2024屆新高考英語(yǔ)熱點(diǎn)沖刺復(fù)習(xí)讀后續(xù)寫公開(kāi)課

2024屆新高考英語(yǔ)熱點(diǎn)沖刺復(fù)習(xí)

讀后續(xù)寫公開(kāi)課

Cruelremarksandwarmchickensoup

Learningpurpose：

學(xué)習(xí)并且運(yùn)用非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞doing/done/todo，以及with獨(dú)立主格結(jié)構(gòu)來(lái)描述人物的神態(tài)、心理、動(dòng)作和語(yǔ)言，使得續(xù)寫段落情節(jié)更具體，邏輯更連貫Step1：

Lead-inandthemaintaskoftoday’sclass

Lead-in：Anamecardofanexcellentgraduate

MaintasktalkaboutLiHua’sstorylearnsomesentencestructuresfromthetextfindwhochangedhislifeandwhattheydidfinishthelasttwoparagraphsusingthesentencestructureswe’velearnedtodayStep2:文章語(yǔ)言風(fēng)格分析

TaskRound1:非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞結(jié)構(gòu)做原因狀語(yǔ)1.

(realize)Ihadbeenlyingtoher,shecouldscarcelycontainherrage.2.

（encourage）byMr.Li’sbrightsmileandgentlewords,Imadeit.3.Onthefirstdayoftheuniversity,Iwasnervous

(introduce)myselfinfrontofmyclassmates.Conclusion1:非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞結(jié)構(gòu)做原因狀語(yǔ)的整句結(jié)構(gòu)

①.

RealizingEncouragedtointroduceSVO.doing+其它,done+其它,主動(dòng)被動(dòng)②.Sbbe/feeladjtodosth.

某人因?yàn)樽瞿呈露械健璓ractice1:1.

(fascinate)bythosegames,Ialwaysstayedinthecybercafetilllateatnightandspentmuchmoneybuyingequipments.2.Ifeltlucky

(have)suchakindclassteacher.3.看到我媽媽做的一切，我十分震驚，茫然不知所措。突然，我媽媽溫柔的聲音打破了沉默，“來(lái)，小伙子，喝點(diǎn)湯，這湯還是溫?zé)岬摹！?/p>

FascinatedtohaveSeeingwhatmymotherdid,Iwasfrozenwithshock,atalosswhattodo.Suddenly,mymum’ssoftvoicebrokethesilence,“Youngman,havesomesoup!It’sstillwarm.”TaskRound2:非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞結(jié)構(gòu)做結(jié)果狀語(yǔ)1.Afterstayinguplateplayinggamesthenightbefore,Ioftengotuplatenextmorning,

(arrive)lateand

(sleep)intheclass.2.ThatSundayafternoon,mymothercametoseeme,only

(find)thatIwasinthecybercafe.3.ThatSundayafternoon,mymothercametoseeme,only

(tell)thatIwasinthecybercafe.Conclusion2:非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞結(jié)構(gòu)做結(jié)果狀語(yǔ)的整句結(jié)構(gòu)

arrivingsleepingtofindtobetold①.自然而然的結(jié)果：句子，(doing+其他.)②.出乎意料的結(jié)果：svo，onlytodo+其它.tobedone+其它.主動(dòng)被動(dòng)Practice2:1.However,mymotherwasalwaysproudofme,not

(believe)inwhathesaid.2.仿寫：打完電話后，我走出了網(wǎng)吧，卻發(fā)現(xiàn)我媽媽正站在寒冷的冬日街頭，網(wǎng)吧門邊上。

believing

Afterthephonecall,Igotoutofthecybercafe,onlytofindmymotherstandingatthedoorinthecoldwinterstreet.TaskRound3:非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞結(jié)構(gòu)做伴隨狀語(yǔ)1.Inordertoaskformorepocketmoney,Icalledmymother,

(cheat)herthatIregisteredforatrainingprogram,andthebookscostsomuch.2.Iwasimmersedinthegame,

(surround)byagroupofgameenthusiasts,

(ignore)thewholeworld,includingmymother.Conclusion3:非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞結(jié)構(gòu)做伴隨狀語(yǔ)的整句結(jié)構(gòu)

cheatingsurroundedignoringSVO,主動(dòng)doing+其它.done+其它.被動(dòng)Practice3:1.Ashamed,IranoutofMr.Li’soffice,

(say)tomyselfthatIwouldnevertalktohimandneverattendhisclass.Soon,Mr.Licalledmymotherandtoldhereverything.

2.仿寫：感到懊悔，我緊緊地?fù)肀е鴭寢?，并且承諾以后同樣的事情以后再也不會(huì)發(fā)生了。

sayingFeelingregretful,Ihuggedmymotherastightlyaspossible,promisingthatthesamethingwouldneverhappenagain.TaskRound4:With引導(dǎo)的獨(dú)立主格結(jié)構(gòu)做狀語(yǔ)1.Withtears

(well)upinmyeyes,IrushedoutofMr.Li’soffice.2.Withapotofchickensoup

(cook)patientlyand

(pack)carefully,mymothercametoseeme.Conclusion4:With引導(dǎo)的獨(dú)立主格結(jié)構(gòu)做狀語(yǔ)的整句結(jié)構(gòu)

wellingcookedpacked句子.WithS獨(dú)++其它,主動(dòng)doingWithS獨(dú)++其它,done被動(dòng)Practice4:1.Butwithoutsayinganything,shewalkedout,waitingforme,withthesoup

(hold)tightlyinherarms.2.仿寫：第二天早上，隨著上課時(shí)間的臨近，她給我打了一個(gè)電話，說(shuō)：“早上好，小伙子！外面有點(diǎn)冷。去教室之前不要忘記穿上你的厚衣服呀?！?/p>

heldThenextmorning,withtheclasstimedrawingnear,shegavemeacall,saying,“Morning,youngman!It’scoldoutside.Don’tforgettoputonyourheavycoatbeforegoingtotheclassroom.”TaskRound5:Summary非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞doing/done/todo，with獨(dú)立主格結(jié)構(gòu)作狀語(yǔ)的整句結(jié)構(gòu)

1.非V做原因狀語(yǔ)

2.非V做結(jié)果狀語(yǔ)

3.非V做伴隨狀語(yǔ)：4.With引導(dǎo)的獨(dú)立主格結(jié)構(gòu)做狀語(yǔ):Step3：寫作思路梳理

Taskround6：rereadthestory,findclues,creatplots,makeanendandreachatopicAdmittedintomyidealuniversity,Iwaswildwithjoy.Onthefirstdayoftheuniversity,Ifeltnervous1(introduce)myselfinfrontofmyclassmates.2（encourage）byMr.Li’sbrightsmileandgentlewords,Imadeit.Ifeltlucky3(have)suchakindclassteacher.EncouragedtointroducetohaveUniversitylifewasfree,butbeingfreewasboring.Notknowingwhattodo,Istartedplayingcomputergames.4(fascinate)bythosegames,Ialwaysstayedinthecybercafetilllateatnightandspentmuchmoneybuyingequipments.Inordertoaskformorepocketmoney,Icalledmymother,5(cheat)herthatIregisteredforatrainingprogram,andthebookscostsomuch.FascinatedcheatingAfterstayinguplateplayinggamesthenightbefore,Ioftengotuplatenextmorning,6(arrive)lateand7(sleep)intheclass.Disappointed,Mr.Lishoutedatmeloudlywithcruelremarks,seizedbyanger.ScoldedbyMrListrictly,Iburstintotears.Ashamed,IranoutofMr.Li’soffice,8(say)tomyselfthatIwouldnevertalktohimandneverattendhisclass.Soon,Mr.Licalledmymotherandtoldhereverything.However,mymotherwasalwaysproudofme,not9(believe)inwhathesaid.arrivingsleepingsayingbelieving

ThatSundayafternoon,withapotofchickensoup9(cook)patientlyand10(pack)carefully,mymothercametoseeme,only11(find)thatIwasinthecybercafe.Iwasimmersedinthegame,12(surround)byagroupofgameenthusiasts,13(ignore)thewholeworld,includingmymother.14(realize)Ihadbeenlyingtoher,mymothercouldscarcelycontainherrage.Butwithoutsayinganything,shewalkedout,waitingforme,withthesoup15(hold)tightlyinherarms.cookedpackedtofindsurroundedRealizingheldignoringThenextmorning,withtheclasstimedrawingnear,shegavemeacall,…

Backtoschool,IexpressedmysincereapologiestoMr.Li.…

MaincharacterCluesPlotsEndingTopicLiHuaMom’swarmchickensoupMr.Li’scruelrewards續(xù)寫第一段：母親的雞湯使我幡然醒悟續(xù)寫第二段：Mr.Li的愛(ài)之深，責(zé)之切winthenationalscholarship,giveaspeechasadistinguishedstudentonthegraduationceremoryexpressgratitudeOnepossibleversion:

Thenextmorning,withtheclasstimedrawingnear,shegavemeacall,saying,“Hey,youngman!It’scoldoutside.Don’tforgettoputonyourheavycoatbeforegoingtotheclassroom.”Afterthephonecall,Igotoutofthecybercafe,onlytofindmymotherstandingatthedoorinthecoldwinterstreet.Seeingwhatmymotherdid,Iwasfrozenwithshock,atalosswhattodo.Suddenly,mymum’ssoftvoicebrokethesilence,“Youngman,havesomesoup!It’sstillwarm.”Feelingregretful,Ihuggedmymotherastightlyaspossible,promisingthatthesamethingwouldneverhappenagain.

Backtoschool,IexpressedmysincereapologiestoMr.Li.Withagentle