2024屆新高考英語熱點沖刺復習讀后續(xù)寫公開課

2024屆新高考英語熱點沖刺復習

讀后續(xù)寫公開課

Cruelremarksandwarmchickensoup

Learningpurpose：

學習并且運用非謂語動詞doing/done/todo，以及with獨立主格結構來描述人物的神態(tài)、心理、動作和語言，使得續(xù)寫段落情節(jié)更具體，邏輯更連貫Step1：

Lead-inandthemaintaskoftoday’sclass

Lead-in：Anamecardofanexcellentgraduate

MaintasktalkaboutLiHua’sstorylearnsomesentencestructuresfromthetextfindwhochangedhislifeandwhattheydidfinishthelasttwoparagraphsusingthesentencestructureswe’velearnedtodayStep2:文章語言風格分析

TaskRound1:非謂語動詞結構做原因狀語1.

(realize)Ihadbeenlyingtoher,shecouldscarcelycontainherrage.2.

（encourage）byMr.Li’sbrightsmileandgentlewords,Imadeit.3.Onthefirstdayoftheuniversity,Iwasnervous

(introduce)myselfinfrontofmyclassmates.Conclusion1:非謂語動詞結構做原因狀語的整句結構

①.

RealizingEncouragedtointroduceSVO.doing+其它,done+其它,主動被動②.Sbbe/feeladjtodosth.

某人因為做某事而感到…Practice1:1.

(fascinate)bythosegames,Ialwaysstayedinthecybercafetilllateatnightandspentmuchmoneybuyingequipments.2.Ifeltlucky

(have)suchakindclassteacher.3.看到我媽媽做的一切，我十分震驚，茫然不知所措。突然，我媽媽溫柔的聲音打破了沉默，“來，小伙子，喝點湯，這湯還是溫熱的。”

FascinatedtohaveSeeingwhatmymotherdid,Iwasfrozenwithshock,atalosswhattodo.Suddenly,mymum’ssoftvoicebrokethesilence,“Youngman,havesomesoup!It’sstillwarm.”TaskRound2:非謂語動詞結構做結果狀語1.Afterstayinguplateplayinggamesthenightbefore,Ioftengotuplatenextmorning,

(arrive)lateand

(sleep)intheclass.2.ThatSundayafternoon,mymothercametoseeme,only

(find)thatIwasinthecybercafe.3.ThatSundayafternoon,mymothercametoseeme,only

(tell)thatIwasinthecybercafe.Conclusion2:非謂語動詞結構做結果狀語的整句結構

arrivingsleepingtofindtobetold①.自然而然的結果：句子，(doing+其他.)②.出乎意料的結果：svo，onlytodo+其它.tobedone+其它.主動被動Practice2:1.However,mymotherwasalwaysproudofme,not

(believe)inwhathesaid.2.仿寫：打完電話后，我走出了網吧，卻發(fā)現我媽媽正站在寒冷的冬日街頭，網吧門邊上。

believing

Afterthephonecall,Igotoutofthecybercafe,onlytofindmymotherstandingatthedoorinthecoldwinterstreet.TaskRound3:非謂語動詞結構做伴隨狀語1.Inordertoaskformorepocketmoney,Icalledmymother,

(cheat)herthatIregisteredforatrainingprogram,andthebookscostsomuch.2.Iwasimmersedinthegame,

(surround)byagroupofgameenthusiasts,

(ignore)thewholeworld,includingmymother.Conclusion3:非謂語動詞結構做伴隨狀語的整句結構

cheatingsurroundedignoringSVO,主動doing+其它.done+其它.被動Practice3:1.Ashamed,IranoutofMr.Li’soffice,

(say)tomyselfthatIwouldnevertalktohimandneverattendhisclass.Soon,Mr.Licalledmymotherandtoldhereverything.

2.仿寫：感到懊悔，我緊緊地擁抱著媽媽，并且承諾以后同樣的事情以后再也不會發(fā)生了。

sayingFeelingregretful,Ihuggedmymotherastightlyaspossible,promisingthatthesamethingwouldneverhappenagain.TaskRound4:With引導的獨立主格結構做狀語1.Withtears

(well)upinmyeyes,IrushedoutofMr.Li’soffice.2.Withapotofchickensoup

(cook)patientlyand

(pack)carefully,mymothercametoseeme.Conclusion4:With引導的獨立主格結構做狀語的整句結構

wellingcookedpacked句子.WithS獨++其它,主動doingWithS獨++其它,done被動Practice4:1.Butwithoutsayinganything,shewalkedout,waitingforme,withthesoup

(hold)tightlyinherarms.2.仿寫：第二天早上，隨著上課時間的臨近，她給我打了一個電話，說：“早上好，小伙子！外面有點冷。去教室之前不要忘記穿上你的厚衣服呀?！?/p>

heldThenextmorning,withtheclasstimedrawingnear,shegavemeacall,saying,“Morning,youngman!It’scoldoutside.Don’tforgettoputonyourheavycoatbeforegoingtotheclassroom.”TaskRound5:Summary非謂語動詞doing/done/todo，with獨立主格結構作狀語的整句結構

1.非V做原因狀語

2.非V做結果狀語

3.非V做伴隨狀語：4.With引導的獨立主格結構做狀語:Step3：寫作思路梳理

Taskround6：rereadthestory,findclues,creatplots,makeanendandreachatopicAdmittedintomyidealuniversity,Iwaswildwithjoy.Onthefirstdayoftheuniversity,Ifeltnervous1(introduce)myselfinfrontofmyclassmates.2（encourage）byMr.Li’sbrightsmileandgentlewords,Imadeit.Ifeltlucky3(have)suchakindclassteacher.EncouragedtointroducetohaveUniversitylifewasfree,butbeingfreewasboring.Notknowingwhattodo,Istartedplayingcomputergames.4(fascinate)bythosegames,Ialwaysstayedinthecybercafetilllateatnightandspentmuchmoneybuyingequipments.Inordertoaskformorepocketmoney,Icalledmymother,5(cheat)herthatIregisteredforatrainingprogram,andthebookscostsomuch.FascinatedcheatingAfterstayinguplateplayinggamesthenightbefore,Ioftengotuplatenextmorning,6(arrive)lateand7(sleep)intheclass.Disappointed,Mr.Lishoutedatmeloudlywithcruelremarks,seizedbyanger.ScoldedbyMrListrictly,Iburstintotears.Ashamed,IranoutofMr.Li’soffice,8(say)tomyselfthatIwouldnevertalktohimandneverattendhisclass.Soon,Mr.Licalledmymotherandtoldhereverything.However,mymotherwasalwaysproudofme,not9(believe)inwhathesaid.arrivingsleepingsayingbelieving

ThatSundayafternoon,withapotofchickensoup9(cook)patientlyand10(pack)carefully,mymothercametoseeme,only11(find)thatIwasinthecybercafe.Iwasimmersedinthegame,12(surround)byagroupofgameenthusiasts,13(ignore)thewholeworld,includingmymother.14(realize)Ihadbeenlyingtoher,mymothercouldscarcelycontainherrage.Butwithoutsayinganything,shewalkedout,waitingforme,withthesoup15(hold)tightlyinherarms.cookedpackedtofindsurroundedRealizingheldignoringThenextmorning,withtheclasstimedrawingnear,shegavemeacall,…

Backtoschool,IexpressedmysincereapologiestoMr.Li.…

MaincharacterCluesPlotsEndingTopicLiHuaMom’swarmchickensoupMr.Li’scruelrewards續(xù)寫第一段：母親的雞湯使我幡然醒悟續(xù)寫第二段：Mr.Li的愛之深，責之切winthenationalscholarship,giveaspeechasadistinguishedstudentonthegraduationceremoryexpressgratitudeOnepossibleversion:

Thenextmorning,withtheclasstimedrawingnear,shegavemeacall,saying,“Hey,youngman!It’scoldoutside.Don’tforgettoputonyourheavycoatbeforegoingtotheclassroom.”Afterthephonecall,Igotoutofthecybercafe,onlytofindmymotherstandingatthedoorinthecoldwinterstreet.Seeingwhatmymotherdid,Iwasfrozenwithshock,atalosswhattodo.Suddenly,mymum’ssoftvoicebrokethesilence,“Youngman,havesomesoup!It’sstillwarm.”Feelingregretful,Ihuggedmymotherastightlyaspossible,promisingthatthesamethingwouldneverhappenagain.

Backtoschool,IexpressedmysincereapologiestoMr.Li.Withagentle