讀后續(xù)寫+攢錢去埃旅游+講義 高三英語二輪復習

云南省一統(tǒng)讀后續(xù)寫第二節(jié)（滿分25分）閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。ItwasJuly2019andmymumRebeccawastakingmeona120kmwalkingholidayfromPortugaltoSpainasaspecialtreatformy10thbirthday.Oneday,whilewalkingalongthecoastalpathstaringoutattheAtlanticocean,IchattedawaytoMum.“WhenLexiturns10,areyougoingtotalkeheronatriplikethis?”Iasked,referringtomyseven-year-oldsister.MumsaidLexihadalreadyaskedtogotoSvalbardinthenorthofNorwaybecauseshewascrazyaboutpolarbears.AlthoughIwasstillonmyfirstspecialtrip,I'dbeenlearningaboutancientcivilizationsatschoolandknewI'dlovetoseesomerelicsintheflesh.SoIcontinuedsaying,“Whydon'tIgotoEgyptwhileyou'reinSvalbardwithLexi?”,addingthatmydad,Olaf,couldtakemethere.“Great,butI'mnotpayingforit.”Mumreplied,chuckling.“That'sfine.I'llpay,"Isaid,“I'llsaveupmypocketmoneyandgetajob.”Sothat'sexactlywhatIdid.ThoughIwastooyoungtodoanyotherpaidwork,Ihadmyownsolution.Istartedsavingmy$10-a-weekpocketmoney.Also,Iwashedmyparents’carormowedthelawnforextracash.In2020,wemovedtoPerth.Oneday,Isawapamphlet(小冊子)intheletterboxadvertisingajobdeliveringcatalogues.WhenItoldMumIwantedtodoit,shetriedtoputmeofftheidea,remindingmethattheworkwastiringandtime-consuming.Butwhenseeingthedeterminationinmyeyes,sheagreedtocallthem.Thankfully,myyoungagedidn'tbotherthem-Igotthejob.OnaMonday,amountainofcataloguesweredroppedoffatourhouse,whichshockedmealot.Itoldmyselftocalmdownanddedicatedtowork.Ittookmeninehourstosortthroughthem.Atfirst,Iusedmybikeandcarriedthecataloguesinmybackpacktodeliverthemto430housesinmyarea.Afterseveraldeliveries,Ifounditwasn'tveryefficient.____________Threeandahalfyearslater,Isavedamassive6500dollars,anddadandIflewtoCairo,Egypt.

_____________文本分析：主要人物：我是這個故事的主角，一個因夢想而努力存錢的孩子；父親Olaf，故事的最后，陪同我去埃及

主題：堅持和創(chuàng)新：故事強調(diào)了面對挑戰(zhàn)時堅持不懈的重要性以及使用創(chuàng)新來克服障礙的價值。它展示了決心和創(chuàng)造性問題解決的方式如何能夠?qū)崿F(xiàn)一個人的夢想。成長和成就：故事還涉及了通過努力和創(chuàng)新實現(xiàn)個人成長和目標達成的主題。

情節(jié)：故事從我十歲生日時與母親在葡萄牙到西班牙的徒步旅行開始，透露了我對埃及古文明的興趣和決定為實現(xiàn)去埃及的夢想而存錢。接著講述了我如何通過做家務(wù)和分發(fā)小冊子的工作來積累旅行基金。最后，我和父親實現(xiàn)了前往埃及的夢想，體驗了那里的文化和古跡。情節(jié)故事山：

開始：故事從我和母親在我10歲生日時沿著葡萄牙到西班牙的海岸線徒步旅行開始。我對古代文明的興趣促使我想要去埃及看看那里的遺跡，而我妹妹Lexi則夢想去挪威的斯瓦爾巴群島看北極熊。這標志了我決定為了實現(xiàn)自己的夢想而開始積攢錢的開始。

沖突：我意識到需要自己積攢足夠的錢去埃及。盡管開始時只能通過做家務(wù)來賺取額外的零用錢，但我沒放棄，并決定通過分發(fā)小冊子來賺更多的錢。我面對的挑戰(zhàn)包括母親對我從事這份工作的擔憂，工作本身的艱辛和時間消耗，以及最初使用自行車分發(fā)時的低效率和身體負擔。

高潮：面對分發(fā)小冊子的艱難，我終于通過某種方法大大減少了我的工作時間，使得任務(wù)變得不那么體力要求高，并且看到我的儲蓄賬戶的增長，讓我對實現(xiàn)夢想充滿了希望。

解決：通過幾年的堅持不懈和創(chuàng)新努力，我最終積攢了足夠的錢。三年半后，我和父親一起飛往了埃及，實現(xiàn)了我的夢想。埃及之行不僅滿足了我對古代文明的好奇心，也是我堅持和創(chuàng)造力的勝利。

結(jié)尾：在埃及的經(jīng)歷讓我深刻體會到了我的夢想成真的喜悅，我從中學到了通過努力和創(chuàng)造性思維，可以實現(xiàn)看似不可能的目標。這次旅行不僅是一個冒險，更是我成長過程中的一個重要里程碑，證明了持續(xù)努力的重要性和價值。參考范文：版本一Afterseveraldeliveries,Ifounditwasn'tveryefficient.

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a

heavybackpackandshuttlingacrossthestreets

inmyneighborhood,Iwasstrugglingtobikehard.

Exhaustedandhungry,Iwentbackhome

late

everyday.A

mountain

of

catalogues

wasstillthere,whichprovedwhatmymomhadsaidpreviouslywastrue.Theworkwasreallytiringandtime-consuming.Frankly,IwasnotsurewhetherIcouldmakeit,but

the

thoughtofsightseeingtherelicsintheflesh

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thatImadeadecisiontodedicatemyselftothework.Threeandahalfyearslater,Isavedamassive6500dollars,anddadandIflewtoCairo,Egypt.

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hadpaid

foritmyself,whichgavemeagreatsenseofachievement.Thankstomymom'ssupport.Ilearnedthevalueofpersistence

andtastedthe

joyofefforts.

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butIknewthere

were

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wonders

waitingformeto

explore

inthefuture.版本二Afterseveraldeliveries,Ifounditwasn'tveryefficient.

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inmyneighborhoodwasexhaustingandtime-consuming.Inspiteofmydoubts,IwasdeterminedtosaveupforatriptoEgypt,acountrythathadalwaysfascinatedme.SoIdedicatedmyselftothework,evenwhenitseemsoverwhelming.Threeandahalfyearslater,Isavedamassive6500dollars,anddadandIflewtoCairo,Egypt,

a

tripthatheldspecialsignificanceasIhadpaidforitmyself.Itfilledmewithgreatprideandaccomplishment.Thankstomymom'ssupport,Ilearnedtheimportanceofpersistenceandhardwork.

AswewanderedthroughtheancientrelicsinEgypt,

Iwastrulystruckbythehistoryandcultureofit.MydadandIhadanamazingtimeexploring,butIknewthatthiswasjustthebeginningofmyadventures.There

arecountlesswonderswaitingformetodiscoverand

experience

inthefuture.譯文經(jīng)過幾次送貨，我發(fā)現(xiàn)