14 旅游話題 中考英語(yǔ)滿分作文賞析

14旅游話題NO.1（2022·湖北武漢·中考真題）假如你是李欣，你與Bob叔叔及其家人約定了一起去北京旅行。請(qǐng)你給Bob叔叔寫(xiě)一封英文電子郵件，告知你的旅行安排。內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)如下：1.6月30日下午2:00機(jī)場(chǎng)見(jiàn)；2.酒店已預(yù)訂好，直接前往；3.第二天觀看升旗儀式；4.游長(zhǎng)城，吃北京烤鴨；5.補(bǔ)充一兩點(diǎn)與旅行有關(guān)的信息或想法。注意：文中不得透露個(gè)人真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校；詞數(shù)60—80；開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。參考詞匯：bookv.預(yù)訂

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flag-raisingceremony升旗儀式【滿分作文賞析】DearUncleBob,I’msogladtohearfromyouaboutvisitingBeijing.Here’sthetripplan.We’llmeetattheairportat2p.m.onJune30th.WecangotothehoteldirectlytohavearestasI’vealreadybookedtherooms.Thenextdaywe’llwatchtheflag-raisingceremonyatTian’anmenSquareearlyinthemorning.Itmustbeamazing!WhatabouttheGreatWall?It’sworthvisitingandyou’llbeimpressed.Asfordinner,we’llhavethedeliciousfood,Beijingduck.Honestly,Iamgettingexcitedaboutthetrip.LookforwardtomeetingallofyouinBeijing.LiXin【解析】1.題干解讀：題目要求根據(jù)內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)及參考詞匯給Bob叔叔回一封郵件，告知Bob叔叔自己對(duì)旅行的安排。2.寫(xiě)作指導(dǎo)：郵件的開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出，寫(xiě)作時(shí)要補(bǔ)全正文內(nèi)容，要以第一人稱(chēng)為主，時(shí)態(tài)多用一般將來(lái)時(shí)。郵件可分為兩段式：第一段介紹具體的計(jì)劃；第二段表達(dá)自己的期待。要做到要點(diǎn)齊全，無(wú)單詞拼寫(xiě)和語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤。NO.2（2022·浙江紹興·中考真題）假設(shè)你是劉軍，在上周末的鄉(xiāng)村旅游中，你發(fā)現(xiàn)了一些游客的不文明行為。請(qǐng)根據(jù)下表信息給某英文報(bào)VOICE欄目的編輯寫(xiě)一封郵件，反映這些問(wèn)題并提出建議。UncivilizedbehaviorsSuggestions●threwrubbisheverywhere●pickedflowers●climbedtrees●putrubbishintobins●…注意：（1）郵件內(nèi)容必須包括上表所有信息，可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)；（2）你的建議至少兩條；（3）詞數(shù)：80—100；（4）郵件開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。參考詞匯：不文明行為uncivilizedbehavior；編輯editorDeareditor,IwasshockedtoseesomeuncivilizedbehaviorswhenItookatriptoavillagelastweekend._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yourssincerely,LiuJun【滿分作文賞析】Deareditor,IwasshockedtoseesomeuncivilizedbehaviorswhenItookatriptoavillagelastweekend.Somevisitorsthrewrubbisheverywhereandleftplasticbagsflyingaround.Somepickedflowerswithoutpermissiontotakephotossothattheycouldshowoffonline.Andsomeclimbedtreesforfun,whichmightresultinseriousaccidents.Ithinkitwrongtoenjoyoneselfatthecostofothers.Visitorsaresupposedtoprotecttheenvironment,likeputtingrubbishintoproperbins.Andtheyshouldbecarefulnottocausetroubletothelocalsandkeepawayfromdanger.Inthisway,agreener,cleanerandmorecivilizednewvillagewillbethereforusalltoenjoy.YourssincerelyLiuJun【解析】1.題干解讀：本文主要以題干表格中的內(nèi)容講述一些游客的不文明行為并提出相關(guān)的建議，可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)。2.寫(xiě)作指導(dǎo)：本文以一般過(guò)去時(shí)和一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主，人稱(chēng)以第三人稱(chēng)為主。第一段主要描述自己發(fā)現(xiàn)的游客的一些不文明行為；第二段提出自己的建議。寫(xiě)作時(shí)運(yùn)用不同的句式和短語(yǔ)使文章層次清晰、邏輯清楚，做到無(wú)單詞拼寫(xiě)和語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤。NO.3（2022·內(nèi)蒙古包頭·中考真題）假定你是李華，下周你的英國(guó)朋友Alan要來(lái)北京游玩，并發(fā)來(lái)如下郵件。請(qǐng)給Alan回復(fù)一封郵件。Hi,NextweekI’llbewithyouinBeijing.Ican’twait!Wecoulddolotsofexcitingthingstogether.AndnowIneedtopackformytrip.WhatshouldIbringwithme?Ialwaystakelotsofthingsinmybagandcan’tfindwhatIreallywant!PleasetellmehowIcouldpack.SinceIaminterestedinhistoryandcultureofChina,Iwanttoknowwherewewillgo.I’dliketogetyousomesouvenirsfromwhereIlive.Whatwouldyoulikemetogetyou?I’msoexcitedaboutthetrip!Seeyousoon.AlanMakealist（T-shirts,sunglasses…）Placesmallbagsinsidebigbags…Placesofinterest（thePalaceMuseum,theGreatWall…）Postcards,books…參考詞匯：packv.打包

souvenirn.紀(jì)念品注意：1.詞數(shù)90左右，開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)寫(xiě)好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；2.可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；3.文中不得出現(xiàn)反映考生信息的真實(shí)人名、地名等內(nèi)容。HiAlan,I’msohappytogetyouremailsayingthatyou’recomingtovisitusnextweek.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________I’mlookingforwardtomeetingyou!LiHua【滿分作文賞析】HiAlan,I’msohappytogetyouremailsayingthatyou’recomingtovisitusnextweek.Sinceyouaregoingonalongflight,Isuggestyoumakealistofthingsyoutake.Itisabithotinsummerhere.SoyoucantakeT-shirtsandsunglasseswithyou.Doyouhatethatfeelingwhenyoucan’tfindwhatyou’relookingforinyourbag?M