高考英語一輪復習應用文寫作新聞報道課件

高分應用文突破系列:

新聞報道

1.明確新聞報道六要素：(五個W一個H)

“五個W”:

who,when,where,what,

why

一個H:how

（即:時間、地點、人物、事情的起因、經(jīng)過、結果)2.新聞報道寫作框架①首段：

時間，地點，人物，事件簡單概括②詳細敘述事件的起因，經(jīng)過和結果③主題升華，對事件進行感悟和評價應用文報道：越野賽跑（2020年新高考卷）假定你是李華,上周日你校舉辦了5公里越野賽跑活動。請你為校英文報寫一篇報道,內(nèi)容包括:參加人員:跑步路線:從校門口到南山腳下:活動反響。首段：時間：LastSunday地點：fromschoolgatetothefootofNanshanMountain人物：students事件：aracematch

LastSunday,ourschoollaunchedaracematchfromschoolgatetothefootofNanshanmountain，inwhichmanystudentsandteachersparticipated.Exhustedaswewere,wefeltdelightedandsatisfied.中間段：邏輯清晰+語言簡練+句式多樣越野賽詳情介紹，出發(fā)時間之類：setoff/asscheduled經(jīng)過遇到的挫折困難:difficulty/giveup結果成功完賽:managetofinishtherace

At9am,weparticipantsmetattheschoolgateasscheduled,eachofwhom（非限制定語從句）

hadagreatpassionforfitnessprograms.Thenwesetoffat10am,（非謂語）enjoyingbeingclosetonature.Afterhavingrunforawhile,sotiredwerewethatsomeofuswouldliketogiveup.（強調(diào)句）

Itwasourteachersthatencouragedustogoonandboostedourconfidence.Finally,allofusmanagedtofinishtherace.尾段：主題升華升華：意識到體育鍛煉的重要性/身心都得到了好處/釋放壓力熱愛大自然

Throughthisactivity,notonly(倒裝)didwedosomephycicalexercisebutalsowerealizedtheimportanceofpersistence./Haditnotbeenforthisrace（虛擬）,Iwouldhavenotrealizedthesignificanceofwillpower/regularexercise.

LastSunday,ourschoollaunchedaracematchfromschoolgatetothefootofNanshanmountain，inwhichmanystudentsandteachersparticipated.Exhustedaswewere,wefeltdelightedandsatisfied.At9am,weparticipantsmetattheschoolgateasscheduled,eachofwhomhadagreatpassionforfitnessprograms.Thenwesetoffat10am,enjoyingbeingclosetonature.Afterhavingrunforawhile,sotiredwerewethatsomeofuswouldliketogiveup.Itwasourteachersthatencouragedustogoonandboostedourconfidence.Finally,allofusmanagedtofinishtherace.Throughthisactivity,notonlydidwedosomephycicalexercisebutalsowerealizedtheimportanceofpersistence./Haditnotbeenforthisrace,Iwouldhavenotrealizedthesignificanceofwillpower/regularexercise.結尾升華：1.Fromthisactivity,welearnedhowtocooperatewitheachotherandcametorealizetheimportanceofteamwork.通過這次活動，我們學會了如何相互合作，并逐漸意識到團隊合作的重要性。2.Theexhibitionturnedouttobeagreathit.Notonlyhasitbroughtjoytousbutalsobroadenedourhorizons.Everyparticipantexpectsanotherone.展覽取得了巨大的成功。它不僅給我們帶來了歡樂，也開闊了我們的視野。每個參與者都期望有另一個。濰坊市高考模擬考試（2023）.上周日，你校組織了紀念高中畢業(yè)的植樹活動。請你為校英文報寫篇報道，內(nèi)容包括：1．活動介紹；2．個人感受。注意：1．寫作詞數(shù)應為80左右；2．請按如下格式在答題卡的相應位置作答。ATree—plantingActivity1.詞匯積累參加：takepartin→participatein旨在：beaimedat→withthepurposeof慶祝：celebrate→congratulate合作：cooperate→collaborate2.句式拓展簡單句變復合句原句：Weenjoyedtreesstandingstraightinthesoil,givingusastrongfeelingofsatisfaction.拓展句：Weenjoyedtreesstandingstraightinthesoil,whichgaveusastrongfeelingofsatisfaction.【點睛】【高分句型1】LastSunday,allthestudentsinSenior3tookpartinatree-plantingactivityorganizedbyourStudentUnioninRenminPark,whichwasaimedatcelebratingourgraduation.(使用了which引導的非限制性定語從句)【高分句型2】Howtiredbuthappywewere!

(使用了how引導的感嘆句)

LastSunday,allthestudentsinSenior3tookpartinatree-plantingactivityorganizedbyourStudentUnioninRenminPark,whichwasaimedatcelebratingourgraduation.

Whileenjoyingbeingclosetonature,wecooperatedwitheachother,somediggingholes,someplantingsmalltrees,andsomewateringthem.Howtiredbuthappywewere!Weenjoyedtreesstandingstraightinthesoil,givingusastrongfeelingofsatisfaction.

Weplantedtreesandinthemeantime,plantedseedsofhopeforthefuture!Webelievedtheyoungtreeswouldgrowup,healthyandstrong,justlikeus.參考范文：關于運動的名言“Sportsdonotbuildcharacter.Theyrevealit.”–HeywoodBroun“體育不能建立人格，但能展示出你的人格