初中八年級(jí)英語(yǔ)課件My Favourite Cartoon-Writing

Module5CartoonsMyFavouriteCartoon----Writing123456Warming-up:ListenandguessPre-writing1.Watchamicrolessonandlearntheuseofhamburgerwriting(漢堡包信息寫作結(jié)構(gòu)).BeginningEndingDetail1Detail2Detail3Hamburgerwriting:Tousethemodelofa_________toorganize___________forwritingapassage.hamburgerinformationMyfavouriteteacherisMissChen.AppearancePersonalityHobbiesWelikeher.1.Brainstorming:Whatcanyouwriteaboutfavouritecartoon?2.Making:Writedownwordsorsentencestocompletethe“hamburger”.3.Writing:Writethepassageaccordingtoyournotes.While-writing

Beginning:Whatisit?Detail1:Whoisinit?Detail2:Whatisitabout?Detail3:Whydoyoulikeit?Ending:...1.Self-perfection:Readthepassageandcheckitsspelling,tense,grammar,linkingwords,punctuation(標(biāo)點(diǎn)).2.Peer-evaluation:Shareyourpassagewithyourpartner,useredpentounderlinethegoodpointsandmarkdownthemistakes.Post-writing

互評(píng)通用修改字符有：拼寫錯(cuò)誤：S語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤：G

時(shí)態(tài)錯(cuò)誤：T漏詞錯(cuò)誤:

大小寫錯(cuò)誤：L刪詞：用詞錯(cuò)誤：詞序調(diào)換：優(yōu)美句子：評(píng)價(jià)內(nèi)容得分扣分原因及修改建議整體情況書面整潔及分段（1分）

有開(kāi)頭、結(jié)尾（1分）

人稱（1分）

時(shí)態(tài)（2分）

要點(diǎn)是否齊全介紹內(nèi)容（3分）

說(shuō)明原因（2分）

是否連貫連詞的使用（1分）

加分點(diǎn)好詞好句（1分）

內(nèi)容拓展（1分）

得分滿分（15分）

學(xué)生作文互評(píng)量化表Post-writing3.Classappreciation:

Choosethebestworkofyourgroupandsharewithclassmates.

Takenotesofusefulwords,pharesandsentencesonthenotesheetwhileyourlistening.SummaryQ1:Whatthingshaveyoulearnt?Q2:Whatthingsareyouinterestedin?Q3:Whatquestionsdoyoustillhave?1.SendyourwritingtotheWechatgroupandsharewithotherstudents.2.Writedownusefu