14 旅游話題 中考英語滿分作文賞析

14旅游話題NO.1（2022·湖北武漢·中考真題）假如你是李欣，你與Bob叔叔及其家人約定了一起去北京旅行。請你給Bob叔叔寫一封英文電子郵件，告知你的旅行安排。內容要點如下：1.6月30日下午2:00機場見；2.酒店已預訂好，直接前往；3.第二天觀看升旗儀式；4.游長城，吃北京烤鴨；5.補充一兩點與旅行有關的信息或想法。注意：文中不得透露個人真實姓名和學校；詞數(shù)60—80；開頭和結尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。參考詞匯：bookv.預訂

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flag-raisingceremony升旗儀式【滿分作文賞析】DearUncleBob,I’msogladtohearfromyouaboutvisitingBeijing.Here’sthetripplan.We’llmeetattheairportat2p.m.onJune30th.WecangotothehoteldirectlytohavearestasI’vealreadybookedtherooms.Thenextdaywe’llwatchtheflag-raisingceremonyatTian’anmenSquareearlyinthemorning.Itmustbeamazing!WhatabouttheGreatWall?It’sworthvisitingandyou’llbeimpressed.Asfordinner,we’llhavethedeliciousfood,Beijingduck.Honestly,Iamgettingexcitedaboutthetrip.LookforwardtomeetingallofyouinBeijing.LiXin【解析】1.題干解讀：題目要求根據(jù)內容要點及參考詞匯給Bob叔叔回一封郵件，告知Bob叔叔自己對旅行的安排。2.寫作指導：郵件的開頭和結尾已給出，寫作時要補全正文內容，要以第一人稱為主，時態(tài)多用一般將來時。郵件可分為兩段式：第一段介紹具體的計劃；第二段表達自己的期待。要做到要點齊全，無單詞拼寫和語法錯誤。NO.2（2022·浙江紹興·中考真題）假設你是劉軍，在上周末的鄉(xiāng)村旅游中，你發(fā)現(xiàn)了一些游客的不文明行為。請根據(jù)下表信息給某英文報VOICE欄目的編輯寫一封郵件，反映這些問題并提出建議。UncivilizedbehaviorsSuggestions●threwrubbisheverywhere●pickedflowers●climbedtrees●putrubbishintobins●…注意：（1）郵件內容必須包括上表所有信息，可適當增加細節(jié)；（2）你的建議至少兩條；（3）詞數(shù)：80—100；（4）郵件開頭和結尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。參考詞匯：不文明行為uncivilizedbehavior；編輯editorDeareditor,IwasshockedtoseesomeuncivilizedbehaviorswhenItookatriptoavillagelastweekend._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yourssincerely,LiuJun【滿分作文賞析】Deareditor,IwasshockedtoseesomeuncivilizedbehaviorswhenItookatriptoavillagelastweekend.Somevisitorsthrewrubbisheverywhereandleftplasticbagsflyingaround.Somepickedflowerswithoutpermissiontotakephotossothattheycouldshowoffonline.Andsomeclimbedtreesforfun,whichmightresultinseriousaccidents.Ithinkitwrongtoenjoyoneselfatthecostofothers.Visitorsaresupposedtoprotecttheenvironment,likeputtingrubbishintoproperbins.Andtheyshouldbecarefulnottocausetroubletothelocalsandkeepawayfromdanger.Inthisway,agreener,cleanerandmorecivilizednewvillagewillbethereforusalltoenjoy.YourssincerelyLiuJun【解析】1.題干解讀：本文主要以題干表格中的內容講述一些游客的不文明行為并提出相關的建議，可適當增加細節(jié)。2.寫作指導：本文以一般過去時和一般現(xiàn)在時為主，人稱以第三人稱為主。第一段主要描述自己發(fā)現(xiàn)的游客的一些不文明行為；第二段提出自己的建議。寫作時運用不同的句式和短語使文章層次清晰、邏輯清楚，做到無單詞拼寫和語法錯誤。NO.3（2022·內蒙古包頭·中考真題）假定你是李華，下周你的英國朋友Alan要來北京游玩，并發(fā)來如下郵件。請給Alan回復一封郵件。Hi,NextweekI’llbewithyouinBeijing.Ican’twait!Wecoulddolotsofexcitingthingstogether.AndnowIneedtopackformytrip.WhatshouldIbringwithme?Ialwaystakelotsofthingsinmybagandcan’tfindwhatIreallywant!PleasetellmehowIcouldpack.SinceIaminterestedinhistoryandcultureofChina,Iwanttoknowwherewewillgo.I’dliketogetyousomesouvenirsfromwhereIlive.Whatwouldyoulikemetogetyou?I’msoexcitedaboutthetrip!Seeyousoon.AlanMakealist（T-shirts,sunglasses…）Placesmallbagsinsidebigbags…Placesofinterest（thePalaceMuseum,theGreatWall…）Postcards,books…參考詞匯：packv.打包

souvenirn.紀念品注意：1.詞數(shù)90左右，開頭和結尾已經寫好，不計入總詞數(shù)；2.可適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫；3.文中不得出現(xiàn)反映考生信息的真實人名、地名等內容。HiAlan,I’msohappytogetyouremailsayingthatyou’recomingtovisitusnextweek.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________I’mlookingforwardtomeetingyou!LiHua【滿分作文賞析】HiAlan,I’msohappytogetyouremailsayingthatyou’recomingtovisitusnextweek.Sinceyouaregoingonalongflight,Isuggestyoumakealistofthingsyoutake.Itisabithotinsummerhere.SoyoucantakeT-shirtsandsunglasseswithyou.Doyouhatethatfeelingwhenyoucan’tfindwhatyou’relookingforinyourbag?M