三年級英語Writing【區(qū)一等獎】

WritingHowtogaincoherenceinyourwriting如何讓作文更有連貫性1.信息完整，覆蓋所有要點;2.恰當(dāng)使用較多的語法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯;3.有效地使用了語句間的連接成分，使全文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊。(可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié))寫作評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)句與句,段與段之間有一定的銜接Previouswritingexamples第二節(jié)書面表達(dá)〔總分值25分〕

假設(shè)你是李華，你的英國筆友David對國內(nèi)最近很受歡送的節(jié)目?中國詩詞大會?很感興趣，寫信向你了解該節(jié)目并請教學(xué)習(xí)古詩的方法。請你用英語給他回一封郵件。內(nèi)容包括：

1.節(jié)目簡介：2021年首播。今年的冠軍是來自上海的16歲中學(xué)生武亦姝。

2.節(jié)目意義。

3.學(xué)習(xí)古詩的建議，

注意:1.詞數(shù)100左右；

2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；

3.開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)；

4.參考詞匯：中國詩詞大會ChinesePoetryCompetitionComparethefollowingexamplesExampleA(要點一：節(jié)目簡介)TheTVshowiscalledChinesePoetryCompetition.Theshowwasfirstbroadcastin2021.Thisyear’schampionisWuYishu,sheisa16yearsoldstudentfromShanghai.

ExampleB(要點一：節(jié)目簡介)TheTVshow,knownasChinesePoetryCompetition,wasfirstbroadcastin2021.WuYishu,a16yearsoldstudentfromShanghai,becamechampionthisyear.

ComparethefollowingexamplesExampleC(要點一：節(jié)目簡介)TheTVshow,knownasChinesePoetryCompetition,wasfirstbroadcastin2021andsoonturnedoutasensation.Itwassoappealingandchallengingthatthousandsofcompetitorsacrossthecountrysignedup.Amongthem,WuYishu,astudentaged16fromShanghai,becamechampionthisyear.

Comparethefollowingexamples

ExampleA:TheTVshowiscalledChinesePoetryCompetition.Theshowwasfirstbroadcastin2021.Thisyear’schampionisWuYishu,sheisa16yearsoldstudentfromShanghai.ExampleB:TheTVshow,knownasChinesePoetryCompetition,wasfirstbroadcastin2021.WuYishu,a16yearsoldstudentfromShanghai,becamechampionthisyear.ExampleC:TheTVshow,knownasChinesePoetryCompetition,wasfirstbroadcastin2021andsoonturnedoutasensation.Itwassoappealingandchallengingthatthousandsofcompetitorsacrossthecountrysignedup.Amongthem,WuYishu,astudentaged16fromShanghai,becamechampionthisyear.

ExampleAExampleCExampleB意義連接形式連接增加細(xì)節(jié)信息合并簡單句形連的主要應(yīng)用〔一〕TheTVshowiscalledChinesePoetryCompetition.Theshowwasfirstbroadcastin2021.TheTVshow,knownasChinesePoetryCompetition,wasfirstbroadcastin2021.定語連接形連的主要應(yīng)用〔二〕Thisyear’schampionisWuYishu,sheisa16yearsoldstudentfromShanghai.WuYishu,a16yearsoldstudentfromShanghai,becamechampionthisyear.

同位語連接形連的主要應(yīng)用〔三〕Hefailedintheexamagain.Thismadehisfatherangry.Hefailedintheexamagain,whichmadehisfatherangry.定語從句連接形連的主要應(yīng)用〔四〕TheTVshow,knownasChinesePoetryCompetition,wasfirstbroadcastin2021andsoonturnedoutasensation.Itwassoappealingandchallengingthatthousandsofcompetitorsacrossthecountrysignedup.代詞連接狀語從句連接形連的主要應(yīng)用〔五〕其它常見連接詞〔詳見學(xué)案〕1、時間順序2、條件3、層次遞進4、轉(zhuǎn)折、讓步5、列舉、解釋6、因果7、觀點8、歸納總結(jié)

意連——通過增加合理的細(xì)節(jié)，使各信息要點產(chǎn)生一定關(guān)聯(lián)，建立意義上的連貫。

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假設(shè)你是李華，你剛從美國結(jié)束半年的英語學(xué)習(xí)回到國內(nèi)。請你用英語給美國同學(xué)James寫一封郵件，感謝他對你學(xué)習(xí)上的幫助。內(nèi)容包括：

1.感謝對方幫助；

2.詢問老師Mr.Smith的近況和聯(lián)系方式；

3.邀請對方春節(jié)來中國作客。

注意:1.詞數(shù)100左右；

2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；

3.開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)；

ExampleA

Bytheway,IalsowouldliketoinviteyoutocometoChinaduringthisSpringFestival.Ifyoucome,Ithinkyouwillhaveagoodtime.Examplesofkeypoint3ExampleB

TheChineseSpringFestivalisapproaching.SinceyouarefondofChineseculture,whynotcomeexperienceitintheflesh?JustcomeandhaveanicetripinChina!

Makerevisionstothefollowingwritingtogaincoherence.假定你是李華，在即將來臨的暑假，你父母和你打算去英國旅行。請給你的英國筆友Tony寫信，說說你的旅游方案，詢問他的個人意見，并希望能夠會面。注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。Makerevisionstothefollowingwritingtogaincoherence.DearTony：

Howiseverythinggoingwithyou?IamwritingtotellyoumyplantotravelinUKwithmyparents.WewillflytoLondon.Thereisfulloftouristattractions.WewillvisitsomeplacesofinteresttoknowmoreaboutthehistoryoftheUK.Andwewilltakesomephotostheretomemorizehowbeautifulthesceneis.Besides,wealsowanttotastethedeliciousfoodinsomefamousrestaurants.Ifitispossible,Iwilltakesomesnackstoyou.SoIhopethatwecanmeeteachotherandhaveatalk.IwouldliketoaskyousomequestionsaboutEngland.Whatdoyouthinkofmyplan?Canyoupleasegivemesomeniceadvice?Lookforwardtoyourearlyreply.DearTony:(Onepossiblerevision)

Howiseverythinggoingwithyou?MyparentsandIareplanningtotravelinUKduringthissummervacation,soIamwritingtotellyoumyplan.Ican’twaittogettoLondon,wheretherearesomeworldfamousplacesofinterest.Amongthesescenicspots,LondonBridgeisthefirstsightIwanttovisit,foritistheplacesunginsomenurseryrhymes.Besides,theBigBen,alandmarkofLondon,isalsoamust-seesiteinourvisitinglist.WhatIwillneveraffordtomissistheCambridgeUniversity,whichisadreampla