第19講 咨詢建議類作文寫作輔導(dǎo)-九年級(jí)譯林版英語暑假重難點(diǎn)精講及專項(xiàng)訓(xùn)練

九年級(jí)英語暑假重難點(diǎn)精講及專項(xiàng)訓(xùn)練第19講咨詢建議類作文寫作輔導(dǎo)第一部分寫作指導(dǎo)四步法寫建議類書面表達(dá)1.首先要知道給出建議的格式：常用書信格式；2.然后寫出提建議的原因；3.最后根據(jù)具體的情況給出明確的建議；4.寫出希望。常用表達(dá)英語中咨詢建議類作文通常以書信的形式呈現(xiàn)，英語書信類作文的常用表達(dá)：開頭部分：

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第二部分咨詢建議類作文專項(xiàng)訓(xùn)練（含范文解析）（一）假如你叫Ann，你的中國朋友小華發(fā)來email請(qǐng)教如何利用詞典學(xué)習(xí)英語。請(qǐng)參考截圖及注釋，根據(jù)提示回一封email。要點(diǎn)如下：1.根據(jù)示例，概括介紹詞條構(gòu)成；2.如何用詞典解決詞匯學(xué)習(xí)中的問題（至少兩點(diǎn)）；3.介紹詞典對(duì)英語學(xué)習(xí)的好處（至少兩點(diǎn)）。(takenfromanEnglish-Chinesedictionary注意：l.截圖內(nèi)容僅供參考，可以引用，不能照抄；2.文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)學(xué)校和姓名；3.詞數(shù)：100左右。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________（二）假定你是李華，你的英國筆友Mike最近因視力減退而感到不安，請(qǐng)你用英文給他寫封電子郵件，談?wù)勀阍诒Ｗo(hù)視力方面的一些做法。要點(diǎn)如下：1.經(jīng)常做戶外活動(dòng)；2.很少用電子產(chǎn)品；3.堅(jiān)持做眼保健操；4.……注意：1.詞數(shù)80-100；2.可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；3.文中不能出現(xiàn)與本人相關(guān)的信息；4.開頭和結(jié)尾已為你寫好，不計(jì)人總詞數(shù)。DearMike,I'msorrytolearnthatyoureyesightisgettingweaker.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua（三）湘西自治州正在進(jìn)行“美麗湘西”建設(shè)，我們要積極參與“美麗湘西”建設(shè)活動(dòng)，從小事做起，讓我們家鄉(xiāng)變得更美。作為學(xué)生，請(qǐng)以“Startoutsmall”為題，用英語寫一篇倡議書。要點(diǎn)提示：1.多種植樹木和花草，不亂砍伐樹木。2.購物時(shí)重復(fù)使用袋子。3.不亂扔垃圾，保持河流等干凈。4.遵守公共秩序，做文明學(xué)生。要求：1.80詞以上。文章的開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；2.文章須包括所有要點(diǎn)，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，使短文意思通順、語氣連貫、過渡自然。不得在作文中出現(xiàn)學(xué)校真實(shí)的名稱和學(xué)生的真實(shí)姓名。參考詞匯：protecttheenvironment；reusebags；plant；cutdown；throw；waitinline；bewie；oboeysartoutsnalStartoutsmallHello,everyone.WeshouldtryourbesttomakeourhometownXiangximorebeautifulandcomfortable.Whatcanwedoforourhometown?________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________（四）最近，你美國的筆友Tony在與同學(xué)的交往中遇到了煩惱，他寫郵件向你尋求幫助。請(qǐng)你以李華的身份給他寫一封郵件——提出你的一些建議。建議內(nèi)容包括：遇到問題多傾訴，多與他人分享情緒，尊重他人，與人為善，誠實(shí)守信……要求：l．詞數(shù)60-80，開頭結(jié)尾己給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；2．可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，使行文連貫；3．文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名、學(xué)校等信息。參考詞匯：sharesolverespectfriendlybehonesttoDearTony,I'msorrytohearthatyouhaveproblemswithclassmates:I'mgladtohelpyou.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Ihopeeverythingwillgowellwithyousoon.Yours,LiHua（五）每年的6月6日是我國的"愛眼日"，可見保護(hù)中小學(xué)生的視力非常重要，為此，學(xué)校將在英語文化節(jié)期間舉行一場(chǎng)"愛眼日"英語演講比賽．請(qǐng)你寫一篇英語演講稿，談?wù)勀銓?duì)保護(hù)視力重要性的認(rèn)識(shí)和建議．內(nèi)容：1．保護(hù)視力的重要性（請(qǐng)寫1點(diǎn)）2．對(duì)保護(hù)視力的建議：（1）閱讀時(shí)注意用眼衛(wèi)生；（2）少用電子產(chǎn)品；（3）常看綠色植物；（4）做眼保健操；（5）多做戶外運(yùn)動(dòng)．要求：1．結(jié)構(gòu)完整，表達(dá)通順，語言規(guī)范，書寫清晰；2．文中不得出現(xiàn)任何真實(shí)的人名，學(xué)校名等信息；3．詞數(shù)80左右，開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。參考詞匯：SightDay"愛眼日"；electronicproducts電子產(chǎn)品；eye-protectingexercises眼保健操Dearfriends,June6isourcountry'sSightDay_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Thankyou!（六）假如你是李華，想?yún)⒓覥hinaDaily舉辦的以"夢(mèng)想職業(yè)體驗(yàn)"為主題的2019年夏令營活動(dòng)。請(qǐng)給主辦人Mr.Smith寫一封介紹個(gè)人情況的申請(qǐng)郵件。內(nèi)容包括：1.個(gè)人信息與興趣愛好；2.夢(mèng)想職業(yè)與個(gè)人計(jì)劃。寫作要求：1.詞數(shù)90詞左右，開頭結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；2.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的學(xué)校名稱與姓名。DearMr.Smith,It'smypleasuretointroducemyselftoyou._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Idohopetojoinintheactivityandlookforwardtoyourreply．Bestwishes!YoursSincerely,LiHua參考答案（一）【參考范文】DearXiaohua,Gladtoreceiveyourletter.YouaskedmehowtouseadictionarytolearnEnglish.Herearesomeofmythoughts.Wordsinadictionaryarecalledentries.Eachentryhasfivesections,suchaspronunciation,partofspeech,definition,usageandwordgroup.Ofcourse,sometimesthesamewordhasdifferentpartsofspeechanddefinitions.Usingdictionariescansolveproblemsinvocabularylearning.Whenwemeetanewword,withthehelpofadictionary,wecannotonlyfindoutitspronunciation,butalsoknowitsmeaning.AdictionaryisofgreatbenefittoEnglishlearning.Firstofall,itcanhelpusunderstandthemeaningofwordsaccurately.Secondly,itcanenrichourknowledgeandexerciseourthinking.Finally,itcanhelpuslearntoexpressourideas.Ihopeit'shelpfultoyou.Yours,Ann【名師點(diǎn)評(píng)】這篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短語，為文章增色不少，如howtouseadictionary,suchas,tolearnEnglish,partofspeech,wordfamily,ofcourse,differentpartsof,withthehelpofadictionary,notonly...butalso,findout,firstofall,helpsb.do,learntodo等。而YouaskedmehowtouseadictionarytolearnEnglish./Whenwemeetanewword,withthehelpofadictionary,wecannotonlyfindoutitspronunciation,butalsoknowitsmeaning./Ihopeit'shelpfultoyou等復(fù)雜從句結(jié)構(gòu)的運(yùn)用，豐富了短文內(nèi)容，使表達(dá)多樣化，是本文的亮點(diǎn)。在學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié)牢記一些固定句式及短語，寫作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用，使文章表達(dá)更有邏輯性，也更富有條理。（二）【寫作思路】這篇作文要求我們以李華的身份，給自己的英國筆友Mike寫信，給他介紹一下你在保護(hù)視力方面的做法。審題可知，這篇短文應(yīng)使用一般現(xiàn)在是，第一人稱來敘述，內(nèi)容應(yīng)包括：首先講述題目中Mike的視力減退問題，并引出文章的主題；然后具體介紹自己在保護(hù)視力方面的做法，這一部分是文章的主體可以按照題目中所列的內(nèi)容進(jìn)行介紹，并對(duì)第四條進(jìn)行補(bǔ)充；最后提出自己的希望或祝愿。寫作時(shí)應(yīng)注意：短文按內(nèi)容表達(dá)的需要，分成三段，每一段一個(gè)主題；內(nèi)容應(yīng)包括題目中的所有要點(diǎn)，不能遺漏；課根據(jù)表達(dá)需要，增加細(xì)節(jié)內(nèi)容，使文章更加充實(shí)、豐富。其次應(yīng)注意文章的表達(dá)，不能根據(jù)漢語思維逐詞翻譯，句式應(yīng)符合英語的表達(dá)習(xí)慣。句子結(jié)構(gòu)應(yīng)完整，可以簡(jiǎn)單句結(jié)構(gòu)為基礎(chǔ)，穿插并列句、復(fù)合句以及其他復(fù)雜句式和結(jié)構(gòu)的使用，提升作文檔次。同時(shí)語句之間使用恰當(dāng)?shù)你暯映煞?，使行文連貫，表達(dá)流暢?！緟⒖挤段摹緿earMike,I’msorrytolearnthatyoureyesightisgettingweaker.I’dliketosharewithyousomewaysofprotectingeyesightinmydailylife.Atschool,Ioftengooutoftheclassroomtoplaywithmyclassmatesordophysicalexerciseduringthebreaks.Inmyfreetime,Ialsotryhardtoavoidusingthemobilephoneorcomputer.Youknow,thelighttheygiveoffisharmfultooureyes.Besides,doingeyeexercisesplaysanimportantroleinrelaxingmytiredeyes.Lastly,Iusuallyhavemyeyesexaminedeverytermtomakesuremyeyesstayhealthy.Ihopeyou’llfindmywayshelpful.Yours,LiHua【名師點(diǎn)評(píng)】這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，短文作者根據(jù)題目要求，對(duì)Mike介紹了自己在保護(hù)視力方面的一些做法。短文有以下幾個(gè)特點(diǎn)：首先文章內(nèi)容完整，包括了題目中要求的所有內(nèi)容，沒有遺漏要點(diǎn)。短文結(jié)構(gòu)清晰，共分成三段：第一段將題目中的寫作背景進(jìn)行了介紹，并引出了文章的話題；第二段具體介紹了自己的做法，這一段是文章的中心，所占篇幅最大。作者按照題目的提示進(jìn)行表述，并對(duì)細(xì)節(jié)進(jìn)行了拓展；第三段提出了自己的希望。其次短文中使用了正確的時(shí)態(tài)和人稱，語法規(guī)范，用詞準(zhǔn)確，句式結(jié)構(gòu)完整，符合英語的表達(dá)習(xí)慣。句式結(jié)構(gòu)比較復(fù)雜，使用了很多較高級(jí)的表達(dá)方式，包括動(dòng)詞短語、介詞短語、賓語從句、狀語從句、非謂語動(dòng)詞等。如I’dliketosharewithyousomewaysofprotectingeyesightinmydailylife.Atschool,Ioftengooutoftheclassroomtoplaywithmyclassmatesordophysicalexerciseduringthebreaks.、Inmyfreetime,Ialsotryhardtoavoidusingthemobilephoneorcomputer.Besides,doingeyeexercisesplaysanimportantroleinrelaxingmytiredeyes.等。（三）【參考范文】Hello，everyone．WeshouldtryourbesttomakeourhometownXiangximorebeautifulandcomfortable．Whatcanwedoforourhometown？（點(diǎn)題）Inordertomakeourhometownmorebeautiful，asstudents，Ithinkweshouldstartfromsmallthings．【高分句型一】（從小事做起）Firstofall，weshouldknowtheimportanceofprotectingtheenvironment．Weshouldplantmoretreesandflowersandnotcutdowntreesrandomly．Second，wehadbetterreusethebagwhenshopping．【高分句型二】Wecan'tthrowrubbishabout，andweshouldkeeptheriverscleanandsoon．Inaddition，wemustobeypublicrulesandbecivilizedstudents．Whenwegotonthebus，weshouldwaitinline．（具體做法）【名師點(diǎn)評(píng)】能夠根據(jù)提示進(jìn)行書面表達(dá)，能夠圍繞主題準(zhǔn)確使用一定的語法、詞匯、短語和句型等，清楚連貫地表達(dá)自己的思想，進(jìn)而完成寫作任務(wù)?！靖叻志湫鸵弧縄nordertomakeourhometownmorebeautiful，asstudents，Ithinkweshouldstartfromsmallthings．為了使我們的家鄉(xiāng)更美麗，作為學(xué)生，我認(rèn)為我們應(yīng)該從小事開始。inordertodosth為了做某事；Ithink+賓語從句?！靖叻志湫投縎econd，wehadbetterreusethebagwhenshopping．第二，我們最好重用當(dāng)購物袋。hadbetterdosth最好做某事。（四）【寫作思路】本文的寫作要求是一封電子郵件。首先，對(duì)于朋友在交友過程中遇到難題表示歉意。用情態(tài)動(dòng)詞提建議，最后希望能交到跟多朋友。然后，分步驟給出另外四個(gè)建議處理和同學(xué)們的關(guān)系。最后希望一切會(huì)好起來?！緟⒖挤段摹緿earTony,I'msorrytohearthatyouhaveproblemswithclassmates.I'mgladtohelpyou.Herearesomesuggestionsforyou.First,whenyouhavedifficulties,youshouldtalktoyourparents,yourteachersoryourfriendsandshareyoursadnessandhappinesswiththem.Theywillhelpyousolvetheproblem.Second,whenyougetalongwithyourfriends,youaresupposedtorespectthem.Third,youshouldbefriendlytopeoplearoundyou.Youcanhelpeachother.Lastbutnotleast,youhavetobehonesttoyourfriends.Thenyouwillmakemorefriends.Ihopeeverythingwillgowellwithyousoon.Yours,LiHua【名師點(diǎn)評(píng)】本文對(duì)于在和同學(xué)們交往中遇到的問題提出建議，分四步給出合理建議，最后指出對(duì)朋友要誠實(shí)，并希望能夠交到更多朋友。用到的短語有：sharesth.withsb.；getalongwith和……相處；besupposedtodo應(yīng)該做某事和Lastbutnotleast等，使得文章豐富多彩；長短句搭配合理。（五）【參考范文】Dearfriends,June6isourcountry'sSightDay.Asweknow,"Eyesarethewindowsofthesoul".Everyoneunderstands