2023年甘肅省平?jīng)鍪写髮W(xué)英語六級模擬考試(含答案)

2023年甘肅省平?jīng)鍪写髮W(xué)英語6級大學(xué)英

語六級模擬考試（含答案）

學(xué)校:班級:姓名:考號:

一、LWriting(10題)

1.Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteacomposition

onthetopicJobProblemsforCollegeGraduates.Studythefollowingcharts

carefullyandyourcompositionmustbebasedontheinformationgivenin

thecharts.Writeto:

statethechangesincollegegraduates'choicesofcareers;

(2)givepossiblereasonsforthechanges;

(3)suggestsomesolutionstotheproblem.

19812006

□Graduateswhocontinuetostudy

SGraduateswhotakeJobsirrelevanttotheirmajors

□GraduateswhoholdjobsIntheirmajors

Yourcompositionshouldbenolessthan150words.Pleasewriteneatly.

2.Directions:Forthispart,youareallowedtowriteashortessayentitled

CollegeStudents'MakingMoney.Youshouldwriteatleast150words

followingtheoutlinegivenbelow.

1.大學(xué)生兼職工作的現(xiàn)象

2.大學(xué)生兼職工作的原因

3.我的觀點(diǎn)

3.Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteacompositiononthe

topicStudyunderaWork-StudyProgram.Youshouldwriteatleast150words

accordingtotheoutlinegivenbelowinChinese:

1.在大學(xué)校園中，有的大學(xué)生是因?yàn)樯罾щy而勤工儉學(xué)，有的大學(xué)生

是為鍛煉實(shí)際能力

2.作為一名在校大學(xué)生，你如何看待勤工儉學(xué)問題

StudyunderaWork-StudyProgram

4.Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteashortessay

entitledWhatDoYouThinkofChallenge?Youshouldwriteatleast150

wordsfollowingtheoutlinegivenbelow:

1.挑戰(zhàn)的意義

2.如何迎接挑戰(zhàn)

3.我的看法

5.Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteashortessay

entitledSayNotoDrunkDriving.Youshouldwriteatleast150words

followingtheoutlinegivenbelow.

1.眾所周知，酒后駕車十分危險

2.但近年來越來越多的人酒后駕車.原因是……

3.我認(rèn)為……

SayNotoDrunkDriving

6.Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteacomposition

onthetopicFastFoodandTraditionalChineseCuisine.Youshouldwriteat

least150wordsaccordingtotheoutlinegivenbelowinChinese.

1.西餐越來越受到中國人的青睞,對你而言，中餐和西餐，更喜歡哪種；

2.請給出兩條以上的理由支持你的觀點(diǎn)；

3.對全文作一總結(jié)。

FastFoodandTraditionalChineseCuisine

7.1.電子課件在課堂教學(xué)中的應(yīng)用非常廣泛

2.引起這種趨勢的原岡及其影響

3.我們應(yīng)該如何應(yīng)用

ApplicationofCourse-wareasaReform,inClassTeaching

8.Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteashortessayentitledIs

aDiplomaEverything?Youshouldwriteatleast150wordsaccordingtothe

outlinegivenbelowinChinese.

1.目前社會存在著迷信文憑現(xiàn)象

2.造成這一現(xiàn)象的原因

3.我對此的觀點(diǎn)

IsaDiplomaEverything?

9.Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteashortessay

entitledShouldWePursueMaster'sDegree?Youshouldwriteatleast150

wordsfollowingtheoutlinegivenbelow.

1.有人認(rèn)為考研是大學(xué)畢業(yè)生最好的出路

2.也有人持不同意見

3.我的看法

ShouldWePursueMaster'sDegree?

10.Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowritea

compositiononthetitle:IsLongHolidayNecessary?Youshouldwriteat

least150wordsfollowingtheoutlinegivenbelowinChinese.

IsLongHolidayNecessary

1.對于長假是否必要，不同的人有不同的看法

2.我認(rèn)為長假是必要的，因?yàn)椤?/p>

3.如何度長假

二、2.ReadingComprehension(SkimmingandScanning)(10題)

11.

HowissustainablepublicspacedevelopedinSerenbe?

A.Peopleplanttreesandmakewaterflowinthatspace.

B.Citizenscangrowtreesfreelyinthespace.

C.Concretewallsaremadeoutsidetheplaceforaprotection.

D.Naturalthingsinthatspacedevelopwithouthumandisturbance.

12.

UnderHazardousWasteActinAustralia,ifyouexporthazardouswaste

withoutapermit,youwillbefineduptoorshutupinprisonfor

13.

Flossing,anessentialpartofthetooth-cleaningprocess,removesplaque

betweenteethandatthegumline,thebreedinggroundfor.

14.Thenetworksofcommunicationsystemwhicharepeer-to-peerareone

propertyof4Gwirelesscommunication.

15.TheScienceofAnxiety

Allanimals,especiallythesmallkind,appeartofeelanxiety.Humanshave

feltitsincethedaystheysharedtheplanetwithsaber-toothedtigers.Butwe

liveinaparticularlyanxiousage.Arecentstudyfoundthateightmonthsafter

theSeptember11event,nearlytwo-thirdsofAmericansthinkabouttheterror

attacksatleastseveraltimesaweek.Anditdoesn'ttakemuchforalltheold

fearstocomerushingback.Whatwassurprisingabouttherecentdrumbeat

ofterrorwarningswashowquicklyittriggeredtheanxietysomanyofus

thoughtwehadputbehindus.

Thisisoneofthemysteriesofanxiety.Whileitisanormalresponseto

physicaldangerandcanbeausefultoolforfocusingthemindwhenthere'sa

deadlinelooming-anxietybecomesaproblemwhenitpersiststoolong

beyondtheimmediatethreat.Sometimesthere'sanobviouscause.Other

times,wedon'tknowwhywecan'tstopworrying.

Anxietydisorder-whichiswhathealthexpertscallanyanxietythatpersists

tothepointthatitinterfereswithone'slife-isthemostcommonmental

illnessintheUSwhichinitsvariousforms,afflicts19millionAmericans.

Inrecentyears,researchershavemadesignificantprogressinnailingdown

theunderlyingscienceofanxiety.Injustthepastdecade,theyhavecometo

appreciatethatwhateverthefactorsthattriggeranxiety,itgrowsoutofa

responsethatisrootedinourbrains.Theyhavelearned,amongotherthings:

-Thereisageneticcomponenttoanxiety;somepeopleseemtobeborn

worriers.

-Brainscanscanrevealdifferencesinthewaypatientswhosufferfrom

anxietydisordersrespondtodangersignals.

-Duetoashortcutinourbrain'sinformation-processingsystem,wecan

respondtothreatsbeforewebecomeawareofthem.

-Therootofananxietydisordermaynotbethethreatthattriggersitbuta

breakdowninthemechanismthatkeepstheanxietyresponsefromcareering

outofcontrol.

Beforewedigintothelatestresearch,let'sdefineafewterms.Thoughweall

haveourownintuitivesenseofwhatthewordsstressandfearmean,scientists

usethesewordsinveryspecificways.Forthem,stressisanexternalstimulus

thatsignalsdanger,oftenbycausingpain.Fearistheshort-termresponsesuch

stressesproduceinmen,womenorlabrats.Anxietyhasalotofthesame

symptomsasfear,butit'safeelingthatlingerslongafterthestresshaslifted

andthethreathaspassed.

Ingeneral,sciencehasahardtimepinningdownemotionsbecausetheyare

bynaturesoslipperyandsubjective.Mostpeopleareascluelessaboutwhy

theyhavecertainfeelings.Butfearistheoneaspectofanxietythat'seasyto

recognize.Humansbreakoutinacoldsweat.Heartbeatsrace,andblood

pressurerises.Thatgivesscientistssomethingtheycancontrolandmeasure.

Indeed,alotofwhatresearchershavelearnedaboutthebiologyofanxiety

comesfromscaringratsandthencuttingthemopen.Theresearchersdestroy

smallportionsoftherats'brainstoseewhateffectthathasontheirreactions.

Bypainstakinglymatchingthedamagedareaswithchangesinbehavior,

scientistshave,bitbybit,createdaroadmapoffearasittravelsthroughthe

rat'sbrain.

Thejourneybeginswhenaratfeelsthestress,inthiscaseanelectricshock.

Therat'ssensesimmediatelysendamessagetothecentralportionofitsbrain,

wherethestimulusactivatestwoneuralpathways.Oneofthesepathwaysis

arelativelylong,circuitousroute（迂回彳生路）throughthecortex（月固皮層）,

wherethebraindoesitsmostelaborateandaccurateprocessingof

information.Theotherrouteisakindofemergencyshortcutthatquickly

reachesaclusterofcellscalledtheamygdale（扁桃體）.

What'sspecialabouttheamygdalaisthatitcanquic

A.YB.NC.NG

16.

In,peoplebelievethatGodraisedJesusfromthedeadonthethird

dayafterhewaskilled.

17.

Ifyouwanttohavestrongbonesyoushouldeatfood.

18.

Doctorswhotreatdepressionwilldistinguishmajordepressionand

dysthymiaandtreatthemdifferently.

A.YB.NC.NG

19.

Inthewriter'sopinion,unlikewhatotherpeoplethought,isawayto

avoidfacingresponsibilities.

A.stayinginhisjob

B.beinga"careerstudent"

C.quittingjobs

D.goingbacktocollege

20.

Nowadayspeoplearesobusywiththeirdallyroutinesthattheyneglectto

三、3.ListeningComprehension(10題)

21.(31)

A.FlytoAmsterdamdirectly.

B.Taketheship.

C.FlytoLondonandtakeacoach.

D.Buyticketdirectlyfromtheairlines.

22.(24)

A.Itcanincreaseproductionby4.5percentinfactoriesatleast.

B.Itissometimesveryboringtotheworkers.

C.Itcanpossiblygivepeoplebetterfeelingandinfluencetheirattitudes.

D.Itisalwaysfasterthananyothermusic.

23.(22)

A.He'lltrainyoungfootballers.

B.He'llrunhisownbusiness.

C.He'llstillbeplayingfootball.

D.He'llbecomeafootballcommentator.

24.聽力原文：M:Whataboringspeaker!Icouldhardlykeepfromfalling

asleep.

W:Oh,Idon'tknowaboutthat.Infact,Idon'thaveaspecialfeelingabout

him.

Q:Whatdoesthewomanmean?

(17)

A.Shedisagreeswiththeman.

B.Shedoesn'tenjoylongspeeches.

C.Shehadn'tknownhowlongthespeechwouldbe.

D.Shedoesn'thaveaspecialopinionaboutthespeaker.

25.聽力原文：ManyhaveheadedtoNashville,Tenn.,withnothingbuta

guitarandadream.Taylor,KeithandCharlottearedeterminedtoseetheir

dreamofbecomingacountrymusicstarcometrue.

Taylor,whohasbeensingingtoanyonewhowouldlistensinceshewas3

yearsold,knewshewantedtobeacountrymusicsingerafterheatingLeAnn

Rimeswhenshewasinthefirstgrade.Shewasjustdeadset,andtoldherself

that'swhatshe'sgoingtobe.Taylor,nowafreshmaninhighschool,practices

andwritessongsathomeandinthestudiofor30hourseachweek.Whenshe

goesthroughsomething,shemustwriteasongaboutit.

KeithmovedtoNashvilleafterhegothisfirstthrillfromafavorableaudience

reactionat16yearsold.Hismornpulledhimintoapianobarandhesang

"TheDance".Andtheplacelovedit.Thesedays,Keithisastay-at-homedad

bydayandamusicianatnightclubs.It'sdifficulttojugglemusicandfamily.

Butmusicisalwaysapartofhislife.Hehasgotacoupleofsongspublished,

soit'slikehe'sstartingtomakeamove.

Charlotte,amotherandamusician,movedherfamilytoNashvilleinsearch

ofhercalling.Shewouldn'tgiveupherdream,notinthefaceofherchildren,

becausethey'reherbiggestfans.WhetherCharlotteisworkingonanewsong

orworkingatherdayjobsellingflowers,herloveforthemusiciswhatkeeps

hergoing.Forher,musicislikeanunsatisfiedardentfollower.It'ssomething

that'spassionatethatshecan'tgetenoughof.

(30)1

A.Whenshewasthreeyearsold.

B.Whenshewassixyearsold.

C.Whenshewasfifteenyearsold.

D.Whenshewaseighteenyearsold.

26.(47)

27.聽力原文：W:Ithinkwe'dbetterreplacethatoldtypewritersothatwe

canworkmoreefficiently.

M:Asfarastheworkefficiencyisconcerned,whynotthetypist?

Q:Whatdoesthemanimply?

(19)

A.Theyshouldfindanewplacefortheoldtypewriter.

B.Theyshouldfindanewplaceforthetypist,

C.Theyshouldfindanewtypist.

D.Theyshouldbuyanewtypewriter.

28.[B5]

29.聽力原文:M:Ididn'tseeyouincreativewritingclasstoday.What

happened?

W:Oh,justadentistappointment.That'sall.Say,didwegetanewassignment

fornextweek?

M:Yeah.Areallyinterestingone,actually.We'resupposedtowriteashort

storythathassomesortoflimitationor,constraintsimposedonit.

W:Whatdoyoumean?Likerhyminginapoem?

M:Well,that'ssomewhattheidea.Butwhatwewritehastobeaprose,as

prosepoetiy.Justtomakerhymeinapoemistooeasy,Iguess.IthinkProf.

Smithreallywantsustochallengeourselves,toputourcreativitytothetest.

W:Well,didshegiveanyhintsaboutwhat'sonhermind'?

M:Notreally,butImayhaveanidea,thekindofthingwhatshe'slookingfor.

IjustfinishedareallystrangebookbysomeFrenchguy.Hewroteawhole

bookwithoutevenusingasingleletter"e".

W:Awholebookwithoutasingle"e"?.How'sthatpossible?But,waita

minute.Ididn'tknowyoucanreadFrench.

M:Ican't.IreadtheEnglishtranslation.Butgetthis.There'snotone"e"in

thateither.

W:Noway.Thinkofthewordsyoucouldn'tuse.

M:Iknow,butthattranslatormanagesit.Igotthebookathomeifyouwant

tocheckoutforyourself,what'sreallyamazingtomeisthatleavingaletter

"e"inEnglishisgonnainvolveacompletedifferentgroupofwordsandends

inFrench

W:Sometimeyouhavetoshowmethatbook.ButrightnowIbettergetgoing

thewritingfornextweek.Ialreadyhaveacoupleofideasthankstoyou.And

IthinkIjustmightbeabletoworkonittosomethinginteresting.

(20)''、

A.Bemuseshewentshopping.

B.Becauseshewentonadate.

C.Becauseshewenttoseethedoctor.

D.Becauseshehadabusinessappointment.

30.SectionA

Directions:Inthissection,youwillhear8shortconversationsand2long

conversations.Attheendofeachconversation,oneormorequestionswillbe

askedaboutwhatwassaid.Boththeconversationandthequestionswillbe

spokenonlyonce.Aftereachquestiontherewillbeapause.Duringthepause,

youmustreadthefourchoicesmarkedA,B,CandD,anddecidewhichis

thebestanswer.

(12)

A.Sitwheresheis.

B.Sitwherethereisabreeze.

C.Extinguishhiscigarette.

D.Movetoanotherpartoftheplane.

四、4.ReadingComprehension(ReadinginDepth)(3題)

31.

Whatistheadvantageclaimedforrepeatingfairytalestoyoungchildren?

32.

Theauthorbelieves'that,inWesternsociety,dreamsarcconsideredtobe

A.shamefulB.beneficialC.unimportantD.artistic

33.Theword"it"(Line3,Para.2)mostprobablyrefersto

A.thelackofstablecommunities

B.thebreakdownofinformalinformationchannels

C.theincreasedmobilityoffamilies

D.thegrowingnumberofpeoplemovingfromplacetoplace

五、5.ErrorCorrection。題)

34.

[S7]

35.

[S8]

36.

【S3】

六、6.ErrorCorrection?題)

37.

[S5]

38.

[S3]

39.

[S9]

參考答案

l.JOBPROBLEMSFORCOLLEGEGRADUATESEachyearthousands

uponthousandsofgraduatesfloodintothejobmarketwavingtheircollege

diplomasandcertificatesexpectingbetterjobsintheirspecializedfieldsonly

tobefrustratedanddisappointed.Accordingtothechartsonly35percentof

graduatesin2006couldfindjobsrelatedtotheirmajorscomparedwith89

percentin1981whenChinahaditsfirstcollegegraduatesaftertheCultural

Revolution.Whydocollegegraduatesfinditincreasinglydifficulttogeta

satisfactoryandrewardingjob?Onereasonperhapsisthatmanycollegesand

universitiesfailtogeartheircurriculatothedevelopmentofindustries.

Degreecoursesofferedinmanycollegesanduniversitiesaresooutdatedand

iirelevantandimpracticalthatemployersaswellasstudentsthemselvesfind

ithardtotranslatetheirbookknowledgeintorealjobskills.Noemployers

wanttoknowabouttheirmind-broadeningandhorizon-wideningqualities

andfewarcwillingtospendtimeandbudgettrainingrawrecruits.Secondly

thereisanoversupplyofgraduateswithacertainspecialtyandthis

oversupplyisincreasing.Alreadythereisanoverabundanceoflawyers

executivesecretariessalesengineersandotherspecialists.Yetcollegesand

graduateschoolscontinueeveryyeartoturnoutmoregraduatesofthese

specialtiestocompeteforjobsthataren'tthere.Theresultisthatmanyof

themcannotentertheprofessionsforwhichtheyaretrainedandhavetotake

otherjobswhichevendonotrequireacollegedegree.Ontheotherhandthere

istremendousneedforteachersresearchworkersandpublicofficials.Butthe

disparityinpaybetweenintellectualworkandbusinessmanagementhas

frustratedthehopeandambitionofgraduateswhomajorineducation

administrationandliberalarts.Collegegraduatesaresotospeakvaluable

resourcesinourcountryandnoonehastherighttowastethewealthoftalent.

Theproblemstheyencounterinjobhuntingdeservemoreattentionfromthe

collegesandthegovernment.Thecollegesshouldgetstudentsoutoftheivory

towerandgeartheircoursestotherealneedsofindustryandbusiness;while

thegovernmentshouldprovidecollegegraduateswithmorevocational

opportunitiesbetter'workingconditionsanddecentsalariessothatmoreand

moregraduateswouldliketodevotetheirlifetoacademicstudiesand

scientificresearch.JOBPROBLEMSFORCOLLEGEGRADUATESEach

yearthousandsuponthousandsofgraduatesfloodintothejobmarket,waving

theircollegediplomasandcertificates,expectingbetterjobsintheir

specializedfields,onlytobefrustratedanddisappointed.Accordingtothe

charts,only35percentofgraduatesin2006couldfindjobsrelatedtotheir

majors,comparedwith89percentin1981whenChinahaditsfirstcollege

graduatesaftertheCulturalRevolution.Whydocollegegraduatesfindit

increasinglydifficulttogetasatisfactoryandrewardingjob?Onereason

perhapsisthatmanycollegesanduniversitiesfailtogeartheircurriculato

thedevelopmentofindustries.Degreecoursesofferedinmanycollegesand

universitiesaresooutdatedandirrelevantandimpracticalthatemployersas

wellasstudentsthemselvesfindithardtotranslatetheirbookknowledgeinto

realjobskills.Noemployerswanttoknowabouttheirmind-broadeningand

horizon-wideningqualities,andfewarcwillingtospendtimeandbudget

trainingrawrecruits.Secondly,thereisanoversupplyofgraduateswitha

certainspecialty,andthisoversupplyisincreasing.Alreadythereisan

overabundanceoflawyers,executivesecretaries,salesengineersandother

specialists.Yetcollegesandgraduateschoolscontinueeveryyeartoturnout

moregraduatesofthesespecialtiestocompeteforjobsthataren'tthere.The

resultisthatmanyofthemcannotentertheprofessionsforwhichtheyare

trainedandhavetotakeotherjobswhichevendonotrequireacollegedegree.

Ontheotherhand,thereistremendousneedforteachers,researchworkers

andpublicofficials.Butthedisparityinpaybetweenintellectualworkand

businessmanagementhasfrustratedthehopeandambitionofgraduateswho

majorineducation,administrationandliberalarts.Collegegraduatesare,so

tospeak,valuableresourcesinourcountryandnoonehastherighttowaste

thewealthoftalent.Theproblemstheyencounterinjobhuntingdeservemore

attentionfromthecollegesandthegovernment.Thecollegesshouldget

studentsoutoftheivorytowerandgeartheircoursestotherealneedsof

industryandbusiness;whilethegovernmentshouldprovidecollegegraduates

withmorevocationalopportunities,better'workingconditionsanddecent

salariessothatmoreandmoregraduateswouldliketodevotetheirlifeto

academicstudiesandscientificresearch.

2.CollegeStudents'MakingMoneyNowadaysitisratherfashionablefor

collegestudentstotakepart-timejobs.Theyworkintheftsparetimein

restaurantsbarsorhelpchildrenasatutor.Afewofthemevensetuptheir

owncompany.Thereareseveralreasonsforthemtotakepart-timejobs.First

theythinkmakingmoneythroughtheireffortscanhelpthemknowthevalue

oflaborsothattheycanbemoreindependentmoreconfidentandmore

economicallyminded.Inadditionmakingmoneyoffcampuscanhelpthem

getmoresocialexperiencerealizewhatthesocietyisreallylikewhichisgood

forthemtogetabetterjobandgraspthecommunicatingskills.Inmyopinion

tousstudentsstudyinghardisthemostimportanttask.Ifwehavefinished

ourlessonswemaytakesomepart-timejobs.Thusthemoreimportantthing

istokeepthebalancebetweenstudyandwork...Ifwecandealwithitwell

wecanbenefitalotfromit.(168words)CollegeStudents'MakingMoney

Nowadays,itisratherfashionableforcollegestudentstotakepart-timejobs.

Theyworkintheftsparetimeinrestaurants,bars,orhelpchildrenasatutor.

Afewofthemevensetuptheirowncompany.Thereareseveralreasonsfor

themtotakepart-timejobs.First,theythinkmakingmoneythroughtheir

effortscanhelpthemknowthevalueoflaborsothattheycanbemore

independent,moreconfidentandmoreeconomicallyminded.Inaddition,

makingmoneyoffcampuscanhelpthemgetmoresocialexperience,realize

whatthesocietyisreallylike,whichisgoodforthemtogetabetterjoband

graspthecommunicatingskills.Inmyopinion,tousstudents,studyinghard

isthemostimportanttask.Ifwehavefinishedourlessons,wemaytakesome

part-timejobs.Thus,themoreimportantthingistokeepthebalancebetween

studyandwork...Ifwecandealwithitwell,wecanbenefitalotfromit.

(168words)解析：［寫作思路］這篇作文屬于夾敘夾議的類型，其特點(diǎn)

是往往以一個社會問題或社會現(xiàn)象開頭，中間部分分析原因、列舉影響

或危害，最后提出解決問題的建議或者展望未來。因此我們可以按照這

種程序來展開文章。第一段指出目前高校學(xué)生兼職的現(xiàn)象很普及，可舉

在飯店、公司做兼職以及做家教辦公司等例子加以說明。第二段闡述造

成這種現(xiàn)象的原因：首先通過自己的努力掙些錢可以使學(xué)生們意識到勞

動的價值，從而獲得經(jīng)濟(jì)上的獨(dú)立。其次，在社會上兼職也可以使學(xué)生

更多地了解社會，為他們以后踏上社會做好準(zhǔn)備。第三段結(jié)合自己談我

們應(yīng)該怎么做：對于學(xué)生米講，最重要的還是先把學(xué)習(xí)學(xué)好；同時，還

要注意保持好二者的平衡。根據(jù)以上思路便可以形成以下的作文。

3.StudyunderaWork-StudyProgramNowadaysmoreandmorecollege

studentsaretakingpart-timejobsastheyhavemoretimeattheirdisposal.

Someareeagertogainexperienceandimprovetheirpracticalskills.

OthersStudyunderaWork-StudyProgramNowadaysmoreandmorecollege

studentsaretakingpart-timejobsastheyhavemoretimeattheirdisposal.

Someareeagertogainexperienceandimprovetheirpracticalskills.Others

4.WhatDoYoungPeopleThinkofChallenge?Withthefastdevelopmentof

theworldmoreandmorechallengeisinstoreforus.Challengemeansnot

onlyhardshipbutalsoopportunity.Sinceweareyoungpeopleandhavebright

futurebeforeusweshouldhavearightattitudetowardschallenge.Bynature

challengeisaninspirationtoourcreativepowerandanopportunitytoachieve

success.Themostimportantthingistodealwithchallengeproperly.Firstyou

mustbewellpreparedforachallengeatanytimebecauseyoucanneverin

mostcasesexpectwhenitcomesexactly.Secondwhenitreallycomesyou

shouldbecourageousenoughtotakeit.Nopainsnogains.Challengemeans

hardwork.Onlythroughhardworkcanyouachievesuccess.Finallyadequate

knowledgeiscalledfortomeetachallenge.Scienceandtechnologyis

developingatatremendousrateandthosewhocannotfollowitspacewillbe

leftbehind.Intoday'smodemsocietynoonecanavoidchallenges.Weare

thereforeobligedtoprepareourselvesadequatelyforthembyaccumulating

enoughknowledgeandbybuildingastrongbody.Onlywiththisstrong

determinationcanweadaptourselvestoanynecessarychangesinthisever-

changingworldwhichseemsfullofchallenges.WhatDoYoungPeopleThink

ofChallenge?Withthefastdevelopmentoftheworld,moreandmore

challengeisinstoreforus.Challengemeansnotonlyhardship,butalso

opportunity.Sinceweareyoungpeopleandhavebrightfuturebeforeus,we

shouldhavearightattitudetowardschallenge.Bynature,challengeisan

inspirationtoourcreativepowerandanopportunitytoachievesuccess.The

mostimportantthingistodealwithchallengeproperly.First,youmustbe

wellpreparedforachallengeatanytime,becauseyoucannever,inmost

cases,expectwhenitcomesexactly.Second,whenitreallycomes,youshould

becourageousenoughtotakeit.Nopains,nogains.Challengemeanshard

work.Onlythroughhardworkcanyouachievesuccess.Finally,adequate

knowledgeiscalledfortomeetachallenge.Scienceandtechnologyis

developingatatremendousrateandthosewhocannotfollowitspacewillbe

leftbehind.Intoday'smodemsociety,noonecanavoidchallenges.Weare,

therefore,obligedtoprepareourselvesadequatelyforthembyaccumulating

enoughknowledgeandbybuildingastrongbody.Onlywiththisstrong

determinationcanweadaptourselvestoanynecessarychangesinthisever-

changingworld,whichseemsfullofchallenges.

5.SayNotoDrunkDriving[1]Asisknowntoalldrunkdrivingisvery

dangerous.[2]Itputstorisksnotonlythedriver'slifebutalsothoseofother

innocentpeople.[3]DangerousasitistherehavebeeSayNotoDrunk

Driving[1]Asisknowntoall,drunkdrivingisverydangerous.[2]Itputsto

risksnotonlythedriver'slifebutalsothoseofotherinnocentpeople.[3]

Dangerousasitis,therehavebee解析：本文要求對酒醉駕駛的原因進(jìn)行

分析，并提出門己的看法。如果要求分析酒醉駕駛的不良后果，那就容

易點(diǎn)，可outline要求分析酒醉駕駛的原因，許多考生可能絞盡腦汁也

不知道該說什么好了。

范文從兩個角度分析原因：首先，經(jīng)濟(jì)上富裕了，開車的人更多了；其

次，司機(jī)主觀上對自己的駕駛技術(shù)太過門信。這兩條都很好，與醉駕密

切相關(guān)，很有說服力。

是否還有別的原因呢?——無酒不成宴的傳統(tǒng)習(xí)慣勺現(xiàn)代生活不合拍；

法律上對醉駕處罰力度不夠；酒席上人們的自控能力太差；等等。讀者

可以自己盡情展開自己的思路，寫出好文章來。

最后還要說明“我認(rèn)為“，當(dāng)然要與標(biāo)題SayN。的看法一致了。但要注

意如何表達(dá)。

Analysis

[1]由outline改寫而來，得來毫不費(fèi)功夫。

R1是[1]的支持句，putsthtodanger/risks是較好的搭配。

[3]還是描寫現(xiàn)象。其中暗含這種現(xiàn)象的存在原因，于是下文就可以就

這些原因進(jìn)行分析。注意這句話與前一段話之間有轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系，用了讓步

結(jié)構(gòu)。

[4][5]onereasonisthat；anotherreasonisthat...,銜接自然。

f6]注意tallvictimto的用法

[7]是作文標(biāo)題的再現(xiàn)!主題句。

[8]怎樣sayno呢?再提一下具體措施，文章就更加有力度了。也是⑺

的支持/擴(kuò)展句。

6.SinceAmericanstylefastfoodwasintroducedintoChinesemarketithas

beenspreadingatablazingspeed.ManypeopleliketoMcDonald'sandKFC

forhamburgersFrenchfriesandice-creamandtheybelievethatthewestern

foodareverydelicious.ButstillalotofpeopleprefertraditionalChinese

cuisineastheyholdit'shealthier.AsfarasIamconcernedIaminfavorof

thesecondopinion.FirstlybyeatingtraditionalChinesemealsonecankeep

awell-balanceddiet.FoodinMcDonald'sandKFCtypicallycontainhigh

caloriesandexcessivecalorieswillaccumulateintheformoffatinthebody

andmakepeopleoverweight.ButatypicalChinesemealprovidesonewith

enoughcarbohydratesvitaminsandproteinthatareneededtokeepthe

physicalfitnessofhumans.Alsopeopledon'tchewtheirfoodenoughwhen

theyhavewesternstylefastfood.Thisaddstotheburdenoftheirdigestive

system.ConverselyChinesepeopletypicallyhavesometeabeforethemain

coursesareserved.Andtheydon'trushthemselvesduringthemeal.Thisdoes

notonlybringthepleasureofenjoyingawonderfulmealbutalsoitmakes

themrelaxandfeelbetter.Thereforealthoughonecaneatwesternfastfood

forachangeeatingChinesefoodismorehealthyandenjoyable.Since

Americanstyle,fastfoodwasintroducedintoChinesemarket,ithasbeen

spreadingatablazingspeed.ManypeopleliketoMcDonald'sandKFCfor

hamburgers,Frenchfriesandice-creamandtheybelievethatthewesternfood

areverydelicious.ButstillalotofpeopleprefertraditionalChinesecuisine

astheyholdit'shealthier.AsfarasIamconcerned,Iaminfavorofthesecond

opinion.Firstly,byeatingtraditionalChinesemeals,onecankeepawell-

b