2022年廣東省深圳市大學(xué)英語6級(jí)大學(xué)英語六級(jí)真題(含答案)

2022年廣東省深圳市大學(xué)英語6級(jí)大學(xué)英

語六級(jí)真題（含答案）

學(xué)校:班級(jí):姓名:考號(hào):

一、LWriting（10題）

1.1.現(xiàn)在越來越多的年輕人把手機(jī)短信作為交流的主要渠道

2.使用手機(jī)雉的利與弊

3.我的觀點(diǎn)

MyViewpointonWide-spreadSMS

2.Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteacomposition

onthetitle:HowtoTreatOurAgingPopulation?Youshouldwriteatleast

130wordsfollowingtheoutlinegivenbelowinChinese.

1.中國(guó)已漸漸步入老齡化社會(huì)。（65歲以上的老年人已占全國(guó)人口的7%）

2.我認(rèn)為應(yīng)如何對(duì)待老年人群。（社會(huì)關(guān)愛與福利制度，家庭溫暖，社

區(qū)服務(wù)……）

3.我的結(jié)論。

HowtoTreatOurAgingPopulation

3.Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowritearesume.You

shouldwriteatleast150wordsfollowingtheoutlinegivenbelow:

假設(shè)你是李明——一名應(yīng)屆畢業(yè)生，在報(bào)紙上看到一則招聘廣告，你想

要到登廣告的公司供職，請(qǐng)給該公司寫一封求職信，內(nèi)容應(yīng)簡(jiǎn)要介紹自

己的情況以及自己的經(jīng)歷等。

4.Directions:Forthispart,youareallowedthirtyminutestowritealetterof

atleast150wordsaccordingtotheoutlinegivenbelowinChinese.

1.有個(gè)國(guó)外的朋友來訪，告訴他你已經(jīng)做好安排。

2.作了哪些安排。

3.對(duì)來訪表示歡迎

5.1.出境旅游人數(shù)增多，游客不文明現(xiàn)象成為公眾關(guān)注的焦點(diǎn)；

2.分析此現(xiàn)象造成的不良影響；

3.如何在出境游中做文明游客。

6.Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteashortessay

entitledTheImportanceofCreatingaHealthyInternet.Youshouldwriteat

least150wordsfollowingtheoutlinegivenbelow.

1.隨著社會(huì)和經(jīng)濟(jì)發(fā)展網(wǎng)絡(luò)成為了每個(gè)人必不可少的獲取信息的工具

2.但是，在網(wǎng)絡(luò)上也出現(xiàn)了一些不健康的因素，如垃圾信息、黃色網(wǎng)

站、虛假新聞、網(wǎng)絡(luò)炒作等

3.我們應(yīng)采取措施制止這些，并建立一個(gè)健康的網(wǎng)絡(luò)環(huán)境

TheImportanceofCreatingaHealthyInternet

7.1.調(diào)查顯示，某大學(xué)61%的學(xué)生需要人際關(guān)系方面的心理幫助

2.出現(xiàn)這種情況的主要原因

3.我的建議

8.1.目前，國(guó)久“漢語熱”持續(xù)升溫

2.出現(xiàn)這種現(xiàn)象的主要原因

3.“漢語熱”給我的啟示

OnForeigners'LearningChinese

9.Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteacomposition

onthetopic:WhyDotheViewersLikeWatchingSportPrograms?You

shouldwriteatleast150words,andbaseyourcompositiononthechartand

outlinebelow:

口比值

1.簡(jiǎn)要分析圖表

2.分析觀眾喜歡看體育節(jié)目的原因

WhyDotheViewersLikeWatchingSportPrograms?

10.Directions:Thefollowingtablegivesstatisticsshowingtheaspectsof

qualityoflifeinfivecountries.Writeacompositiondescribingthe

informationinthetablebelow.Youshouldwriteatleast150words.

DailyInfant

GNPperLife

caloriemortalityrates

Countryheadexpectancyat

supplyperper1000live

(2000,$)birth(years)

headbirths

Bolivia

Egypt

Indonesia

二、2.ReadingComprehension(SkimmingandScanning)(10題)

11.

isgivengreatrespectinAsiabutnotinwesterncountries.

12.

inyourbodyfunctionstokeepthebalancebetweenthecaloriesyour

bodyburnsandthequantityittakesin.

13.

ThethreearrestedinSudanwereregardedasbylocalauthorities.

14.WhatisthemainfindingofDonaldL.McCabe'ssurveys?

A.Moreundergraduatesadmittedtocopyingafewsentencesinwritten

assignments.

B.Lessundergraduatesadmittedtocopyingafewsentencesinwritten

assignments.

C.MoreundergraduatestakeplagiarismfromtheWebforgrantednowadays.

D.LessundergraduatesarecopyingfromtheWebthanearlierinthedecade.

15.Promotionsareusuallyusedtoattractlow-incomeshoppers.

16.

whilestandingoutsideahouseisnotconsideredbymostAmericans

asbeinginsidethehouseorroom.

17.

ThenewrolemodelIconWomandealswitheverythingaboutworkon,

18.

Theverbalgymnastlikesusingcomplexsentencesandmouth-fillingphrases

justasmakinga.

19.

IntheU.S.,eachStatecanadministeraseparateunemploymentinsurance

programundertherestrictionof.

20.

ThereisaU.N.conventionthatcancover.

A.problembetweenneighbors

B.problembetweenstateswhichdonotshareaborder

C.problemsonairpollution

D.trans-boundaryairpollution

三、3.ListeningComprehension(10題)

21.(17)

A.Thewomanblamesthemanforhisabsence.

B.Thewomanthinksthateverythingwasallright.

C.Thewomanthanksthemanforhisefforts.

D.Thewomandoesn'tthinkitwastheman'sfault.

22.(35)

A.GhanaiantomatoestastebetterthanBritishones.

B.BritishtomatoesarehealthierthanGhanaianones.

C.Protectingtheenvironmentmaycostalotofmoney.

D.Cuttingdownfoodmilesmaynotnecessarilysavefuel.

23.(40)

24.(29)

A.Weshouldn'tjudgepeoplebyreadingtheirfaces.

B.Weshouldn'tsmileinthewrongplace.

C.Weshouldn'tcoverourtruefeelings.

D.Weshouldn'texpressouremotionstooopenly.

25.(32)

A.Toenjoylocalfoodandwine.

B.Tothinkabouttheirwork.

C.Tohaveagoodsleep.

D.Toforgettheirworkandenjoythemselves.

26.聽力原文:Isyourfamilyinterestedinbuyingadog?Adogcanbea

happyadditiontoyourfamily,butifyouchoosethewrongkindofdog,the

consequencescancauseyoualotoftrouble.

Familiesshouldsitdownandthoroughlydiscusstheproblemsinvolved

beforebuyingadog.[29]Evenifthechildreninyourfamilyaretheoneswho

wantthedog,theparentsaretheoneswhoarereallyresponsibleforseeing

thattheanimalisproperlycaredfor.Ifyoudon'tknowmuchaboutdogs,it's

agoodideatogotothelibraryortheASPCAforbooksaboutvariouskinds

ofdogs,aswellasbooksabouthowtotrainapuppy.Inreadingaboutthe

differentbreeds,youshouldknowthatadogdescribedasveryalertmaybe

toojumpyandbouncy.Whenabookdescribesadogasanidealhuntingdog,

itprobablymeansthatthedogwon'tbehappylivinginasmallapartment.

Dogbreedsvaryinpopularityastheyearsgoby.[30]Oneofthemostpopular

dogsthesedaysistheGermanshepherd,thisisbecauseitprovidesprotection

aswellascomRanionship.Thefamilyshouldbewarnedthatthesedogsgrow

uptobeverybig,andmaybetoopowerfulforchildrentohandle.Ifspaceis

limited,atoydogmaybeagoodchoice.Theredogsareverysmallandeasy

totrain.[3]Theydon'tneedtobewalkeddaily,sincetheycanexerciseinthe

spaceavailableinthehome.

(33)

A.Children.B.Family.C.Parents.D.ASPCA

27.[B6]

28.聽力原文：M:CanyoubelieveIjusthadtopay20poundsforahaircut

inSteward?

F:YoushouldtrythesalonwhereIgo.It'sonly10.Butittakesawhiletoget

anappointment.

Q:Whatdoesthewomanmean?

(16)

A.Shesuggeststhemantogotoafartherplacetotrimhishair.

B.Sheofferstocuttheman'shairherselfatthepriceof10.

C.Shetellsthemanacheaperbutbusierplacetohavehishaircut.

D.Sheusedtotrimherhairinaluxurioussaloon.

29.[Bll]

30.聽力原文：M:Thesummerholidayiscoming,butIreallydon'tknow

whattodo.Theredoesn'tseemtobeanyjobsavailable.

W:Whydon'tyoutryhouse-sitting?LastsummerCindywasahousesitter

fortheSmithswhentheywentawayonvacation.TheyhiredCindytostayin

theirhousebecausetheydidn'twantitleftempty.

M:YoumeantheypaidCindyjusttoliveintheirhouse?

W:Itwasn'tthateasy.Shehadtowaterthehouseplants,mowthelawn,and

eventakecareofthepets.

M:Iguessitisalittlelikebaby-sittingexceptyou'retakingcareofahouse

insteadofchildren.

W:Thestudentemploymentofficestillhasafewjobsposted.

M:DoIjusthavetofilloutanapplication?

W:Youhavetohaveaninterviewwiththehomeownerandprovidethree

referencesatleast.

M:Thatseemslikealotoftroubleforasummerjob.

W:Well,thehomeownerwantssomeguaranteethattheycantrustthehouse

sitter.Youknowtheywanttomakesureyou'renotthetypewho'llholdwild

partiesintheirhouse,orbringagroupoffriendsinwithyou.

M:Isee.Housesitterswhodothatsortofthingprobablyaren'tpaidthen.

W:Usuallythey'repaidanywayjustbecausethehomeownersdon'twantto

makeafuss.Butifthehome-ownerreportsit,thehousesitterwon'tbeable

togetanotherjobeasily.Sowhydon'tyouapply?

M:IthinkIwill.Thankyou.

(20)

A.Theylefttheirpetswithneighbors.

B.Theyrentedtheirhousetoastudent.

C.Theyhiredsomeonetostayintheirhome.

D.Theyaskedtheirgardenertowatchtheirhouse.

四、4.ReadingComprehension(ReadinginDepth)(3題)

31.

[C2]

32.

[C5]

33.

Theword"substantially"(Line2,Para.5)mostlikelymeans

A.alittlebitB.infactC.materiallyD.considerably

五、5.ErrorCorrection?題）

34.

[S4]

35.

[S6]

36.

[S9]

六、6.ErrorCorrection?題）

37.

[S5]

38.[S7]

39.

[S4]

參考答案

l.MyViewpointonWide-spreadSMS?Nowadaysmoreandmoreyoung

peoplehavejoinedtheclanofthumbs.TheyuseSMSastheirmajor

communicationchannel.②ItisalsoreportedthatSMSisthemost

frequentlyusedfunctionforthemobilephoneusersinChinaapartfrom

makingcalls.③SMShasbroughtusmanyadvantages.Firstlywiththetipof

yourfingermessageswithwordsdigitalpicturesandmusiccanbesentto

anotheruserwithinseconds.What'smoreyoucansendonemessagetomany

userswithoutrewritingitSecondlycomparedwithmakingcallsSMSismuch

cheaperbecausetheproviderchargesonly0.1￥permessage?However

shortmessagesdisturbourlifesometimes.Garbagemessagesarequite

annoyingandthereareanincreasingnumberofvictimswhohavebeen

cheatedorfooledbythem.⑤AsformeIpreferusingthiswayof

communicationitgivesmemuchconveniencetomydailylife.ButIalso

hopesomemeasuresshouldbetakentopunishthosespreadinggarbage

messagessothatwecanenjoythemoderninformationtechnologysafelyMy

ViewpointonWide-spreadSMS①Nowadays,moreandmoreyoungpeople

havejoinedtheclanofthumbs.TheyuseSMSastheirmajorcommunication

channel.②ItisalsoreportedthatSMSisthemostfrequentlyusedfunction

forthemobilephoneusersinChinaapartfrommakingcalls.③SMShas

broughtusmanyadvantages.Firstly,withthetipofyourfinger,messages

withwords,digitalpicturesandmusiccanbesenttoanotheruserwithin

seconds.What'smore,youcansendonemessagetomanyuserswithout

rewritingitSecondly,comparedwithmakingcalls,SMSismuchcheaper

becausetheproviderchargesonly0.1￥permessage?However,short

messagesdisturbourlifesometimes.Garbagemessagesarequiteannoying,

andthereareanincreasingnumberofvictimswhohavebeencheatedor

fooledbythem.⑤Asforme,Ipreferusingthiswayofcommunication,it

givesmemuchconveniencetomydailylife.ButIalsohopesomemeasures

shouldbetakentopunishthosespreadinggarbagemessagessothatwecan

enjoythemoderninformationtechnologysafely解析：①審題及布局。這

是一篇比較典型的提綱式作文。按照文章提示的要求，首先應(yīng)該對(duì)越來

越多的年輕人把手機(jī)短信作為交流的主要渠道這一現(xiàn)象進(jìn)行簡(jiǎn)單介紹，

然后說明使用手機(jī)短信的利與弊，最后表明自己的觀點(diǎn)，即喜歡這種交

流方式與否。在布局上，根據(jù)題目中給出的提綱來展開，采用三段式的

結(jié)構(gòu)即可。第一段介紹這種現(xiàn)象；第二段說明使用短信交流的利弊，應(yīng)

該注意根據(jù)自己的觀點(diǎn)事先安排說明利弊的比重，即如果認(rèn)為利大于弊,

就應(yīng)該多說明益處，反之亦然；第三段陳述自己的觀點(diǎn)。②語言。本文

是一篇論說文，論說要層次分明，語言簡(jiǎn)潔流暢，盡量避免重復(fù)使用同

一句式或詞匯，以增加文采。時(shí)態(tài)上采用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)即可。

2.HowtoTreatOurAgingPopulation?Chinahasalreadysteppedintoan

agingsocietyaccordingtointernationalstandards.Thosebeyond65madeup

morethan7percentofthenationalpopulation.Accordingtoexperts'

predictionthisphenomenonisgoingtocontinuefordecades.Nowthesociety

isfacedupwiththeissueoftacklingtheoldpeople'sproblems.Firstthe

societyshouldfosterasocialenvironmentthatchampionsrespectandcare

fortheold.Thisisprerequisiteintacklingthevariousproblemstheelderly

face.Withoutloveandrespectfortheoldanywelfaremeasurecouldnotbe

implementedfullyandforthebenefitoftheold.Thoughinmostareathe

traditionalideaoflovingandrespectingtheoldstillprevailstherearesome

youngpeoplewhoconsideroldpeopleaseconomicandmentalburdenand

areeagertogetrideofthem.Thereforechangingthiskindofattitudetowards

oldpeopleisuppermostinensuringthatourGrandmaandGrandpaleada

happylife.Secondbasedonthefactthatthetraditionofhomecareforthe

elderlyfacesbigchallengeduetotheshrinkingfamilysizeacombinationof

familycarecommunity-basedservicesandsocialwelfarenecessarytohelp

ouroldpopulationinhelpingandsupportingtheirlives.Inthiswayoldpeople

canenjoythehelpandlovefromboththesocietyandtheirfamiliesthus

relievingthepressureontheiryoungerchildren.Thirdoldpeoplenotonly

needhelptheycanalsogiveahandinraisingtheirgrandchildren.Ifwetreat

themaspreciousassetstheymaynotonlyliveafullerlifebutalsomake

furthercontributionstooursocialandeconomicdevelopments.Atpresent

boththeproportionoftheoldintheChinesepopulationandthenumberof

retiredpeopleareincreasing.Howtorespondtothisphenomenonaffects

everybodynowandinthefuture.Weshouldcombinecommunityhelpwith

familycareandofferhelptothemineveryway.HowtoTreatOurAging

Population?Chinahasalreadysteppedintoanagingsocietyaccordingto

internationalstandards.Thosebeyond65madeupmorethan7percentofthe

nationalpopulation.Accordingtoexperts'prediction,thisphenomenonis

goingtocontinuefordecades.Nowthesocietyisfacedupwiththeissueof

tacklingtheoldpeople'sproblems.First,thesocietyshouldfosterasocial

environmentthatchampionsrespectandcarefortheold.Thisisprerequisite

intacklingthevariousproblemstheelderlyface.Withoutloveandrespectfor

theold,anywelfaremeasurecouldnotbeimplementedfullyandforthe

benefitoftheold.Thoughinmostarea,thetraditionalideaoflovingand

respectingtheoldstillprevails,therearesomeyoungpeoplewhoconsider

oldpeopleaseconomicandmentalburdenandareeagertogetrideofthem.

Therefore,changingthiskindofattitudetowardsoldpeopleisuppermostin

ensuringthatourGrandmaandGrandpaleadahappylife.Second,basedon

thefactthatthetraditionofhomecarefortheelderlyfacesbigchallengedue

totheshrinkingfamilysize,acombinationoffamilycare,community-based

servicesandsocialwelfarenecessarytohelpouroldpopulationinhelping

andsupportingtheirlives.Inthisway,oldpeoplecanenjoythehelpandlove

fromboththesocietyandtheirfamilies,thusrelievingthepressureontheir

youngerchildren.Third,oldpeoplenotonlyneedhelp,theycanalsogivea

handinraisingtheirgrandchildren.Ifwetreatthemaspreciousassets,they

maynotonlyliveafullerlife,butalsomakefurthercontributionstooursocial

andeconomicdevelopments.Atpresent,boththeproportionoftheoldinthe

Chinesepopulationandthenumberofretiredpeopleareincreasing.Howto

respondtothisphenomenonaffectseverybodynowandinthefuture.We

shouldcombinecommunityhelpwithfamilycareandofferhelptothemin

everyway.

3.May27th2005DearSirIwaspleasedtoseeyouradinBeijingEvening

NewsonMay25th2005forasalesengineer.ThisJuly1willreceivemy

Bachelor'sdegreeinElectronicEngineeringfromBeijingUniversity.I

believethatIhavecapabilitytoworkwellbecauseofmyeducationandwork

experiences.Asindicatedinmyattachedresumemymaindegreecourseis

concernedwithbasicelectronictopics.ButIalsohavetakensuchcoursesas

MarketingConsumerBehaviorStrategiesandPsychologyandallavailable

opportunitiestoincreasemyknowledgeIhavealreadypassedCET-6with

excellentresultsandIhaveevenworkedtwosummersasanEnglish

interpreteratBeijingTravelService.Iwouldwelcomeanopportunitytojoin

yourstaffbecauseyourworkisthekindIhavebeenpreparingtodoand

becausetheconditionsunderwhichitiscardedoutwouldhelptoexpressmy

abilities.Ifaninterviewisneededpleasecallmeatyourconvenience.Thank

youverymuch!Bestwishes!SincerelyLiMingMay27th,2005DearSir,I

waspleasedtoseeyouradinBeijingEveningNewsonMay25th,2005fora

salesengineer.ThisJuly1willreceivemyBachelor'sdegreeinElectronic

EngineeringfromBeijingUniversity.IbelievethatIhavecapabilitytowork

wellbecauseofmyeducationandworkexperiences.Asindicatedinmy

attachedresume,mymaindegreecourseisconcernedwithbasicelectronic

topics.ButIalsohavetakensuchcoursesasMarketing,ConsumerBehavior.

StrategiesandPsychology,andallavailableopportunitiestoincreasemy

knowledge,IhavealreadypassedCET-6withexcellentresultsandIhave

evenworkedtwosummersasanEnglishinterpreteratBeijingTravelService.

Iwouldwelcomeanopportunitytojoinyourstaffbecauseyourworkisthe

kindIhavebeenpreparingtodoandbecausetheconditionsunderwhichitis

cardedoutwouldhelptoexpressmyabilities.Ifaninterviewisneeded,please

callmeatyourconvenience.Thankyouverymuch!Bestwishes!Sincerely,

LiMing

4.DearMr.SmithIhavereceivedyourletterdatedApril52006inwhichyou

haveaskedmetomakearrangementsforyourstayhere.Iamgladtotellyou

yourschedulewillbeasfollows:FirstofallIwillmeetyouattheairport

whenyouarrivehereandthenIwilltakeyoutoouruniversityhotelwhereI

havebookedaroomforyou.Ontheseconddayofyourarrivalyouwillbe

invitedtoattendourteachingactivityinasmallgroup.IntheafternoonIwill

takeyoutovisitourstudents'lab.OnthethirddayIhavearrangedalecture

atwhichIhopeyoucouldgiveusanintroductiontotheteachingfeaturesof

fineartsatCambridge.IntheeveningIwillhaveasmallpartyforyouand

youwillhavemorechancetocommunicatewithourstudentsaswellasour

staff.OnthelastdayIwillseeyouoffattheairport.Ifthereisanything

inconvenientforyouinthisschedulepleaseletmeknowassoonaspossible.

Iamlookingforwardtoyourreplyandwishyouapleasantjourney.Yours

respectfullyAllenChuDearMr.Smith,IhavereceivedyourletterdatedApril

5,2006inwhichyouhaveaskedmetomakearrangementsforyourstayhere.

Iamgladtotellyouyourschedulewillbeasfollows:Firstofall,Iwillmeet

youattheairportwhenyouarrivehereandthenIwilltakeyoutoour

universityhotelwhereIhavebookedaroomforyou.Ontheseconddayof

yourarrival,youwillbeinvitedtoattendourteachingactivityinasmallgroup.

Intheafternoon,Iwilltakeyoutovisitourstudents'lab.Onthethirdday,I

havearrangedalectureatwhichIhopeyoucouldgiveusanintroductionto

theteachingfeaturesoffineartsatCambridge.Intheevening,Iwillhavea

smallpartyforyouandyouwillhavemorechancetocommunicatewithour

studentsaswellasourstaff.OnthelastdayIwillseeyouoffattheairport.

Ifthereisanythinginconvenientforyouinthisschedule,pleaseletmeknow

assoonaspossible.Iamlookingforwardtoyourreplyandwishyoua

pleasantjourney.Yoursrespectfully,AllenChu

5.BeaCivilizedTourist{11Withtheimprovementofpeople'slivingstandards

moreandmoreChineseenjoytravelingabroadtheseyears.[2]Unfortunately

manytouriststravelingabroadhavenotbehavedthemselveswell.[3]They

talkloudlyinpublicplacesdroprubbisheverywherejumpqueuesandignore

localregulations.[4]Someevenscribbleintouristattractionsleavingmarks

onscenicspots.[5]Alltheuncivilizedbehaviorhascausedbadeffect.[6]It

hasbroughtinconveniencestolocalpeopleandhasmadethescenicspots

dirtyandlesspopular.[7]Besidesithasleftabadimpressiononthelocal

peoplewhomightthusthinkthatalltheChinesepeopleareinconsiderateand

impolite.[8]Thenhowcanwebecivilizedandcourteoustourists?[9]Ithink

thekeytobeingapopulartourististo"DoinRomeastheRomansdo."[10]

Thereforeweneedfirstlearntheforeignculturesandlocalconventionsand

customsbeforewegotravelingabroad.Thenweshouldalwaysbewareand

trytogetridofourbadhabitswhenweareinaforeignplace.[11]Onlyin

thiswaycanourexperienceabroadbepleasantandfruitful.BeaCivilized

Tourist[1]Withtheimprovementofpeople'slivingstandards,moreandmore

Chineseenjoytravelingabroadtheseyears.[2]Unfortunately,manytourists

travelingabroadhavenotbehavedthemselveswell.[3]Theytalkloudlyin

publicplaces,droprubbisheverywhere,jumpqueues,andignorelocal

regulations.[4]Someevenscribbleintouristattractions,leavingmarkson

scenicspots.[5]Alltheuncivilizedbehavior,hascausedbadeffect.[6]Ithas

broughtinconveniencestolocalpeople,andhasmadethescenicspotsdirty

andlesspopular.[71Besides,ithasleftabadimpressiononthelocalpeople,

whomightthusthinkthatalltheChinesepeopleareinconsiderateand

impolite.[8]Then,howcanwebecivilizedandcourteoustourists?[9]Ithink

thekeytobeingapopulartourististo"DoinRomeastheRomansdo."[10]

Therefore,weneedfirstlearntheforeignculturesandlocalconventionsand

customsbeforewegotravelingabroad.Thenweshouldalwaysbewareand

trytogetridofourbadhabitswhenweareinaforeignplace.[11]Onlyin

thiswaycanourexperienceabroadbepleasantandfruitful.解析：[1]由

出境游人口增加引出游客不良行為的話題。

[2]是主題句，⑶[4]的例子對(duì)[2]加以論證，[3][4]之問用even表示

程度的加深。

[5]自然段的主題句。注意，本文重點(diǎn)在說明該如何做，所以“不良影響”

部分要盡量簡(jiǎn)潔。

[6][7]用以支持[5]。

[8]用疑問句形式出現(xiàn)的主題句。

[9]適當(dāng)引用諺語，可以言簡(jiǎn)意賅地表達(dá)出中心意圖，使文章增色。

[11]結(jié)束句要注意最后強(qiáng)化主題。

[寫作指南]

本題要求對(duì)出境游中的一些不文明現(xiàn)象進(jìn)行分析。根據(jù)題目要求，本文

寫作結(jié)構(gòu)安排如下：

第一段簡(jiǎn)要描述題目中提到的不文明現(xiàn)象。先總述，說我國(guó)公民出境游

中存在不文明現(xiàn)象，然后舉出兩三個(gè)例子予以充實(shí)。

第二段分析這些不文明現(xiàn)象帶來的不良影響:①給旅游當(dāng)?shù)氐木用駧?/p>

生活上的不便，污染風(fēng)景區(qū)的環(huán)境；②給中國(guó)人抹黑，使祖國(guó)的形象受

損，不利于文化的交流和溝通。

第三段就如何做文明游客提出建議。要做文明游客，最重要的就是“入鄉(xiāng)

隨俗”，而要做到這一點(diǎn)，就需要加深列旅游目的地文化的理解，改正游

客平日生活中的陋習(xí)。

6.TheImportanceofCreatingaHealthyInternet[1]Withthedevelopmentof

oursocietyandeconomytheInternetbecomesanecessarytoolforeveryone

toobtaininformation.[2]Howevertherearealsosomeunhealthycontentsin

tTheImportanceofCreatingaHealthyInternet[1]Withthedevelopmentof

oursocietyandeconomy,theInternetbecomesanecessarytoolforeveryone

toobtaininformation.[2]However,therearealsosomeunhealthycontentsin

t解析：作文標(biāo)題是“創(chuàng)建健康網(wǎng)絡(luò)環(huán)境的重要性”，這已經(jīng)表明，寫作

的重點(diǎn)是說明“為什么要?jiǎng)?chuàng)建健康的網(wǎng)絡(luò)環(huán)境”。但所給出的outline沒有

體現(xiàn)這一點(diǎn)。僅僅根據(jù)。utline動(dòng)筆，恐怕寫不出好作文來。

提綱的第1點(diǎn)和第2點(diǎn)都址說背景，是為我們要論述的論點(diǎn)服務(wù)的，?第

3點(diǎn)指向“措施”，也與論點(diǎn)有關(guān)。但是，以這三點(diǎn)中的任何一條為中心，

都有可能偏題。

那么該如何做這篇文章呢?不僅要把提綱中的內(nèi)容納入，而且還要特別

淪述“創(chuàng)建健康網(wǎng)絡(luò)環(huán)境的重要性”。要思考那么兒條“重要性”出來，才

能有話可說，切合中心主旨。洲練從不同的角度考慮健康網(wǎng)絡(luò)的重要忤，

培養(yǎng)良好的思維能力，是寫好此類作文的關(guān)鍵。

Analysis

[1]對(duì)應(yīng)outline的第1條

[21對(duì)應(yīng)outline的第2條。如果不知道怎么用英涪表達(dá)“炒

作”(drumbeating),不說就是。反正僅僅是不良現(xiàn)象中的一個(gè)例子而已。

[3]主題句，對(duì)應(yīng)作文標(biāo)題。

[4][5][6]三條理由。健康的網(wǎng)絡(luò)可以：預(yù)防網(wǎng)絡(luò)犯罪：保護(hù)兒童不受

不良信息的影響；方便我們更好地利用網(wǎng)絡(luò)資源。（這部分可以八仙過海,

各顯神通）

⑺總結(jié)全文.照應(yīng)outline的第3條。

7.0nCollegeStudents'InterpersonalRelationship?Accordingtothefigure

showninaresearchabout61%collegestudentsneedpsychologicalguidance

incopingwithinterpersonalrelationship.?Severalfactorscanaccountfor

thisphenomenon.③Foronethingsincemanystudentsfromone-child

familieshaveneverlivedindormitoriesbeforeenteringcollegeit'scommon

forthemtomeetdifficultiesingettingalongwithothers.Foranothermost

middleschoolsgivingprioritiestothegraspofknowledgeandhighgrades

haveneglectedthenurtureofstudents'soundpersonalityandabilityof

communication.Besidessomeparents'improperwayofeducationalsoleads

tothechildren'sincompetenceinhumanrelations.?ConsideringalltheseI

suggestthatcollegesestablishacompletesystemofmentalcounselingfor

studentsincludingregularspeechesandcoursesonpsychologyfree

professionalconsultationsetc.?Parentsarealsosupposedtogiveahandin

dealingwithchildren'semotionaldilemma.Finallystudentsthemselves

shouldtakeanactiveattitudetowardsgrouplifeandconsciouslydevelop

harmoniousrelationswithothers.OnCollegeStudents'Interpersonal

Relationship（DAccordingtothefigureshowninaresearch,about61%

collegestudentsneedpsychologicalguidanceincopingwithinterpersonal

relationship.②Severalfactorscanaccountforthisphenomenon.③Forone

thing,sincemanystudentsfromone-childfamilieshaveneverlivedin

dormitoriesbeforeenteringcollege,it'scommonforthemtomeetdifficulties

ingettingalongwithothers.Foranother,mostmiddleschools,giving

prioritiestothegraspofknowledgeandhighgrades,haveneglectedthe

nurtureofstudents'soundpersonalityandabilityofcommunication.Besides,

someparents'improperwayofeducationalsoleadstothechildren's

incompetenceinhumanrelations.?Consideringallthese,Isuggestthat

collegesestablishacompletesystemofmentalcounselingforstudents,

includingregularspeechesandcoursesonpsychology,freeprofessional

consultations,etc.?Parentsarealsosupposedtogiveahandindealingwith

children'semotionaldilemma.Finally,studentsthemselvesshouldtakean

activeattitudetowardsgrouplife,andconsciouslydevelopharmonious

relationswithothers.解析：①審題及布局。這篇作文要求在說明、解釋

現(xiàn)象的基礎(chǔ)上提出建議。在布局上，根據(jù)題中給出的三段式提綱來展開

即可。首先要描述現(xiàn)象，即人際關(guān)系對(duì)很多大學(xué)生造成軻擾；第二段說

明導(dǎo)致這種現(xiàn)象的原因，從大學(xué)生自身、學(xué)校、家長(zhǎng)三個(gè)方面論述；第

三段提出解決問題的建議。②語言。本文意在探討大學(xué)生人際關(guān)系這一

熱點(diǎn)問題，語言應(yīng)概括、清晰，注意邏輯性；根據(jù)內(nèi)容需要可使用一般

現(xiàn)在時(shí)，現(xiàn)在完成時(shí)。

8.0nForeigners'LearningChinese①NowadaysChineseourmothertongue

isenjoyinganunprecedentedpopularityintheworld.②Overtwohundred

ConfuciusInstituteshavebeensetupinsixty-ninecountriesandmany

foreignersareattractedbytheoldmysteriousandcharminglanguage.(3)

SeveralfactorsaccountfortheenthusiasmforChineselearning.④Firstlywith

therapideconomicdevelopmentChinahasexperiencedadramaticriseinits

internationalinfluencewhichenlargestheneedofmanycountriesfor

professionalswithaproficiencyinChineselanguage.SecondlyChinese

servesasausefultoolforforeignerstoinvestigatethesplendidChinese

cultureanditsrichconnotations.FinallythewidespreadofChineseispartly

duetotheeveryendeavormadebyplentyofChinesetrainingorganizations.

⑤ThepopularityofleaningChinesehasnotonlyincreasedmynationalpride

butmademerealizethesignificanceofeconomicdevelopment.Besides⑥

wecollegestudentsshouldfirstlearnourmothertonguewellandthentakethe

responsibilitytopopularizeit.OnForeigners'LearningChinese?Nowadays,

Chinese,ourmothertongue,isenjoyinganunprecedentedpopularityinthe

world.②OvertwohundredConfuciusInstituteshavebeensetupinsixty-

ninecountries,andmanyforeignersareattractedbytheold,mysteriousand

charminglanguage.?SeveralfactorsaccountfortheenthusiasmforChinese

learning.④Firstly,withtherap