06Unit4單元寫作指導典題例析跟蹤訓練(科技節(jié)的活動計劃)(譯林版2020)(原卷版)

Unit4Scientistswhochangedtheworld(譯林版2020必修第三冊)單元寫作指導&典題例析&跟蹤訓練(科技節(jié)制訂的活動計劃)I.單元寫作指導話題分析本單元的主題語境是“人與社會”，話題是“著名人物科學家”。單元寫作的話題關于為科技節(jié)制訂的活動和計劃。文章是說明文，里面涉及到一些小發(fā)明創(chuàng)造,所以寫作時要實事求是、言簡意賅,語言較為正式。2.話題詞匯(1)活動安排①invitesb.todosth. 邀請某人做某事②bescheduledtodosth. 被安排做某事③takeplace 發(fā)生;舉行④withthepurposeof 目的是……⑤takepartin/participatein/joinin 參加(2)科技發(fā)明與創(chuàng)造①introducesth.tosb. 向某人介紹某物②sharesth.withsb. 與某人分享某物③improvethequalityoflife 改善生活質量④haveabetterunderstandingof對……有更好的了解⑤inspiresb.todosth. 激勵某人做某事3.句式整理(1)開頭①TheScienceFestivalisscheduledtotakeplaceontheplaygroundfrom8a.m.to11a.m.,lastingthreehours.科技節(jié)定于上午8點到11點在操場上舉行，持續(xù)3個小時。②I’mgreatlyhonoredtoinviteyoutotheScienceFestivaltobeheldinourschool.我非常榮幸地邀請您參加在我們學校舉行的科技節(jié)。(2)主體段落①Itgoeswithoutsayingthatmoderntechnologybringsusconvenienceandfortinlife.毫無疑問，現代科技給我們的生活帶來了方便和舒適。②Thepurposeoftheactivityistoarousethestudents’interestinscience.這個活動的目的是激發(fā)學生對科學的興趣。③Thegadgetisofgreatlypracticaluseindailylife.這種小工具在日常生活中很實用。(3)結尾①IwouldappreciateitifyoucouldjoinintheingScienceFestival.如果你能參加即將到來的科技節(jié)，我將不勝感激。②Lookingforwardtoyourjoiningus.期待您的加入。II.典題例析假定你是李華,想邀請英國交換生Peter下周二參加你校舉辦的“科技節(jié)”，并觀賞學生們的“科技小發(fā)明”。請給他寫封郵件，內容包括:1.寫信意圖；2.活動時間和地點；3.活動目的和內容；4.表達希望。注意:1.詞數80個左右；2.可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。參考詞匯:科技小發(fā)明:technologygadgets審核體裁/話題邀請參加科技節(jié)的文章(邀請信)時態(tài)/人稱一般現在時/第一，三人稱文章結構第一段：引入話題：寫邀請信的目的第二段：科技節(jié)的時間，地點，舉辦科技節(jié)的目的意義第三段：再次邀請核心要點1.活動的時間，地點和意義，2活動的內容和目的。二.造句1.科技節(jié)定于上午8點到11點在操場上舉行。→TheScienceFestival____________________ontheplaygroundfrom8a.m.to11a.m.

2.科技節(jié)持續(xù)3個小時。TheScienceFestival____________________.3.它的目的是鼓勵我們學生創(chuàng)造性地思考和與他人分享我們的作品。____________________aswellasshareourworkswithothers.

4.各種各樣的小工具在我們的日常生活中用處很大。Variousgadgetsare____________________inourdailylife.5.一些優(yōu)秀的學生發(fā)明家會介紹他們的技術小工具的功能,并當場示范。Someexcellentstudentinventorswill____________________.6.我認為這將是最令人興奮的部分。(exciting)________________________________________.【答案】1.isscheduledtotakeplace2.laststhreehours3.Itspurposeistoencourageusstudentstothinkcreatively4.ofgreatuse/useful5.introducethefunctionsoftheirtechnologygadgetsandperformthemonthespot6.Ithinkitwillbethemostexcitingpart.

三.句式升級1.用分詞作狀語合并句1和句2。_______________________________________________________________.

2.用定語從句合并句5和句6。_______________________________________________________________.【答案】1.TheScienceFestivalisscheduledtotakeplaceontheplaygroundfrom8a.m.to11a.m.,lastingthreehours.

2.Someexcellentstudentinventorswillintroducethefunctionsoftheirtechnologygadgetsandperformthemonthespot,whichIthinkwillbethemostexcitingpart.

【參考范文】DearDavid,I’mgladtoinviteyoutotheScienceFestivaltobeheldinourschoolnextMondaytoenjoythestudents’technologygadgets.TheScienceFestivalisscheduledtotakeplaceontheplaygroundfrom8a.m.to11a.m.,lastingthreehours.Itspurposeistoencourageusstudentstothinkcreativelyaswellasshareourworkswithothers.Atthisfestival,youcanenjoyvariousgadgetswhichareofgreatuse/greatlyusefulinourdailylife.What’smore,someexcellentstudentinventorswillintroducethefunctionsoftheirtechnologygadgetsandperformthemonthespot,whichIthinkwillbethemostexcitingpart.IwouldappreciateitifyoucouldjoinintheingScienceFestival.Lookingforwardtoyourreplyandexpectingyouring.Yours,LiHuaIII.跟蹤訓練應用文寫作A(2023下·湖南岳陽·高一統(tǒng)考期末)假如你是李華，“學?？萍脊?jié)”即將到來，你校英文報正在開展主題為“Scientistswhochangedtheworld”的征文活動，請用英文寫一篇文章，介紹你最崇拜的科學家。文章內容包括以下三個方面：1.科學家的成就；2.他(她)對世界的影響；3.你崇拜他(她)的理由。注意：1.詞數80左右；2.可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________B(2023上·甘肅蘭州·高一?？茧A段練習)假定你是李華，擅長體育運動，最近收到朋友Jane的來信,她在信中說自己苦惱于身體不夠強壯。1.鼓勵Jane參加跑步俱樂部。2.闡明跑步對于健身的積極作用。3.分享一些科學跑步的建議。注意：1.詞數80左右，可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫；2.信的開頭已為你寫好，不計入總詞數。DearJane,Iamreallysorrytohearthatyouareworryingaboutyourweakbody.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yourstruly,LiHuaC(2023下·四川綿陽·高一統(tǒng)考期末)假定你是李華，與留學生朋友Tom約好一起去參加你校即將舉行的科技節(jié)并為他做介紹，但你因故不能赴約。請給他寫封郵件，內容包括：1.表達歉意；2.說明原因；3.提出彌補措施。注意：1.詞數80左右；2.可適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫3.開頭和結尾已給出，不計入總詞數。DearTom,____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHuaD(2023下·河北石家莊·高一正定中學校考階段練習)假定你是李華，請根據下列表格中的內容提示，為校報的“英語園地”寫一篇英語短文，介紹你最崇拜的一位中國科學家。注意：1.詞數80左右；2.可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。參考詞匯：培育雜交水稻breedhybridrice；產量output姓名袁隆平出生年份1930年職業(yè)科學家工作經歷大學畢業(yè)后，從事農業(yè)教學和研究工作；1975年，成功培育出了雜交水稻。成就提高了水稻產量，有助于消除世界饑餓；被譽為“雜交水稻之父”。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________E(2023下·湖南長沙·高一長沙市明德中學?？茧A段練習)假如你是李華，你的朋友國際交換生John報名參加了學?？萍甲x書節(jié)的中文演講比賽，比賽主題是“低碳生活，綠色家園”。他很重視這個活動，但不知如何準備，故寫信向你求助。請你給他回信提一些建議，內容包括：1.表示支持；2.具體建議；3.表達祝愿。注意：1.寫作詞數應為80左右；2.可適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。3.考詞匯：科技讀書節(jié)ScienceTechnologyandReadingFestival低碳生活，綠色家園LowcarbonLife,GreenHome________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________F(2023下·江蘇連云港·高一統(tǒng)考期末)假定你是李華，你校學生會將舉辦一年一度的科技節(jié)活動，請你用英語寫一個書面通知。內容包括：1.活動主題；2.內容安排；3.報名方式。注意：1.寫作詞數應為80左右；2.請按如下格式在答題卡上的相應位置作答。Notice_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Students’Union讀后續(xù)寫閱讀下面材料，根據其內容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段，使之構成一篇完整的短文。A(2023上·陜西寶雞·高一統(tǒng)考期中)SHOULDWEFIGHTNEWTECHNOLOGY?Thismorning,Isawtheshockingheadline:“PassengerDiesWhenCarCrashesinDriverlessMode”.Inthearticle,variouspeoplesaidthatthepublicshouldopposetheideaofdevelopingdriverlesscars.Theysaidthatsomeadvancesintechnologywereunnecessaryandcouldevenbedangerous.Hence,weshouldceaseacceptingtechnologyjustbecauseitisnew.Thenewspaperreportedthatthecarpanyhadalreadyapologizedfortheaccident,butthefamiliesofthedeceasedsaiditwasnotenough.Nevertheless,thepanystillclaimedthatmostpeoplewouldbetravellingindriverlesscarsonedaysoon.Ontheonehand,therearemanydifferentgroupsofpeoplearoundtheworldwholivehappilyintheabsenceofnewtechnology.ProbablythemostwellknownaretheAmish,agroupofChristianslivinginruralAmerica.Theydonotownordrivecars,watchTV,orusetheInternet.Theyhavelivedmainlyasfarmerssincethe18thcenturyandtheywillprobablybelivingthesamewayinthedistantfuture.Theyadvocateasimplelifewithanemphasisonhardwork,family,andmunity.Theythinkthatisbetterthancaringaboutluxuriesorfollowingthelivesoftherichandfamous.ItcouldevenbearguedthattheAmish’squalityoflifeisbettersincetheyliveinandappreciatethenaturalenvironmentratherthanlivinginlarge,pollutedcities.注意：1.續(xù)寫段落不少于150個詞；2.請按如下格式作答。參考詞匯：theInternetkeepintouch

socialmediahealthmonitorParagraph1:Ontheotherhand,newtechnologyhasprovidedpeopleeverywherewithmanybenefitsovertheyears.Forexample,____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Paragraph2:Personally,Ihavebenefitedquitealotfromtechnologicaladvances.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________B(2023上·云南·高三云南師大附中?？茧A段練習)Iwasalwaysthelittlegirlwhoplayedwithmagnetsonthekitchenfloor.Ipiecedtogethermodelrollercoastersandexhaustedalotofsciencekits.Learningfrommydadashedesignedrobots,Iformedmyownideas,includinganautomaticbreakfastmachine.At14yearsold,Iappliedtomyhighschool’sAcademyofScience,Engineering,andHighTechnology.Asisunfortunatelytypicalinengineering,femalestudentswerecriticallyunderrepresentedinthisacademytherewereameretwentyofusoutofninetytotalstudents.Thiswasatoughchallengeforme:asanambitiousfemaleengineer,Ineededtoadvocatemyowntalentsandabilitiesinafieldwherewomenareoftenmarginalized(邊緣化).Withinthefirstmonthofthefreshmanyear,webeganourfirstproject:awoodencancrusher(壓罐器).Ihadworkedonprojectswithboysbefore，butthosewerenothinglikethis.Thethreeofushadonemonthtoresearch,design,build,andtestourdeviceamonthfullofarguingandfrustration.Mysuggestionswereturneddown.AndIwasassignedthe“default(默認的)femalerole”oftimekeeperanddocumentation.Iwasn’texpectedtobecapableofcontributingtoanythingelse.Wefinishedwithafunctionalcancrusher,butIknewthiswasnothowIwantedtocontinueasafemaleengineer.Bythetimejunioryearrolledaround,itwastimetofacetheyearlongEngineeringDesignandDevelopment(EDD)projectandstatepetition.WhenIagreedtoworkwithtwoothergirls,Ihadnoideathatthiswouldentirelychangemyperspectiveofmyabilityasateammember,aleaderandanengineer.Forthispetition,wecreatedagarageparkingaidtohelpdriverspreventsideviewmirrordamage.Withinourteam,wecreatedasafespacewhereweallvalue