高考英語作文講解

高考英語作文常見錯誤剖析及寫作2024/4/121.學生英語作文中10種常見錯誤剖析

1、漢語式思維Seethefilmwilltookmemuchtime.Hehappenedanaccidentyesterday.2、謂語缺失

Hetoldmethatallmyclassmatessittingintheclassroom.Sheintheclassroomyesterday.3、Therebe句型出錯Therearefivestudentsplaybasketballontheplayground.Therearesomeworkersareworkinginthefield.(Seeing)(Anaccidenthappenedtohimyesterday.)werewasFive2024/4/122.6、非謂語動詞出錯Beingseriouslyill,hisclass-matessenthimtohospital.Seeingfromthespace,theearthlookslikeaball.學生英語作文中10種常見錯誤剖析

4、謂語動詞用法出錯Hedressedinanewcoat.Greatchangeshavebeentakenplace.WhenIarrivedHongKong,mymotherwastherewaitingforme.Hedidn’tnoticetheteachertocomeintotheclassroom.5、詞性混用SheenjoysstudyEnglish.Ifanyoneagainsttheplan,pleaseletmeknow.isin(studying)isAsheisseriouslyill,(Seen)2024/4/123.學生英語作文中10種常見錯誤剖析

7、分數(shù)與百分數(shù)作主語Inourclass,20%sthdentsaregirls,butthreefifthsstudentsareboys.8、定語從句錯誤Thetwoboysarereadingaremybrothers.ThebookIboughtitislost.I’llneverforgetthedayswhenwespentinthevillagetogether.9、連詞出錯Althoughhetried,buthestillcouldn’tkeepupwiththeothers.Mysuggestioniswetryforasecondtime.10、形容詞、副詞混用Thepatientappearednervouslywhenhetalkedtothedoctor.

Theartistworkedhardlytofinishhisdrawingsontime.oftheofthewhothatthatnervoushard2024/4/124.DearSue,I’mLiHua,isoneofyourstudentsinChina.It’salmostamonthsinceyouleftus.Weallverymissyouandareverygratefulforyoudidforus.Wearebusyasusually.WehadanEnglishspeechcontesttheotherday.Iwonthefirstprize.Thisagainremindsmeofallyourkindhelp.Doyoustillrememberthetreesweplantedthemtogetheronthehillbehindtheschool?Yesterday,wewentthereandwaterthem.Thetreeyouplantedyourselfisgrowinggood,andthewholeclassdecidedtonameitSueWood.WillyoucomebackseeSueWood?Howiseverythingwithyoulately?WehopetoknowmoreaboutyouwithyourAmeicanstudents.Hopetokeepinclosetouch.Allthebest,LiHua作文修改

whatusual-edwelltoand2024/4/125.實例寫作

(2010全國Ⅱ)假設你是李華，你的美國筆友Peter曾表示希望來中國教書。你?，F(xiàn)需招聘外教，請給他寫封信，告訴招聘信息。內容主要包括：1．教授課程：英語口語、英語寫作、今日美國、今日英國等2．授課對象：高中生（至少三年英語基礎）3．工作量：—每周12學時，任選三門課—擔任學生英語俱樂部或英語校報顧問（advisor）注意：1．詞數(shù)100左右；2．可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫；3．開頭語已為你寫好，請將完整的回信寫出來。DearPeter,IrememberyoutoldmeyouwereinterestedinteachinginChina.________________________________________________________

Best,Lihua2024/4/126.寫作技巧點撥

1、提綱式作文為半開放型寫作。2、要點均為4—5個（多為4+1個要點），要點提示比較簡潔，考生111有發(fā)散思維的空間；3、英語作文多為三段式：

1para.——Topicsentence(mainidea,writer’sattitude)2ndpara.——Body(differentpoints)3rdpara.——Ending(writer’sownidea)4、盡量避免第一印象詞匯出現(xiàn)5、好的連詞與表達法的使用。2024/4/127.提煉文章要點理解每個要點的含義，然后討論每個要點的正確表達方式。形成文章。2024/4/128.范文DearPeter,

IrememberyoutoldmeyouwereinterestedinteachinginChina.①Ourschoolislookingforanative-speakertoteachsomecoursestoseniorhighstudents.

②Ifyou’dliketocome,youcanchoosethreeofthefollowingfourcourses:Speaking,Writing,BritainTodayandAmericaToday,andteach12periodsaweek.③ThestudentswhoaregoingtotakethesecourseshaveatleastthreeyearsofEnglishlearningexperiences.

④Besidesteaching,youwillalsoworkasanadvisorforourstudents’Englishcluborourschool’sEnglishnewspaper.

⑤Pleaseletmeknowifyouareinterestedandifyouhaveanyot