2024屆高考英語作文復(fù)習(xí)專項(xiàng)讀后續(xù)寫?yīng)氉杂瓚?zhàn)后的收獲 講義-

讀后續(xù)寫?yīng)氉杂瓚?zhàn)后的收獲

閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段，使之構(gòu)成一

篇完整的短文。

WhenIwasinmiddleschool,myfamilymovedtoSeattle,wheremy

parentsstartedtheirnewbusiness一asmallgrocerystoredownstairs

myhouse.Asagirlofshyandreservednature,Ihadtotakeafresh

starttofitintothesophisticatedcitylife.

Onesunnyday,myschoolannouncedanexcitingevent,atalentshow

forthelocalfoodbank.Studentswereencouragedtoshowcasetheir

uniquetalentsinfrontofthepublicinthecityhallonNationalDay.A

buzzofexcitementfilledtheschoolaseveryonebeganpreparingfor

thebigday.Deepdown,Ifeltasparkofcuriosityandadesireto

participate.However,myself-doubtheldmeback,"Idon'thaveany

specialskillstoshare.5,

Daysturnedintoweeks,andthetalentshowdrewcloser.Icouldn't

shaketheupsettingfeelinguntilonedayEmma,oneofthemost

populargirlsinmyclass,cametomewhileIwashelpinginthe

grocerystoreafterclass."Howaboutsingingtogetherinthetalent

show?”Shegrinned,ctIheardyousingingatune,alongthewayback

home.Ican'thelpfollowingyouhere.^^Gosh,Icouldn'tbelievemy

ears.Emma,withpersonalityandpopularity,acknowledgedmylittle

talent.SinceEmmahadtheworld'sprettiestvoice,Ifeltlikebeing

favouredbyfortune.

“Youtwo?Thetalentshowfbrthefoodbank?^^Mymumbenttowards

usandherfacelitup."Abigoccasion."Thenalightbulbseemedtogo

inherhead."Whynotpractiserightnowupstairs?Ibetyou511bea

perfectmatch.5,Winkingatus,sheseemedtoknowwewerethinking

alike.

EmmaandIembarkedonrehearsingalmosteverysingledayafter

school.Webrainstormed,exchangedideasandrehearsedthe

scene.Asthedaysrolledby,Iwasfeelingprettygoodaboutouract.

Butthedaybeforetheperformance,Emmacalledthatshehadanacute

stomachacheandwasnotinanyshapetoperform.

【表達(dá)積累】

l.Asagirlofshyandreservednature,Ihadtotakeafreshstartto

fitintothesophisticatedcitylife.

2.Studentswereencouragedtoshowcasetheiruniquetalentsin

frontofthepublicinthecityhallonNationalDay.Abuzzof

excitementfilledtheschoolaseveryonebeganpreparingforthebig

day.Deepdown,Ifeltasparkofcuriosityandadesireto

participate.However,myself-doubtheldmeback,"Idon'thaveany

specialskillstoshare.”

3.Daysturnedintoweeks,andthetalentshowdrewcloser.

4.Emma,withpersonalityandpopularity,acknowledgedmylittle

talent.SinceEmmahadtheworld'sprettiestvoice,Ifeltlikebeing

favouredbyfortune.

5.Thenalightbulbseemedtogoinherhead.

6.Winkingatus,sheseemedtoknowwewerethinkingalike.

7.Emmacalledthatshehadanacutestomachacheandwasnotin

anyshapetoperform.

1.作為一個害羞而內(nèi)向的女孩，我不得不重新開始以適應(yīng)復(fù)雜的城

市生活。

2.鼓勵學(xué)生在國慶節(jié)當(dāng)天在市政廳向公眾展示自己的獨(dú)特才能。興

奮的嗡嗡聲充斥著學(xué)校，每個人都開始為重要的日子做準(zhǔn)備。在內(nèi)

心深處，我內(nèi)心充滿著好奇心和參與欲望的火花。然而，我的自我

懷疑阻止了我，“我沒有任何特殊的技能可以分享。

3.時間漸漸過去，才藝表演越來越近。

4.艾瑪，這個性極佳和人氣爆棚的女孩，承認(rèn)了我的小才華。由于

艾瑪擁有世界上最漂亮的聲音，我覺得自己備受命運(yùn)的青睞。

5.然后她的腦袋里靈光一現(xiàn)。

6.她朝我們眨眨眼，似乎知道我們在想什么。

7.艾瑪打電話說她突然肚子疼，無法完成表演。

1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；

2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。

Iwascompletelyknockedoutbythenews.

Finallycamethebigmoment.

【參考范文】

Iwascompletelyknockedoutbythenews.WithoutEmma'svoiceto

guideme,Iwoulddefinitelymessupandthiswasnothow

everythingwassupposedtogo!AsIstoodthere,feelingataloss,a

gentletouchonmyshoulderbroughtmebacktoreality.Itwasmy

mom,wearingacomfortingsmile.Afterhavingabriefideaofmy

story,shesaidinafirmtone,"You'veworkedsohard.Youcanmake

itonyourown."Memoriesofcountlessrehearsalcameflooding

back,drowningmyfearsandlosses.Swingingintoaction,Iadjusted

myperformancetoasolo,practicinginnotime.

Finallycamethebigmoment.Takingadeepbreath,Isteppedontothe

stage,envelopedintheglowofthelights.Atfirst,myvoicetrembled

withnervousness,butasthesongprogressed,my

confidencesoared.Ipouredmyemotionsintotheperformance,

lettingmyvoicecarrymyfeelingsintotheair.Thecrowdwatchedin

awe,theirapplauseandcheersechoinginthehall.Facingthe

overwhelmingresponse,IknewthatIhadconqueredmyfears.

Yes,theunexpecteddiscouragementcanbeablessingindisguiseif

wehaveabeliefinourselvesandnevergiveupourdreams.

續(xù)寫譯文

我完全被這個消息震驚了。如果沒有艾瑪?shù)穆曇魜硪龑?dǎo)我，我肯定

會搞砸，一切都不應(yīng)該是這樣的！當(dāng)我站在那里，感到不知所措時，

肩膀上輕輕的觸碰讓我回到了現(xiàn)實(shí)。那是我的媽媽，臉上掛著令人

安慰的微笑。在大致了解了我的故事后，她語氣堅(jiān)定地說：“你已

經(jīng)很努力了，你自己就能成功