高三英語二輪復習讀后續(xù)寫女兒和爸爸一起努力實現(xiàn)夢想講義

杭州一模讀后續(xù)寫原文及翻譯

讀后續(xù)寫原文

中文翻譯MydadandIhadbeenlookingforwardtotheStatecrosscountryraceofmysenioryearofhighschool,whichwouldbetheclimaxofmyexistence.我和我爸爸一直期待著我高中最后一年的州際越野賽，這將是我生活的高光時刻。Iwasthefastestrunneronmyteam,andI

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makeitintothetopfifteen.Wehadbeenworkingtowardsthisraceforthreeyears.我在隊里是跑得最快的，應該能進入前十五名。我們已經(jīng)為這場比賽準備了三年。Itwaseverythingtome,anditwaseverythingtomydad.Hewasarunnerandwaswildwithjoybymysuccessinrunning.這對我來說，對我爸爸來說都是一切。他曾是一名賽跑運動員，他對我在跑步上取得的成功感到無比欣喜。Hemadeittoeveryrace,evenflyinghomeearlyfrombusinesstripstoseemerun.他參加了每一場比賽，甚至會提前結束差旅回家來看我比賽。Ialwayslistenedforhisvoice,whichrangabovethecrowdtellingmetorelaxmyarms,callingoutmytime.

Hepushedme.Hecheeredforme.Hebelievedinme.我總是聽著他的聲音，那聲音響亮地穿透了人群，他告訴我要放松雙臂，他會喊出我的成績。他鞭策我，鼓舞我，相信我。WespentcountlesshoursonthesandycanalsofArizona.Breathinginthedustofthedesert,theblossomsoftheorangetrees,andtheterriblesmellofthedairyfarm,wemadeourwayacrossthecity.我們在亞利桑那充滿沙子運河旁花費了無數(shù)個小時訓練。吸過沙漠的塵土，聞過橘樹的芳香，品過牛奶場的臭氣，穿越了整個城市。Wepoundedmilesandmilesintoourrunningshoes,markingwitheverystepthepathtogreatness.Itwasajourneythatwasjustours.

Adreampassedonfromonegenerationtothenext.我們用腳步丈量著土地，朝著最后的目標堅定地前行著。這是只屬于我和父親的旅程。這是上一代傳下來的夢想。Thenthebigdaycame.Itwashotterthannormaltoohot.Mythroatfeltlikeafieldofcotton,crackedwiththesummerheat,asIwaitedfortheguntofire.終于，比賽的日子到了。天氣比平時熱多了太熱了。我感覺我的喉嚨像一塊因夏日高溫而裂開的棉花田，我等著發(fā)令槍的聲音。Igazedoutatthecrowd;dozensoffamiliarfacesfromchurchandschoolflickeredacrossmyview.Theyhadeforme.Theywerecountingonme.我注視著人群；熟悉面孔閃過我的視線，他們有的是我的同學，有的是在教堂做禮拜認識的朋友。他們是為了我來的。他們都對我抱以厚望。Isawmydadsethiswatch,worryandexcitementetchedacrosshisface.Withthesoundofagunshot,theracebegan.我看到我的爸爸按下了手表，他的臉上既有擔憂也有隱隱的興奮。發(fā)令槍聲響起，比賽開始了。Forthefirsttwoandhalfmiles,Ifeltgreat.Ihadneverbeforebeensoreadyforsomething.Theweeksleadinguptotheracewerefilledwithhardpracticesandastrictdiet.在前兩英里半的距離里，我感覺狀態(tài)很好。我從未為任何事情做過這么充分的準備。在比賽前的幾個星期，我進行了艱苦的訓練和嚴格的飲食規(guī)劃。Thescorchingsunbeatuponmyback,blindingmewithitsbrilliance.Nothingwasgoingtostopme,though.灼熱的太陽曬打著我的后背，刺眼的光芒讓我看不清前方的路。但是，沒有什么能阻止我。續(xù)寫第一段：However,withoutwarning,mystrengthwasrunningout.然而，不知何時，我的力量開始耗盡。續(xù)寫第二段：Iwhispered,"I'msosorryIdisappointedyou,Dad."我小聲說道，“我很抱歉，爸爸，我讓你失望了?！蔽谋痉治觯汗适麓笠馕液臀野职忠恢逼诖腋咧凶詈笠荒甑闹蓦H越野賽。我在隊里是跑得最快的，也為此準備了三年。爸爸一直非常支持我，陪我訓練，觀看我的比賽，為我加油。終于，比賽的日子到了。比賽那天，太陽無情地炙烤著大地，不知何時，我的力量開始耗盡。續(xù)寫情節(jié)：第一段：然而我的力量正在耗盡。盡管我知道我的勝利夢想破滅了，但我必須完成比賽。我用盡全身力氣，手腳并用，一寸一寸地爬過終點線。第二段：我輕聲說：“爸爸，我很抱歉讓你失望了?！彼麥厝岬匦α诵φf，你永遠不會讓我失望。有時這些事情就會發(fā)生。重要的是你盡了最大的努力。附：官方參考答案范文Howeverwithoutwarning,mystrengthwasrunningout.Mylungsfoughttotakeinenoughair,andmyfeettransformedintocementbricks.Neckandneckwithoneofmygreatestrivals.Icouldseethefinishline.Ihadbegunthefinalsprintintoglorywhenmykneesbuckledandmylegsgaveway.NothingIcoulddowouldmakethemholdmyweight.Theywereasweakasjelly.EventhoughIknewmydreamsofvictoryhadbeendestroyed,Ihadtofinishtherace.Withallofthestrengthleftinme,Igotonmyhandsandkneesandcrawled,inchbyinch,acrossthefinishline.ShamepulsedthroughmyveinsasDadsquatteddownandpulledmeintohisarms.Iwhispered,"I'msosorryIdisappointedyou,Dad."Hegavemeagentlesmileandsaid."Youcouldneverdisappointme.Sometimesthesethingsjusthappen.Allthatmattersisthatyoudidyourbest."Liftingmyface,Isawmydad'seyes,inwhichIsawthesweat,thetime.andtheworkwehadputintoourdream.Themileswehadruntogether,allforthisrace.flashedacrossmymind."Butweworkedsohard.Whataboutourdream?"Iasked.Inthatsecond,theworldstoodstill.Hereachedoverformyhand,holdingbackhisowntears,andsaid."Don'tyouknowthatyouaremydreametrue?"下水文：Howeverwithoutwarning,mystrengthwasrunningout.Theairinmylungsseemedtobeevacuated,andmyfeetturnedintolargestones,asifweighingathousandpounds.Oneofmybiggestopponentshasalreadyrunaheadofme.Icanseethefinishline,butitlooksveryfaraway.Whenmykneesbentandmylegsbent,Ihadalreadystartedthefinalsprint.Mylegsareasweakasjelly.AlthoughIknowmydreamofvictoryhasbeens