2022年浙江省湖州市大學英語6級大學英語六級模擬考試(含答案)

2022年浙江省湖州市大學英語6級大學英

語六級模擬考試（含答案）

學校:班級:姓名:考號:

一、l.Writing（10題）

1.1.新聞媒體披露，徐州某中學1000多名學生簽名，莊嚴承諾“遠離網

吧”

2.分析“遠離網吧”運動的原因

3.做出對比和評論

AwayfromNet-barCampaign

2.Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteashortessayentitled

DoesGradesMeanAbility?Youshouldwriteatleast150wordsfollowing

theoutlinegiven,below:

1.Somepeoplethinkthatgradesisthewaytoshowone'sability.

2.Othersholdthatgradesmaynotnecessarilymeanability.

3.Youropinion.

3.Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteashortessay

entitledTheImportanceofCreatingaHealthyInternet.Youshouldwriteat

least150wordsfollowingtheoutlinegivenbelow.

L隨著社會和經濟發(fā)展網絡成為了每個人必不可少的獲取信息的工具

2.但是，在網絡上也出現了一些不健康的因素，如垃圾信息、黃色網

站、虛假新聞、網絡炒作等

3.我們應采取措施制止這些，并建立一個健康的網絡環(huán)境

TheImportanceofCreatingaHealthyInternet

4.Directions:Forthispart,youareallowedthirtyminutestowritea

compositiononthetopic:MyViewonPart-timeJobs.Youshouldwriteat

least150words,andbaseyourcompositionontheoutlinegivenbelow:

1.近年來越來越多的大學生都有社會兼職工作，人們對此現象有不同的

看法。

2.有人認為兼職工作最好事，可以……有人認為兼了只工作有一些弊

JLLLI

V而.....

3.你的看法

5.Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteacomposition

basedonthefollowinggraph.ThetitleisEnthusiasmforSports.Youshould

writenolessthan150wordsandgiveyourreasonswhymanyTVviewers

prefertowatchsportsprograms.Quoteasfewfiguresaspossibleinyour

PercentageofTVViewersofVariousPrograms

6.假設你是李明，請你給保護長城志愿者工作指導中心寫一封申請信,

申請成位保護長城項目的志愿者。信中必須包括以下內容：

1.你從某報紙中得知這個項目招募志愿者的消息，感受到十分的高興

2.想當這個項目志愿者的原因

3.簡單介紹個人的性格和愛好，并表示十分希望自己能成為一名志愿者

ALetterofApplicationforVolunteeroftheGreatWallReservationProject

7.Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteacomposition

onthetopic:Let'sGoinforSports.Youshouldwriteatleast150words,and

baseyourcompositionontheoutlinegivenbelow.

1.當今世界上，有越來越多的人對體育運動感興趣；

2.但有些人仍然不了解運動的重要性；

3.體育運動有很高的價值。

8.Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteashortessay

entitledTheMarvelsofMedicineintheTwentiethCentury.Youshouldwrite

atleast150wordsfollowingtheoutlinegivenbelow:

1.Introduction:Advancesinmedicalscience-themostimportantachieve

mentsmadeinthetwentiethcentury

1.Developmentofvaccinesandantibiotics

2.Discoveriesofnewdiagnosismethods

3.Adventofgeneticengineering,anewbranchofbiology

Concludingremarks:Evengreaterwonderstobewroughtinthe21stcentury

9.Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteacomposition

withthetitleofACampaignSpeech,statingyourreasonsforrunningfor

chairmanoftheStudentUnion.Youshouldwriteatleast150wordsfollowing

theoutlinegivenbelowinChinese.

1.開場白

2.你認為自己具備了什么條件（能力、性格、愛好等）可以勝任學生會主

席的工作

3.如果當選，你將為本校同學做些什么

10.Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteashortessay

entitledTechnology,aBlessingoraCurse?Youshouldwriteatleast150

wordsfollowingtheoutlinegivenbelow:

1.科學技術使人們的生活變得更加便利

2.科學技術造成的負面影響

3.我們應該怎樣面對這種矛盾

二、2.ReadingComprehension(SkimmingandScanning)(10題)

11.AGuidetoJobHunting

Developingyourcareerandfindinganewjobcantakeoveryourlifeifyou're

notcareful.That'swhyrecruitmentexpertsKellyServiceshavecomeupwith

agreatlistofshortcutsandtoptipsthatwillhelpyoumanageyourtimeand

achieveyourgoals.AccordingtolatestresearchfromKelly,whichlastyear

foundover10000peoplepermanentjobsacrossawiderangeofbusiness

sectors,employersarelookingfortoptalentcombinedwithcommitmentand

enthusiasm.

Prioritizeyourneeds

Workoutyourpriorities.What'simportanttoyou,whatsortofcompanydo

youwanttoworkforandwhattypeofjobyouareafter?Howambitiousare

you,wouldyoubepreparedtorelocate,howfarareyouwillingtocommute

andhowimportantisjobsatisfaction?Thisinitialhomeworkwillhelpyouto

recognizeyourownkeyrequirementsandcouldsaveahugeamountoftime

thatcouldbewastedchasingafterthewrongtypeofjob.

Consulttheexperts

Takethehassleoutofjobhuntingbydiscussingyourcareeroptionswiththe

experts.StaffinggiantsKellyServiceshaveover500experiencedrecruitment

Consultantsin120HighStreetlocationswhocantakethelegworkoutofjob

huntingforyou.Theyhavecontactswithmulti-national"bluechips"aswell

aswithsmallerlocalcompaniesand,withcuttingedgetechnologyinplace,

theycanlookatallavailablejobsnationwideatthetouchofabutton.

ExecutiveCVtips

SellingyourselfandyourskillssuccessfullyinyourCVcanmakeallthe

differencebetweensecuringanintervieworfindingyourselfontherejectlist.

Remembertofocusonyourachievements,togiveexamplesoftasksyouhave

successfullycompletedwhichdemonstrateyourstrengthsandcompetencies

andtoincludeactivitiesthatreflectyourattitudeandpersonality.YourCV

shouldbetailoredtospecificjobopportunitiesandyoushouldhavean

electronicversionaswellasapaperbasedone.MakingsurethatyourCVis

uptoscratchisoneoftheservicesofferedbyKelly,soifyoursisinneedof

anoverhaulcontacttheexperts.

Jobsonline

TheInternethasrevolutionizedthesearchforworkandthewebisagreat

placetolookforjobs.Therearehundredsofdifferentjobsadvertisedonwww.

kellyservices,co.uk-andbecauseit'savailable24-7youcancheckupon

yourjobopportunitieswheneveritsuitsyou.Onceyouhaveregisteredfor

workandgivenusallyourdetails,Kellywillcontactyouwhentherightjob

comesup-youdon'tevenhavetochaseus.Butmakesurethatyousetupa

privateemailaddressbecauseyouwon'twanttobebombardedatwork.

Getconnected

Theweb,whichgivesyouaccesstomorethanamillioncompaniesinevery

partoftheglobe,istheplacetoresearchyourpotentialemployers.Usea

searchenginetofindoutthelatestonspecificcompanies,industriesandwho's

beeninthenews.

Effectivetimemanagement

Usingyourtimeeffectivelyiscrucial,particularlyifyouareworkingwhile

lookingforyournewjob,andit'sherethatyourstrategyandplanofaction

willcomeintotheirown.Makesurethatyourplanhastargets,realistic

deadlines,andthatyousetcertainperiodsoftimeasidetofocusonyour

search.Onehourofconcentratedeffortisworthfourhoursofinterruptions,

somakesureyouarenotdisturbed!Intoday'sbusyworldit'sallabout

learningtosavetimeandspenditeffectively.

Careercounseling

Sometimesyoujustneedsomeonetotalkto,togetyourthoughtsmobilized,

andKelly'scareercounselingserviceistheperfectoption.Inabsoluteprivacy

youcandiscussyouremployabilityandfinancialexpectationsinthe

knowledgethatKellyhasallthelatestmarketdataonsalariesandtrendsto

hand.Beingabletopinpointwhereyouwantyourcareertogoandmapouta

realisticpathwayisagreatco

A.Managingtime.

B.Workingoutpriorities.

C.Consultingtheexperts.

D.Askingforthefamily'srequirements.

12.

LikeNewYorkandLondon,Washington,D.C.hasgrownwithoutplansand

blueprints.

A.YB.NC.NG

13.

Accordingtomanydoctorsandnutritionists,ourmaximumdailycalorie

intakeoffatcaloriesis.

14.

TherelationshipbetweenChadandtheSudanisnotandsotheborder

crossingisparticularlydifficult.

15.Biotechfirmshavenotmuchinterestinthedevelopingworldmarket

because.

A.runningbusinessthereneedsmuchindistribution

B.farmerstherearetoopoortobuytheirproducts

C.thesefinnswanttokeeptheirtechnologysecret

D.farmerstheredon'tlikegeneticallymodifiedcrops

16.

ThepracticeatImperialCollege,Londonprovesthatsomescientists'fearsof

focusingtoomuchcommunicationare.

17.ThecurrentruraldepopulationinEuropeistheresultoflong-term

emigrationandindustrialization.

18.

Asmallpopulationmayundergogeometric,orexponentialgrowthwhen

introducedintoafavorableenvironment.

A.YB.NC.NG

19.Nowadaysemployersoftenaskquestionsdesignedto.

A.findtheinterviewees'shortcomings

B.findthesolutionsofthecompany'sproblems

C.maketheintervieweesrealizetheyneedtolearnmore

D.discovermoreaboutintervieweeandthewaytheintervieweereactto

differentsituations

20.

Ifyouaredoingacademicreadinginyourlibrary,you'readvised.

A.tohitoverstuffedcouchesandchairstoproduceideas

B.touseoverstuffedcouchesandchairsforarefreshment

C.nottouseoverstuffedcouchesandchairs

D.nottostuffcomfortablecoachesorchairs

、3.ListeningComprehension（10題）

21.SectionC

Directions:Inthissection,youwillhearapassagethreetimes.Whenthe

passageisreadforthefirsttime,youshouldlistencarefullyforitsgeneral

idea.Whenthepassageisreadforthesecondtime,youarerequiredtofillin

theblanksnumberedfrom36to43withtheexactwordsyouhavejustheard.

Forblanksnumberedfrom44to46youarerequiredtofillinthemissing

information.Fortheseblanks,youcaneitherusetheexactwordsyouhave

justheardorwritedownthe

聽力原文：Lastyear,researcherspublishednewfindingsfromtheWomen's

HealthInitiative,along-termstudyofmorethan160000midlifewomen.The

datashowedthatmultivitamin-takersarenohealthierthanthosewhodon't

takethepills,atleastwhenitcomestothebigdiseases-cancer,heartdisease,

andstroke"Evenwomenwithpoordietsweren'thelpedbytakinga

multivitamin,"saysstudyauthorMarianNeuhouser,PhD,inthecancer

preventionprogramattheFredHutchinsonCancerResearchCenter,in

Seattle.

Vitaminsupplementscameintofashionintheearly1900s,whenitwas

difficultorimpossibleformostpeopletogetawidevarietyoffreshfruitsand

vegetablesyear-round.Backthen,vitamindeficiencydiseasesweren't

unheard-of:thebowedlegsandconfusionribscausedbyasevereshortageof

vitaminD,ortheskinproblemsandmentalconfusioncausedbyalackof

vitaminB.

Butthesedays,you'reextremelyunlikelytobeseriouslydeficientifyoueat

anaverageAmericandiet,ifonlybecausemanypackagedfoodsarevitamin-

enriched.Sure,mostofuscoulddowithacouplemoredailyservingsof

produce,butamultidoesn'tdoagoodjobatsubstitutingforthose."Multi

vitaminshavemaybetwodozeningredients—butplantshavehundredsof

otherusefulcompounds,"Neuhousersays."Ifyoujusttakeamultivitamin,

you'remissinglotsofcompoundsthatmaybeprovidingbenefits."

Thatsaidthereisonegroupthatprobablyoughttokeeptakingamulti-

vitamin:womenofreproductiveage.Thesupplementisinsuranceincaseof

pregnancy.AwomanwhogetsadequateamountsoftheBvitaminismuch

lesslikelytohaveababywithabirthdefect.

Lastyear,researcherspublishednewfindingsfromtheWomen'sHealth

Initiative,along-termstudyofmorethan160000midlifewomen.Thedata

showedthatmultivitamin-takersareno[Bl]—―thanthosewhodon't

takethepills,atleastwhenitcomestothebigdiseases-cancer,heartdisease,

and[B2]

"Evenwomenwithpoordietsweren'thelpedbytakingamultivitamin,"says

studyauthorMarianNeuhouser,PhD,inthecancer[B3]——program

attheFredHutchinsonCancerResearchCenter,inSeattle.

Vitamin[B4]cameintofashionintheearly1900s,whenitwas

difficultorimpossibleformostpeopletogetawidevarietyoffreshfruitsand

vegetablesyear-round.Backthen,vitamin[B5]diseasesweren't

unheard-of:thebowedlegsand[B6]ribscausedbyasevereshortage

ofvitaminD,ortheskinproblemsandmental[B7]causedbya

lackofvitaminB.

Butthesedays,you're[B8]unlikelytobeseriouslydeficientifyou

eatanaverageAmericandiet,ifonlybecausemanypackagedfoodsare

vitamin-enriched.Sure,[B9]."Multivitaminshavemaybetwo

dozeningredients-butplantshavehundredsofotherusefulcompounds,"

Neuhousersays."[BIO]

Thatsaidthereisonegroupthatprobablyoughttokeeptakingamulti-

vitamin:womenofreproductiveage.Thesupplementisinsuranceincaseof

pregnancy.[Bll].

[Bl]

22.

[B3]

23.(28)

A.Shewasaskedtocallthechairman'swife.

B.ShewasaskedtomakeacopyofEnglishfinalexam.

C.Shewasaskedtogotothechainnan'swife'soffice.

D.Shewasaskedtoretakethefinalexam.

24.(36)

A.BebopreflectedthestateoftheAmericaneconomy.

B.Bebopmadetheperformancetaximposed.

C.Bebopdevelopedbecauseoftheperformancetax.

D.Bebopsufferedfromtheperfonnancetax.

25.聽力原文：M:Openwide.Nowshowmewhereithurts.

W:Hereonthetop,especiallywhenIbiteintosomethinghotorcold.

Q:Whoistheman?

(17)

A.Adentist.B.Acook.C.Adietician.D.Atwirler.

26.聽力原文：Yearsagobeforetherewererefrigerators,anicehousewasa

buildingusedforstoringice.Thefirsticehouseswereinthecellarsof

farmhouses.Piecesofice,mixedwithsnowandmeadowgrass,werepiledin

winterandkeptuntilthefollowingsummer.Soonfarmersbegantobuild

separatehousesforstoringice.Theseicehouseshaddoublewallswithhay

stuffedbetweentokeepoutanyheat.Blocksoficewereputinsidethe

icehouseandpackedwithstraworsawdust.

Wheredidtheicefortheseicehousescomefrom?Workerstookitfroma

frozenpondorriver.Theysawedtheiceintoevenblocks.Thentheypulled

theiceblocksfromthewaterwithhooksandcarriedthemtotheicehouseson

sleds.Specialtoolshelpedtheworkerscutandhandletheice.Iceaxes

choppedlargeholesintheice.Icesawscuttheiceintoevenblocks.Choppers

loosenedtheseblocksfromoneanother.Icehooksfastenedthemselvesinto

thelargeblocks.Thentheycouldbecarriedoverthefrozensurfaceofthe

pondorriver.Tongswereusedtopickupthesmallerblocksofice.Ships

carriediceallovertheworld.In1799thefirstboatloadintheUnitedStates

wassentfromNewYorkCitytoicehousesinNewOrleans.Louisiana.A

boatloadwassentfromBoston,Massachusetts,totheWestIndiestohelpfight

yellowfeverin1805.IcemerchantsinBostonalsoshippedtonsoficefrom

pondsandriverstocitiesinEurope.

(30)

A.Separatehouseswerebuiltforstoringice.

B.Doublewallswerebuiltinicehousestokeepcool.

C.Blocksoficewerepackedwithweedinicehouses.

Dicewasputintoicehousesinwinter.

27.

[BIO]

28.(25)

A.Lateinthemorning.

B.Earlyintheafternoon.

C.Sometimebeforedawn.

D.Shortlyaftersunrise.

29.

[B4]

30.（24）

A.Helovesthecityverymuch.

B.Hedoesn'tseemtolovethecityverymuch.

C.Hehatesthecity.

D.Hedoesn'tknow.

四、4.ReadingComprehension（ReadinginDepth）（3題）

31.Basically,therearethreetypesoffatigue:physical,pathological（由疾病

弓[起的）,andpsychological.Asyoumightsuspect,eachdifferssignificantly

fromtheothers.

Whenyouexerciseyourbodyyouproducewasteproducts.Muscles,for

example,discardlacticacid（乳酸）intotheblood;cellsdumpincarbon

dioxide,Whenthesewastesreachacertainlevelintheblood,thebrainis

notifiedandyouractivityleveldrops.Excesswastesinthemusclesmay

producesoreness.Ifthebloodofaphysicallyfatiguedanimalisinjectedinto

arestedanimal,itwillproducefatigue.Thesolutiontothistypeoffatigueis

simple-rest.Thatshouldreviveyou;ifitdoesn't,anothercauseshouldbe

sought.

Haveyoueverbecomeinvolvedinsomanyactivitiesthatyouhadtobein

twoplacesatonce?Thisiswhathappenswhenyourbodyhasadisease.The

cellsareovertaxedandcannotkeepupwithbothfightingthediseaseand

keepingyouactive.Theresultisfatigue.Somecommunicablediseaseslike

thefluandcoldsarenotoriousfordrainingyourenergy.Othernon-

communicablediseases,likeanemia（貧血），drainyoubecauseyouare

lackinganimportantbodyingredient.Beingoverweightcancause

pathologicalfatigue.Itshouldbeobviousthatthistypeoffatigueisnotgoing

togoawaywithouttreatment.Inaway,pathologicalfatigueisalifesaver.It

letsyouknowsomethingiswrongandthatyouneedrest.Evenapoordiet

canproducepathologicalfatigue.Frequently,peoplewhogooncrashdiets

developpathologicalfatigue,andifthedietisnotimproved,theymaydo

physicalharmtotheirbodies.

Hereisthemostcommontypeoffatigue.Almosteverybodyexperiencesit

nowandthen.Often,thecauseisanemotionalwaryouarewagingwith

yourselforthosearoundyou.Someofthesefamiliarfactorscanbringon

psychologicalfatigue,worries,stress,lackofexercise,boredom,depression.

Ifyouknowsomeonewithpsychologicalfatigue,wouldyouadvisehimto

rest?Noway!Thatmightbefineforourothertypesoffatigue,butforthis

one,it'sdeadly.Ifyouareevergoingtobeabletocopewithstress,depression,

orworry,youneedoxygeninyourcellsandamoreoptimisticattitude.Get

outofthechairanddosomething!Believeitornot,manypeoplethrow

themselvesintophysicallaborlikecleaningorcarpentryto"defatigue"

themselves.Ifyoufindyourselfinaparticularlystressfulsituationthatyou

can'tphysicallyescape,escapementally.Whenfatiguecontinues,maybeyou

needtogettotherootoftheproblem.

Thetopicforthispassageis。

A.theproblemsofinsomnia

B.typesoffatigue

C.thedangersoffatigue

D.people'sneedforrest

32.

[C6]

33.SectionA

Directions:Inthissection,thereisashortpassagewith5questionsor

incompletestatements.Readthepassagecarefully.Thenanswerthequestions

orcompletethestatementsinthefewestpossiblewords.

Lazinessisasin,everyoneknowsthat.Wehaveprobablyallhadlectures

pointingoutthatlazinessisimmoral,thatitiswasteful,andthatlazypeople

willneveramounttoanythinginlife.Butlazinesscanbeharmfulthanthat,

anditisoftencausedbymorecomplexreasonsthansimplewishtoavoid

work.Somepeoplewhoappeartobelazyaresufferingfrommuchmore

seriousproblems.Theymaybesodistrustfuloftheirfellowworkersthatthey

areunabletojoininanygrouptaskforfearofridiculeorfearofhavingtheir

ideasstolen.Thesepeoplewhoseemlazymaybeparalyzedbyafearof

failurethatpreventsfruitfulwork.Orothersortsoffantasiesmayprevent

work:somepeoplearesobusyplanning,sometimesplanninggreatdealsof

fantasticachievementsthattheyareunabletodealwith;strictlyspeaking,

theyaremerelyprocrastinating—reschedulingtheirday.

Lazinesscanactuallybehelpful.Likeprocrastinators,somepeoplemaylook

lazywhentheyarereallythinking,planning,contemplating,researching.We

shouldrememberthatsomegreatscientificdiscoveriesoccurredbychanceor

whilesomeonewas"goofingoff."Newtonwasn'tworkingintheorchard

whentheapplehithimandhedevisedthetheoryofgravity.Allofuswould

liketohavesome"lazy"buildthecarorstovewebuy,particularlyifthat

"laziness"werecausedbytheworker'stakingtimetocheckeachstepofhis

workandtodohisjobright.Andsometimes,being"lazy"—thatis,takingtime

offforarest-isgoodfortheoverworkedstudentorexecutive.Takingarest

canbeparticularlyhelpfultotheathletewhoistryingtoohard,todoctor

who'ssimplyworkinghimselfovertimetoomanyevenings,attheclinic.So

becarefulwhenyou'retemptedtocallomeonelazy.Thatpersonmaybe

thinking,resting,orplanninghisorhernextbook.

Themainideaofthispassageis.

五、5.ErrorCorrection?題）

34.Teachersbelievethatstudents'responsibilitywithSI.

learningisnecessary.Ifalongreadingassignmentis

given,instructorsexpectstudentstobefamiliarwiththe

informationsinthereadingeveniftheydonotdiscussitinS2.

classorgiveanexamination.Theidealstudentis

consideredtobeonewhomotivatedtolearnforthesakeofS3.

learning,nottheonewhoisinterestedonlyingettinghigh

grades.Grade-consciousstudentsmaybefrustratedwith

teacherswhodonotbelieveitisnecessarytogradeevery

assignment.Sometimeshomeworkisreturnedwithbrief

writingcommentsbutwithoutagrade.WhenresearchisS4.

assigned,theprofessorexpectsthestudenttomaketheS5.

initiativeandcompletetheassignmentwithminimal

guidance.Professorsdonothavetimetoexplainhowthe

libraryworks;theyexpectstudents,particulargraduateS6.

students,tobeabletousethereferencesourcesinthe

library.IntheUnitedStates,professorshaveotherduties

exceptteaching.OftentheyeitherhaveadministrativeworkS7.

todoormaybeobligedtopublisharticlesandbooks.ButS8.

thetimethataprofessorcanspendwithastudentoutsideof

classisverylimited.Educationalpracticessuchasstudent

participationindicatesarespectforindividualresponsibilityS9.

andindependence.ThemannerwhicheducationisS10.

providedinanycountryreflectsbasicculturalandsocial

beliefsofthatcountry.

[SI]

35.

[S2]

36.[S10]

六、6.ErrorCorrection?題）

37.

[S8]

38.

[S5]

39.

[S7]

參考答案

l.AwayfromNet-barCampaignIthasbeenreportedthatamiddleschoolin

XuzhouCityhasrecentlylaunchedacampaignnamed"AwayfromNet-bar".

Morethanathousandstudentshavesignedfortheirsolemnpromisethatthey

willnotspendasingleminuteinthenet-bars.Withthecomingofthesummer

vacationthiscampaignisespeciallymeaningfulforthehealthydevelopment

oftheminors.TheInternethasbroughtpeoplegreatconvenienceingetting

informationentertainingandcontactingeachotherandithasalsobenefited

somebusinessmenespeciallytheownersofnet-barsWhileitistruethatmost

net-barsarerunninglegallyitisalsohuethatsomeareofferingunhealthy

programsthatinvolveviolenceandsexcontent.Sincemostmiddleschool

studentsarepronetobeinfluencedandtheycanhardlytellwhichbarisdoing

wellandwhichoneisnotitisonlyadvisablethattheyshouldstayawayfrom

all.Besidesstayingawayfromnet-barsisalsogoodtostudents'physical

health.Bypassivelysittingtoolonginfrontofthecomputerscreenboththeir

eyesightandphysiquesuffer.ObviouslytheAwayfromNet-barsCampaign

isanactivitythatisworthadvocatinganditmeritsotherschools'

reference.AwayfromNet-barCampaignIthasbeenreportedthatamiddle

schoolinXuzhouCityhasrecentlylaunchedacampaignnamed"Awayfrom

Net-bar".Morethanathousandstudentshavesignedfortheirsolemnpromise

thattheywillnotspendasingleminuteinthenet-bars.Withthecomingof

thesummervacation,thiscampaignisespeciallymeaningfulforthehealthy

developmentoftheminors.TheInternethasbroughtpeoplegreat

convenienceingettinginformation,entertainingandcontactingeachother,

andithasalsobenefitedsomebusinessmen,especiallytheownersofnet-bars,

Whileitistruethatmostnet-barsarerunninglegally,itisalsohuethatsome

areofferingunhealthyprogramsthatinvolveviolenceandsexcontent.Since

mostmiddleschoolstudentsarepronetobeinfluencedandtheycanhardly

tellwhichbarisdoingwellandwhichoneisnot,itisonlyadvisablethatthey

shouldstayawayfromall.Besides,stayingawayfromnet-barsisalsogood

tostudents'physicalhealth.Bypassivelysittingtoolonginfrontofthe

computerscreen,boththeireyesightandphysiquesuffer.Obviously,the

AwayfromNet-barsCampaignisanactivitythatisworthadvocatingandit

meritsotherschools'reference.

2.DoesGradesMeanAbility?Somepeoplethinkthatgradescanreflect

students'abilityintheiracademicpursuit.Thehighertheirgradesthesmarter

theymustbe.InthecompetitionforgradesitishardtobeawinnerDoes

GradesMeanAbility?Somepeoplethinkthatgradescanreflectstudents'

abilityintheiracademicpursuit.Thehighertheirgrades,thesmarterthey

mustbe.Inthecompetitionforgrades,itishardtobeawinner

3.TheImportanceofCreatingaHealthyInternet[1]Withthedevelopmentof

oursocietyandeconomytheInternetbecomesanecessarytoolforeveryone

toobtaininformation.[2]Howevertherearealsosomeunhealthycontentsin

tTheImportanceofCreatingaHealthyInternet[1]Withthedevelopmentof

oursocietyandeconomy,theInternetbecomesanecessarytoolforeveryone

toobtaininformation.[2]However,therearealsosomeunhealthycontentsin

t解析：作文標題是“創(chuàng)建健康網絡環(huán)境的重要性”，這已經表明，寫作

的重點是說明“為什么要創(chuàng)建健康的網絡環(huán)境”。但所給出的outline沒有

體現這一點。僅僅根據outline動筆，恐怕寫不出好作文來。

提綱的第1點和第2點都址說背景，是為我們要論述的論點服務的；第

3點指向“措施”，也與論點有關。但是，以這三點中的任何一條為中心，

都有可能偏題。

那么該如何做這篇文章呢?不僅要把提綱中的內容納入，而且還要特別

淪述“創(chuàng)建健康網絡環(huán)境的重要性”。要思考那么兒條“重要性”出來，才

能有話可說，切合中心主旨。洲練從不同的角度考慮健康網絡的重要仲，

培養(yǎng)良好的思維能力，是寫好此類作文的關鍵。

Analysis

[1]對應outline的第1條

[2]對應outline的第2條。如果不知道怎么用英潔表達“炒

作”(drumbeating),不說就是。反正僅僅是不良現象中的一個例子而已。

[3]主題句，對應作文標題。

[4][5][6]三條理由。健康的網絡可以：預防網絡犯罪：保護兒童不受

不良信息的影響；方便我們更好地利用網絡資源。(這部分可以八仙過海,

各顯神通)

⑺總結全文.照應outline的第3條。

4.MyViewonPart-timelobsRecentyearsmoreandmorecollegestudents

areeagertofindpart-timejobsintheirsparetime.Astowhetheritis

worthwhiledrawingmuchattentiontothejobfromcollegestudypeople's

attitudesvarygreatly.Myopinionisthatstudentsshouldgivetoppriorityto

academicperformancewhiletakingapart-timejob.Ontheonehandtaking

upapart-timejobmayhelpthestudentsinmanyrespects—stimulatelearning

moreefficientlyexploretheknowledgeoutsidethebooksandevengainthe

financialindependence.Alsotheexperienceoftakingthepart-timejobisa

perfectpreparationforthestudents'futurejob-huntingcompetition.Onthe

otherhandpart-timejobshavestrongnegativeinfluenceonthestudents'study.

Andtheworkwhichoftenmakesastudentunderstrongpressurecanonlybe

doneatthecostofthetimeinwhichthestudentsshouldstudyforthemselves.

Itisevidentthatthereisalwaysaconflictbetweenstudyandwork.Inmy

opinionwhetheritisworthwhiletakingapart-timejobdependsonourability

todealwiththerelationshipbetweenstudiesandworkproperly.Ifthereisa

conflictbetweenstudyandworkforastudentIthinkheshouldputatop

priorityonwhetheritisagoodhelptohisacademicperformance.MyView

onPart-timelobsRecentyears,moreandmorecollegestudentsareeagerto

findpart-timejobsintheirsparetime.Astowhetheritisworthwhiledrawing

muchattentiontothejobfromcollegestu