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65-year-oldMr.Fairfaxhadretiredfromteaching.Hewasveryinterestedinadventure.Thistimehemadeanadventureonasparsely(稀少地)populatedland.Inthecoldwinter,hetriedanewplaceandforgottobringhiscellphone,theonlytimeonthetrip.Hetrekked(艱苦跋涉)morethanhalfanmilewithtwodogstoaharvestedwheatfield.Eyesfixedonthehorizoninexpectationofanotherrabbit,Mr.Fairfaxsteppedonthethinsnowonacanal.Suddenly,itcollapsed(坍塌)anddroppedhimfourfeettothebottom.Realizingthathewasintroubleandwasgoingtohurthimself,Mr.Fairfaxwassuddenlypickingupalotofspeed.Hisleftleghitfirst,andhelayonhissidetoreachforhisshotgun,unloadeditanduseditasacrutch(拐杖).Hespentanhourandahalfclimbingthecanalbutslippedandslidbackdownwhenhewaspartlyup.Thistime,oneofhisfeetgotstuckbetweentworocks.Mr.Fairfaxtoldhimselfthatifhedidn’tgethimselfoutofthatcanal,hewasn’tgoingtohaveaverygoodnight.Mr.Fairfaxwalkedhisfootfreeandclimbedmoreslowlyandcautiouslyoutofthecanal.Heimmediatelyrealizedthedifficultyofthetaskbeforehim.Theaccidentoccurredabout2p.m.,anditwasnearing5p.m.withtheroadfarawayasthesunwassetting.Mr.Fairfaxfocusedoncrawlingtosafety.Evenwithhisgunsupportinghim,hoppingwasimpractical.Instead,hesatdownandpushedhimselfbackwardlessthan40inchesatatimewithhisgoodleg.Hewasdeterminedandsurethathemustholdon.Hewasinexhaustionandhadmorefrequentbreaks.Temperaturesdroppedovernight,andhisglovesandbootsgotwet.Hishandsandfeetsoonwerecompletelynumb.Para.1Mr.Fairfax’sdogshadbeenplayinginthefieldandeventuallycampuptohim.____Para.2However,gleams(微光)ofdaylightremained----Mr.Fairfaxsawthesixthcar.____

原文呈現(xiàn)Part1:Thekeyelementsofastory5W1H

CONTENTSWhowhenwhereWhatwhyhowMr.FairfaxtwodogsInacoldwinteronasparselypopulatedland,aharvestedwheatfieldHewasstuckinthecoldwinterweatherashisleftleggothurt.Heneededhelptogethomeorhewouldnotsurviveonthecoldwinternight.Heaccidentallyslippedintothebottomofthecanalandgothurt.Heneededtowalkedtotheroadtogetrescued.Main

idea:Mr.Fairfaxmadeanadventureonasparselypopulatedlandonacoldwinterday.While__________(explore)aharvestedwheatfiled,he________(accident)slippedintothebottomofthecanalandgothisleftleghurt.Ittookhim3hours________(get)outofthecanal.Withduskcomingandtemperaturedropping,Mr.Fairfax,_______handsandfeetcompletelynumb,neededhelp!exploringaccidentallytogetwhose

第二部分續(xù)寫(xiě)情節(jié)創(chuàng)設(shè)和依據(jù)PART0201.topicandtheme02.thecharacterandhisobjectives&emotions0203.thekeyinformationinthegivenpart(theforeshadows)04.thegivensentencesSelfQuestion&Answerabout:SelfQuestion&AnswertopicandthemeQuestions:Whatkindofstoryitis?What’sthegeneralplotofsuchastory?What’sthethemeofthestory?Answers:Itisastoryaboutanadventure.exploredanewplacePossible1.gotdistractedandlostPossible2.gotstuck/caughtinunexpectedsituationPossible3:….GotrescuedbyothersGotoutoftroublebyoneselfGeneralplotofanadventurestoryexcited&happyanxious&sadfirstdesperatefinallyrelievedThemes:1.anunforgettableexperience2.bestrongandkeepaclearmindinfaceofunknownchallengeandtrytohelponeself…ending

thecharacterandhisobjectives&emotionsSelfQuestion&AnswerQuestions:1.WhatkindofpersonwasFairfax?2.Whathappenedtohim?3.Whatwashisobjectivesinthepassage?4.Whatdidhedotoachievehisobjectives,accordingtothegivenpartandsentences?Answerstoquestion1&2:Fairfax,whowasaretiredteacherandinterestedinadventure,gotstuckinasparselypopulatedlandincoldwinterlateafternoon,withhisleftleghurt.objectives:togetrescuedbeforeitwastotallydarkPossibleplanstogetrescued:gotoutofcanal---cametotheroad-----getrescuedbythepassingcarorturntoothersforhelp?Possibleplanstogetrescued:gotoutofcanal---cametotheroad-----getrescuedbythepassingcarorbyothers?

thekeyinformationinthegivenpart(theforeshadows)Questions:1.Didhegotoutofthecanalandcametotheroadwheretherewerecarspassingattheendofthegivenpart?2.Couldheaskedthedogstofindpeopletohelphim?4.Mr.Fairfaxwalkedhisfootfreeandclimbedmoreslowlyandcautiouslyoutofthecanal.Heimmediatelyrealizedthedifficultyofthetaskbeforehim.Theaccidentoccurredabout2p.m.,anditwasnearing5p.m.withtheroadfarawayasthesunwassetting.5.Mr.Fairfaxfocusedoncrawlingtosafety.Evenwithhisgunsupportinghim,hoppingwasimpractical.Instead,hesatdownandpushedhimselfbackwardlessthan40inchesatatimewithhisgoodleg.Hewasdeterminedandsurethathemustholdon.Hewasinexhaustionandhadmorefrequentbreaks.Temperaturesdroppedovernight,andhisglovesandbootsgotwet.Hishandsandfeetsoonwerecompletelynumb.Hedidn’tcometotheroad,becauseroadwasfarawayandhisphysicalconditiondidn’tallowhim65-year-oldMr.Fairfaxhadretiredfromteaching.Hewasveryinterestedinadventure.Thistimehemadeanadventureonasparsely(稀少地)populatedland.Inthecoldwinter,hetriedanewplaceandforgottobringhiscellphone,theonlytimeonthetrip.Hetrekked(艱苦跋涉)morethanhalfanmilewithtwodogstoaharvestedwheatfield.No,hecouldn’t.Theremighthavebeennopeople.Para.1Mr.Fairfax’sdogshadbeenplayinginthefieldandeventuallycampuptohim.Para.2However,gleams(微光)ofdaylightremained----Mr.Fairfaxsawthesixthcar.

thegivensentencesSelfQuestion&Answer???Possibleplanstogetrescued:gotoutofcanal---cametotheroad-----gotrescuedbyacar

para1para2Q1:Whatdiddogsdototheirowner?Q2:HowdidMrFairfaxgettotheroad?Q3:WhatdidMr.Fairfaxdotoattractthefivecars’attention?Q4:HowdidMr.Fairfaxfeelwithoutgettinghelp?Q1:WhatdidMr.

Fairfax

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attention?Q2:WhatdidthedriverdotohelpMr.Fairfax?Q3:HowdidMr.Fairfaxfeelwhenrescued?Q4:What’sMr.Fairfaxreflectionaboutthisadventure?Para.1Mr.Fairfax’sdogshadbeenplayinginthefieldandeventuallycampuptohim.

thegivensentencesSelfQuestion&AnswerPossibleplanstogetrescued:gotoutofcanal---cametotheroad-----gotrescuedbyacar

para1para2Q1:WhatdiddogsdotoMr.Fairfax?surrounded,warmed,barkedandwaggedtheirtailsanxiouslyQ2:HowdidMrFairfaxgettotheroad?

struggled,crawled,walkedwiththehelpofdogsbit,pulled,dragged,pushedQ3:WhatdidMr.Fairfaxdotoattractthefivecars’attention?wavedwildlyandshoutedloudlyQ4:HowdidMr.Fairfaxfeelwithoutgettinghelp?wasindespairPara1:Mr.Fairfax’sdogshadbeenplayinginthefieldandeventuallycameuptohim.Thetwodogssurroundedhisbodytowarmhimwhilebarkingwildly.Mr.Fairfaxfinallystruggledtothefenceneartheroadwiththehelpofthedogs.Despitehisexhaustionandpainfulleg,hestilltriedtowavedownadriverforfearthathemightloseconsciousnessatanytime.Hewavedwildlyandshoutedloudly,butinvain.Whenthefifthcarpassedwithoutstopping,hisheartsankindespair.Para.2However,gleams(微光)ofdaylightremained----Mr.Fairfaxsawthesixthcar.

thegivensentencesSelfQuestion&AnswerPossibleplanstogetrescued:gotoutofcanal---cametotheroad-----gotrescuedbyacar

givenpartpara1para2Q1:WhatMr.

Fairfax

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attention?gathered/musterallhisstrength,wavedwildly,dogsbarkedwildlydogsracedafterthecar,dogsrantothemiddleoftheroadQ2:WhatthedriverdotohelpMr.Fairfax?

wrappedhimwithablanket,supportedhimtothecar,helpedthedogstothecar,drovethemhome/ahospitalQ3:HowdidMr.Fairfaxfeelwhenrescued?gratefulQ4:What’sMr.Fairfaxreflectionaboutthisadventure?

thankstohisfaithfuldogsandthekinddriver,hewasfinallysaved.heinspiredhimselfwiththisaccident.Para.2However,gleams（微光）ofdaylightremained-Mr.Fairfaxsawthesixthcar．Gettingupallhisstrengthandcourage,hewavedwildlyagain.Fortunately,thistimethecarstoppedandthedriverrolleddownthewindowtoaskhimwhatwaswrong.AfterrealizingMr.Fairfax’ssituation,thedriverjumpedoff,assistinghimontothebackseatwithhistwolovely