和爸爸騎馬遇野兔讀后續(xù)寫講評(píng)課課件高三英語(yǔ)二輪復(fù)習(xí)

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VacationLikeNeverBefore

Itwassummer,andmy

dad

wantedtotreatustoavacationlikeneverbefore.Hedecidedtotakemeona

triptotheWildWest.

WetookaplanetoAlbuquerque,abigcityinthestateofNewMexico.WereachedAlbuquerqueinthelateafternoon.

UnclePaul,

mydad’sfriend,pickedusupfromtheairportanddroveustohisfarminPecos.

HiswifeTinacookedusadeliciousdinnerandwegottoknowhissonsRyanandKyle.MydadandIspentthenightintheguestroomofthe

farmhouse

listeningtothefrogsandwaterrollingdownthe

rivernearby.Veryearlyinthemorning,UnclePaulwokeusuptohavebreakfast.“Thedaystartsatdawnonmyfarm,”hesaid.Afterbreakfast,IwenttohelpAuntTina

feed

thechickens,whilemydadwentwithUnclePaultotakethe

sheep

outtograze(吃草).IwasimpressedtoseemydadandUnclePaulridinghorses.Theylookedreallycool.一.輸入標(biāo)題story頁(yè)碼1

Intheafternoon,IaskedUnclePaulifIcouldtakeahorseride,andhesaidyes,aslongasmydadwentwithme.Iwasn’tgoingtotakeahorseridebymyselfanyway.So,mydadandIputonournewcowboyhats,gotonourhorses,andheadedslowlytowardsthemountain.“Don’tbe

late

forsupper,”UnclePaulcried,“andkeeptothe

track

sothatyoudon’t

getlost!”“OK!”Mydadcriedback.AfterawhileUnclePaulandhisfarmwereoutof

sight.Itwassopeacefulandquietandthecolorsofthebrownrocks,thedeepgreenpinetrees,

andthelateafternoonsunmixedtocreateamagicscene.Itlookedlikeabeautifulwoven(編織的)blanketspreadoutuponthegroundjustforus.trackn.pathorroughroad,esponemadebyvehicles,peopleoranimals路,小徑（尤指車輛﹑人或動(dòng)物造成的一.輸入標(biāo)題story頁(yè)碼2故事情節(jié)頁(yè)碼3一.輸入標(biāo)題概要頁(yè)碼4MydadtreatedmetoaspecialsummervacationinUnclePaul’sfarmintheWildWest,whereIexperiencedmyfirsthorse-ridingwithmyfather’scompany.一.輸入標(biāo)題續(xù)寫頁(yè)碼6

Paragaph1:Suddenlyalittlerabbitjumpedoutinfrontofmyhorse.____________________________________________________Paragraph2:Wehadnoideawherewewereanditgotdark._____________Thecontent(內(nèi)容)ofparagraph1:Howdidwegetlost?Thecontentofparagraph2:Howdidwefindourwayback?路上遇到一只兔子我們迷路了**續(xù)寫思路——第一段關(guān)注第一段的首句+第二段的首句（第二段的首句通常是第一段故事的結(jié)果）第一段首句：Suddenlyalittlerabbitjumpedoutinfrontofmyhorse.第二段首句：Wehadnoideawherewewereanditwasgettingdark.因果關(guān)系:思路:——因?yàn)橥米拥耐蝗怀霈F(xiàn)，我們迷路了?！米拥某霈F(xiàn)導(dǎo)致了什么結(jié)果？**情節(jié)總結(jié)已知情節(jié)我和爸爸到西部荒野，體驗(yàn)農(nóng)村生活，我看到騎馬覺得很酷，感到好奇，并最終獲準(zhǔn)和爸爸一起騎馬去山里。本課內(nèi)容單擊此處輸入你的正文，文字是您思想的提煉，為了最終演示發(fā)布的良好效果，請(qǐng)盡量言簡(jiǎn)意賅的闡述觀點(diǎn)；根據(jù)需要可酌情增減文字，以便觀者可以準(zhǔn)確理解您所傳達(dá)的信息。單擊此處輸入你的正文，文字是您思想的提煉，為了最終演示發(fā)布的良好效果，請(qǐng)盡量言簡(jiǎn)意賅的闡述觀點(diǎn)；根據(jù)需要可酌情增減文字，以便觀者可以準(zhǔn)確理解您所傳達(dá)的信息。

未知情節(jié)兔子突然出現(xiàn)后發(fā)生了什么？如何找到回到農(nóng)場(chǎng)的路？最終回到保羅叔叔家了嗎？**分析故事情節(jié)、線索課程導(dǎo)入IntroductionRisingactionClimaxResolutionFallingactionDadandIwenttothewestandexperiencedalifeonthefarm(excited)IwentonahorseridewithDad(overjoyed)Arabbitjumpedout(nervous?\excited?)Wegotlost

(worried)Wefoundourwayhomeornot(thrilled?\frustrated?)Wereachedthefarmornot(relieved?\frightened?)首句精研：研讀兩段給出句，想想它們給我們提供了哪些續(xù)寫線索？Para.1:Suddenlyalittlerabbitraninfrontofmyhorse..Para.2:Wehadnoideawherewewereanditgotdark.1.Howdidtheygetlost?2.Wheredidthehorsescarrythem?3.Howdidtheyfeelaboutanddealwiththesituation?1.Didtheyeventuallymakeitbacktothefarmhouse?2.Howdidtheygetback?3.Howdidtheyfeel?提問(wèn)**分析文章細(xì)節(jié)MydadandIspentthenightintheguestroomofthefarmhouselisteningtothefrogsandwaterrollingdowntherivernearby.“Don'tbelateforsupper,”UnclePaulcried,“andkeeptothetracksothatyoudon'tgetlost!"Therewasarivernearby.(Para4)So,mydadandIputonournewcowboyhats,gotonourhorses,andheadedslowlytowardsthemountains.Thewriterandhisfatherwereondifferenthorses.**Arabbitjumpedout.Ichasedtherabbit.因果關(guān)系:——因?yàn)橥米拥耐蝗怀霈F(xiàn)，我們迷路了。思路:——兔子的出現(xiàn)導(dǎo)致了什么結(jié)果？Myhorsepanickedandranaway.Wegotlost.Wegotlost.Wefoundourwayhomebyfollowingtheriver.UnclePaulcametotakeushome.Wereturnedtothefarm.一.輸入標(biāo)題Logic頁(yè)碼71.Howdidtheygetlost?2.Wheredidthehorsescarrythem?3.Howdidtheyfeelaboutanddealwiththesituation?1.Didtheyeventuallymakeitbacktothefarmhouse?2.Howdidtheygetback?3.Howdidtheyfeel?*首句呼應(yīng)上文中間刻畫細(xì)節(jié)尾句銜接過(guò)渡首句呼應(yīng)上文中間刻畫細(xì)節(jié)尾句萃章顯志向Thehorsegotscaredor...XXXThethingsIandmyfatherdidXXX/feltWegotlost.Ifeelfearwhengotlostsay\do\feelfinallygothome，unforgettableexperience

Para1Para2Para1Para21.時(shí)間表達(dá)2.情感表達(dá)3.心理活動(dòng)；4.動(dòng)作描寫；5.事件及經(jīng)過(guò)；6.感悟；7.可套用的句式。Justthen,…=Justatthatmoment

正在那時(shí)擴(kuò)寫句子1.我追著兔子跑2.馬跑的很快3.我不想摔下馬4.爸爸讓我平靜下來(lái)5.我不想馬傷到兔子

6.爸爸想到方法7.看燈光，我們感到激動(dòng)。8.我感到特別害怕.9.我希望我們不會(huì)看到餓狼。翻譯1.我追著兔子跑我毫不猶豫地追著兔子跑從來(lái)沒(méi)有見過(guò)這么可愛的動(dòng)物以至于我毫不猶豫地追著她。IhadneverinlifeseensolovelyacreaturethatIchaseditwithouthesitation.NeverbeforeinmylifehadIseensolovelyacreaturethatIchaseditwithouthesitation/thinkingtwice.so...that...如此...以至于...never倒裝句

翻譯2.馬跑的很快馬被嚇?biāo)耘艿暮芸煳业鸟R嚇得跑得比我想象的還快。MyhorsewassostartledthatitranfasterthanIcouldimagine.SostartledwasmyhorsethatitranfasterthanIcouldimagine.so...that...倒裝句翻譯3.我不想摔下馬我努力保持平衡不讓自己掉下馬盡管我很害怕，我努力保持平衡不讓自己掉下馬。ThoughIwasfrightened,Itriedtokeepmybalancetopreventmyselffromfallingoff.FrightenedasIwas,Itriedtokeepmybalancetopreventmyselffromfallingoff.sparednoeffortstokeepmybalance,preventingmefromfallingoff.4.爸爸讓我平靜下來(lái)爸爸盡力讓我平靜下來(lái)爸爸感覺到了我的恐懼和擔(dān)憂，盡力讓我平靜下來(lái)。Myfathersensedmyfearandconcerns,andhetriedtocalmmedown.Sensingmyfearandconcerns,mydadtriedtocalmmedown.非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞：v-ing作狀語(yǔ)佳句翻譯5.我大聲喊著，猛地一拉韁繩，防止馬兒傷到這個(gè)小東西。（yellout,pullbackthereins,v-ing）6.我?guī)缀跻紳⒘?，突然爸爸想到了一個(gè)好辦法。7.一看到遠(yuǎn)處的微弱燈光，我們感到一陣激動(dòng)。8.想到我們被困森林，沒(méi)法找到回去的路，我感到特別害怕.9.帶著懷疑的念頭，我希望我們不會(huì)看到餓狼。5.我大聲喊著，猛地一拉韁繩，防止馬兒傷到這個(gè)小東西。（yellout,pullbackthereins,非謂語(yǔ)v-ing）Iyelledoutloudly,pullingbackthereinsinordertostopthehorsefromhurtingthelittlecreature.6.我?guī)缀跻紳⒘?，突然爸爸想到了一個(gè)好辦法。（beontheedgeof...when...）Iwasalmostonthevergeof

breakingdownwhenagoodideahitmyfather.7.一看到遠(yuǎn)處的微弱燈光，我們感到一陣激動(dòng)。（themoment/minute;arushof...）Themomentwesawthefaintlightinthedistance,wefeltarushofexcitement.8.想到我們被困森林，沒(méi)法找到回去的路，我感到特別害怕.Atthethought

thatwewerestuckinthedarkforestunabletofindthewayout,Iwasseizedwithastrongsenseofhorror.9.帶著懷疑的念頭，我希望我們不會(huì)看到餓狼。Withdoubtfulthoughtsgoingthroughmyhead,Ihopedthatwewouldn’tseehungrywolves.1.(狀語(yǔ)從句+賓語(yǔ)從句)但是在我們跳下馬之前，我們發(fā)現(xiàn)我們已經(jīng)偏離了常規(guī)（beofthebeatentrack)，迷路了。2.(名詞性從句)又累又餓，我在想我們能不能找到回去的路。3.（非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞作狀語(yǔ)）我一直叫喊著求助，希望我的叫喊能被聽到，但是沒(méi)有回應(yīng)。Butbeforewejumpedoffthehorses,wefoundthatwehadbeenoffthebeatentrackandgotlost.Exhaustedandhungry,Iwonderedifwecouldfindourwayback.Ikeptshoutingforhelp,hopingmyshoutscouldbeheardbysomeone,buttherewasnoreply.

1.（獨(dú)立主格結(jié)構(gòu)做原因狀語(yǔ)）這一切即將到來(lái)，毫無(wú)預(yù)兆，我感到恐懼。Ending:

Afterwhatseemedlikeages,thefarmhousefinallycameinsight.Finally,wearrivedatthefarmhouse,safeandsound.Whatanight!Finally,wearrivedhomesafelyjustintimeforsupper.Whatathrillingbutmemorablevacationitwas.Itturnsoutthereisalwaysawayoutofanyplight(困境)aslongaswestaycalm.

Reflectingonthismemory,Iregardedthisexperienceasmyspecialadventurewithmydad.Para.2:Wehadnoideawherewewereanditgotdark.自然式結(jié)尾留白式結(jié)尾呼應(yīng)原文式結(jié)尾點(diǎn)題式結(jié)尾反思哲理式結(jié)尾feelingdialogue（內(nèi)心獨(dú)白）actionsurroundingsExample

Wehadnoideawherewewereanditwasgettingdark.Thecoldwindwasblowinghard

andthedarknessmademescared.“Dad,whatcanwedo?”“Allisgoingwell!”

Dadans