過程中出現(xiàn)意外誰遇到了意外？意外是什么？還接著跑嗎？Goldensentences:5.BecauseIwasyoungandagile,Iwasabletoquicklypickmyselfupandcontinuetherace.6.Ijustpickedmyselfupandwentonrunning.7.Ifelltotheground,gotup,withoutlookingbackattheothers,ranasfastasIcould.MyturnarrivedandItookthebatoncleanlyandbeganmyrun.Asaresult,Ileftthemeetempty-handed.銜接2：闡明失敗的原因8.…costusvaluabletime.9.Althoughtherestofourteamtriedourbest,…10.We’dblownourchanceatamedal.MyturnarrivedandItookthebatoncleanlyandbeganmyrun.Asaresult,Ileftthemeetempty-handed.失敗的感悟，由此得到的教訓(xùn)銜接3：如何面對失敗（團(tuán)隊，個人）動作、語言、心理描寫、“成功”與“失敗”的名人名言場景的變化：離開了運動會。情緒的變化：沮喪——寬慰。Goldensentences:11.Aswelookedateachother,greatsorrow/sadnesscloudedoureyes.(無靈主語）我們相互看著，滿眼憂傷。12.Thereweresadheartsatschoolthatnight.Ifeltasifaknifewerecuttingmyheart.（擬人）那天晚上學(xué)校的人心理都很悲傷。我覺得心如刀割。情緒描寫——沮喪、難過Goldensentences:13.IfeltsosadthatIfoundmyselfcryingunconsciously,unabletohold/fightbackmytears.我難過得哭了，無法抑制我的眼淚。14.Anairofsorrowanddepressionsettledovertheteam.(氛圍描寫)全隊都彌漫著悲傷和沮喪的氣氛。情緒描寫——沮喪、難過Goldensentences:15.Ifinallysatdownandcried,amixtureofwarmthandreliefflooded/washedoverme.我終于坐下來哭了起來，心中滿是溫暖和寬慰。16.Welookedateachother,andfeltawaveofreliefwentthrough/floodedover/washedoverus.我們凝視彼此，心中一陣寬慰。情緒描寫——溫暖、寬慰主題升華Goldensentences:17.Wefalldowntogetupandfightbetterwhenwearefrustrated.我們倒下去要爬起來，受到挫折要戰(zhàn)斗得更好。18.Everyonefacesthepossibilityofsetbacksandfailures,whichispartofourlifeexperience.每個人都面臨著挫折和失敗的可能，這是我們每個人人生經(jīng)歷的一部分。Paragraph1:MyturnarrivedandItookthebaton（接力棒）cleanlyandbeganmyrun.TheairrushedpastmeasImovedclosertothenextrunner.Thendisasterstruck!Isawaboyrunacrossthetrackintomypathoutofnowhere.Icouldn'tgetawayfromhimfastenough.Weweresentsomersaultingoverhimaftercollidingwithacrunch.BecauseIwasyoungandagile.Iwasabletoquicklypickmyselfupandcontinuetherace.However,thecollisioncostusvaluabletime.Ihandedthebatontothenextrunner.Ikneweverythingwaslostwhenheranwithallhismight,butitwastoolate.We'dblownourchanceatamedal.Paragraph2:Asaresult,Ileftthemeetempty-handed.Consequently,wejustassumeditwasbadluck.I,forone,feltterribleforlettingtheteamdo