外研版（2019） 選擇性必修 第二冊(cè)Unit6 Survival Writing課件

Unit6

Survival

Readthestoryandanswerthequestions.Whereisthepersoninthestory?Whatdifficultiesishefacing?ThepersoninthestoryisonMars.Hehastokeephimselfsafefromthedeadlyradiationoutside.Andheisfacingthelackofwater,oxygenandfood.Whathashealreadydonetostayalive?Whatwillhedonext?Hehasresumedcommunicationwiththebase.Hehasdiscoveredanundergroundicedeposittogetwater,andproduceoxygenwiththewater.HewillworkouthowtofarmonMarsandgrowplantswithseeds.Findoutthemainideaofeachparagraph.TheproblemthewritermeetsThethingsthatcanhelphimtosurviveThedifficultiesheisfacingImagineyouhavetosurviveinadangerousplace.Planyourstorybyansweringthequestions.Whatarethedangers?(eg.animals,thecold,noair)Whereisthedangerousplace?(eg.Antarctica,space,thejungle)Howdoyoufeel?(eg.confident,anxious,optimistic)Howdoyoumanagetosurvive?(eg.catchfish,meltsnow,makeafire)【審題定調(diào)】本寫(xiě)作任務(wù)要求寫(xiě)一篇求生故事，屬于記敘文的范疇。講述故事，就是要通過(guò)完整的情節(jié)和生動(dòng)形象的語(yǔ)言，使讀者在享受故事情節(jié)的同時(shí)，有所感、有所悟。寫(xiě)作時(shí)應(yīng)注意：1.可以按照時(shí)間的先后順序展開(kāi)，也可以采用倒敘或插敘的手法進(jìn)行寫(xiě)作；2.故事的開(kāi)頭要交代故事發(fā)生的時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)、人物及背景。具體內(nèi)容可根據(jù)實(shí)際情況進(jìn)行適當(dāng)調(diào)整；3.在講述故事的經(jīng)過(guò)時(shí)，條理要清晰、重點(diǎn)應(yīng)突出，同時(shí)語(yǔ)言要準(zhǔn)確、生動(dòng)；4.故事的結(jié)尾要簡(jiǎn)潔明了，既在意料之外，又在情理之中，這樣才可以給讀者留下深刻的印象。本寫(xiě)作人稱(chēng)主要用第一人稱(chēng)。時(shí)態(tài)主要用一般過(guò)去時(shí)。【謀篇布局】本寫(xiě)作可分為三部分：第一部分：故事發(fā)生的背景；第二部分：故事的經(jīng)過(guò)（可穿插你的感受）；第三部分：故事的結(jié)局。WhatanAdventure! It’sbeenthreedayssinceIgotseparatedfromtheotherteammembers.WewenthikingtogetheronMonday,butbecameseparatedduetoaheavyrainstorm.Withoutacompass,Ilostdirection,andnowIamlostindensejungle. Therearenoroadsatall,soIhavetomakemyownwaystepbystep.Ihavehurtbothmyhandsquitebadlyfromallthethorns—theyareeverywhere.Tomakethingsworse,Istumbledandsprainedmyankle.Thepainiskillingme!Snakes,monkeys,insectsandotheranimalsappearfromtimetotime.Yesterday,Iheardtheroarofatigerfromfaraway.Iwasterrified!Irubstickstogethertomakeafireeverynighttokeepmyselfwarmandsafe.It'sreallyadifficulttechniquetomaster,andittakesmeseveralfrustratingandworryingattemptseveryevening.Ihavetoremindmyselftobecalmandoptimisticateverymoment. Foodalsoworriesmealot.I'vebeeneatingberriestoappeasemyhunger,butIhavetobeverycarefultoavoidanythingpoisonous. TodayIhavesomeluckwhenIfindastreamwhichIcanfollow.Itgive