考點07如何讓作文更具“色彩”高二英語寒假大培優(yōu)講義

考點07如何讓作文更具“色彩”·模塊一運用高級詞匯·模塊二運用多變復(fù)雜句式·模塊三運用銜接手段·模塊四范文賞析·模塊五實戰(zhàn)演練15篇（2024年四校八校精選考題）模塊模塊一運用高級詞匯詞組優(yōu)先原則豐富的英語表達少不了用到一些常用的詞組。事實上，詞組的使用范圍遠大于單個單詞。寫作時需要我們運用平時所積累的一些詞組，盡量增加文章的文采。例如:(1).Theinventionofrobotsistosomeextentavoidtheemotionaleffectsfromhumanbeingatwork.(2).putersplayaveryimportantrole/ofgreatimportanceinourlife.(3).Suddenlyagoodideaoccurredtome./Agoodideasuddenlystruckme.(4).Infaceof

ademandingchallenge,thespeechofSteveJobsservesasagreatguide.(5).Therefore,everyoneshouldsparenopains,notroubleandnoexpensetoscalehisorhernewheightsandstepintoabrandnewprospect.核心高級詞匯原則普通詞匯（表達）VS核心高級詞匯（表達）普通表達高級表達important重要的crucial/vital/critical/significantfamous杰出的outstanding/renowned/eminent/prestigioussometimes有時候occasionally/onceinawhilethink/consider認為，考慮takesthintoconsideration/accountpayattentionto注意attachimportancetohard努力地diligentlyclever聰明的bright/intelligentdisagree反對，抵制oppose/objectto/resisttheideathatuse使用employ/utilize/optimize/makefull/thebestuseofsay/tell告訴,表達voiceone’sopinion/convey/delivertheideathatIthink/IbelieveInmyhumbleopinion我相信，我主張Imaintain/hold/IamfirmlyconvincedthatIholdtheopinionthat/holdstrongbeliefthatAsfarasIamconcerned,…/Inmyperspectivesupport/agree贊成，提倡IaminfavoroftheproposalthatIstronglyremend/suggest/advocatethatIthinkhighlyof/Ispeakhighlyof/singhighpraiseforsthconsidersthasextremelyimportant高度重視,認為…很重要lay/put/placegreatemphasisonattachgreatimportanceto/putahighvalueon weallknowthat眾所周知ItisuniversallyacknowledgedthatItismonknowledgethatgoodside好處//優(yōu)點strength/strongpoints/advantage/benefit/meritbadside壞處/缺點weakness/weakpointsdisadvantage/drawback/defect避免重復(fù)原則同義，近義替換如果一個詞在一篇重復(fù)出現(xiàn)文章可讀性必然降低，因此，要使文章生動，可以在上下文中用同義詞或詞組替換同一個意思的詞語。例如：①

Ilikereadingwhilemybrotherlikeswatchingtelevision.—Ilikereadingwhilemybrotherenjoys/isfondof/iskeenonwatchingtelevision.②

thearrivaloftheageofinformation—theapproachoftheInternetera

—theemergenceofthedigitalage—theriseofthenetworkasawaytorelievestress③makestudentsinterestedinstudy

stir/stimulatestudents’interestinstudy

arousestudents’passioninlearning

makestudentsselfmotivatedinacquiringknowledge（2）詞性轉(zhuǎn)換對于一些高頻使用的詞，不妨嘗試用一下它的詞性，使語言不“落入俗套”。例如：①

Rocketshavebeen

applied

toexploretheuniverse.

—Rocketshavefound

application

fortheexplorationoftheuniverse.②

Somepeopleare

reluctant

todonatemoneybecausethecharitysysteminChinaisstill

immature.

—The

immaturity

ofthecharitysysteminChinacausedpeople’s

reluctance

indonation.③

Thatthemobiledevicescan

recognize

thespeaker’svoiceismoreandmorepopular.—Speech

recognition

onmobiledevicesisgrowinginpopularity.

（3）一句多表對于同樣的意思可以通過不同的句式來表達，以增加文章的表達多元化。例如：—Theoldladywalkedoutofthesupermarket,carryingaheavyshoppingbagonhershoulder.—Theoldladywalkedoutofthesupermarket,withaheavyshoppingbagonhershoulder.—Theoldladywalkedoutofthesupermarket,aheavyshoppingbagonhershoulder.表達地道原則使用俗語成語：為了用地道的英語語言寫出漂亮的作文，形象化、生動化及趣味性的詞語或詞組也應(yīng)進入我們的備考詞典。例如：能言善辯haveasilvertongue害群之馬ablacksheep

成天看電視的人acouchpotato

喜歡亂說話的人abigmouth

有經(jīng)驗的新手agreenhand

視而不見turnablindeyeto

備受關(guān)注inthespotlight

輕而易舉的事情apieceofcake

沒前途的工作deadendjob

最后的忍耐極限thelaststraw

茫然不知情inthedark

金科玉律goldenrule

使用插入語：看似漫不經(jīng)心的插入語，其實能顯示作者的功底，也是許多閱卷老師青睞的表達方式。插入語能使句子有一種跌宕起伏的感覺。副詞、連接詞和短語都可以當作插入語，放在句子中間，它們一般位于主語之后，動詞或助動詞的前面，兩邊分別加上逗號。例如：A.Aperson,

likeamodity,

needspackaging.B.Themainreasonwhypeopletravelis,

perhaps,forpleasure.C.Students,

atlarge,havetofaceatoughchoicewhenchoosingmajors.D.Lifeis,

inasense,aharshbattle.E.Somestudents,

duetotimidity,don’tdaretoaskquestionsinclass.F.Protectingtheenvironment,

asIseeit,hasafarreachinginfluenceonfuturegenerations.

G.Otherindividuals,

however,

taketheattitudethatthegovernmentshouldtaketheresponsibilitytotakecareoftheold.H.Agoodteachernotonlyoffersknowledge,

butmoreimportantly,healsoteachesstudentshowtobehavewell.模塊模塊二運用多變復(fù)雜句式1、肯定不如雙否好①Thepostmanesontimeeveryday.——Thepostmanneverfailstoeontime.②IhavemadegreatprogressinEnglishwithhishelp.——Icouldn’thavemadesomuchprogressinEnglishwithouthishelp.③Despitemanyobviousadvantagesofbicycle，itisnotwithoutitsproblem.2、陳述不如倒裝妙倒裝句：否定詞或詞組放句首時，句子要部分倒裝。Notonly...butalso...前后連接兩個句子時，notonly后的句子要用部分倒裝，但butalso后的分句不用倒裝。“Only+狀語”位于句首時，要用部分倒裝，only后的狀語可以是副詞、介詞短語、從句等。讓步狀語從句也可以倒裝，結(jié)構(gòu)為:副詞/形容詞/名詞+as+主語+動詞(名詞放在句首時，冠詞要省略)。例如:Thereisnodenyingthatweallleadabusyschoollife,butbynomeansshouldthisbeanexcusefornotdoinghousework.NotonlydoestheInternetprovideuswitheasyaccesstoawealthofinformation,butalsoithelpsustoescapefromthepressureinreality.SmallasArmstrong'ssteponthemoonis,itisagiantleapforthehumanbeing.Inthecenterofourschoolliesourlibrary,whichisbetweenthegardenandtheteachingbuilding.3.主動不如被動巧(1)Wecanborrowfivebooksatmost,andwecankeepthemfortendays.→AtmostWecanborrowfivebooksatatimeandtheycanbekeptfortendays.WewillhaveselectedaboutthirtyvolunteerstotheMarsthroughouttheworldby2020.→AboutthirtyvolunteerswillhavebeenselectedtotheMarsthroughouttheworldby2020.I'mdelightedtoknowthattheShanghaiMuseumwillorganizeafamousartexhibitionandyouarecollectingopinionsofthepublicastoselectthelocationfortheexhibition，whichencouragedmetowritetoexpressmyideas.→I'mdelightedtoknowthatafamousartexhibitionwillbeorganizedbytheShanghaiMuseumandopinionsofthepublicarebeingcollectedastoselectthelocationfortheexhibition，whichencouragedmetowritetoexpressmyideas.4.、非謂語結(jié)構(gòu)不能少非謂語動詞：非謂語動詞改變了動詞只能作謂語的功能，使其在英語句子中的用法更加靈活、多變。非謂語動詞包括動名詞、不定式和分詞。對于語法基礎(chǔ)牢固的學生來說，應(yīng)該多嘗試運用非謂語結(jié)構(gòu)的表達，這是在英語寫作中使文章增色的重要手段之一。例如：Governmentsoughttomakeeffortstoreducetheincreasinggapbetweencitiesandcountryside.(不定式）Tomakethemostofourabilitiesandfindthepositionsthatmostfitusinsocietyareshortcutstofulfillourvalue.(不定式)Itisnousecryingoverthespoiltmilk.(動名詞)Themajorityofpeopleobjecttosmokinginpublic.(動名詞)Governmentshouldenforcerelevantlawsorregulationstoseverelypunishthefactoryproducingagreatnumberofpollutantsandthepeoplelitteringorspittingdeliberately.(現(xiàn)在分詞)Hearingthebadnews,theyoungmancouldn’thelpcrying.(現(xiàn)在分詞)PresidentObamasaideducationalsuccessandeconomicwellbeingarelinked,especiallyinaworldeconomydrivenbyinformationandtechnology.(過去分詞)LostintheInternetworld,youloseyourpassionforlife,missthebeautyofnatureandmakeanindifferentpersonofyourself.(過去分詞)5、單句不比從句強復(fù)合句包括定語從句、名詞性從句和狀語從句。作文中運用復(fù)合句，表達較為復(fù)雜的邏輯關(guān)系。例如:Aspeople’sdesiretogetwealthandfamegrows,manycasesarefoundinsportsgameswhereathletescheatinthegamesorviolentconflictsbetweentheplayershappen(時間狀語從句，限制性定語從句)Alotofpeoplestillholdtheopinionthatappearanceisfarmoreimportantthancapabilityis.(同位語從句；比較狀語從句)Everyonepossessesadream.That'swhytheyestablishaheadofthemselvesaseriesofgoalsandaremotivatedtofulfilltheultimatedream.(表語從句)Homeislikeaharbor,wherewecanrestwhenwefeelupsetorfrustrated,andthenwecansetoutagainwithencouragementandconfidence.(非限制性定語從句；時間狀語從句)Sincewecan'tremovestressfromourlives,weneedtofindwaystohandleit.(原因狀語從句)

Ifwecareforaperson,ifwearealwaysreadytohelpthatpersonandifwesharemostofourthoughtsandfeelingswithaperson,theyareourgenuinefriends.

(狀語從句)Successandfailureisoftenwronglydefinedbygradeswhereexamorientededucationispopularized.(地點狀語從句)Ourrelationshipissodeepandclosethatmostofthethingsareautomaticallyunderstoodbyeachother.(結(jié)果狀語從句)Ecologistspointedoutthataclusteroftallbuildingsinacityoftenoverburdenspublictransportationandparkinglotcapacities.(賓語從句)Whateverthefuturemayhaveinstore,wewillbewellpreparedforitifwelearntoacceptchangeandappreciatewhatisnewanddifferent.(讓步狀語從句，條件狀語從句，賓語從句)注意：值得提醒的是，同學們在使用復(fù)雜的句型和結(jié)構(gòu)時，要有把握能正確地表達；也要注意分寸，應(yīng)根據(jù)書面表達的內(nèi)容和篇章結(jié)構(gòu)而定，做到地道得體，千萬不能生搬硬套，畫蛇添足。補充英語作文亮點句型亮點句型：英語中有大量的好句型和慣用句式，如果在平時的學習或復(fù)習中能夠有意識地、積極有效地積累、總結(jié)和歸納這些句型和句式，就能在寫作時增強語言的表現(xiàn)力，豐富語言的色彩。例如：一、the+est+名詞+(that)+主詞+haveever+seen(known/heard/had/read,etc)~~~themost+形容詞+名詞+(that)+主詞+haveever+seen(known/heard/had/read,etc)例句：HelenisthemostbeautifulgirlthatIhaveeverseen.海倫是我所看過最美麗的女孩。二、Nothingis+erthanto+VNothingis+more+形容詞+thanto+V例句：Nothingismoreimportantthantoreceiveeducation.沒有比接受教育更重要的事。三、cannotemphasizetheimportanceof~~~toomuch/can’tbetoo(再怎么強調(diào)...的重要性也不為過)例句：Wecannotemphasizetheimportanceofprotectingoureyestoomuch.我們再怎么強調(diào)保護眼睛的重要性也不為過。四、Thereisnodenyingthat+S+V...(不可否認的……)例句：Thereisnodenyingthatthequalitiesofourlivinghavegonefrombadtoworse.不可否認的，我們的生活品質(zhì)已經(jīng)每況愈下。五、Itisuniversallyacknowledgedthat+句子~~(大家都知道……)例句：Itisuniversallyacknowledgedthattreesareindispensabletous.全世界都知道樹木對我們是不可或缺的。六、Thereisnodoubtthat+~~(毫無疑問的……)例句：Thereisnodoubtthatoureducationalsystemleavessomethingtobedesired.毫無疑問的我們的教育制度令人不滿意。七、Anadvantageofisthat+句子(……的優(yōu)點是……)例句：Anadvantageofusingthesolarenergyisthatitwon'tcreate(produce)anypollution.使用太陽能的優(yōu)點是它不會制造任何污染。八、Thereasonwhy+句子isthat+句子(……的原因是……)例句：Thereasonwhywehavetogrowtreesisthattheycanprovideuswithfreshair.我們必須種樹的原因是它們能供應(yīng)我們新鮮的空氣。九、So+形容詞+be+主詞+that+句子(如此……以致于……)例句：Sopreciousistimethatwecan'taffordtowasteit.時間是如此珍貴，它經(jīng)不起我們浪費。十、Adj+as+Subject(主詞)+be,S+V(雖然……)例句：Richasourcountryis,thequalitiesofourlivingarebynomeanssatisfactory.{bynomeans=innoway=onnoaccount一點也不}雖然我們的國家富有，我們的生活品質(zhì)絕對令人不滿意。十一、The+~er+S+V,~~~the+~er+S+VThe+more+Adj+S+V,~~~the+more+Adj+S+V(愈……愈……)例句：Theharderyouwork,themoreprogressyoumake.你愈努力，你愈進步。十二、By+Ving,can(借著……，……能夠……)例句：Bytakingexercise,wecanalwaysstayhealthy.借著做運動，我們能夠始終保持健康。十三、enable+Object(受詞)+to+V(……使……能夠……)例句：Listeningtomusicenableustofeelrelaxed.聽音樂使我們能夠感覺輕松。十四、Onnoaccountcanwe+V~~~(我們絕對不能……)例句：Onnoaccountcanweignorethevalueofknowledge.我們絕對不能忽略知識的價值。十五、Itistime+S+過去式(該是……的時候了)例句：Itistimetheauthoritiesconcernedtookproperstepstosolvethetrafficproblems.該是有關(guān)當局采取適當?shù)拇胧┙鉀Q交通問題的時候了。十六、Thosewho~~~(……的人……)例句：Thosewhobreakthelawshouldbepunished.違法的人應(yīng)該受處罰。十七、Thereisnoonebut~~~(沒有人不……)例句：Thereisnoonebutlongstogotocollege.沒有人不渴望上大學。十八、be+forced/pelled/obliged+to+V(不得不……)例句：Sincetheexaminationisaroundthecorner,Iampelledtogiveupdoingsports.由于考試迫在眉睫，我不得不放棄做運動。十九、Itisconceivablethat+句子(可想而知的)Itisobviousthat+句子(明顯的)Itisapparentthat+句子(顯然的)例句：Itisconceivablethatknowledgeplaysanimportantroleinourlife.可想而知，知識在我們的一生中扮演著一個重要的角色。二十、Thatisthereasonwhy~~~(那就是……的原因)例句：Summerishot.ThatisthereasonwhyIdon'tlikeit.夏天很炎熱。那就是我不喜歡它的原因。模塊模塊三運用銜接手段英語作文銜接手段包括邏輯銜接、語法銜接、詞匯銜接。對于高中英語作文，這里重點講解邏輯銜接手段，所謂邏輯銜接手段可分為：并列關(guān)系、解釋關(guān)系、轉(zhuǎn)折和讓步關(guān)系、遞進關(guān)系、例證關(guān)系、因果關(guān)系等等。例1：Becauseitismorelikelynowthatbothparentswork,thereislittleopportunityforchildrentostayintheirownhome.Instead/Rather,theywillprobablygotoanurseryschoolwhentheyaremuchyounger.（轉(zhuǎn)折）例2:Apartfrom/Inadditionto/Besidesthesetensionscausedbyculturaldifferences,internationaltourismmayalsoleadtoconflictsbetweentouristsandalocalmunity.（遞進)例3：Inspiteofthis,theobviousbenefitsofputerskillsforyoungchildrencannotbedenied.(讓步)例4：Theywill,forexample,beabletoflyplanesandtheywillbeabletocoordinatethemovementsofseveralplanesinthevicinityofanairport.（舉例）模塊模塊四范文賞析Directions:WriteanEnglishpositionin120150wordsaccordingtotheinstructionsgivenbelowinChinese.請閱讀下面的漫畫，按要求用英文寫一篇短文。內(nèi)容要求：1．描述漫畫內(nèi)容；2．分析漫畫所揭示的問題；3．提出你的看法。寫作指導：第一步：審題定體裁。典例為議論式圖畫作文，體現(xiàn)其特點的常用句型有：開始句：用一句話概括漫畫內(nèi)容句型一：從這幅圖畫中我們可以看到一家三口正走在紅地毯上。Fromthepicturewecanseeafamilyofthreewalkingonalongredcarpet.句型二：正如上面圖畫生動呈現(xiàn)給我們的是一家三口正走在紅地毯上。Asisvividlypresentedinthepictureabove/Asthepictureabovevividlypresentstous，afamilyofthreearewalkingonalongredcarpet.(使用as引導的非限制性定語從句)中間過渡句：用一句話揭示圖畫的含義它反映了當今的一個普遍現(xiàn)象：孩子是家庭的中心，肩負著父母的希望。Itshowsamonphenomenonnowadaysthatchildrenarethefocusoffamilies，shouldering(shoulder)thehopeoftheirparents.結(jié)束句：用一句話強調(diào)所提建議的重要性(常用only引起的倒裝句)只有用這種方式，他們才能在成長過程中學會獨立，才能成為真正意義上的成功者。Onlyinthiswaycantheygrowuptobeindependentandbeetrulysuccessful.第二步：要點全而不漏要點要全：①描述漫畫內(nèi)容；②分析漫畫所揭示的問題；③提出你的看法。核心詞匯：①穿著講究的：bewelldressed②朝前彎腰：bendforward③家庭的中心：thefocusoffamilies④肩負……的期望：shoulderthehopeof...⑤為孩子安排一切：arrangeeverythingforchildren⑥不遺余力：sparenoeffort⑦結(jié)果：asaconsequence⑧不獨立思考，沒有創(chuàng)造力：havenoindependentthoughtorcreativeideas⑨表明……的普遍現(xiàn)象：Itshowsamonphenomenonthat…第三步：根據(jù)要點提示，寫出句式要點一：兒子精心打扮，高傲地揮手走在中間。Thesoniswelldressedandwavesproudlyinthemiddle.要點二：在后面，父親向前傾著托起上衣。Thefatherbehindbendsforwardtoholdthejacket.要點三：在前面，母親汗流浹背地展開地毯。Themotherinfrontrollsoutthecarpet，sweating.要點四：父母為孩子安排好了所有的事情，不遺余力地為孩子的成功鋪平道路。Parentsarrangeeverythingfortheirchildrenandsparenoefforttopavethewayfortheirsuccess.要點五：孩子們對于父母變得如此依賴以至于他們沒有獨立的想法或創(chuàng)造性的觀點。Childrenbeesoreliantontheirparentsthattheyhavenoindependentthoughtorcreativeideas.要點六：這種狀況讓人感到憂心忡忡。Suchasituationisofgreatconcern.要點七：過度保護和太多的關(guān)心對孩子的發(fā)展極其有害。Overprotectionandtoomuchcareareextremelybadforchildren'sdevelopment.要點八：父母應(yīng)該鼓勵孩子克服困難，激勵孩子獨立發(fā)展而不是為他們做一切事情。Parentsshouldencouragetheirchildrentooveredifficultiesandinspirethemtodevelopbythemselvesratherthandoeverythingforthem.第四步：詞匯、句式升級升級句式一：用分詞短語“welldressed”作定語改寫要點一Theson，welldressed，wavesproudlyinthemiddle.升級句式二：用and連接要點二、三Thefatherbehindbendsforwardtoholdthejacketandthemotherinfrontrollsoutthecarpet，sweating.升級句式三：用while連接升級句式一、二Theson，welldressed，wavesproudlyinthemiddlewhilethefatherbehindbendsforwardtoholdthejacketandthemotherinfrontrollsoutthecarpet，sweating.升級句式四：把要點四中的后半句改為分詞短語作狀語Parentsarrangeeverythingfortheirchildren，sparingnoefforttopavethewayfortheirsuccess.升級句式五：把要點五改成倒裝句Soreliantdochildrenbeeontheirparentsthattheyhavenoindependentthoughtorcreativeideas.第五步 巧用過渡詞升級句式四和五之間為因果關(guān)系，可以使用過渡詞語asaresult/consequence；要點七、八是針對上文提到的社會現(xiàn)象發(fā)表的個人觀點，故可以使用inmyopinion作為過渡詞語。第六步 正確分段第一段：描述漫畫內(nèi)容(開始句；升級句式三)第二段：分析漫畫所揭示的問題(中間段的開始句；升級句式四、五)第三段：提出自己的看法(要點六至八；結(jié)尾句中的強調(diào)句)第七步 完善成文Onepossibleversion：Fromthepicturewecanseeafamilyofthreewalkingonalongredcarpet.Theson，welldressed，wavesproudlyinthemiddlewhilethefatherbehindbendsforwardtoholdthejacketandthemotherinfrontrollsoutthecarpet，sweating.Itshowsamonphenomenonnowadaysthatchildrenarethefocusoffamilies，shoulderingthehopeoftheirparents.Parentsarrangeeverythingfortheirchildrenandsparenoefforttopavethewayfortheirsuccess.Asaconsequence，childrenbeesoreliantontheirparentsthattheyhavenoindependentthoughtorcreativeideas.Suchasituationisofgreatconcern.Inmyopinion，overprotectionandtoomuchcareareextremelybadforchildren'sdevelopment.Insteadofdoingeverythingforthem,parentsshouldencouragetheirchildrentooveredifficultiesandinspirethemtodevelopbythemselves.Onlyinthiswaycantheygrowuptobeindependentandbeetrulysuccessful.模塊模塊五實戰(zhàn)演練15篇一、書面表達1．（2023下·上?！じ叨虾Ｊ薪ㄆ街袑W?？计谥校〥irections:WriteanEnglishpositionin120150wordsaccordingtotheinstructionsgivenbelowinChinese.學校將在新學期增設(shè)如下選修課程：園藝(gardening)、烹飪(cooking)、護理(nursing)，請從中選擇一門你最感興趣的課程，并談?wù)勀銥槭裁催x擇這門課程。______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】

I’mverygladtohearthatourschoolwilladdseveralcoursesincludinggardening,cookingandnursingnextterm.Iwanttoattendacourseaboutgardening.Iprefertospendmysparetimeingclosetonature,makingmymindandmannerscultivated.Therefore,I’dliketolearnhowtoplantdifferentkindsofgrass,flowersandtreesinthegardenandIwanttoknowhowIshouldmaintainthegrassindifferentseasons.Besides,ifIgainabitmoreknowledgeofgardening,Icanhelpmaketheenvironmentbeautiful.Atthesametime,thecoursecanhelpmemajorinthegardeningafterattendingcollege.Inaword,I’dappreciateitifitcanteachmemoreaboutgardening.【導語】本篇書面表達屬于記敘文。要求考生從學校下學期將要增加的選修課程中選擇一門最感興趣的，并談?wù)劄槭裁催x擇這門課程?！驹斀狻?.詞匯積累空閑時間：sparetime→freetime此外：besides→what’smore同時：atthesametime→meanwhile總之：inaword→inall2.句式拓展簡單句變復(fù)合句原句：Iprefertospendmysparetimeingclosetonature,makingmymindandmannerscultivated.拓展句：Iprefertospendmysparetimeingclosetonature,whichcanmakemymindandmannerscultivated.【點睛】【高分句型1】I’mverygladtohearthatourschoolwilladdseveralcoursesincludinggardening,cookingandnursingnextterm.（運用了that引導的賓語從句）【高分句型2】Besides,ifIgainabitmoreknowledgeofgardening,Icanhelpmaketheenvironmentbeautiful.（運用了if引導的條件狀語從句）【高分句型3】Inaword,I’dappreciateitifitcanteachmemoreaboutgardening.（運用了固定句型，it作形式賓語）2．（2023上·上海金山·高二上海市金山中學?？茧A段練習）Directions:WriteanEnglishpositionin120150wordsaccordingtotheinstructionsgivenbelowinChinese.英國作家JohnRuskin有一句名言：“Livingwithoutanaimislikesailingwithoutapass”,請以“GoalSettingIsImportant”為題，以具體事例談?wù)勀銓@句話的看法。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】范文GoalSettingIsImportantAsJohnRuskinputsit,“Livingwithoutaimislikesailingwithoutapass.”Goalsoflife,withoutdoubt,determinewhatwearegoingtobe.IusedtobesoaddictedtoputergamesthatlittledidIhavetimeforstudyandthusfellbehind.Asaresult,myparentsandteachersweregreatlyworriedaboutme.However,itwaswhatmyEnglishteachersaidtomethatreallyhelpedmeout.ShetoldmethatImusthavemyowngoaloflife,otherwisemyfuturewouldbehopelessandaimlessandthatplayingputergameswasfunandattractivebutitwouldn’tguaranteemeabrightandpromisingfuture.IfinallyrealizedthatImustsetupaclearandachievablegoalandworkhardtowardsitrightaway.Inthedaysthatfollowed,wheneverIfelttiredorhadanurgetoplayputergames,Ithoughtofmygoalandsoonregainedstrength.Asthesayinggoes,alifewithoutagoalisalifewithouthope.Bearingmygoaloflifeinmind,Iamalwaysfullofenergyinmystudy.【導語】本篇書面表達屬于開放性作文。要求考生以“GoalSettingIsImportant”為題，以具體事例談?wù)剬τ骷襃ohnRuskin的名言：“Livingwithoutanaimislikesailingwithoutapass”的理解?！驹斀狻?.詞匯積累因此：asaresult→asaconsequence意識到：realize→beaware疲倦的：tired→wornout充滿：befullof→befilledwith2.句式拓展用定語從句合并句子原句：IusedtobesoaddictedtoputergamesthatlittledidIhavetimeforstudyandthusfellbehind.Asaresult,myparentsandteachersweregreatlyworriedaboutme.拓展句：IusedtobesoaddictedtoputergamesthatlittledidIhavetimeforstudyandthusfellbehind,asaresultofwhichmyparentsandteachersweregreatlyworriedaboutme.【點睛】【高分句型1】IusedtobesoaddictedtoputergamesthatlittledidIhavetimeforstudyandthusfellbehind.（運用了“so…that…”句型和倒裝句）【高分句型2】However,itwaswhatmyEnglishteachersaidtomethatreallyhelpedmeout.（運用了what引導的主語從句和強調(diào)句型）3．（2023下·上?！じ叨虾Ｊ心涎竽７吨袑W校考期中）Directions:WriteanEnglishpositionin120150wordsaccordingtotheinstructionsgivenbelowinChinese.下面的漫畫展示的是劇場中的場景。請以此為素材寫篇短文。你的作文必須包括：簡要描述漫畫內(nèi)容；就其折射出的社會現(xiàn)象談?wù)勀愕母邢搿＃ㄗⅲ何闹胁坏贸霈F(xiàn)真實的姓名及學校名稱。）__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】OperaisthetreasureoftheChinesenation,butfewerandfewerpeoplegotoseeit.Inthecartoon,grandpaandGrandsonarewatchingaplayinatheater.Tothesameplay,twopeople’sreactionisverydifferent.Thegrandfatherislisteningtothemusicwithgreatinterest,whilethegrandsonisbowinghisheadtosleep.ThecartoonreflectsthatnowadaysyoungpeoplearenotinterestedintraditionalChineseoperaculture.IthinkyoungpeopleshouldactivelypromotetraditionalChineseculture,especiallyoperaculture.Inaddition,underthebackgroundthatcontemporaryyoungpeopledonot“catchacold”inoperaculture,Chinesetraditionaloperacultureshouldadapttothetrendoftimes,andmakeuseofnetworktechnologyandinformationmeanstoreformandinnovateoperaculture,sothatChineseoperacanenterthepublic’svisionandbelovedbythepublic.

Allinall,Chineseopera,especiallyPekingOpera,isthequintessenceofChineseculture.Thecontemporaryyouthhavetheresponsibilityandobligationtocarryitforward,passonthequintessenceofChineseculture,andmakeitpopularathomeandabroad.【分析】本篇書面表達屬于看圖作文，所給漫畫展示的是劇場中的場景。要求考生以此為素材寫篇短文。文章必須包括：簡要描述漫畫內(nèi)容；就其折射出的社會現(xiàn)象談?wù)勀愕母邢??！驹斀狻?.詞匯積累對……感興趣：beinterestedin→haveinterestin→showinterestin總之：allinall→inshort→inbrief另外，此外：inaddition→furthermore→moreover反應(yīng)，回應(yīng)：reaction→response→reflection2.句式拓展合并簡單句原句：Inthecartoon,grandpaandGrandsonarewatchingaplayinatheater.Tothesameplay,twopeople’sreactionisverydifferent.拓展句：Inthecartoon,grandpaandGrandsonarewatchingthesameplay,towhichtwopeople’sreactionisverydifferent.【點睛】[高分句型1]Thegrandfatherislisteningtothemusicwithgreatinterest,whilethegrandsonisbowinghisheadtosleep.

(運用了由并列連詞while連接的并列句，前后形成鮮明對比)[高分句型2]Inaddition,underthebackgroundthatcontemporaryyoungpeopledonot“catchacold”inoperaculture,Chinesetraditionaloperacultureshouldadapttothetrendoftimes,andmakeuseofnetworktechnologyandinformationmeanstoreformandinnovateoperaculture,sothatChineseoperacanenterthepublic’svisionandbelovedbythepublic.

(運用了sothat引導的結(jié)果狀語從句)4．（2022上·上海奉賢·高二?？茧A段練習）課文《2050》向我們展示了2050未來的生活。有同學認為機器人給我們帶來很多方便，也有同學認為機器人會帶來很多麻煩。請你談?wù)勎磥頇C器人的帶來的利弊，并談?wù)勀愕目捶ā_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Onepossibleversion:Withthedevelopmentofscience,anincreasingnumberofpeopleareconfusedaboutwhetheritisgoodorbadtoletrobotsreplacehumanbeingsinsomefields.Everycoinhastwosides.Robotsbringnotonlymuchconveniencetoourlifebutalsounemploymentofmanypeople.AsfarasIamconcerned,ithassomepositiveeffectsonourlife.Theadvantagesofrobotsarefarmorethanthedisadvantages.Tobeginwith,robotsmakeourlifemoreconvenient.Wecandoalotofthingswiththehelpofrobotsthatcouldn’tbedoneinthepast.Additionally,robotscanbeusedinindustrialproduction.Factoriescanreduceproductioncostsbyusingrobots.Androbotsdon’tgetsick,whichisverygoodforproducinggoods.Lastbutnotleast,robotscansavemorepeopleincaseofdisaster,becausetheydon’tfeelpain,theycansavemorepeoplewithoutfeelingtired.Allinall,theworldischanging,andweshouldchangeourthinking.Ifrobotsbecameapartofourlife,ourlifewouldbemorecolorful.【導語】本篇書面表達為一篇議論文，要求學生就未來機器人的帶來的利弊，談?wù)勛约旱目捶ā！驹斀狻?.詞匯積累：越來越多：anincreasingnumberof→agrowingnumberof疲憊的：tired→exhausted而且：additionally→inaddition/what’smore/furthermore在我看來：asfarasIamconcerned→inmyopinion/frommypointofview2.句式拓展：原句：Additionally,robotscanbeusedinindustrialproduction.Factoriescanreduceproductioncostsbyusingrobots.拓展句：Additionally,robotscanbeusedinindustrialproduction,bywhichfactoriescanreduceproductioncosts.【點睛】【高分句型1】Withthedevelopmentofscience,anincreasingnumberofpeopleareconfusedaboutwhetheritisgoodorbadtoletrobotsreplacehumanbeingsinsomefields.（運用了whether引導賓語從句。）【高分句型2】Androbotsdon’tneedtoeatorgetsick,whichisverygoodforproducinggoods.（運用了which引導非限制性定語從句。）5．（2022上·上海嘉定·高二?？计谥校〥irections:WriteanEnglishpositionin120150wordsaccordingtotheinstructionsgivenbelowinChinese.一項調(diào)查顯示，近七成受訪者表示他們不愿意對父母開放微信朋友圈；“屏蔽父母”主要理由是，認為父母“過度關(guān)心、管教太多、無法溝通”。對此現(xiàn)象，請你寫一篇文章談?wù)勀愕目捶ǎ愕奈恼马毎ㄒ韵聝?nèi)容：1.你是否對父母開放你的朋友圈；2.請說明你這樣做的理由；3.談?wù)勀銓Α捌帘胃改浮边@種做法的看法。參考詞匯：屏蔽父母don’tsharemymomentswithmyparents微信朋友圈WeChatMoments___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Nowadays,itseemsthatMomentssectionof