2025版高考英語(yǔ)一輪總復(fù)習(xí)第一部分應(yīng)用文寫(xiě)作第一章書(shū)信第三講求助信咨詢(xún)

文體(一)求助信求助信是針對(duì)目前自己遇到的一些困難寫(xiě)信請(qǐng)求對(duì)方給予幫助的信件類(lèi)型。一般是就自己目前的困境求助，所以以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主；若涉及過(guò)往遭遇，則可用一般過(guò)去時(shí)。因?yàn)槭窍驅(qū)Ψ角笾?，所以言辭要誠(chéng)懇，如實(shí)說(shuō)出自己的困難和迫切需要幫助的境況；此外還要提前表達(dá)謝意。具體寫(xiě)作結(jié)構(gòu)如下：1．吸引眼球開(kāi)頭句①I(mǎi)amamiddleschoolstudentandIamwritingtotellyoumyproblemwhichhastroubledme.我是一名中學(xué)生。我寫(xiě)信告訴您一個(gè)困擾我的問(wèn)題。②I'mwritingtoyoutoaskwhetheryoucoulddomeafavour.我寫(xiě)信是想問(wèn)您能否幫我一個(gè)忙。③I'mwonderingifyoucouldtakethetroubletohelpmewith...我想知道您是否能費(fèi)心幫我……④I'msorrytobotheryou,butIhavesomedifficultieshereandIneedyourhelp.很抱歉打擾您，但我有些困難需要您的幫助。⑤Ihavedifficultyindoing...whichbothersmealot.SoIhavenochoicebuttoturntoyouforhelp.我在做……方面有困難，這很困擾我。所以我別無(wú)選擇，只能向您求助。2．亮點(diǎn)出彩篇中句①I(mǎi)seemnottobeabletofitinwellwithothershere.在這兒我似乎不能與他人融洽相處。②IlongtolearnEnglishwell,butIdon'tknowhow,whichmakesmeupset.我渴望學(xué)好英語(yǔ)，但我不知道怎么學(xué)，這使我很煩惱。③WhatbothersmeisthatIdon'tknowwhattodo.困擾我的事情是我不知道要做什么。④Ican'tconcentrateonmylessonsthesedays,andIfailedinthelastexam,whichworriesmealot.這些日子我不能專(zhuān)心學(xué)習(xí)，上次考試我沒(méi)及格，這使我很著急。⑤Ioftenfeelleftoutinthisschool,andIdon'tknowhowithascomeabout.在這所學(xué)校我經(jīng)常感到受冷落，我不知道這是怎么回事。⑥Facedwith/Facingsomanydifficulties,Ihavetoturntoyouforhelp.面對(duì)如此多的困難，我不得不向您求助。3．韻味無(wú)窮結(jié)尾句①I(mǎi)'meagertogetyourtimelyhelp./I'meagerforyourtimelyhelp.我渴望得到您及時(shí)的幫助。②Iwouldbeverygratefulifyoucouldhelpme.../Iwouldappreciateitifyoucoulddomeafavourand...如果您能幫助我……我會(huì)非常感激。③I'dappreciateitifyoucouldtakemyrequestintoconsideration/account.如果您能考慮我的請(qǐng)求，我將不勝感激。④Iwouldbegratefulifyoucouldgive/lendmeahand.如果您能幫助我，我將十分感激。Dear,Mynameis.I'mwritingtoaskwhetheryoucoulddomeafavour.(說(shuō)明自己的身份，提出寫(xiě)信目的)Ihavehadmuchdifficulty/troublein(交代自己面臨的困難).Besides,I'mveryupsetthat(提出令自己苦惱的問(wèn)題)．What'smore,Idon'tknow(進(jìn)一步說(shuō)明自己的困境)．I'mwonderingifyoucouldbesokindastosothat(請(qǐng)求對(duì)方幫助).Inthemeantime/Atthesametime,Ibegyoutosothat(再次請(qǐng)求對(duì)方的幫助).I'dappreciateitifyoucouldlendmeahand(表達(dá)對(duì)對(duì)方幫助的感激)．I'mlookingforwardtoyourearlyreply.Yourssincerely，LiHua(2021·全國(guó)甲卷改編)假定你是李華。你校計(jì)劃舉辦介紹中國(guó)傳統(tǒng)文化的主題班會(huì)，并在英文網(wǎng)站展示。請(qǐng)你寫(xiě)一封郵件給外國(guó)朋友Chris，向他了解哪些中國(guó)傳統(tǒng)文化更吸引外國(guó)友人。郵件內(nèi)容包括：1．闡明寫(xiě)信事由；2．征求建議；3．表示感謝。注意：1.寫(xiě)作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80左右；2．可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。【滿(mǎn)分范文】DearChris，I'mwritingtolearnfromyouaboutwhichtraditionalChinesecultureismoreappealingtoforeignfriends.OurschoolplanstoholdaclassmeetingwhosethemeistointroducetraditionalChineseculture.ThemeetingwillbedisplayedontheEnglishwebsite.InordertocarryforwardthetraditionalChinesecultureandattractmoreforeignfriends,we'redeterminedtomakethemeetingmeaningfulandimpressive.Idohopeyoucangiveussomeadvice.Lookingforwardtoyourreplyassoonaspossiblewithgratitude.Yours，LiHua【名師點(diǎn)評(píng)】1．文章開(kāi)篇表明寫(xiě)信意圖；隨后說(shuō)明求助的具體內(nèi)容(向?qū)Ψ搅私饽男┲袊?guó)傳統(tǒng)文化更吸引外國(guó)友人)；最后表達(dá)希望和感激。2．范文中使用了(appealing,carryforward,impressive,gratitude等)高級(jí)詞匯，并運(yùn)用了較多的語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)，如whose引導(dǎo)的定語(yǔ)從句、動(dòng)詞不定式短語(yǔ)作表語(yǔ)(istoincroducetraditionalChineseculture)、被動(dòng)語(yǔ)態(tài)(willbedisplayed)、強(qiáng)調(diào)(dohope)等。這豐富了文章的語(yǔ)言結(jié)構(gòu)，展示了較強(qiáng)的綜合運(yùn)用語(yǔ)言的能力，增加了文章的亮點(diǎn)。假定你是紅星中學(xué)即將畢業(yè)的高三學(xué)生李華，最近你和父母在大學(xué)專(zhuān)業(yè)的選擇上有些爭(zhēng)論。請(qǐng)給你的外教Black寫(xiě)一封求助信，內(nèi)容包括：1．求助緣由；2．你的選擇和理由；3．你的期望。注意：1.寫(xiě)作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80左右；2．請(qǐng)按如下格式作答。DearBlack，Longtimenosee!Lookingforwardtoyourreply!Yours，LiHua【參考范文】DearBlack，Longtimenosee！I'llgraduatefromseniorhighschoolsoon.Recently,Iarguedwithmyparentsaboutthechoiceofthemajoratcollege.Asdoctors,myparentswishmetomajorinmedicineandbecomeadoctor.However,I'vebeeninterestedinvehiclessinceIwasinprimaryschool.Ithinknewenergyvehicleswillhaveapromisingfuture.SoIplantomajorinAutomobileEngine