2024屆高考英語作文復習專項讀后續(xù)寫：自負導致比賽失敗任務單素材

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一、原文

Havingheldtheinterschoolstorytellingchampionshipforthepasttwoyears,Iwas

theshiningstarofmyschool.Whenitcametochoosingtherightcandidatetoparticipatein

suchcompetitions,Iwasalwaysthefirstchoice.Naturally,Iwasonceagainselectedto

representmyschoolintheapproachingcontestthisyear.

UponhearingthefactthatIwaschosenagain,myclassmatesandfriendsacknowledged

thatIwouldundoubtedlyemergeasthechampionagain.Consequently,Ibecameconceited.I

wassoproudthatIneglectedtheimportanceofpracticingforthecontest.

Aweekbeforethecontest,myteacherMs.Saraasked,“Selena,wouldyouliketostand

infrontoftheclasstorehearseforthecontest?,,Shehadtutoredmeinthepasttwo

competitionsandknewhowimportantpracticewas."Justimagineyouareonthestageinthe

,

presenceoftheaudience9,sheadded.

'Tmsorry,Ms.Sara,“Ireplied.UIhaveabitofasorethroat.^^

ThiswasusuallythelieIwouldtellwhenevermyteacherrequestedmetopracticein

frontoftheclass.IalwaysfoundexcusestoavoiddoingitbecauseIbelievedthatIwasthe

bestandthereforethepracticewasunnecessary.Ononeoccasion,IeventoldMs.Saranotto

worrytoomuchasIwaswellpreparedforthecontest.Infact,Idideverythingbutpractice

myscript.Ionlymanagedtoglancebrieflythroughthestorythedaybeforethecontest.As

thebeststorytelleramongthestudentsofthelocalsecondaryschools,Iwastoovainto

practiceandexpectedeverythingtobefine.

Thecontestwasbeingheldinthelocalcommunityhall.Onthedayofthecontest,the

hallwaspacked.Myschoolteachersandprincipalweretherealongwithmanyofmy

classmatesandschoolmates.Iwastheeighthcontestantoutoftwentyintotal.Thosewho

spokebeforemedidextremelywell.Onseeingtheirfascinatingandoutstandingperformance,

Ibegantoloseconfidenceinmyself.MypalmssweatedheavilyandIstartedtofeelnervous.

Soon,itwasmyturntotalk.

Finally,resultswewannouncedafterthecontest.

二、分句練習

Paragraph1:Soon,itwasmyturntotalk.

(1)我鼓起了一些勇氣，走上舞臺，試圖掩蓋我已經失去信心的事實?！厩昂蠖际欠侵^語】

①鼓起勇氣pluckupHavingpluckedupsomecourage,Isteppedontothe

somecouragestage,attemptingtoconcealthefactthatconfidencehad

②隱藏、掩蓋concealdesertedme.

(2)當我看到觀眾時，我聽到我的聲音在顫抖，我的腿也在顫抖?！緒ith結構，so表示

也】

看至one9sglancemeetWithmyglancemeetingtheaudience,Iheardmyvoicewas

sbtremblingandsoweremylegs.

(3)由于不夠熟練，我甚至在演講的過程中出現(xiàn)了幾次結巴，當我捕捉到老師、同學和

校長驚訝、困惑和失望的表情時，情況變得更糟了?！痉窍薅ㄐ远ㄕZ從句】

①缺乏lackof...Owingtolackofproficiency,Ievenstammereda

②熟練proficiencyfewtimesinthecourseofspeech,whichworsened

③結巴stammerwhenIcapturedtheastonished,puzzledand

④在…的過程中inthecourseofdisappointedlookofmyteachers,classmatesand

⑤捕捉captureprincipal.

(4)我想不起是怎么結束的，只記得我說完最后一句話后逃離了舞臺。當然，沒有任何

掌聲?！緀xceptfor]

Icouldn,trecallhowitended,exceptformydesperateescapefromthestagewhenI

finishedmylastword.Ofcourse,withoutanyapplause.

Paragraph2:Finally,resultswereannouncedafterthecontest.

(1)聽到我沒有被列入獲獎名單后，我垂下眼睛，努力躲避周圍人的注視?！痉侵^語】

①將…列入名單list...

HavingheardthatIwasnotlistedamongthewinners,I

②努力做某事

droopedmyeyesandendeavoredtoavoidthegaze

endeavortodo

aroundme.

③注視n.gaze

(2)突然，我感到一只手放到了我的肩膀上。是薩拉老師。

Suddenly,Ifeltahandonmyshoulder.ItwasMs.Sara.

(3)我回頭，看到一雙關心的眼睛?！皼]關系”，她用溫柔的聲音安慰我。

①回頭look

backIlookedbackandapairofconcernedeyescameintomysight.

②安慰“It'sOK”,shecomfortedmeinasoftvoice.

comfort

(4)當幾個同學也圍過來安慰我時，我再也抑制不住自己的情緒，淚水奪眶而出，羞愧

和悔恨交織在一起?！綼s從句，with結構】

①聚集在一起gather

Asseveralclassmatesalsogatheredaroundtoconsole

around

②安慰consoleme,Icouldn'tcontainmyemotionsanymoreandmy

③抑制containtearsbrimmedover,withamixtureofshameand

④淚水奪眶而出one'stearsremorseoverwhelmingme.

brimmedover

⑤悔恨remorse

(5)“驕者必敗。愿你永遠不要再讓自負阻礙你的成功?！甭牭剿_拉女士的話，我認真地

點點頭，決心明年再戰(zhàn)。

①驕兵必敗Pridegoes

beforeafall.

②愿may+sb+do（原形）

③自負arrogance,conceit,“Pridegoesbeforeafall.Mayyouneverletarrogance

vanitystandinthewayofyoursuccessagain."hearingwhat

④阻礙standinthewayMs.Sarasaid,Inoddedearnestlywithastrongwillto

of...fightnextyear.

⑤誰的話whatsbsaid

④帶著…的決心witha

strongwilltodo...

三、最終自測

Soon,itwasmytamtotalk.敘鼓起了一■些勇氣，走上舞臺，試圖掩蓋我已經失去信心

的事實。當我看到觀眾時，我聽到我的聲音在顫抖，我的腿也在顫抖。由于不夠熟練，

我甚至在演講的過程中出現(xiàn)了幾次結巴，當我捕捉到老師、同學和校長驚訝、困惑和失

望的表情時，情況變得更糟了。我想不起是怎么結束的，只記得我說完最后一句話后逃

離了舞臺。當然，沒有任何掌聲。

Finally,resultswereannouncedafterthecontest.聽到我沒有被列入獲獎名單后，我垂

下眼睛，努力躲避周圍人的注視。突然，我感到一只手放到了我的肩膀上。是薩拉老師。

我回頭，看到一雙關心的眼睛，“沒關系”，她用溫柔的聲音安慰我。當幾個同學也圍過

來安慰我時，我再也抑制不住自己的情緒，淚水奪眶而出，羞愧和悔恨交織在一起。“驕

者必敗。愿你永遠不要再讓自負阻礙你的成功?！甭牭剿_拉女士的話，我認真地點點頭，

決心明年再戰(zhàn)。

四、最終范文

Paragraph1:Soon,itwasturntotalk.Havingpluckedupsomecourage,Istepped

ontothestage,attemptingtoconcealthefactthatconfidencehaddesertedme.Withmy

glancemeetingtheaudience,Iheardmyvoicewastremblingandsoweremylegs.Dueto

lackofproficiency,Ievenstammeredafewtimesinthecourseofspeech,whichworsened

whenIcapturedtheastonished,puzzledanddisappointedlookofmyteachers,classmatesand

principal.Icouldn'trecallhowitended,exceptformydesperateescapefromthestagewhen

Ifinishedmylastword.Ofcourse,withoutanyapplause.

Paragraph2;Finally,resultswereannouncedafterthecontest.HavingheardthatIwas

notlistedamongthewinners,Idroppedmyeyesandendeavoredtoavoidthegazearoundme.

Suddenly,Ifeltahandonmyshoulder.ItwasMs.Sara.Ilookedbackandapairofconcerned

eyescameintomysight."It'sOK”,shecomfortedmeinasoftvoice.Asseveralclassmates

alsogatheredaroundtoconsoleme,Icouldn'tcontainmyemotionsanymoreandmytears

brimmedover,withamixtureofshameandremorseoverwhelmingme."Pridegoesbeforea

fall.Mayyouneverletarrogancestandinthewayofyoursuccessagain.^^hearingwhatMs.

Sarasaid,Inoddedearnestlywithastrongwilltofightnextyear.

自負導致比賽失敗(學生版)

一、原文

Havingheldtheinterschoolstorytellingchampionshipforthepasttwoyears,Iwas

theshiningstarofmyschool.Whenitcametochoosingtherightcandidatetoparticipatein

suchcompetitions,Iwasalwaysthefirstchoice.Naturally,Iwasonceagainselectedto

representmyschoolintheapproachingcontestthisyear.

UponhearingthefactthatIwaschosenagain,myclassmatesandfriendsacknowledged

thatIwouldundoubtedlyemergeasthechampionagain.Consequently,Ibecameconceited.I

wassoproudthatIneglectedtheimportanceofpracticingforthecontest.

Aweekbeforethecontest,myteacherMs.Saraasked,“Selena,wouldyouliketostand

infrontoftheclasstorehearseforthecontest?,,Shehadtutoredmeinthepasttwo

competitionsandknewhowimportantpracticewas."Justimagineyouareonthestageinthe

,

presenceoftheaudience9,sheadded.

'Tmsorry,Ms.Sara,“Ireplied.UIhaveabitofasorethroat.^^

ThiswasusuallythelieIwouldtellwhenevermyteacherrequestedmetopracticein

frontoftheclass.IalwaysfoundexcusestoavoiddoingitbecauseIbelievedthatIwasthe

bestandthereforethepracticewasunnecessary.Ononeoccasion,IeventoldMs.Saranotto

worrytoomuchasIwaswellpreparedforthecontest.Infact,Idideverythingbutpractice

myscript.Ionlymanagedtoglancebrieflythroughthestorythedaybeforethecontest.As

thebeststorytelleramongthestudentsofthelocalsecondaryschools,Iwastoovainto

practiceandexpectedeverythingtobefine.

Thecontestwasbeingheldinthelocalcommunityhall.Onthedayofthecontest,the

hallwaspacked.Myschoolteachersandprincipalweretherealongwithmanyofmy

classmatesandschoolmates.Iwastheeighthcontestantoutoftwentyintotal.Thosewho

spokebeforemedidextremelywell.Onseeingtheirfascinatingandoutstandingperformance,

Ibegantoloseconfidenceinmyself.MypalmssweatedheavilyandIstartedtofeelnervous.

Soon,itwasmyturntotalk.

Finally,resultsvve-eannouncedafterthecontest.

二、分句練習

Paragraph1:Soon,itwasmyturntotalk.

(1)我鼓起了一些勇氣，走上舞臺，試圖掩蓋我已經失去信心的事實。【前后都是非謂語】

①鼓起勇氣pluckupsomecourage

②隱藏、掩蓋conceal

(2)當我看到觀眾時，我聽到我的聲音在顫抖，我的腿也在顫抖?！緒ith結構，so表示

也】

看至Uone'sglancemeetsb

(3)由于不夠熟練，我甚至在演講的過程中出現(xiàn)了幾次結巴，當我捕捉到老師、同學和

校長驚訝、困惑和失望的表情時，情況變得更糟了?！痉窍薅ㄐ远ㄕZ從句】

①缺乏lackof...

②熟練proficiency

③結巴stammer

④在…的過程中inthecourseof

⑤捕捉capture

(4)我想不起是怎么結束的，只記得我說完最后一句話后逃離了舞臺。當然，沒有任何

掌聲。【exceptfor】

Paragraph2:Finally,resultswereannouncedafterthecontest.

(1)聽到我沒有被列入獲獎名單后，我垂下眼睛，努力躲避周圍人的注視?！痉侵^語】

①將…列入名單list...

②努力做某事endeavor

todo

③注視n.gaze

(2)突然，我感到一只手放到了我的肩膀上。是薩拉老師。

(4)我回頭，看到一雙關心的眼睛。“沒關系”，她用溫柔的聲音安慰我。

①回頭